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1、如今不少学生在英语(论坛)学习中不重视拼写
2、出现这种现象的原因是
3、为了改变状况我认为
Currently,collegestudentsofthenewage,cannotfailtonoticetheobviousfactthatagrowingnumberofstudentsdon'
tattachimportancetospellinginEnglishlearning,whichhastriggeredawideconcernsamongpeople,especiallyforEnglishspecialistsintheMiddleKingdom.
Thisprevailingtrendisdrivenbyahostofrelevantreasons.theprimaryreasonbehindthistiderootsinitsless-emphasis.Specificallyspeaking,agrowingnumberofstudentshavegrowingrespectforthecontentofEnglishlearningratherthanspecificdetails.Plus,themodernandcurrentEnglishlearninginschoolsorcollegescancontributetothisexistingheadache.
Giventheseriousnessofthisproblem,inanefforttoenhancestudent'
sabilitytospellinginEnglishlearning,urgentandeffectivestepsmustbeadoptedbeforethesituationgetsworse.Inthefirstplace,amoreeffectivelytoughrulesandregulationsofteachingevaluationshouldbeputforwardtofixthisproblemsmoothly.Secondly,wearesupposedtojoinourforcestolaunchaschool-widecampaigntopublicizethesignificanceofspelling.Besides,wealsoshouldboostourawarenessofcorrectspellinginEnglishlearning.Simplyput,wecanfullybelievethatourcombinedeffortswillreaprewards.
权威点评:
本次作文总体上来说属于传统三段论形式。
具体来说,从结构上看,是常规的现象描述—原因分析——具体措施的三段论模式,是我们点点英语在最后预测中所反复强调的段落形式,对于考生来说,几乎没有难度,但是很容易写成模板式的作文,套用一些老套的单词、短语和句型,如果想得到高分,一定要在句式和搭配上有所创新,在就是我们点点英语团队所提出和倡导的闪光点作文,比如说表达原因的时候,一般模板都是:
therearesomereasonsasfollows,但是我们所提倡的是高分作文的句式:
thistrendisdrivenbyahostofrelevantreasons等。
从话题上来看,即在意料之中,又在意料之外,意料之中就是说这个话题考生都不陌生,是我们耳熟能详的,贴近考生,而且很多考生都存在的问题,意料之外是指题目出的比较细致,很难做到考前精确预测,这是一种很好的现象和考查形式,四级改革之后的目标就是考查考生的应用能力,而不是背诵能力,因此这种题材的不确定性给考试增加了难度,但是更能考查考生的临场发挥和平时的积累,特别是基本功的能力,因此我们点点英语主张考生在未来的四级备考中,最重要的是基本功的训练,特别是单词,短语和句式,段落的写作,考前的预测做到有效的补充,这样考试才会取得好成绩。
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四级作文:
1、如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2、出现这个现象的原因是
3、为了改变这种状况,我认为
DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling(上海昂立教育阿古琳娜)
Nowadaysfewerandfewerstudentspayattentiontotheirword-spelling.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thereisadramaticincreaseinthenumberofstudentswhocanonlyimitatethepronunciationofawordbutbeincapableofspellingit.InthisessayIwilldiscussthefactorsofthisphenomenonandoffermyownviewonit.
Thereareanumberoffactorscanbeaccountableforthissituation.OneofthemostcommonfactorsisthatfewerandfewerstudentsneedtowriteEnglishessays.Besides,thegoalofmoststudentstolearnEnglishistospeakitandpasstheexaminationwhichmeanstheyjustneedtoselectthesimilarwordsaccordingtothelisteningmaterialsandpassages.Perhapsthemostcontributingfactoristhewideuseofelectronicdevicessuchase-dictionariesandcomputersandstudentsnolongerneedtocorrectthewordsbythemselves.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ifirmlyarguethatweneedtoattachgreatimportancetoword-spelling.Tothestudents,theyshouldwriteEnglishasmuchastheycan.Meanwhile,totheteachers,thedictationsshouldbereinforcedintheclass.
一、明星代言问题
OntheCelebritySpokesperson
Currently,wecouldhardlyliveasingledaywithoutseeingacelebrityspokespersonpromotingaproductorasocialcampaignonTV,netorothermedia.Thisisanintenselypopulartrendthatwecannotfailtonotice.
Thereisnodoubtthatthecelebrityspokespeoplecouldboostthesaleofaproduct.Ahostofcelebrityspokespersons,however,haveemergedasthemarketingtoolofsomecompanies,evencompaniesproducingandsellingfakeandinferioritems.Thiskindofbehaviorhasproducednegativeimpactsonconsumersandwholesociety,whichshouldbeseverelycriticizedandpenalized.Ofcourse,asisknowntoall,everythinghasbothbrightanddarksides.Somestars’endorsementofsocialactivitiesandpubliccampaignsraisespublicawareness,givingrisetochangesinpublicbehavior.Inthiscase,theyserveaspositiverolemodelsofthegeneralpublic.Tonameonlyonecase:
PuCX,ahouseholdfigure,actingasthecelebrityspokesmanoftheChinaAIDSFoundation,contributesgreatlytothecauseofAIDSpreventionandcureinChina.
二、关于选秀节目
Overthepastcoupleofyears,avarietyoftalentshowshaveemergedonTVchannelsacrossthenation,fromSuperGirlstoHappyBoysandsoforth.Thistypeofentertainmentprogramisintenselypopular,especiallyamongyoungadultsandhasproducedprofoundimpactsontheirstudiesandlife.
