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ontheright（leftside
closeto,nextto,opposite,across,
inside,outside
in（tothesouth/east/west/north
ononeside...,ontheotherside（of
常用短语和句型:
方位
1.Thereisatallshelfontheleftofmyroom.（ontherightof,inthefrontof,nearthewindow,
2.Abovethebed,thereisalargepaintingofthebluesea.（Ontherightoftheroom,
3.Nexttoitisabed.（Infrontofit,Atthebackof,Inthemiddleof,Totherightof
4.Theyareoppositethedoor.（ontheleft/rightoftheroom.
5.Theofficebuildingisintheeastofthecampus.（inthesouthof,tothewestof,infrontof,behind,atthebackof,
6.Themonument,whichwasbuiltin1894,standsinthecenterofthesquare.
描述国家,城市等
7.ChinaislocatedinAsia.（besituated…besurroundedby,lietotheeastof
8.Itcoversahugeareaof9,600000squarekilometers.
9.Thepopulationofthiscityis100,000.
路线
10.Whenyoucomeoutof…（getto…reach…
11.Crossthestreet（river（keepwalkingalong…walkdown…
12.TurnrightattheendofBridgeStreetintoRiversideRoad.（thesecondtrafficlights,thefirstcrossing,
13.Takethefirstturningonyourleft.（takethepathwhichcrossestheriver.
14.Gostraightontothetrafficlightandthenturnright.
15.You’llsee（findit
人物
16.Mygrandpa,kindandpatient,enjoystalkingwithkids.
17.Heisabout5feetand7inchestall.
18.Shehasaroundfacewithtwobigeyes.
描述物品
19.Thisropeis100meterslong.=Thelengthofthisropeis100meters.=Thisropeis100metersinlength.（inweight,inwidth,inheight,insize,incolor,inshape
20.Itisaroundyellowhatwithpinkflowersonit.It’smadeofstraw.
21.Therearethreebooksintheherdrawer.
1.1999年NMET书面表达
假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。
最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。
他三年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况.参照下图,给他写一封回信,介绍你校的变化。
注意:
1回信须包括图画的主要内容,可适当增减细节,使内容连贯。
2词数100字左右。
图1图2
A.审题:
①一封信（体裁
②谈学校的变化（三年前图1,三年后图2
③重点在三年后的描述
B.题纲及常用结构
①开头语:
收到来信hearfromsb./get（receiveyourletter….
②学校的变化:
新教学楼:
anewschoolbuilding
图书馆:
ournewlibrary
新操场:
thenewplayground
树木环绕:
lotsoftrees
③表述方位的词:
ononeside（ontheotherside
ontheright（left
Therebe….,
infrontof,inandaround
C.将以上要点扩展成句并连文,注意句与句之间的过渡。
DearMr.Smith,
Iwassopleasedtohearfromyouandamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyschool.Youareright,Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplace.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyoucomeandseeforyourselfsomeday.
Bestwishes.
Yours,
LiHua
2.假如你作为崔剑锋的同学接受美国一家报社记者的采访,请你介绍有关他的事迹。
根据所给提示,写一篇100词左右的短文。
Name:
CuiJianfeng
Birthday:
8,15,1971
Birthplace:
Heze,Shandongprovince
Education:
1989---1993,BiologyDepartment,PekingUniversity
1996Doctor’sdegree,PrincetonUniversity,NewJersey
Deeds:
1977diedforsavingaboyon16thSept.
范文分析:
①文字和图画综合表达的一篇文章;
②文章可分为两大部分
B.题纲及常用短语:
①第一部分,谈他的经历:
talkabouthisexperience.
Experience
·
name
Birthday
Birthplace
Education
Wordsandphrasescouldbeused.
graduateform/goabroad/receivetheDoctor’sdegree
②第二部分:
谈他的救人及牺牲的故事HisDeeds
Wordsandexpressions:
goouting/goforapicnic
hearthecryforhelp
seesb.doingsth.
jumpintotheriver
loseone’slife
③第三部分:
结尾Conclusion
Hisstoryinspiredlotsofpeople.
We’llrememberhimforever.
Heisalwaysinourhearts.…
C.成文
写作答案:
CuiJianfengwasborninAugust,1971,inHeze,Shandongprovince.AftergraduatingfromBiologyDepartment,PekingUniversity,hewentabroadforfurtherstudiesinPrincetonUniversity,NewJersey.Therebestudiedveryhardanditwasin1996thathereceivedtheDoctor’sdegree.Onthe16th,September1997,hewentoutingwithhisclassmates.Neartheriver,theywerehavingapicnicwhenheheardthecryforhelp.Hesawaboysinkinginthewater.Withouthesitation,herushedtowardstheriverandjumpedintothewater.WiththehelpoftheotherAmericanstudents,theboywassaved.Cuiwasabouttogetoutofwaterwhenarockhithimonthehead.Cuilosthislife.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity.We’llrememberhimforever.
