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3.你的看法

第一段：

Reachingnewpeakofpopularityinmodernliveisonlineshopping,whichhasattractedpeoplefromallwalksoflife.Specifically,itisnotsurprisingtoseeyoungladiesorderingfashionabledressesfrom,youngmenpurchasingmagazinesfromsomebook-sellingwebsite,andeventheagedbuyinghouseholdappliancesfromtheInternet.

第二段【版本一】

ItisindisputablethattheprevalenceofE-shoppinghasimpact,beitstrongorslight,onourdailylive.ThankstothemarketplaceontheInternet,wehavemorechoicesthanevertopaybillforgas,televisionortelephonewithoutgoingtoanofficeseveralblocksaway.However,thismarveloustechnologyiscondemnedbysomeindignantcharacters.Accordingtothem,withthisbusiness,nodepartmentwouldhaveacontrolonthequalityofserviceorcommodities.

第二段【版本二】

TheprevalenceofE-shoppingseemsnotunusual,butisactuallyacontroversialissue.Indeed,withtheassistanceofthisamazinginternet-basedmarketplace,wecanconvenientlyenjoythepleasureoforderingservicesorcommoditieswithbutfewclicks.However,thereisnogardenwithoutweeds!

Thisnewtechnologyisalsoblamedbysomecriticsforitsinabilityofhavingcontroloverthequalityofgoodsorserviceitoffers.

第二段【版本三】

Injustonegeneration,millionsofpeople,regardlessoftheirstatusorbackground,haveindulgedinthis“OnlineTransaction”.ScholarsandsocialresearchersfromeverypartofthenationaresinginghighpraiseofthevalueoftheE-BusinessSystem:

convenience,efficiency,andlowcosts,butfewhaveeverlookedatthesideeffect:

lackofqualityassurance.Consumerswhofeeloverchargedorunderservedcanhardlyfindachancetocomplain.

第三段【版本一】

Althoughitisnotsoperfect,wecanneverdenytheconvenienceitbringsus.Wearedefinitelysteppingintoanerawhenallthesetroublearesolvedandeveryone,nomatterheisanadultorakid,well-educatedorjustnormal,wouldenjoytheconveniencewhichE-shoppingbringus.

第三度【版本二】

Noteveryonecanwithstandtheimperfectionofthenetwork-basedshoppingsystem,andsomefranklydeclaretheirdistastefortheClick-to-Buyprocess.Butasawell-educatedyounglady,Iamconfidentthat“involutionmakeshuman,andrenovationmakeshumanlife”,andthatthemarchoftimewilldefinitelybringaboutthematureofonlineshoppingsystem.

CelebritiesBeingProducts’Spokesmen

1.明星代言现象很普遍；

2.明星代言广告可能存在一些问题；

3.我的看法。

第一段

Haveyoueverfoundanycelebrity’sadvertisementsontheInternet,televisions,newspapers,magazinesorontheoutdoorbulletins?

Ifso,remember,it’snothinguncommon!

Inthecontemporarysociety,itisnotsurprisingforcelebrities,ortheso-calledsuperstars,tobespokesmenorrepresentativesforawidevarietyofproducts.

Popularastheyare,theseadvertisementshavegivenrisetosomeproblemsforbothcelebritiesandtheconsumers.Tobeginwith,beforerepresenting,astarmayknownothingabouttheproduct.Thus,consumersmaybemisled.Evenworse,forthesakeofmoney,somestarsadvertiseforitemswithlowquality,evenforfakecommodities.InthecaseofSanlu,thepublicimageofstarsinvolvedwasspoiled.Lastbutnotleast,thehighincomeofadvertisingdoesnotdeservetheirlabor,whichwidensthegapbetweenthepoorandtherich.

Theprevalenceofpubliccharacteradvertisingseemsnotunusual,butithasbecomeasocialdisaster.Admittedly,businessmenhavetherightandneedtomaketheirproductshouseholdbrandswiththeassistanceofsuperstars’advertising.However,someofthemhavebroken（blowup）themoralbottom-line.Somecelebrities,fortheirinabilityofjudgingthequalityofcommoditiestheyadvertise,getinvolvedintoscandaloffake-productadvertisingandmoney-orientedboasting.Consequently,thepublicfigureisruinedandconsumersaremisled.

Injustonegeneration,formillionsofpeople,regardlessoftheirstatusorbackground,theirconsumingdecisionhasbeenguidedby“PublicFigureAdvertising”.Scholarsandsocialresearchersfromeverypartofthenationaresinginghighpraiseofthevalueofthesocialinformationsystem:

efficientandpersuasive,butfewhaveeverlookedatthesideeffect:

inaccurateandmisleading.Consumerswhowerepersuadedtopurchaseasubstandardproductcanneitherbesatisfiednorblamethespokesman–superstarintheirmind.

Frommypointofview,itishightimethatmeasuresweretakentoeliminatethedemerits.Firstly,lawsshouldbeworkedouttoregulatecelebrities’advertising.Secondly,starsshouldberequiredtotellthetruthtothepublic.Onlybydoingsocanstarsbetrustedbytheirfansandcanconsumersbenefit.

