写作大作文练习合肥练习.docx

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写作大作文练习合肥练习

【第一段】

简要描述图片，略微引向主题；

图片基调描述：

相关细节描写：

标题引向主题：

Information

transformation

Regardlessof…

PreferAtoB

AispreferabletoB.

AoutweighB

【第二段】

点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；

1.举例证明

2.因果分析

3.利弊分析

4.名言哲理

5.正反论证

TD1D2C

a.化立论为驳论

大众观点

质疑大众

详实论据

得出结论

b.化苍白为哲理

格言哲理

哲理阐释

详实论据

得出结论

c.化平淡为修辞

灵活提出论点；

灵活运用修辞。

【第三段】

针对上文论调，进行有效评论。

1.社会弊病（环境生态）

控制：

外控，内控

Correspondinglawsandregulationsshouldbelaidoutto……

（schoolregulations）

Officialinterventionshouldbecastonthismatter….

Finesandpenaltiesshouldbeactivatedtodirectthissituationtoapositiveone.

Mediasupervisionshouldbeputonthismattertoreduceitsprevalence….

self-restrict

Self-discipline

self-control

Theabilityofself-restrainshouldbecultivatedamongpeoplewho…...

Theawarenessof……shouldbenurturedamongthosewho….

Rightattitudetowards…shouldbeadvocatedamongthosewho….

Howtoputtheproblemof…undercontrol?

Itoccurstothevastmajoritythatapackagedeal,involving…,…,and…,isdemandedbythecurrentsituation.Thatisaway,butnotcomprehensiveenough.Actuallywealsoneedto….,withtheassistanceofwhichwecanfundamentallyputthistrendtoanend.

Suchmisconductsshouldbeputundercontrolimmediately!

Buthow?

Suggestionsfromthegeneralpublicmayinvolve…,…,and….Thesesuggestionshavebeenputintopracticeforyears,withfruitfulrewards.Isthatenough?

Actuallywhatweneedismorethanwhatmentionedabove,butanewwaythat……

2.社会风尚

表明支持

说明价值

（惠及自身与他人）

（惠及当下与未来）

积极参与

Askedaboutmyattitudeto…,Iamtosay…iseitherbeneficialtoindividualsorelevatingtosociety.Actuallythisescalatingeffectwillnotlastformerelyseveralyears.Asitisawealth,wearewillingtodeliveritfromoneindividualtoanother,fromonedecadetoanother,andfromonegenerationtoanother.Asacollegeman,Iamdeterminedtobearole-modelin….（Ascollegestudents,wehavethedutytojointhecampaignof…...）

Ididnotdoitforyou.

《狗镇》舞台剧

Grace

Tommy

3.个人方案

外在帮助：

咨询，阅览，影视

内在自助：

详细计划

Howtostepoutoftheshadowof…?

Onceuponatime,Iwassuggestedbyfriendstoseekhelpfromseniors,experts,orbookswhenIwasinthesametrouble.Thatwasaway,butapassiveway.Helpfromthemisnotalwaysavailable,andnotnecessarilysuitsme.Thereforeinfaceofthe…situation,Iamdeterminedto…,to…,andto….

书信

摘要

备忘录

1.格式

2.素材

Jan.19th

DearXXX,

Dearsirormadam,

Towhomitmayconcern,

【第一段】

道明来意；

自我介绍，问候致意，说明背景

【第二段】

TD1（C1）D2（C2）

A：

罗列：

建议、请求、理由、困难

B：

情节：

conflict

【第三段】

重申来意；

适度拓展。

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

Xcitywashitbyaflood…

Dearfriends,

Iamwriting,onbehalfofthestudentunion,toaskforhelpforcitizensinadisaster.Severaldaysago,Xcitywasstrickenbyaflood.Tomakethingsworse,thousandsoflocalresidentsarenowhomeless,strivingforsurvivalwithoutassistancefromfamilies.（Acoupleofdaysago,afloodandstormturnedthousandsofresidentsinXcityintohomelessindividuals.）

Theyareexposedtotwodifficulties.Theirdailynecessities,includingfoodstuff,freshwaterandmedicine,arefarfromadequacy,whilelocalauthoritiescannotaffordtoaddresstheirmanyneeds.Inaddition,thesethousandsoffriendneedintensivecaredayandnight,asonlyundersuchcarecantheyrecoverfrompanic?

Knowingtheirdifficultieshowcanwecontinuetostandwitharmfolded?

Anyonewhoistoshowsupportcancontactusatsupport@.

Schoolauthorities

Exercise1

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）interpretthephenomenonitreflects,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

学生的对联

图片基调描述：

ironic

相关细节描写：

Couplet,thefirstline,thesecondline,

Horizontalscroll

标题引向主题：

dishonest

Depictedbythecartoonisanironicscenethatthecoupletpastedbystudentsmirrorsunfavorableattitudetowardcollegeexaminations.Thefirstlinereads“therewillbenoupgradewithoutcheatinginexams”,whilethesecondlinebears“successintestsoutweighsdignity”.Thehorizontalscrollsummarizestheiridea:

they,regardlessofthevirtueofhonesty,aredeterminedtopassexamsbyanymeans.

大众观点诚信

质疑大众反问

详实论据

单从考试方面：

小抄，耳语，手势，短信，

得出结论不再诚信，自身，教育

Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…..

