短文改错新题型.docx

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短文改错新题型

短文改错新题型专题训练一

1.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。

1.

ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.

Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

2.

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

3.

ItsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlasttime．NowI'dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer．

Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool．Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent．Ismiledtohimandlethimcome．

Afterawhile,hebegantocry．Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened．Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher．Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness．Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed"Mother"forthestudents．Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem．Doyouthinkso?

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．

4.

Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.

5.

Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.

6.

InSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,theyfeltabitofpitybutverydelighted.Ithinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.

7.

OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman，whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years．Sheisalwaysworkinghard．Foramodelteacherformanyyears，sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass，shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible．Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting．InherspareSheIntime，sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays．Shelovesussomuchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus．Inthefact，sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend．Weallrespectandlovehim．

8

ThedayismyDad’sbirthday.ThisafternoonIwenttotheshoppingcenter

downtown,andboughtpresentforhim.ThenItookthesubwaytraintohome.

Sittingonthetrain,Ithoughtmydadwillbeveryhappywhenshesawthe

present.Atthenextstat