深圳英语中考作文模板文档格式.docx

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11.采取有效措施来…takesteps,takeeffectivemeasurestodosth

12.有利有弊Everycoinhasitstwosides。

13.身心两方面bothphysicallyandmentally

14.缓解压力/减轻负担reducestress/pressure

15.相反onthecontrary。

16.毫无疑问Thereisnodoubtthat…

17.充分利用makefulluseof/takeadvantageof.

18.随着时间的流逝Astimegoesby,______

开头

1.Inrecentdays

2.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.

Somepeoplefirmlybelieve/think/say/holdtheopinionthat_______,because________.whileothersstronglybelieve________.

3.Thereisanoldsaying,”Failureisthemotherofsuccess”

Today,____,whichhavebroughtalotofharmsinourdailylife.

First,____Second,____.Tomakethingsbetter,/Tomakethingsworse,/muchworse,/evenworse,_________

3.Nowadays，itiscommonforpeopletowritemicroblogs.Peoplelikeitbecause______.Besides，______.

4.Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology/society,thegreenhouseeffect/ourenvironmenthasbecomemoreandmoreserious/moreandmorepopular/.Wecanseemoreandmorepollution.

5.Everythinghastwosidesand______isnotanexception.

Ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

6.Manis/Humanbeingsarenowfacingabigproblem,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Thatispollution.（which代替前面一句，逗号不可少。

）

同学们经常用的是it。

也可以。

但标点符号不一样。

Wearenowfacingabigproblem.Itisbecoming……

7.______hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylife.Thereisnodoubtthatithasbroughtusalotofbenefits/advantages,butmeanwhile/atthesametimeithascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.

中间段落句

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句

1./Mostimportantofall,/firstofall,/inthefirstplace/firstly/Tobeginwith,

besides,/moreover/inaddition,/furthermore/also,

inthatcase,asaresult,though,However,inotherwords,

2.Onthecontrary，somepeoplebelievethat___.Theysay____.

ButIdon"

tthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolvetheproblem.Foronething,_______.Foranother,________.

3.weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasuresto______.

ononehand,________.Ontheotherhand,________.

4.Ifully/totallyagreewiththestatement/ideabecause______.

5.Inmyopinion,Ithinkitnecessaryto____.Thereasonsareasfollows.First_____.Second______.Lastbutnotleast,______.

6.Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework，suchas，washingclothes，cleaningtheroomandwateringflowers

结尾

·

atlast/lastbutnotleast/allinall/inaword/Tosumup

1.Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof________.Onlyinthiswaycanwe______inthefuture.

2.Fromabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat____.

Wecaneasilydrawaconclusionthat_____________

3.Personally,Ibelievethat_____.

Hopefully,studentsatschoolcanstudyandplaysafelyinthefuture.

4.Ifallofusmakegreatefforts/tryourbestto__________,Iamsure__________

5.ifeveryonepaysmoreattentiontoourenvironment,therewillbelesspollution

审题，书写，无语法错误，语句通顺最关键

（满分作文标准：

包含所有要点。

能围绕内容适当发挥。

应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇。

用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚）

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：

（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。

（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

（5）书写字迹和标点符号，大小写是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。

经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。

抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。

一篇简洁、通顺的文章，建议大部分同学模仿

Nowadays,manycountriesintheworldhavefoundcasesofthenewH1N1fluvirus.It’ssaidthatpeoplewithH1N1fluviruswillcough,haveafeverandfeeltired.Topreventthevirus,wecandomanythings.Firstly,we’dbetternotgotoplaceswheretherearemanypeople.Secondly,weneedtowashourhandsoftenwithsoapandwater,especiallyafterwecoughorsneeze.It'

salsoagoodhabitforustoexerciseregularly.Itcannotonlyhelpuskeepfitbutalsoimproveourhealthagainstillness.Andhavingagoodsleepisimportant,too.Peoplewhoaretiredorunderstresscangetsickeasily.Andthen,eatmorefruitandvegetabletokeepourselvesfitandstrong.Lastbutnotleast,openthewindowandkeeptheairintheroomfresh.Ifwealldothesethings,wewillpreventthevirus.Sothereisnoneedtobeworried.Ibelievewewillwinthroughintheend.

有争议的、正反观点的文章，用以下的作文模板

Microblog

Today,ourclassheldaheateddiscussionaboutwhetheritisgoodforstudentstousemicroblogs.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somestudents/mostofthestudentsholdtheopinion/agreethatitbringsmuchbenefitstousandwecangetalotofknowledgefromit.Firstly/Ononehand,throughmicroblogs,wecanknowmorefriendswithsimilarinterests.Secondly,itbecomespossibletotalktofamouspeopleclosely.Besides,itisaconvenientwayforustoshareourjoyandsorrowwithourclosefriends.Sometimes,itcanreduceourpressureinaway.

