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作文范文之toomuchcarespoilsachild英语作文
toomuchcarespoilsachild英语作文
【篇一:
arewegivingtoomuchcaretoourchildren】
arewegivingtoomuchcaretoourchildren
nowadays,inchina,moreandmorefamilyonlyhaveonechildbecauseoftheonechildpolicy.parentsaretakingmoreattentiontotheirchildrenthanbefore.withtheeconomicconditionisbecomingbetter,parentsaretendtoputthebestthingsfortheirchildren,theywantthemtoreceivethebesteducation,hopethemwillbeabletobecometheusefulgiftofcountryandsociety.however,ithinktoomuchcarecanbeharmfultochildren.
first,parentsliketomaketheirchildrensignedupforlotsofafter-schoolprograms,theythinkthemoreskillstheirchildrenknowthemoreusefulfortheirgrowth.childrenhavetotakeart,english,pianoafterschool.accordingtotheoverloadsituation,childrenalreadyhavetoomuchhomeworktodoafterschool;theinterestedclassmakesthemhavelesstimetorelaxthemselves.theymighthaveshort-sightednessordepressed.
second,duetotheimprovementofeconomicconditioninchina,manychildrenstudyinginshoolarecompaniedbytheirparentsthattheyaretoodependantontheirparents,theycan’tdomuchthingsbythemselves.
however,asthesayinggoes”everycoinhastwosides”.soparents’careandlovecanalsohelpchildrengrowupanddeveloptobethegiftofourcountryandsociety.asfarasi’mconcernedparentsaresupposedtocareandlovetheirchildrenbuttheyshouldavoidspoilingtheirchildren
【篇二:
高中英语专题写作学生铺张浪费现象】
错误分析
1.时态
图表作文,调查结果,讨论结果
一般现在时
2.topicsentence与supportingdetails不相关
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personally,bothparentsandsocietyaretoblame.materialsareneededbutnotnecessary.parents
shouldteachchildrenhowtolivewithlovebutnotmoney.onlyifparentsandsocietyserveas
goodmodelswillchildrenliveabetterlife.
1)personally,bothparentsandsocietyaretotaketheresponsibility.
2)parentsshouldteachchildrenhowtolivewithlovebutnotmoney.
3)whileforsociety,….isneeded.
4)onlywhenparentsandsociety…will….
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frommyperspective,i’minfavourofspendingbirthdayoutside.itiscertainlyimportanttomake
childrenhappy.ofcourse,everybeanhasitsblack.therefore,whatmattersishowwecanfeel
happy,notwhetherwegooutsideorinside.
1)frommyperspective,i’minfavourofspendingbirthdayoutside.
2)afterall,itisimportanttomakechildrenhappy.
3)also,stayingoutsidetocelebratemaycreateafriendlyatmospherebetweenfriendsand
relatives.
4)ifirmlybelievethatwithagrandcelebration,thechildwillsurelyenjoyamore
memorablebirthday.
3.内容层次性不强,没有层层递进。
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asisshowninthepictureabove,thereisafeastathome,buttheboyshouts,“whowould
celebratetheirbirthdayathome?
”theparentsareshocked.
asweknow,ittellsthattheboyistiredofcelebrationathome.hewantstogooutside,
seeingafilm,eatingwesternfoodandhavingahappycelebration.ofcourse,theboymusthave
attendedtheothers’perfectcelebration,sohewantstohostonetoo.
frommyperspective,it’snotnecessarytodothat.birthdayisjustasignofgrowingup,a
cakeandabirthdaysongisenough.celebratingoutsidewouldcostparents’alotofmoney.so,
clearupyourmind,don’tletparentssoupset.birthdaybelongstoyourself,notrestaurant.
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asisshowninthepictureabove,thechildisunhappybecausehisparentsholdthebirthday
celebrationathome.
asamatteroffact,moreandmorechildrentendtoholdabirthdaypartyatarestaurant.it
costsalotbutdrawsmoreattentiontothechild.
asforme,it’sunnecessarytospendmuchmoneyoncelebrating.abriefoneisbetter.abig
partynotonlywastesmoneybuttime.childrenalsocomparewitheachother.i’dratherstayat
homeandhaveamealwithmyfamily.
tosumup,weoughttohaveameaningfulcelebrationinsteadofawastefulone.
上次考试文章
parti
2.asisshowninthepictureabove,aplantbeingwateredbyfourflowerpotsisdyingout.it
isobviousthattheflowersseemtobeover-watered.
3.asisshowninthepictureabove,fourwaterpotsfilledwithlovearewateringthesame
plant.insteadofgettingstronger,however,theplantisdyingduetoalackofair.
partii1.thispictureshowsacommonphenomenoninourlife.asthesinglechildinthebigfamily,he
mightgetcountlessattentionandcare.however,toomuchcarealwaysspoilsachild.
3.toomuchcarefromtheirparentssoastobesparedofallkindsofhardshipshowever,theresults
maybedifferent.
