回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见.docx

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回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见

回复英文论文编辑部的修改意见Response to Editor and Reviewer

………..,Ph.D.Professor

LaboratoryofPlantNutritionand

EcologicalEnvironmentResearch,

HuazhongAgriculturalUniversity,

Wuhan,430070,P.R.China

E-mail:

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Jun10,2009

RE:

 HAZMAT-D-09-00655

DearEditor，

Wewouldliketothanktheeditorforgivingusachancetoresubmitthepaper,andalsothankthereviewersforgivingusconstructivesuggestionswhichwouldhelpusbothinEnglishandindepthtoimprovethequalityofthepaper.Herewesubmitanewversionofourmanuscriptwiththetitle“………………………”,whichhasbeenmodifiedaccordingtothereviewers’suggestions.EffortswerealsomadetocorrectthemistakesandimprovetheEnglishofthemanuscript.Wemarkallthechangesinredintherevisedmanuscript.

Sincerelyyours,

………………..,Ph.D.Professor

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Thefollowingisapoint-to-pointresponsetothetworeviewers’comments.

Reviewer#1:

General comments:

Reviewer#1:

ThepaperpresentsaninterestingexperimentalinvestigationtoassessthephotocatalyticdegradationofpolyethyleneplasticwithgoethiteunderUVirradiation.Theresearchworkisclearlypresentedbuttheconclusions,theintroductionandotherpartsofthepaperrelatetheresultsobtainedwithunjustifiedclaimsabouttheimpactofthework.Inaddition,thebackgroundinformationprovidedintheintroductionpartneedssignificantenrichment.Inparticular:

Answer:

Thankyouforthecommentsonthepaper.WehaverevisedthemanuscriptassuggestedsinceweconsiderthatsomesentencesordescriptionsintheConclusionpartarenotsoaccuratebasedontheresults. 

Page3,line46:

recyclingisnotavailable…

Eventhoughalargeamountofagriculturalplasticwasteinburntorburiedinthefields,somequantitiesofspecificcategoriesofgoodqualityagriculturalplasticwastearerecycledinseveralcountrieswhileresearcheffortsandprojectsareinprogresstoimprovethecorrespondingpercentage.Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature.

Answer:

Yes.Youropinionsinspiredusandwerevisedthemanuscriptaccordingly.Intherevisedpaper,thesentence“Recyclingisnotavailableforeconomy,”waschangedto“Inordertoreducecosts,thethicknessofapplicationagriculturefilmsinsomeregionsinChinaislessthan0.005mmresultindiffculttorecycle,Andbecausetheprocessofrecyclingisexpensiveandtime-consuming,onlyasmallpercentageoftheagriculturalplasticwasteiscurrentlyrecycledattheendofcultivationinChina[4]”（Page3line49-52）.

Page3,line76:

biodegradableandphotodegradable….

Therearedevelopmentsintheareaofbiodegradablematerialsthatindicatetheopposite.Concerningphotodegradablematerials,theyarenotconsideredtorepresentasolutionastheyhavenotbeenproventobebiodegradable.Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature. 

Answer:

Thankyouforremindingustheimproperdescriptiononthestudy.Wehavetheimproperpartsrevisedaccordinglyandhopethatthisnewmanuscriptwillbeconvincing（Page3line52-55）.

Page4,line65:

findaneco-friendly….

Thebesteco-friendlydisposalforagriculturalplasticwasteisrecyclingandfornon-recyclablematerials,energyrecovery.Degradingmaterialsproducedfromfossilsourcesisnotaneco-friendlydisposal!

Theauthorsshouldrefertothecorrespondingrecentliterature.

Answer:

Thankthereviewerforthecomments.We’verecognizedthatsomeofthedescriptionsinthepreviouscopywerereallynotsoaccurateandalittlebitarbitraryduetoourpoorEnglishlevelandthestudyonrecentliterature.Afterconsultingmorereferences,wethereforerevisedpapertobemorereasonableandconvincing.

Page4,line66:

tocarbondioxideandwater….

Conversionoffossiloilbasedmaterialsintocarbondioxideandwaterismuchworsethanconvertingrenewable-basedmaterialsintocarbondioxideandwater 

Answer:

Thankthereviewerforthecomments.We’verecognizedthatthisdescriptioninthepreviouscopywerenotaccurate,duetoourpoorstudyonrecentliterature.Thesentence“itisveryimportanttofindaneco-friendlydisposalofplasticwastewheretheydegradetocarbondioxideandwaterunderthesunlightirradiationwithoutproducingtoxicbyproducts.”hasbeendeleted.

Page6,line112:

volatileproducts….

Definetheproducts.

Answer:

WehavedefinedthevolatileproductsinPage6line124-125.

Page9,line185:

eco-friendlydisposal….

Theclaimsoftheauthorsthatthistechniqueisaneco-friendlyonearenotjustified.Theconclusionsandotherpartsofthepaperneedtoberewrittenandlimitthescopeofthepresentedresearchworktothetechnicalobjectiveswithoutderivi