Thereareacoupleofreasonsbehindthetide.Tostartwith,youngfolksneedrolemodelstolearnfrom.Somanyofthemarecrazyforcontestantsparticipatingintheseprograms.ThisgivesrisetotheincreasingemergenceoftheseshowsbecauseTVnetworksnaturallyneedtocatertoyoungaudiences.Plus,thankstoeconomicandpoliticalreformscarriedoutbythegovernment,thiscropofyounggenerationhavemorefreedomanddesiretoexpressandshowcasethemselves.Therefore,agrowingnumberofyoungpeopledesiretogetinvolvedintheseshows.
Thisisadivisivetopic.Onmypersonallevel,thetalentshowisasuperbmeansofrelaxingandamusingandcanhugelyrelieveourstrains.Ascollegestudents,however,wecouldnotaffordtoindulgeinthemandshouldbeawareoftheutmostimportanceofstudies.
三、食品安全问题
OntheFoodSecurity
Overthepastcoupleofyears,severalcasesofthefoodscandalhavebeendisclosedonvariousmedia.Theproblemoffoodsecurityhasbecomeahotbuttonacrosssociety.Theprevalenceoffoodinsecurityhasgreatlyimpactedpublichealth,whichthegovernmentcouldnotaffordtoignore,accordingtotheonlineeditionofthePeopleDaily.
Thereareacoupleofdrivingforces,Iwouldargue,behindthisundesirabletide.First,inthecourseoftherapideconomicevolution,weignoremoraleducation,givingrisetotherisingrateoftheproblem.Moreimportantly,thelackofadequateregulationandpunishmentonthoseillegalproducersenforcesthetrend.
AsConfuciusinstructed,itisbetterlatethannever.Promptandstrictmeasuresshouldbetakentoturnbackthiseviltrend.Thegovernmentshouldlaunchamassivemoralcampaigntoeducateallcitizensanddrawuptougherlawstocrackdownonthoseirresponsiblecorporationsandprohibitthemfromenteringthefoodindustryagain.Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthroughourcombinedeffortsweareboundtoenjoymorerisk-freefoodsinthedaysahead.
四、社会不文明现象
OnUncivilizedBehaviors
Wecannotfailtonoticethatcountlessuncivilizedbehaviorsexistinourdailylives,suchasspitting,talkingloudly,littering,sayingnastywordsinpublicplacesandsoforth.Allthesearebadmannersthatweshouldnotlosesightof.Asanancientlandenjoyingasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years,ChinaiswitnessingasurgeinimproperactsthateveryChinesecitizenshouldfeelashamedof.UncivilizedbehaviorsbyahostofChinesebothathomeandabroadhaveseriouslyaffectedChina’simage,accordingtoaneditorialpostedonPeopleDaily’sofficialwebsite.
AsChinese,weshouldnotgetoffendedwhenotherspointoutourweaknessesbutshouldfocusmoreattentiononimprovingourselves.Weshouldstrivetoidentifythecausesofthoseimproperbehaviorsandfindwaystoeliminatethem.Thereareahostofcauses,Iwouldargue,behindthistrend.Tonameonlyone:
thelackofmoraleducation.Thegovernmentshouldwageamassivemoralcampaigntofightagainstthistrendandweourselvesshouldendeavortobehavedecentlyinourdailylives.Ascollegestudentsofthenewage,weshouldtaketheleadingrole.
五、感恩
OnCultivatingtheSenseofGratitude
Oncollegecampusesacrossthenation,thereisanoticeablephenomenonthatwecannotaffordtoignore:
fartoomanyyoungcollegestudentslackthesenseofgratitude,oneofthecountlesstraditionalvirtuesofthisancientlandwithasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years.Theseyoungadultswerenotandarenotawareofthehugeimportanceofexpressinggratitudetothosewhooncehelpedthem,fromteacherstoparentsandsoforth.
Personally,Ideemthattherootcauseofstudentswithoutagracefulheartisthattheyreceiveaneducationnotvaluingthemoralsphere.Istronglybelievethatjointeffortsfromfolksacrosssocietyarethefinalremedyforthissocialheadache.Asyounguniversitystudentsofthenewera,weshouldmakeourowncontributionstothiscause.Imagineaworldwithoutthesenseofgratitude.Thiskindofworldisdoomedtofailure.Simplyput,weshouldjoinourhandstoheightenourawarenessoffosteringagracefulheart.Onlyinthiswaycanwebuildoursocietyintoaharmoniousone.Myfellowstudents,Ibegyoutoactfromnowon.
六、大学生使用信用卡现象
OnCreditCard
Atpresent,awidevareityofcreditcardsissuedbymajorbanksandshoppingmallsarethrivingincollegesanduniversitiesacrossthenation,withamultitudeofcollegestudentsmakingupagrowingpopulationofcardholders.Indeed,oneoutoffivestudentsisestimatedtobeinpossessionofatleastonecreditcard,andthefigureisexpectedtobeonthesteadyincrese,thelatestdatapublishedbyYangtzeEveningPostsuggests.
Likeanythingpriortotheemergenceofthissmallpieceofplastic,theincreasingpopularityofcreditcardoncampushasbothbrightanddarksides.Ontheonehand,youngadultsincollege,freefromthetroubleofpocketingaconsiderablesumofcash,couldenjoytheconvenienceofcreditcardsandpurchaseexpensivegoodsbyinstallments.Ontheotherhand,however,theirresponsibleandexcessiveuseofthecardsbytheseyoungsters,thema