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☉6.犯罪

☉7.弱势群体：

妇女的权利，妇女参军

☉8.体育

雅思写作错误检查表（10条）

1.使用了正确的语法结构：

时态语态，主谓一致，从句，用词准确（名词，动词，形容词的形式），介词，冠词

2.句式有变化

3.使用了一定量的词汇

4.拼写没有错误

5.观点明确，语意精准不模糊

6.每段主题句都表明了该段中心思想，所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题

7.大量的过渡性词语（逻辑连接词），使句子间和段落间都具有逻辑性和条理性

8.提供了足够的细节，例子或论据

9.每一段话都得到充分展开

10.每一段话都紧扣文章主题

如何应用：

a.1347当做检查项目，其他当做考前提醒

b.时间紧，就改第一段和每段的前两句话

三.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走

1.转述背景，扩展题目（setting/backgroundinformation）：

把题目所提供的背景再用自己的话拓展转述同义替换一下

题目：

Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportsormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobeagoodsportspersonormusician.

Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

考官写的开头段：

Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sports,artormusic.

2.说明意图（statementofpurposes）：

写作意图=你的立场或者观点，争取用一句话说明你的观点，位置可以是在首段的最后一句

3.提及下文，分支观点的罗列和总结（summaryofmainpoints）:

对主要观点用短语或者短句形式进行总结概括

注意：

一般情况下包括前两步就可以了，第三步视情况而定.句子个数不是绝对的

开头段写作套路赏析

Itisinevitablethatastechnologydevelops,sotraditionalculturemustbelost.Technologyandtraditionareincompatible,youcannothavebothtogether.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

开头段1：

Itisafactoflifethattheadvanceofscienceandtechnologyhasbeenaccompaniedbyadeclineintraditionalculture.（背景转述）Inmyopinion,thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,becausesomeaspectsoftraditionalculturehamperprogressandshouldbeabandoned.Moreover,itisnaturalthatpeopleshouldwanttofindnewwaysofdoingthings.（写作意图）

Itisafactoflifethat…

这是现实中的事实….

Itisnaturalthat…

很自然….

Itisquitecommonthesedaysthat…

目前很普遍的是….

开头段2：

Itisanundeniablefactthatscientificandtechnologicaldevelopmentshavebroughtconsiderablebenefitstoeverywalkoflife.EspeciallysincetheIndustrialRevolutiontookplace,ourliveshavebeenmademuchmoreconvenientbyinventionssuchastrains,airplanesandcomputers.（背景转述）ButIthinkthatthelossofourtraditionalcultureistoohighapricetopayforit.（写作意图）

1.Itisanundeniablefactthat…

不可否认的是…

2.AistoohighapricetopayforB

A对于B来说是一个巨大的代价

Theenvironmentaldeteriorationanddestructionaretoohighapriceforoureconomicgrowth.

四.议论文五大题型分类和写作套路

（一）讨论型discuss

题目表述：

Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

讨论正反两方面观点并给出你的观点

例如:

题目1

Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendecidingonthepunishment.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

题目2：

Somepeoplebelievethatculturewillberuinedifitisusedtoearntourismrevenue,butothersconsiderthattourismistheonlywayofprotectingaculture.

讨论型discuss写作套路

套路1.两方平衡式---两个观点公平讨论

开头段：

不表达个人观点立场

主体段1:

反方观点（你不倾向的观点）--2点理由

主体段2:

正方观点（你相对倾向的观点）--2点理由

结尾段：

方法1---你同意其中一个观点

方法2---都同意

套路2.一方倾向式---两个观点不公平讨论

表达个人观点或立场

详谈正方观点（你相对倾向的观点）----2-3点理由

简谈反方观点（你不倾向的观点）----1-2点理由

重申你的观点或立场

文章布局及思路练习题目1---犯罪类

正方观点—惩罚固定

1.Fixedpunishmentwillhaveadeterringeffectonsociety.（对…有威慑作用）,accomplishthepurposeofdeterrence

2.Guarantee/ensuresocialstabilityandsecuritytoalargeextent

3.Asignofthetriumphofgoodoverevil

4.fixedpunishmenttoeachtypeofcrimecouldraiseindividuals’awarenessofobeyingthelaw.

反方观点—惩罚不固定

1.Takingthecircumstancesandmotivationofacrimeintoaccountisaprerequisiteforestablishingandensuringjusticeandequity.

绿色部分：

同类信息大量携带（并列）

前提,先决条件：

precondition,premise,prerequisite

在….的前提下:

underthepremiseprecondition/prerequisiteof

2.Somekindsofcrimesshouldbetakendifferently,suchasself-defenseandmanslaughter.自我防卫和过失杀人

3.Criminallawshavetoprovideminimumandmaximumpenalties惩罚forthepunishmentandthelawalsohavetoforeseecertaincasesofexemptions.免除，豁免

文章布局及思路练习题目2---旅游类

正方观点---旅游业有益于文化保护

1.Intergratingtourismandculturalheritagecouldprovideeconomicincentivesforprotectingculture.

economicincentives=financialsupport

2.Museums,historicalsitesandruinsenablethevisitorstogetadeepinsightintolocalcustomsandpractices,experiencelocaltraditions,artandheritages,respectthehostcommunityanditsenvironment,promotethedialogueovernaturalandculturalresourcesbetweendifferentcountries.