Itisconventionallyholdthat…..

Itissharedbythegeneralpublicthat...

Itisdeeplyrootedinthemindofthepublicthat…

Itiswidelysharedthatnoanyothergroupsinthisworldcanbeashonestascollegestudents.Butisthatatruthanylonger?

Examplesagainstthispublicviewareabundantandwithineasyreach.Fromcollegeexaminationsalone,itisnotsurprisingtoseecandidatesdeliveringkeysbygesture,bywhisper,orevenbymobilephones.Evidently,studentsinmountingnumbersdon’tcherishthevirtueofhonestyanymore,whichmayexertnegativeinfluenceoneithertheiroveralldevelopmentorthequalityofeducation,nottomentiontheprospectofoursociety.

Have/impose/exertnegativeinfluenceon…

Exercise2

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.（20points）

ThedreamofaBird

Alarming

Abirdisholdingagun.

Heishidinginthebush.

Heisstaringatthesky

Humanbeingsaresoaring

Hewantstoshootpeopleforrevenge

Whatpeopledidwithhim

Depictedbythecartoonisanalarmingscenethatabird,holdingagunandhidinginthebush,isstaringattheskywherehumanbeingsaresoaring.Clearly,heislongingforadaywhenbecomesahunter,shootingpeopleforrevenge.Hisdreamrootsin/isprovokedby/isevokedby/issparkedbywhatpeopleoncedidwithhim.

大众观点走进环保时代

质疑大众反问

详实论据个人：

狩猎|企业：

排污

得出结论未普及有害

Ithasbecomea“commonsense”thatnoanyotheragesplacessuchanemphasisonenvironmentalprotectionastoday.Butdoeseverybodyoreverygrouptakepartinthiscampaign?

Theanswerisratherdisappointing!

Thefollowingmisdeedsormisconductsarefaimiliar.Itisnotsurpringtoseesomeofusshootingwild-lifeforfun,cookingthemforfood,orsellingthemforhugeprofit.Itisalsonotuncommontofindsomefactoriesemitingtoxicgaseswithatmospherepolluted.Evidently,thesenseofachievingabetterenvironmentisnotsopervasiveasweexpect,whichmaybedetrimentaltooursecurityandwellbeing.

Idioms600.doc

创作：

Thenaturetreatsusthewaywetreatit.

Whatwedowiththenatureistobeansweredfor.

格言哲理

Asafamousthinkeronceputit,“……”

Nevereasilyletgoofthetruth,“……”

Nevereasilyshrugoffthetruth,“……”

Nevereasilywaveasidethemotto,“…..”

Theextendedmeaningofthecartooncanbesummarizedasamotto:

……

哲理阐释

Thatis,……

Putitanotherway,……

Simplystateit,…….

Inotherwords,…….

详实论据过去：

现在：

得出结论

Exhibitedbythiscartoonisamotto:

itisourobligationtotakecareofournature.However,suchamottohasbeenwavedasidebyasignificannumberofus.Anycases?

Haven’tyouevernseensomeofusshootingwildlifeforfun,forfood,orforprofit?

Haven’tyouevernoticedsomefactoriesoverminingwithgeographicdisastersrecuring?

Wherehastheirconciencegone?

Wherehassenseofsocialresponsibilitygone?

Wherehasinsighttothefuturegone?

Aren'tthesevirtuesswallowedbytheirgreediness,sacrificinglong-termbenefitforinstantsatisfaction?

seekinginstantsatisfactionatthecostoflong-termbenefit?

Sacrifice…for….

Atthecostof….

Attheexpenseof….

Geographicdisaster

Occur

Recuring

Beharmfulto…

Bedetrimentalto…

Pervasive

Theimplicationofthecartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicindailylife:

thenaturetreatsusthewaywetreatit.Putitanotherway,thenaturemayrewardusfruitfulyonconditionthatweareongoodtermwithit,whilepunishusifwemistreatit.Inthepast,ancestorsneverwenttoofarinexploitingnaturalresources,sothegiftsfromnaturewereavailableanywhereandanytime.Currently,ourgreedinesshasthreatenedtheseresources,puttingthemtotheedgeofrunningout.Nowonderthebirdinthepicturerevengesonhuman.Heiswarningusthatwhatwedidwiththenatureistobeansweredfor.

【版本三】

Getonwellwith

Beongoodtermwith

Exercise3

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

图片基调：

instructive

相关细节：

Aman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogoandfeelingperplexedandnervous.

标题总结：

decisive

Emergingfromthecartoonisaninstructivescenariothataman,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogoandfeelingperplexedandnervous.Thecaptioninformshim,aswellasallofus,thatonemayfailtograspopportunitiesduetohisindecisiveness.

Informsb.,aswellas….,that..

Haveyoueverbeentrappedintoadilemma,ordelicatesituation?

Ifso,youmayfeelthesameawkwardnessandconfusionasthemandoesinthepicture.He,facingseveraldirections,iswalkingbackandforth,wonderingwheretogoandfeelingperplexedandnervous.Clearly,thecartoonistseekstoinformusthatdecisivenessisaqualitynecessaryforanyone.

Bettertryingthancrying.

Theimplicationofthecartooncanbesummarizedasaphilosophictopicindailylife:

bettertryingthancrying.Putitanotherway,facingchoices,wemayfailtograspop