第三段【版本二】

Whenitcomestotheconcretesolutiontothisdemerit,itoccurstomostpeoplethatthebestpolicyistopunishthesestarsbycorrespondinglaws.Legislation,however,isatime-consumingprocess,andworksonlyonextremecases.ThekeyfactorliesintheTVinstitutions,whilethose“superstars”arenotthecoreofthecorruptedgroup.Therefore,abetterapproachmaybetotakemeasuresagainsttheseorganizational“rumorproducers”.

附录：

经典观点对比型作文常用句型

Para.1（第一段开头句）

1.Therearisesacontroversialdebateoverwhetherweshould…or…/Xisonearthablessingorcurse.Thosewhoareinfavorof…deemthatisadvisableto….Accordingtothem,noonecould…without….

2.Weoftenfindourselvescaughtinadilemma,whetherweshould…or…/viewXasablessingorcurse.….

3.Whetherweshould…or…/viewXasablessingorcursehastriggeredaheateddiscussion.

4.Whetherweshould…or…/viewXasablessingorcursehasbecomeaverycontroversialissue.

5.Astowhetherweshould…or…/viewXasablessingorcurse,people’sviewsaredivergent.

6.Whetherweshould…or…/viewXasablessingorcurseisaverypopulartopicwhichisoftentalkedaboutnotonlybycityresidentsbutbyfarmersaswell.

例：

Whetherweshouldreadselectivelyorextensivelyisaverypopulartopicwhichisoftentalkednotonlybystudentsbutbymostscholarsaswell.

Para.2 

（第二段开头句）

1.Thearguermayberightabout….,butheseemstoneglect/failtomention（takeintoaccount）thefactthat…

2.Itwouldbenaturetotaketheviewthat….,butitwouldbeabsurdtoclaimthat….

3.Suchidea,ifnotentirelyunreasonable/unacceptable/inappropriate/improper/undesirable,issomewhatmisleading/doubtfulandneedscarefulconsideration.

Para.3（第三段开头句）

1.Ifaskedtomakeachoice,Iwouldnothesitatetosidewiththeformer/latterview.

2.Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…

Students'

CommonwealActivity

1.目前大学生有很多机会参与公益活动；

2.有人认为参与这些活动对学生有益，而另些人则认为会影响学业；

3.你的看法。

Inaworldofincreasingdiversity,collegestudentshavemoreaccesstoparticipatingincommonwealactivities.Nobetterexamplethanthefollowingonecanillustratethistrend.On8th,Aug.2008,tensofthousandsofyoungcollegestudentswereorganizedtobevolunteersofthegrandevent,BeijingOlympicGames,servingtheathletes,refereesandspectatorsfromeverypartoftheworld.

Whetheritisablessingorcurseforstudentstotakepartinsuchanactivityhastriggeredaheateddiscussionamongthegeneralpublicandstudentsthemselvesalike.Somefolks,longingforthecorrespondingtrainings,deemitanopportunityforstudentsnotonlytoacquirepracticalskills,buttobroadentheirhorizon.Sadly,othersclingtotheideathatitistotallyawasteoftime,spendingawholesummeronsomethingirrelevanttoacademicpractice.

Frommyperspective,Iwouldneverhesitatetoengagemyselftoactivitieslikethis.Asastudent,mysolepurposeisnotonlytoobtainknowledgeconcerningmymajor,buttofullyadaptmyselftosociety.Itismydutytobeproficientincommunicatingwithpeoplewithdifferentbackground,servingpeopleinneedandcontributingmyyouthtomycountry.

TheWaytoGetBooks

1.书籍对学生而言是不可或缺的；

2.有人赞成学生买书，有人赞成学生借书；

Windistofirewhatdistanceistolove——风对于火，正如距离对于爱情！

Gunsaretosoldierswhatbooksaretostudents!

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Lookingattheirbookcases,wecanjudgewhethertheyarequalifiedcollegestudentsbydeterminingiftheyownsufficientmaterialsrelevanttotheirprofession.<

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Scanningtheircomputer,wecandeclarewhethertheyarediligentstudentsbyestimatinghowmanyE-booksareontheirhard-disks.Indeed,booksareanindispensibletoanycollegestudents.

Sincebooksareanessentialpartofstudents’campuslife,howcouldtheygetaccesstothesereadingmaterials,tobuyortoborrow?

Thisquestionhastriggeredaheateddiscussionamongus.Thevastmajorityofusarewillingtoowntheirownbooks,thatis,tobuy.Accordingtothem,possessingthesebooks,theycanreadthemanytime,takethemanywhere,andlendthemtoanyonewithoutanylimit.Forsomepeople,however,thatisjustanunaffordabledream.Intheireyes,booksarecostlyandonecanneveraffordtopurchaseallthebooksheneed.Therefore,theyinsistonmakingafulluseoflibrariesandborrowingmaterialsatlowexpense.

Intheaggregate,theformermethodrendersmethefreedomtoread,though,atahighcost,whilethelatterbringsdownmyexpensesbutsetsuptoomanyrestrictions.Asacollegestudent,Iamdeterminedtoachieveabalancebetweenthesetwochoices.Specifically,Iwouldbuymyfavoritebooksandborrowtherestfromeitherlibrariesormyfriend.

以下信息六级可能用到：

图表作文段落功能

1、描述图表

2、分析原因

3、个人建议

图表类型

1.Table:

数据繁杂，点到为止

2.Piechart:

两种词组（consistof/becomposedof）（accountfor/makeup/takeup）

3.Columnchart