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高考英语短文改错练习34

短文改错专练（三）

李仕才

      假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

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每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

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在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

      删除：

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      修改：

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      注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A

DearSandra,

      You’llneverguesswhereI’mwritingthisemail.Acave!

Youknowwe’reonholidaysinSpain.Well,wespendafewdaysinBarcelonafirst.Wehadagoodtimethere,thoughonedayIdidn’tfeelverygood.IthinkIatetoomuchicecreamthedaybefore.Anyway,whenIleftBarcelona,wecametospendafewdaysinGranada.However,wecouldn’tgetahotel—toomanytouristsandnotenoughbed!

Thenthehotelownersaid,“Whydon’ttrythecavehotels?

”Wethoughthewerejoking.Livingincaves?

Butthereweareandit’swonderful.We’reenjoyingitmuchthatwedon’tknowwhenwe’regoingtoleave.We’renevergoingtohaveenoughtimetoexploreforeverything.

      Takecare!

                                                                    Ben

B

      Myunclebuysasatellitedish,whichisalargeroundpieceofmetalthatreceivessatellitetelevision.Hedecidedtosetuphimself.Heclimbeduptheladderandattachedthedishwiththesideofhishouses.Afterhefinishing,heandmyauntrelaxedfortheeveninginfrontoftheTV.Thenextdaywasverymuchhot,andtheydecidedtostayathomeandwatchTV.Thatafternoontheyheardlotsofshoutingoutside.Whentheywentoutside,theysawthatthehouseoppositewereonfire.Fortunately,thefirewasputtingout.Itturnedoutthatthefirehadstartedbecausemyuncle’ssatellitedishhadbeenconcentratingthesun’sraysonthecurtainsofherneighbor’shousebuthadcausedthefire.

C

      Christmasissupposedtobeatimeexpressourloveandgoodwilltowardsothers.Itissupposedtobeatimewhichweperformactsofkindnessforpeoplelessfortunatetoourselves.ButdowethinkoftheotherpeoplewhenwesatdowntoourChristmasdinner?

Ofcoursenot—we’retoobusyeatingthosedeliciousfoodsrelatedwithChristmas.Wearetoobusywonderingthatthepresentswegavewereasniceorbetterthantheonewereceived.Theyforgettothinkofthesickandthehomeless.ThewholeideaofChristmashascompletechanged.Whatashame!

D

      Athiefbrokeintoourhouseandfilledhisbagbyourpossessionswhenhesuddenlyfeelingapairofeyesonhim.Lookingup,heseesaneaglestaringathimwithcold,mercilesseyes.Atfirstthemanwastoofrighteningtomove,butaftertenminutehetriedmovingquietlytowardsthedoor.Therefore,theeyesjustfollowedhimandhecouldn’tmove.Eventually,myparentsreturnedtoandfoundthethiefinourhouse.Whenmyfatherturnedthelight,thethiefcouldseethattheeaglewasjustatoy.Butitwastoolateandshewasarrested.Myfathersaidthatthetoyeaglewerebetterthananywatchdog.

E

      Nowadaysmoreandmorestudentswerefoundcheatinginexams.Somecopyfromeachother;somecopyfromtheirtextbooks,referencebooksorpreparednote;othersusemoderncommunicationtoolsuchasmobilephones.Cheatinginexamswillcausesomeworseeffects.Foronething,itwillresultunfaircompetitionanddestroythecreativityofbrightstudents.Foranother,studentswhooftencheatsinexamswilldevelopbadhabitsandwon’tbeabletomeettheneedsofsocietyinthefuture.Sohowcancheatinginexamsbestopped?

Onmyopinion,severepunishmentsshouldbeputintotheeffecttopreventstudentsfromcheating.Atthesametime,greateffortsshouldbemadetomakestudentsunderstoodwhatkindofpersonsocietyneedsortrytobuilduptheirhonesty.

F

DearJack,

      I’mgladtolearnthatyouwillcomeBeijingtolearnaboutChinesecultureasanexchangestudent.Atthemoment,IamstudyingEnglishinmyschoolbutIalwaysgetbettergradesinmyclass.I’mgoodatthespokenEnglish,soI’msureIwillcommunicatewithyoufrequent.Beside,myparentsareopenandkindandisfriendswithmanyofmyclassmates.Ibelieveyouwillbeoneoftheirfriendtoo.Therefore,IinviteyoutoliveinmyhomeduringyoustayinBeijing.I’mwillingtohelpingyouasmuchasIcan.

      Bestwishes!

