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综合改错（ErrorsCorrection）：

☐大学生村官之我见

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☐和谐宿舍的建设之道

☐“富二代”affluent2ndgeneration

☐特长生是否可以不用通过考试上大学？

☐汉语热的现状及其原因

☐考试作弊或论文抄袭与大学生诚信的重要性

☐大学生应该杜绝校园浪费

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☐大学生给老师评分是否合理？

一、语法错误

二、词汇错误

三、逻辑错误

四、多词少词

Example:

Televisionisrapidlybecomingtheliterature

ofourperiods.Manyofthearguments1.time/times/age

havingusedforthestudyforliteratureasa2./

schoolsubjectarevalidfor∧studyoftelevision.3.the

一、语法错误

1、平行结构（notonly...butalso\both...and\either...or\and）

1）Aprofessor'ssalaryishigherthanasecretary.[secretary's]

2）Oneoftheseisinformative,interesting,andiseasytounderstand.[去掉]

3）Definingaproblemiseasierthantoprovideasolution.[providing]

2、连词错误

1）Candlewilllaterbereplacedbylamp,thatcouldburnlongerandlighter.[which]

2）Thechildrenattendedasmallelementaryschool（oftenofjustoneroom）tothattheyhadtowalkeveryday,possiblyforafewmiles.[which，that前只能有except和in。

exceptthat除此以外；inthat因为，体现在]

3）Itwillbeinterestingtodiscoverhowmanyyoungpeoplegotouniversitieswithoutanyideaofthattheyaregoingtodoafterward.[what，what相当于thethingthat]

4）Itappearsthatweallfindcompanyinsound,ifwedemandalittlequietfromtimetotime.[but或yet]转折，所以不能用if

5）Theyarelikelytotravelmoreandtowantmoreeducation.Nevertheless,manymorejobsareavailableintheseservices.[Therefore或So]因果

3、分词错误

1）Police'srecordsshowasurprisedlinkbetweenchangesintheseasonsandcrimepatterns.[surprising]

2）Eventhequietofourcarefulprotectedwildernessareascanbeinvadedatanymomentbyapassedjet.[passing]

3）Soasportsman'sindividualwayofwalkingwithraisedshouldersisimitatedbyanadmiredfan.[admiring]

4、指代错误

1）Abreakintheiremployment,oradecisiontoworkparttime,willslowitsraisesandpromotions-asitwouldformen.[their]

2）Clearlysomerisksareworthtaking,especiallywhentherewardsarehigh:

amansurroundedbyflamesandsmokegenerallyconsidersthatjumpingoutofasecond-floorwindowisanacceptablerisktosaveitslife.[his]

3）Themodernlight-housealsoidentifiesitinacodeknowntoallships.[itself]主语宾语相重叠用反身代词

5、形容词、副词（略）

6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）

1）Businesstodaywhetheritisrunningalittlegas-stationorabigfactorytakegoodmanagement.[takes]

2）Advancesintechnologyhasalsochangedpeople'slives.[have]

3）Butif98percentofusdoesn'tneedtowork,whatarewegoingtodowithourselves?

[don't]复数

4）Whetherwomenwhohavestartedacareerwillattainpayequalitywithmenrestonatleasttwofactors.[rests]句子做主语为单数

5）Insomeplacesallthetreeshavecutdown.[havebeen]

二、词汇错误（搭配错误、用词错误）

三、逻辑错误（肯定否定乱用）

1）Bloodpressuredrugsdefinitelyhelpsomepeopleliveafteraheartattack,butthesesamedrugsmaybebothnecessaryandharmfulforthosewithonlymildbloodpressureproblems.[unnecessary]

2）Ineverycase,theinfluentialpersonmayconsciouslynoticetheimitationbuthewillfeelcomfortableinitspresence.[unconsciously]

四、多词少词（少介词、冠词、形式宾语；多介词和副词）

1）WhentwoAmericansmeetforfirsttime,itisnormalforthemtocalleachotherbytheirgivennameimmediately.[thefirst]

2）Infact,untilrecentlyseawaterhasalmostbeconsideredtobeuselessandnovalue.[ofno]

Passage2

Untiltheverylatestmomentofhisexistence,man

hasbeenboundtotheplanetonwhichbeoriginatedand

developed.Nowhehadthecapabilitytoleavethatplanet1.has

andmoveoutintotheuniversetothoseworldswhichhe

hadknownpreviouslyonlydirectly.Menhaveexplored2.indirectly

partsofthemoon.putspaceshipsinorbitaroundanother

planetandpossiblywithinthedecadewilllandintoanoth-3.on

erplanetandexploreit.Canwebetooboldastosug-4.so

gestthatwemaybeabletocolonizeotherplanet5.planets

withinthenot-too-distantfuture?

Somehaveadvocat-

edsuchaprocedureasasolutiontothepopulation

problem:

shiptheexcesspeopleofftothemoon.But

wemustkeepinheadthebillionsofdollarswemight6.mind

spendincarryingouttheproject.Tomaintainthe

earth'spopulationatitspresentlevel,wewould

havetoblastoffintospace7,500peopleeveryhourof

everydayoftheyear.

Whyarewespendingsolittlemoneyonspace7.much

exploration?