反方观点---旅游业有害于文化保护

1.Tourismcreatespollutionandwaste.Therubbishdiscardedbytravelerswouldhaveanegativeimpacton/doharmto/dogreatdamagetothetouristspotsandlocalculturalruins.

2.Excessivebuilding（roads,hotelsetc.）destroysnaturalhabitatsandspoilsthelandscape.

3.Localtraditionsmaybelostduetotheexoticculturalconflicts.

4.Traditionaljobsandskillsdieout（e.g.farming,fishing）.

5.Localpeopleareforcedtoworkinthetouristindustry,whichwouldtaketheirattentionandvigorawayfromtheculturalconservation.

（二）.同意与否型agreeordisagree

Doyouagreeordisagree…?

Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

考试重点

Itisoftensaidthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolsaretooacademicinorientationandthatitwouldbemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatterssuchashomemanagement,workandinterpersonalskills.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

题目2：

Somepeoplethinkthatstricterpunishmentfordrivingoffendersistheonlyeffectivewaytoimprovesafetyontheroad.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

同意与否型agreeordisagree写作套路

明确表达个人观点立场

辩护段：

用2-3个理由（分支论点）为自己立场辩护,每个分支论点后紧跟2-3句支持句

让步段：

承认对方观点有好处（1句）并解释（1-2句），然后指出其缺陷并进一步修正它或提出改进建议（1-2句）

重申立场并引申展望

文章布局及思路练习题目1---教育类

Educationusedtobeashortperiodoftraining,buttoday,peopletreatitlikealifelongpractice.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

接受终生教育的理由

1.Inordertosurviveinthefiercecompetitionoutofsociety,peopleneedtoreceivereeducationtoimprovequalificationandobtainspecializedexpertiseorall-roundability.

2.People’seducationconceptisintransition,studentsarenotconfinedtoacertainagegroupandeveryonecouldchoosethewayofstudysuitabletohimself.

3.Valueoflife,self-value,self-worth,自我价值ambition,questforknowledge求知欲andspiritualneedsmotivate/urge/stimulate/spur促使peopletopursuelifelongeducation.

让步：

教育可以是短期的

1.Somekindsofschoolingcouldbeaccomplishedinarelativelyshortperiod,suchaslanguagetraining,orcomputerskillstraining.

2.Forsomerelativelyimpoverished/poverty-strickenfamilies,ashort-termeducationismuchmoreaffordableandaccessible.

文章布局及思路练习题目2---政府职能类

Thereisnowanincreasinglytolerantattitudetowardshomosexualityinsociety,especiallyinthewest.Somegovernmentsshouldchangethelawtoallowhomosexualmarriages.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

同意特殊癖好者结婚

1.Effectivelyslowdownthebirthrateandpopulationgrowth.

2.Isgoodforeliminatingdiscriminationagainsthomosexualsingeneral.

3.Ensurethejusticeandequityofsocietyandcivicrights.

4.Lightenthespiritualburdenandkillthelonelinessofthehomosexuals

不同意特殊癖好者结婚

1.Asgayorlesbiancouplesareunlikelytohavechildren,thereisnorealnecessityfortherighttomarry---marriageisthegraveoflove.

2.Mostofthemajorreligionsintheworld,suchasChristianity,IslamandJudaismfrownuponhomosexuality.

frownupon:

不赞同，不批准

（三）.比较优缺点型advantagesanddisadvantages

Advantagesanddisadvantages

Benefitsanddangers

Strengthsandweakness

Meritsanddrawbacks

Positiveandnegative

Inordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,studentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthispracticeoutweighitsdisadvantages?

Nowadays,moreandmorestudentschoosetopursuetheiradvancedstudyinforeigncountries.Discussthemeritsanddrawbacksofstudyingabroad.

比较优缺点型写作套路

先不用表达个人立场

主体段1：

论述advantages

主体段2：

论述disadvantages

表达个人立场

文章布局及思路练习题目1—教育类

Inordertoimprovethequalityofeducation,studentsshouldbeencouragedtoevaluateandcriticizetheirteachers.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthispracticeoutweighitsdisadvantages?

学生参与评估老师的好处

1.Contributetotheimprovementofteachingmethods,changethetraditionallearningbyrote死记硬背orspoon-feedschooling.填鸭式学习，booststudents-centered/students-orientededucation,andeventuallyrealizetheimprovementofinstruction.

2.Strenghtenteacher-and-studentinteractionandrelationship,openupaheart-to-heartdialoguebetweentheteachersandstudents,whichcouldnotonlyenhancetheteachingqualityoftheteachersbutalsocontributetothepsychologicalgrowthofthepupils.

3.Evaluationfromthestudentsmaybethemosteffectiveway,forstudentscouldjudgewhethertheteachingisproductiveorn