However,aquarterofthestudentsarestronglyagainstit.Theythink（that）……..andItcanhardlybetrusted.Ontheotherhand,mostoftheyoungteenagershavenoabilitytotellthetruefromwrong,sotheymaybemisledbycertainfalseadvertisements.

Inmyopinion,theadvantagesofwritingmicroblogsfaroutweighthedisadvantages。

Itcannotonlypractiseourwriting,butalsoexpressourfeelings.Butasastudents,weshouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeonit.Afterall,studycomesfirst./studyshouldbeputinthefirstplace.

aboutholidays

Somepeoplethink…….isveryimportant.Firstly,wecouldhaveagoodrestandrefreshourselvesafterseveralmonthsofhardwork.Secondly,wecouldspendmoretimestayingwithourfamily.Thirdly,wewillbeabletousetheone-weekvacationtotraveltosomefartherplacessuchasforeigncountries.

　　However,otherpeopleholdopposite/differentviews.Theythink（that）itcausesalotofproblems.Foronething,/ononehand,Itmayleadtotrafficjamsandvisitorswillnotenjoythemselvesifthetravellingspotsareover-crowded.Foranother,/ontheotherhand,……

　　Inmyopinion,Iprefera7-dayholiday.Icannotonlysleepwellanddoexercise,butalsoreadsomeinterestingbooks.……….

以下的文章是hottopic，积累素材而用，有的地方还不通顺。

亲们也许可以写得更好！

Foodsafety

Everydaywehavetoeatfoodanditcangiveuslotsofenergy.However,inthepasttwoyears,foodsafetyhasbecomeaseriousandimportantproblem.Unhealthyfoodisharmfultous.Sowemustdosomethingtomakeourfoodsafe.

First,weneedtoletallthepeopleunderstandthedangerofusingadditives,whichcancausemanyhealthproblems.Second,thegovernmentmustmakesomeusefullawstomakesurethatthefoodproducerswhouseharmfulmaterialsarepunished,sothattheyneverdoitagain.Third,businessmenshouldbeeducatedtobeawareofpeople'

shealthinsteadofbeingonlyinterestedinmakingmoney.

Beside,asforus,we'

dbetternoteatanythingindirtyplacesthoughsomefoodisdelicious,because…...

Isincerelyhopethatthewholesocietypaymoreattentiontofoodsafety.

Shoppingonline

Nowshoppingonlineattractsmoreandmorepeople.Ofcourse,ithasalotofadvantages.First,theproductsontheInternetarecheaperthanthoseintheshops.Second,wehavemanydifferentkindsofproductstochooseontheInternet.Inaddition,it’smoreconvenient.Wejuststayathomeandpressthemouseinsteadofshoppinginacrowdedandnoisyshoppingmall.

However,ithasdisadvantagesaswell.Forexample,theproductsmaynotbegoodenough.Andthesellerscanhardlyprovidegoodservicestoeveryone.Sobecarefulwhenyouareshoppingonline!

Somestudentsthinkit'

sveryconvenientforustogoshoppingontheinternet.SomeshopsontheInternetareopenforalmost24hoursaday,sowecanbuywhatwewantatanytimeifwelike.What'

smore,weneedn'

ttowaitinaqueue.

However,somestudentsdisagreewiththem.Theysaytheycan'

tseethethingswhileshopping.Sotheyarenotsurewhethertheyaregoodornot.Theyareworriedaboutthequalityofthegoods.Besides,theycan'

tenjoythehappinessofshoppingwithfriends.

Advertisements,goodorbad?

Whenwetalkaboutthistopic,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions/ideas.

Thereisnodoubtthatanumberofadsbringgreatbenefitstouspeople,tosomeextent.Somepeoplethinktheycanbenefitalotfromads.Tobeginwith,adspromoteeconomybyencouragingpeopletobuymoregoods.Second,adsgivepeoplethelatestinformationaboutproducts.Third,theycanhelppeoplebuybetterandcheapgoods.

However,ontheotherhand,someadshavebadeffects.First,theypersuade/encouragepeopletobuytheproductstheydon’treallyneed.Andfalseadscheatconsumers.Second,asurveyshowsthatchildrenwhowatchmanyadsaremoreinterestedinpossessionswhentheygrowup.Besides,adsputmuchpressuretobothchildrenandparentsbecauseitiseasierforchildrentoasktheirparentsformoneytobuythingswhentheyfindattractivethingsfromadvertisements.Thatistosay,childrenareeasiertobeinfluenced.Lastbutnotleast,paperadsareakindofwasteanddamagetheenvironment.

Infact,everycoinhastwosides.Sowhatweshoulddoistomakefulluseofthebenefitsofads.

Shouldstudentsbringmobilephonestoschool

Nowadaysmobilephonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularamongthemiddleschoolstudents.Somethinkitisgoodforstudentstobringamobilephone.Butsomepeopledonotthinkso.Theythinkitisbadforstudentstobringamo