                                                              Yours,

                                                              LiHua

G

      MyfriendJakeiseighteenyearsoldandlivesinasmallvillage,notfarwiththecityofNottingham.Hegrewupinthisvillage,soheknowseveryonehere.Buthefeelsboringinthevillage.Atthemoment,hetravelsNottinghameverydaytotheshopwhereheworks.Thisisabusat7:

30inthemorningandthelatestbusbackintheeveningisat5:

30.FromtheSeptember,however,he’sgoingtostayinNottinghamwithhisauntandunclewhenhiscousinjointheNavy.Hecanusehiscousin’sroom.He’sreallylookingforwardtoliveinNottingham.He’llbeabletogooutwithhisfriendsintheeveningandhedoesn’thavetogetupearlierinthemorningtocatchthebus.

H

      Lastnight,ourneighborvisitedmyfamilyandcomplainedforthenoisefromourhomeatnight.Wefeelverysorrytocausesomuchtrouble.Iexplainedwhymyparentsfixedourkitchenatnightbecauseweworkedalldayandonlycamebackhomeintheevening.What’smore,theyfixedthekitchenbythemselvesbecausethehighcostofworkers.Sincemyparentsarenotprofessional,soittookthemalongtimetofixit.Consideringthenoiseandtroubletheneighborwerehaving,myparentsdecidedtohiresomeworkerstofixourkitchensontheweekend.Wepromisedwewouldfinishtheworkassoonaspossibly.Atlast,weexpressedourshameagainandtheneighborforgivingus.

答案

A

1....onholidaysin...         holidays→holiday

2....wespendafew...        spend→spent

3....feelverygood.      good→well

4....whenIleft...       I→we

5....notenoughbed!

     bed→beds

6.“Whydon’ttry...      don’t→not或try前加you

7....hewerejoking.      were→was

8.Butthereweare...     there→here

9....itmuchthat...                   much前加so

10....exploreforeverything.      去掉for

B

1.Myunclebuys...      buys→bought

2....tosetup...                 up前加it

3....withthesideof...       with→to

4....ofhishouses.              houses→house

5.Afterhefinishing...        finishing→finished

6....verymuchhot...         去掉much

7....wereonfire.               were→was

8....wasputtingout.           putting→put

9....herneighbor’s...         her→his

10....buthadcaused...       but→and

C

1....expressourlove...   express前加to

2....whichweperform...   which→when

3....lessfortunateto...       to→than

4....theotherpeople...   去掉the

5....wesatdownto...        sat→sit

6....relatedwith...       with→to

7....thatthepresents...  that→whether/if

8....theonewe...              one→ones

9.Theyforgetto...      They→We

10....hascomplete...    complete→completely

D

1....hisbagby...         by→with

2....feelingapair...       feeling→felt

3....heseesaneagle...       sees→saw

4....frighteningtomove...   frightening→frightened

5....aftertenminute...     minute→minutes

6.Therefore,theeyes...    Therefore→However

7....parentsreturnedto...   去掉to

8....turnedthelight...     the前加on或light后加on

9....shewasarrested.          she→he

10....eaglewerebetter...    were→was

E

1....werefoundcheating...    were→are

2....orpreparednote...             note→notes

3....communicationtool...     tool→tools

4....someworseeffects.             worse→bad

5....willresultunfair...       unfair前加in

6....cheatsinexams...        cheats→cheat

7.Onmyopinion...          On→In

8....putintotheeffect...       去掉the

9....understoodwhatkind...      understood→understand

10....ortrytobuild...       or→and

F

1....comeBeijingto...       Beijing前加to

2....butIalwaysget...       but→and

3....bettergradesin...        better→good

4....thespoken...              去掉the

5....withyoufrequent.       frequent→frequently

6.Beside,my...                  Beside→Besides

7....andisfriends...          is→are

8....oftheirfriend...         friend→friends

9....duringyoustay...      you→your

10....willingtohelping...  helping→help

G

1....notfarwith...       with→from

2....hefeelsboring...        boring→bored

3....travelsNottingham...  Nottingham前加to或into

4.Thisisabus...                This→There

5....thelatestbus...           latest→last

6....theSeptember...         去掉the

7....hiscousinjoin...     join→joins

8....tolivein...       live→living

9....hedoesn’thave...       doesn’t→won’t

10....getupearlier...         earlier→early

H

1....complainedfor...      for→about/at

2.Wefeelverysorry...     feel→felt

3....explainedwhymy...    why→that

4....weworkedallday...     we→they

5....becausethehigh...      the前加of

6....soittookthem...       去掉so

7....werehaving...                   were→was

8....fixourkitchens...       kitchens→kitchen

9....assoonaspossibly.     possibly→possible

10....forgivingus.                    forgiving→forgave