Considerthegreatneedforimproving8.Considering

manyaspectsoftheglobalenvironment,oneissurely

justifiedinhisconcernforthemoneyandresources

thattheyarepouredintothespaceexplorationef-9.去掉

forts.Butperhapsweshouldlookatbothsidesofthe

coinbeforearrivinghastyconclusions.10.arrivingat/reaching

Passage3

Mostpeopleworktoearnalivingandthey

Producegoodsandservices.Goodsareeither

agricultural（likemaize）ormanufactured（like

cars）.Servicesaresuchthingslikeeducation,1.as

medicine,andcommerce.Thesepeopleprovide2.Some

goods;someprovideservices.Otherpeopleprovide

bothgoodsorservices.Forexample,inthesame3.and

garageamanmaybuyacarorsomeservicewhich

helpshimmaintainhiscar.

Theworkpeopledoiscalledaseconomic4.去掉

activity.Alleconomicactivitiestakentogethermake

uptheeconomicsystemoftown,acity,acountry,

ortheworld.Sucheconomicsystemisthesum-total5.之前加an

ofwhatpeopledoandwhattheywant.Thework

peopledoeitherprovideswhattheyneedorprovides

themoneywiththattheycanbuyessential6.which

commodities.Ofcourse,mostpeoplehopetohave

enoughmoneytobuycommoditiesandserviceswhich

areessentialbutwhichprovidesomeparticular7.nonessential

personalsatisfaction,suchastoysforchildren,visits8.之后加to

thecinema,andbooks.

Thescienceofeconomistisbasisuponthefacts9.based

ofoureverydaylives.Economistsstudyoureveryday

livesandthegenerallifeofourcommunitiesinorder

tounderstandthewholeeconomicsystemofwhichwe

areapart.Theytrytodescribethefactsofthe

economyinwhichwelive,andtoexplainhowit

works.Theeconomistmethodsshouldofcoursebe10.economists’

strictlyobjectiveandscientific.

Passage4

Britishpeopledon'tdrinkasmanyteaasthey1.much

usedto,butGreatBritainstilltakesalmosttwenty-

fivepercentofallworldexportsofthecommodity.

TheworldlargestproducersofteaareIndia,China2.world's

andtheSriLanka.3.去掉

Thequantityofteaisaffectedbytheclimate,4.quality

bythelatitudeatwhichitisgrownandalsoby

thatpartoftheteabushisplucked.Infact,as5.which

DominicBeddard,ateataster,tellsus,favourcan6.flavour

evendependonwhichdaytheleafisplucked:

"Thereareveryconsiderabledifferencesbetweenteas

fromthesameestatemadeondifferentday,"hesays.7.days

Processingteaisacomplicatedprocedure.After

thegreenleafhasbeenplucked,itisprocessedina

factory.Quicklyandcarefully,theteaisreducedto8.slowly

asmallbrittleparticle,whichisthendriedandlooks

liketheteayouseeinapacket.Theteacompanies

thenrelyontastersasDonimictovaluethetea.This9.之前加such

hastobedoneonaday-to-daybasisbecauseof

fluctuationsinquality.Havingtotasteuptosix

hundredcupsofteaadaycertainlycausesDominic's10.makes

jobanunusualone!

take=accountfor

9题或者把as改成like

causesb.todo

makesbsth不是双宾语，而是宾语和补语

Passage5

Parentscanbesupportiveofsuspicions.They

canbehelpfultotheteacher,orareinneedofhelp1.be

themselves.Sometimes,Ithinkparentsaretoohard

totheirchildren.Ihaveseenmanyparentsofthis2.on

kind.Ioftenhavetheproblemofparentscomingin

andtellingmewhattheyreallytreattheirkids.They3.how

tellmethattheyusuallystandovertheirkindswhen

theydotheirhomework.Theychecktheirworkand

makebigfussoverthegrades.Theycriticizethekids4.之前加"a"

overeverythinghavingtodowithschool.My

responseusuallyis:

"well,youknow,heisreallya

goodkid.Heisfineinmyclass.Maybeyoushould

notbetoostrictwiththem."5.him

Wewantparentstorealizethefactthatteachers

areprofessorsatworkingwithchildren.Theyhave6.professional

observedmanychildrenandmanyparents.Because

ofthis,andbecauseoftheirspecializedtraining,

teacherscanberealisticaboutchildren.Teachers

knowwhetherparentswanttheirchildrentodowell7.that

andtobehavewell.Butteachersknowlesswhat8.better

childrenshouldbeabletodoatdifferentagesand

stages.Theydon'texpectthe8-year-oldstodothe

workthatcanonlybedonebythe12-year-olds.

Parents,inthecontrary,oftenexpecttheirchildren9.on

todowhatisusuallybeyondtheirageandability.

Obviously,thismaymakegreatharmtothe10.do

children'sdevelopment.

standover密切监视某人

what后面必须缺少主语或者宾语

makeabigfuss大惊小怪

Passage6

Thusyouexperiencesuccessasyoucomplete

eachchapter.Whileyouhavecompletedtheoverall5.haven’t

goal,youknowyouhaveprogressedtowardit.

Passage7

althoughthetremendousamountsofmoney,time3.despite

andenergygivingovertooralhealth.

Although后面必须接句子

Critics,ontheotherhand,slamtheprofession.

Itcanbeconservativelyestimatedthatatleast

15percentofUnitedStatesdentistsare

incompetent,honest,orboth,saysaformer10.dishonest

Passage8

Allthesetokensofsuccessareinasensemerelybribes

providedbyanotherperson.Therefore,theycanbe10.However\But

effectiveanduseful.

inasense某种意义上

Passage9

Itisnotjustinacademythatchildrenarebeenpushed4.being

toofarandtoofast.Someparentsstarttheirpreschool

Weneedtoabandon