作文范文之toomuchcarespoilsachild英语作文.docx

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作文范文之toomuchcarespoilsachild英语作文

toomuchcarespoilsachild英语作文

【篇一：

arewegivingtoomuchcaretoourchildren】

arewegivingtoomuchcaretoourchildren

nowadays,inchina,moreandmorefamilyonlyhaveonechildbecauseoftheonechildpolicy.parentsaretakingmoreattentiontotheirchildrenthanbefore.withtheeconomicconditionisbecomingbetter,parentsaretendtoputthebestthingsfortheirchildren,theywantthemtoreceivethebesteducation,hopethemwillbeabletobecometheusefulgiftofcountryandsociety.however,ithinktoomuchcarecanbeharmfultochildren.

first,parentsliketomaketheirchildrensignedupforlotsofafter-schoolprograms,theythinkthemoreskillstheirchildrenknowthemoreusefulfortheirgrowth.childrenhavetotakeart,english,pianoafterschool.accordingtotheoverloadsituation,childrenalreadyhavetoomuchhomeworktodoafterschool;theinterestedclassmakesthemhavelesstimetorelaxthemselves.theymighthaveshort-sightednessordepressed.

second,duetotheimprovementofeconomicconditioninchina,manychildrenstudyinginshoolarecompaniedbytheirparentsthattheyaretoodependantontheirparents,theycan’tdomuchthingsbythemselves.

however,asthesayinggoes”everycoinhastwosides”.soparents’careandlovecanalsohelpchildrengrowupanddeveloptobethegiftofourcountryandsociety.asfarasi’mconcernedparentsaresupposedtocareandlovetheirchildrenbuttheyshouldavoidspoilingtheirchildren

【篇二：

高中英语专题写作学生铺张浪费现象】

错误分析

1.时态

图表作文，调查结果，讨论结果

一般现在时

2.topicsentence与supportingdetails不相关

version1

personally,bothparentsandsocietyaretoblame.materialsareneededbutnotnecessary.parents

shouldteachchildrenhowtolivewithlovebutnotmoney.onlyifparentsandsocietyserveas

goodmodelswillchildrenliveabetterlife.

1）personally,bothparentsandsocietyaretotaketheresponsibility.

2）parentsshouldteachchildrenhowtolivewithlovebutnotmoney.

3）whileforsociety,….isneeded.

4）onlywhenparentsandsociety…will….

version2

frommyperspective,i’minfavourofspendingbirthdayoutside.itiscertainlyimportanttomake

childrenhappy.ofcourse,everybeanhasitsblack.therefore,whatmattersishowwecanfeel

happy,notwhetherwegooutsideorinside.

1）frommyperspective,i’minfavourofspendingbirthdayoutside.

2）afterall,itisimportanttomakechildrenhappy.

3）also,stayingoutsidetocelebratemaycreateafriendlyatmospherebetweenfriendsand

relatives.

4）ifirmlybelievethatwithagrandcelebration,thechildwillsurelyenjoyamore

memorablebirthday.

3.内容层次性不强，没有层层递进。

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asisshowninthepictureabove,thereisafeastathome,buttheboyshouts,“whowould

celebratetheirbirthdayathome?

”theparentsareshocked.

asweknow,ittellsthattheboyistiredofcelebrationathome.hewantstogooutside,

seeingafilm,eatingwesternfoodandhavingahappycelebration.ofcourse,theboymusthave

attendedtheothers’perfectcelebration,sohewantstohostonetoo.

frommyperspective,it’snotnecessarytodothat.birthdayisjustasignofgrowingup,a

cakeandabirthdaysongisenough.celebratingoutsidewouldcostparents’alotofmoney.so,

clearupyourmind,don’tletparentssoupset.birthdaybelongstoyourself,notrestaurant.

version2

asisshowninthepictureabove,thechildisunhappybecausehisparentsholdthebirthday

celebrationathome.

asamatteroffact,moreandmorechildrentendtoholdabirthdaypartyatarestaurant.it

costsalotbutdrawsmoreattentiontothechild.

asforme,it’sunnecessarytospendmuchmoneyoncelebrating.abriefoneisbetter.abig

partynotonlywastesmoneybuttime.childrenalsocomparewitheachother.i’dratherstayat

homeandhaveamealwithmyfamily.

tosumup,weoughttohaveameaningfulcelebrationinsteadofawastefulone.

上次考试文章

parti

2.asisshowninthepictureabove,aplantbeingwateredbyfourflowerpotsisdyingout.it

isobviousthattheflowersseemtobeover-watered.

3.asisshowninthepictureabove,fourwaterpotsfilledwithlovearewateringthesame

plant.insteadofgettingstronger,however,theplantisdyingduetoalackofair.

partii1.thispictureshowsacommonphenomenoninourlife.asthesinglechildinthebigfamily,he

mightgetcountlessattentionandcare.however,toomuchcarealwaysspoilsachild.

3.toomuchcarefromtheirparentssoastobesparedofallkindsofhardshipshowever,theresults

maybedifferent.