练习
1.假如你叫Alice,你本应去机场接Danial,但你不得不去医院接你的母亲回家,你的朋友Mary主动提出替你去机场接Danial,你给Danial写信说明上述情况,并描述Mary的外表。
2.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留,请你帮他安排一天的活动。
要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。
颐和园饭馆
北京大学
宾馆图书城
【参考译文】
1.DearDanial,
I’mverysorryIcan’tcometomeetyouattheairportsinceIhavetotakemymotherhomefromhospital.MyfriendMaryhaskindlyofferedtomeetyouandbringyouhome.Asyouhavenevermetherbefore.I’lldescribehertoyou.
MissMaryisayoungladyinhertwentieswithglasses.Sheisofmediumheight.Shehasaroundfacewithwavyhair.Shelikeswearinghigh–heeledshoes.ItiseasytorecognizeherbecausesheisusuallydressedinT–shirtandaskirt.Sheisalwayscheerful.
IdohopeyoumanagetorecognizemyfriendMarywithoutanydifficulty.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.
Yoursincerely,
Alice
2.DearMike,
I’mgladtohearyouarecomingsoon.I’veplannedaone-daytripforyouinBeijing.
InthemorningyoucanfirstgototheSummerPalace,whichisoneofthemostbeautifulparksinBeijing.Thereyoucangoboatingandclimbing.It’salsoaniceplacefortakingpictures.TheninthemiddleofthedayyoucanenjoyaChineselunchinarestaurant.
Intheafternoon,IsuggestyouvisitBeijingUniversity.Asyouknow,itisfamousbothinChinaandintheworld.Beforeyougobacktoyourhotel,youcandropintheBookTown.TherearenotonlydifferentkindsbooksbutalsomanyChinesepaintings.Ihopeyou’llhaveagoodtime.
Bestwishes,
DearJohn,I’msogratefulyou’recomingtoseemyfatherat10:
00a.m.onSunday.HereishowyoucanfindPeople’sHospital.AfteryoucometotheDaZhongSquare,walknorthwardstillyougettothegateofEastPark.Turnrightandwalkalongthestreet.Itwilltakeyouabout5minutes’walktoarriveatthepolicestation.Thenwalknorthwardsagainandturnrightatthesecondcrossing,youwillfindpeople’sHospitalinfrontofyou.I’llmeetyouatthegateofthehospital.I’msureyou’llhavenotroublecominghere.XiaoLi
假如你在路上遇见一位外宾，他问你去购物中心怎么走。
购物中心离问路处只需半个小时，但为了使这位外宾顺利找到购物中心，你给他画了下面的一幅草图。
现在，请你根据草图，把给外宾指路的话写下来。
内容不超过100词。
•Theshoppingcentreisnotfarfromhere.It’sonlyhalfanhour’swalk.Nowtakethefirstturningontheleft.ThengoalongYananRoad.Pleaseturnrightatthetrafficlights.That’stosay,takethesecondturningontheright.Thenyou’llfindabridgeonyourleft.Crossthebridgeandturnleft.Thenyou’llfindaverylargebuildingonyourleft.It’stheshoppingcenter.Iamsureyoucann’tmissit.对于地理方位的介绍的文章，首要的是抓住方位，确定要介绍物体或位置的参照物。
而在具体写路途的转换时，句句应衔接，不要有遗漏。
同时选择合适的介词和上下文的连接词，使文章连贯清楚。
描写方位方面的句型以及词汇有：
1.mainroad主干道one-wayroad单行道highwaymain公路street大街sidewalk人行道crossing人行横道overheadwalkway天桥trafficlights信号灯trafficblock（jam交通阻塞2.在…拐角处on/atthecornerof紧接着nextto/beside在前面infrontof朝…走goto在…中心inthecentreof在…十字路口atthecrossing在小河那边beyondtheriver在街对面crossthestreet/ontheother（oppositesideofthestreet顺（沿…走walk（godown在…尽头attheendof径直走gostraighton向左拐向turnleftinto走左边第三个道口takethe3rdturningontheleft通过广场goacrossthesquare通往leadto坐落于liein…/belocatedin…/besituatedin•
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