高考-概要写作-公开课.ppt

高考-概要写作-公开课.ppt

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概要写作概要写作SummarywritingSummarywriting高考新题型高考新题型概要写作评分标准第五档（概要写作评分标准第五档（2125points）：

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1.理解理解准确准确，涵盖，涵盖所有要点所有要点2.准确准确使用相应的使用相应的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇3.完全完全使用使用自己的语言自己的语言。

（60-80W）4.有效有效地使用了语句间的地使用了语句间的连接成分连接成分，使概要，使概要结构紧凑结构紧凑contents（内容内容）languageskills（语言语言）structure（结构结构）Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!

Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?

Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?

（182W）Step1.Understandthewholepassageandgraspthekeypoints.Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!

Ourindustrialsocietyhasturnedusintospoiledchildren.Thiswastefulnesshasgotusintothegreattroubleweareinnow.Whenwehavenoresourcesleft,thenwewillstarttotakecareofwhatwehave.Butwhycantweactbeforethishappens?

Whycantwetrytobuildasocietyinwhichthepreventionofwasteisavirtue?

概要写作难点概要写作难点1Howtogetthekeypointsquicklyandcorrectly?

（如何快速、准确地捕捉要点如何快速、准确地捕捉要点）抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息Para1：

Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever.Ifyouboughtacarorastove,itwasaonce-in-a-lifetimeinvestment.Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.detailedexampleu忽略具体事例忽略具体事例topicsentence概要写作难点概要写作难点2Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?

（如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑如何灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑）characteristics1.Onceuponatime,industrialgoodsweremadetolastforever._,industrialgoodsweremade_.Sometimeago;Inthepast;Decadesagotobeusedforalongtimetofunctionwellforalongtime;durable近义词替换近义词替换Youpaidgoodmoneyforit,andyoutookcareofit.Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurable.spentmuchmoneyontreasuretreatitkindlyYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Decadesago,industrialgoodsweremadedurableYouspentmuchmoneyonitandtreasureit.Para1.useitcarefullyNowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!

topicsentencedetailedexamplescharacteristicsresultu忽略具体事例忽略具体事例Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.Justthinkofthecarsthataretradeddaily,justbecausetheyareoutofstyle.Thinkoftheexpensivepackagingmaterialthatisthrownawayeverytimeanewobjectisbought.Andweshoppershavetopayforthatmaterial!

1.Nowadaysindustryhaspersuadedusthatproductscouldntlastalongtime.2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.3.Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.ModernIndustrymadeusbelieveconvincednotpermanentModernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.short-lived近义词替换近义词替换2.Itischeapertothrowthemawaythantorepairthem.Tothrowthemawayischeaperthantorepairthem.Itismoreexpensivetorepairthemthantothrowthemaway.改变主语（形式主语）改变主语（形式主语）正话反说、反话正说正话反说、反话正说Thishasleddirectlytothe“throw-awaysociety”whichisagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.whichhasresultedinagreatwasteoftheearthsresources.改变句式改变句式resultinModernindustryhasconvincedusthatproductsarenotpermanent.Tothrowthemawayischeaper