五三答案（p439，p.446p.447）

thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreetherworking

mom.（p.439.7）

thepictureconveysanimportantmessagetous.thatis,…（p.439.9）

thispictureremindsmeofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.（p.446.4）

ascanbeseeninthepicture,mostofthestudentsarewearingglasses.itisobvious

that…（p.447.10）

partiii

1.tomyunderstanding,achildshouldn’treceivetoomuchcare.firstly,manwasborntogo

throughdifficulties.onlywhenthechildovercomesdifficultiesbyhimselfwillhegrowup.

secondly,it’simportantforchildtodiscoverhisownwaytolifewithouttoomuchattention.

besides,it’snecessaryforparentstoleadandencouragetheirchildren.loveandcareforchildren

inaproperway.

2.inmyopinion,toomuchcarecandomoreharmthangoodtoachild.havingbeenthecenterof

theirownfamily,,mostofthekidsgrowselfishandunwillingtoshareorcooperatewithothers.

besides,theyaremorelikelytobeafraidofthedifficultiesandbreakdowninfaceoffailure.

3.frommyperspective,it’shightimethatparentsshouldthinktheirwayofshowinglove.

firstly,parentsshouldn’ttakeactionifthesituationiswithinyourkids’ability.secondly,make

sureyourkidsknowhowtoprotectthemselveswhenyouarenotthere.

undoubtedly,beingagoodparentisnoeasytask.butalwaysremember:

toomuchcaremay

spoilachild.

twopossibleversions

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…,withafeastofinvitingfoodandahugebirthdaycake,thekid,unsatisfiedwithhaving

apartyathome,isannoyed.thismakeshisparentsratherembarrassed.

thisisavividreflectionofwhatparentsnowadaysareconfronting.immersedintoo

muchlove,kidstendtobemoreparticularaboutthequalityoflife,thinkinglittleoftheirparents.

frommyperspective,it’shightimethatparentsshouldrethinktheirwaysofshowing

love.theyshouldactasguidesratherthanofferkidswhatevertheywant,makingitclearthat

moneyisearnedthroughhardwork.asakidwhomakesnomoney,hehasnorighttocomplain

aboutlife.besides,lettingkidsseethedifficultlifetheircounterpartsareleadinginsomeremote

villagesisalsoagoodidea.gradually,thekidswilllearntocherishwhattheyhavenowandhave

agratefulheart.---fanchenwei

version2

…,thesonseemstobeannoyedtocelebratebirthdayathome,makinghisparentsembarrassed.

tobethe“emperors”ofthehome.theybecomemoredemandingandtakethehighlivingstandard

forgranted.

frommyperspective,it’saseriousissuenevertobeneglected.childrenknowlittle

aboutthelivingpressuretheirparentsundertake,whichleadstothelackofgratitudetotheir

parents.tosolvetheproblem,first,thesocietyshouldbuildupamoresolidmoralstandardand

advocateappreciatingthelovefromparents.second,parentsshouldconcernmoreabout

children’smoraleducationratherthanmakeeveryefforttodelightthem.onlywiththejoint

effortsofthesocietyandparentscantoday’sseedsbecomestrongtrees.

arevisedversion:

…,thesonseemstobeannoyedtocelebratebirthdayathome,makinghisparents

embarrassed…..

outtobethe“emperors”ofthehome.theybecomemoredemandingandtakethehighliving

standardforgranted,whichleadstothelackofgratitudetotheirparents.

frommyperspective,it’saseriousissuenevertobeneglected.tosolvethe

problem,…….

---george

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buildupamoresolidmoralstandard建立坚实的道德准则

【篇三：

非凡作文参考讲义】

非凡作文参考讲义

浙江教育考试院2012年样卷

请根据下图写一篇100—120个词的短文。

你的短文应包括下列要点：

1.简要描写图画内容；

2.说明图画含义；

3.表达你的观点。

注意：

1.短文的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）；

2.参考词汇：

spoil宠坏

toomuchcarespoilsachild

asisshowninthepictureabove,theplantisbeingwateredtoomuch.wecanseethattheleavesoftheplantfalldownandobviouslytheplantisquiteunhealthy.

thepictureindicatesthattoomuchcarewillspoil/doharmtothechildren,althoughparentsdoeverythingforthemoutoftruelove.

asfarasiamconcerned,ifparentswanttheirchildrentobestrongerandmoreindependent,theyshouldletthemgothroughdifficultiesratherthanoffertoomuchcareandspoilthem.byexperiencinglifeonhisown,onecanbemuchhealthierbothphysicallyandmentally.

杭州非凡教育2012二模

互联网给人们生活、工作带来了很多便利。

但网上存在的许多涉及暴力、欺骗等不良现象也影响了青少年的健康成长。

请结合下图，谈谈你自己的看法。

具体要求如下：

1.简要叙述英特网给人们生活和工作所带来的便利；

2.结合下图简要分析英特网所带来的弊端；

3.针对弊端谈谈你的看法及应采取的措施（至少2点）。

注意：

词数：

100~120，文章开头已给出（不计入词数）。

thereisnodoubtthatwehavebenefitedalotfromtheinternetinoureverydaylife.

asoneoffamousoldsayingsgoes,eachcoinhastwosides.therearealsosomeshortcomingswithinternet.forexample,itcontainssomeunhealthycontentsuchasviolenceandcheating,whichdoharmtopeople,especiallytheteenagers.

asfarasiamconcerned,althoughweshouldrecognizetheconvenienceinternetbringsus,thenegativeeffectsofitshouldnotbeignored.effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem,suchasencouragingchildrentodeveloppositiveattitudetowardslifeandgettingridofunhea