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Whatmakesagoodpassage尉惠玲WhatWhatmakesagoodpassage?

1.Beautifulhandwriting2.Beautifullanguage（correctspelling,grammarandpunctuation）3.Usageofcomplicatedoradvancedwordsandsentencepatterns1.4.Well-organizedstructureofanarticle（Includingallthepointsrequired）5.Usageofconnectingwords,suchasadverbs,orconjunctions外在美一篇优秀的书面表达首先是一件艺术品。

书写清楚，字母大小匀称，单词间距适当，使人赏心悦目。

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HowdoesBeijingstrike/impressyou？

2.Otherwise,youreffortswillhavenoresultsOtherwise,youreffortswillmakenosense.3.Whilecrossingtheroad,youmustbecareful.Whilecrossingtheroad,youcantbetoocareful.4.Aftermanyattempts,theplanetookoffAftermanyattempts,theplanemanagedtotakeoff.句式美5.NeverdoeshespeakNeverdoeshespeakabouthisownfamily.6.Lastyearthefactoryproducedtwiceasmanycarsasitdiddidtheyearbefore.7.Somestudentsthinkwhileothersarguesothersargues8.RomewasnotbuiltinonedayRomewasnotbuiltinoneday.9.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboyAllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.10.HewhodoesntreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.HewhodoesntreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.Group21.Jimdidntpasstheexam.Itsurprisedeverybody.Jimdidntpasstheexam,whichsurprisedeverybody.WhatsurprisedeverybodywasthatJimdidntpasstheexam.ItwassurprisingthatJimdidntpasstheexam.2.Shewasveryhappyandshebegantoprepareforthetrip.Shewassohappythatshebegantoprepareforthetrip.3.Hetriedveryhardbuthecouldntopenthedoor.Tryashemight,hecouldntopenthedoor.4.KangjieMiddleSchoolwasfoundedin1945anditswell-knowninShanxiProvince,eveninChina.Foundedin1945,KangjieMiddleSchooliswell-knowninShanxiProvince,eveninChina.5.Ihurriedtothestationbuttheytoldmethetrainhadleft.Ihurriedtothestationonlytobetoldthetrainhadleft.6.Ifweatherpermits,wewillhaveapicnic.Weatherpermitting,wewillhaveapicnic.7.Wereturnedhome,weweretiredbutwerealsohappyWereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.8.Becausemanyeyeswerefixedonme,Iwasnervous.Withmanyeyesfixedonme,Iwasnervous.9.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.Howgladweweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!

10.Wedidntfindthecorrectwayuntildark.Itwasnotuntildarkthatwefoundthecorrectway.Notuntildarkdidwefindthecorrectway.11.Whenweclimbedtowardsthetop,wefoundtheviewmorewonderful.Thehigherweclimbedthemountain,themorewonderfultheviewwas.结构美合理的段落层次，条理清晰1.开头引人入胜。

2.中间内容充实饱满。

3.结尾干净利落。

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。

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AndIdefinitelyagreewithyouonthat.Someofthecolumnswhichyoumentionedintheletterarereallymycupoftea.Say,“cultureexpress”givesusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,itsnecessarytolearnfromeachother.Thiswillofferawonderfulchance.Apartfromthat,“blurtout”isprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimproveoralEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,“entertainment”issocool!

Thepopularsingers,actorsandcelebritiesaresocatchyandattractivethatyouabsolutelycantmissit!

Teenagersarejustfondofthetrendythings.Well,Icantlistmore.Ireallycantwaittoreadthatmagazine!

Yoursfaithfully,LiHua衔接美作文中的连贯表达作文中的连贯表达MakeCoherence引出话题tobeginwithtostartwithgenerallyspeakingasweallknowasisknownasaruleinonesopinionitiskn