五三答案(p439,p.446p.447)
thepictureshowsusatouchingmomentwhenalittlegirlcomestogreetherworking
mom.(p.439.7)
thepictureconveysanimportantmessagetous.thatis,…(p.439.9)
thispictureremindsmeofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.(p.446.4)
ascanbeseeninthepicture,mostofthestudentsarewearingglasses.itisobvious
that…(p.447.10)
partiii
1.tomyunderstanding,achildshouldn’treceivetoomuchcare.firstly,manwasborntogo
throughdifficulties.onlywhenthechildovercomesdifficultiesbyhimselfwillhegrowup.
secondly,it’simportantforchildtodiscoverhisownwaytolifewithouttoomuchattention.
besides,it’snecessaryforparentstoleadandencouragetheirchildren.loveandcareforchildren
inaproperway.
2.inmyopinion,toomuchcarecandomoreharmthangoodtoachild.havingbeenthecenterof
theirownfamily,,mostofthekidsgrowselfishandunwillingtoshareorcooperatewithothers.
besides,theyaremorelikelytobeafraidofthedifficultiesandbreakdowninfaceoffailure.
3.frommyperspective,it’shightimethatparentsshouldthinktheirwayofshowinglove.
firstly,parentsshouldn’ttakeactionifthesituationiswithinyourkids’ability.secondly,make
sureyourkidsknowhowtoprotectthemselveswhenyouarenotthere.
undoubtedly,beingagoodparentisnoeasytask.butalwaysremember:
toomuchcaremay
spoilachild.
twopossibleversions
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…,withafeastofinvitingfoodandahugebirthdaycake,thekid,unsatisfiedwithhaving
apartyathome,isannoyed.thismakeshisparentsratherembarrassed.
thisisavividreflectionofwhatparentsnowadaysareconfronting.immersedintoo
muchlove,kidstendtobemoreparticularaboutthequalityoflife,thinkinglittleoftheirparents.
frommyperspective,it’shightimethatparentsshouldrethinktheirwaysofshowing
love.theyshouldactasguidesratherthanofferkidswhatevertheywant,makingitclearthat
moneyisearnedthroughhardwork.asakidwhomakesnomoney,hehasnorighttocomplain
aboutlife.besides,lettingkidsseethedifficultlifetheircounterpartsareleadinginsomeremote
villagesisalsoagoodidea.gradually,thekidswilllearntocherishwhattheyhavenowandhave
agratefulheart.---fanchenwei
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…,thesonseemstobeannoyedtocelebratebirthdayathome,makinghisparentsembarrassed.
tobethe“emperors”ofthehome.theybecomemoredemandingandtakethehighlivingstandard
forgranted.
frommyperspective,it’saseriousissuenevertobeneglected.childrenknowlittle
aboutthelivingpressuretheirparentsundertake,whichleadstothelackofgratitudetotheir
parents.tosolvetheproblem,first,thesocietyshouldbuildupamoresolidmoralstandardand
advocateappreciatingthelovefromparents.second,parentsshouldconcernmoreabout
children’smoraleducationratherthanmakeeveryefforttodelightthem.onlywiththejoint
effortsofthesocietyandparentscantoday’sseedsbecomestrongtrees.
arevisedversion:
…,thesonseemstobeannoyedtocelebratebirthdayathome,makinghisparents
embarrassed…..
outtobethe“emperors”ofthehome.theybecomemoredemandingandtakethehighliving
standardforgranted,whichleadstothelackofgratitudetotheirparents.
frommyperspective,it’saseriousissuenevertobeneglected.tosolvethe
problem,…….
---george
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buildupamoresolidmoralstandard建立坚实的道德准则
【篇三:
非凡作文参考讲义】
非凡作文参考讲义
浙江教育考试院2012年样卷
请根据下图写一篇100—120个词的短文。
你的短文应包括下列要点:
1.简要描写图画内容;
2.说明图画含义;
3.表达你的观点。
注意:
1.短文的标题和开头已给出(不计词数);
2.参考词汇:
spoil宠坏
toomuchcarespoilsachild
asisshowninthepictureabove,theplantisbeingwateredtoomuch.wecanseethattheleavesoftheplantfalldownandobviouslytheplantisquiteunhealthy.
thepictureindicatesthattoomuchcarewillspoil/doharmtothechildren,althoughparentsdoeverythingforthemoutoftruelove.
asfarasiamconcerned,ifparentswanttheirchildrentobestrongerandmoreindependent,theyshouldletthemgothroughdifficultiesratherthanoffertoomuchcareandspoilthem.byexperiencinglifeonhisown,onecanbemuchhealthierbothphysicallyandmentally.
杭州非凡教育2012二模
互联网给人们生活、工作带来了很多便利。
但网上存在的许多涉及暴力、欺骗等不良现象也影响了青少年的健康成长。
请结合下图,谈谈你自己的看法。
具体要求如下:
1.简要叙述英特网给人们生活和工作所带来的便利;
2.结合下图简要分析英特网所带来的弊端;
3.针对弊端谈谈你的看法及应采取的措施(至少2点)。
注意:
词数:
100~120,文章开头已给出(不计入词数)。
thereisnodoubtthatwehavebenefitedalotfromtheinternetinoureverydaylife.
asoneoffamousoldsayingsgoes,eachcoinhastwosides.therearealsosomeshortcomingswithinternet.forexample,itcontainssomeunhealthycontentsuchasviolenceandcheating,whichdoharmtopeople,especiallytheteenagers.
asfarasiamconcerned,althoughweshouldrecognizetheconvenienceinternetbringsus,thenegativeeffectsofitshouldnotbeignored.effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem,suchasencouragingchildrentodeveloppositiveattitudetowardslifeandgettingridofunhea