北京一模二模开放作文汇编Word格式.docx

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Possibleversion:

Inthepicture,Icanseeaboydrawingaclockonthewallwithcare.Thenumber13atthetopoftheclockcatchesmyeye.Whatanunusualidea!

Ifwedivideonedayinto26hours,wemayhavetwomorehoursofsparetimetoenjoy.

Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhouseunusualideastochangeourlife,justlikeEdisonandJobs.Facedwithoureverydaylife,theyalwaysthinkoutoftheboxandhavecreativeideas.Lifecanbeordinary.Butifwehavemoreunusualideas,wewillenrichourlifeandmakeitwithadifferenceliketheboyinthepicture.

3.西城（团结就是力量）

Unitybringsstrength.

Asisdepictedinthepicture,somesmallfish,fleeinginalldirections,arebeingchasedbyalarge,fierceone.Afewminuteslater,however,thetablesareturned.Thesmallfish,alongwithalargenumberoftheirfellows,returnanddrivetheirenemyawaybyformingtheshapeofalargerfish.

Thehiddenmessagehereisobvious,thatis,unitybringsstrength（提出论点）.Toasmallfish,lifecanbeverytoughasthreatsfromthelargefisharealwaysthere.Thechanceforitssurvivalisslimwhenitfacesalargefishallbyitself.If,however,allthesmallfishformaunitedteam,theymaybecomestrongenoughtodefeattheenemy（结合图画，讲道理论证）.Thesamethingwouldhappeninourlife.Forinstance,wesometimesfacethreatsortroublesthatmaybeunbearable,leavingeachofusinsecureandhelpless.Don’tforget,inthatcase,thatourfriendsandfamilyareasourceofstrength.Iflifeisapondandwearethefishinsideit,weshouldalwaysstayunitedtomeetitschallenges.（联系自身，讲道理论证）

4.海淀（心态：

知足）

theybothseekgreatpleasurebyenjoyingwhatlifepresents，Ifweenjoythethingsinhand,wewillsmilethroughlife

Onepossibleversion:

Asisshowninthepicture,amonkeyispickingandeatingpeacheshappilyonatree,throwingsomehalfeatenonesontotheground.Ahedgehog,atthesametime,iseatingtheleftovershappily.

Frommypointofview,thepictureconveysthatweshouldhaveapositiveattitudetowardslife（提出论点）.Thefoodfortheanimalsinthepictureisnotofthesamequality,buttheybothseekgreatpleasurebyenjoyingwhatlifepresents（结合图画，讲道理论证）.Itisthisattitudethatweshouldadopt.Ifweenjoythethingsinhand,wewillsmilethroughlife,justlikethemonkeyandhedgehoginthepicture（联系自身，讲道理论证）

5.东城（做事方法）

注：

文中必须指出正确的做法

Apropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboyisholdingapairofhugescissorstocutasmallpieceofpaper,butinvain.

Thepicturetriestotellusthatapropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal（提出论点）.Inourdailylife,weconstantlyneedtocarryoutdifferenttasks,whethertheyaresimpleorcomplicated.Weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatadoptingapropermethodisthemostimportantthing.Ifnot,whatevereffortswemake,we’llaccomplishnothing,（联系自身，讲道理论证）justliketheboyinthepicture,whoisusingawrongwaytocutpaper.Itmaybewiseforhimtochangethescissorsintoasmallpairorjustusehisownfingers.Onlyinthisway,canhetearthepaperintopieces（建议正确的做法）.Inmyopinion,choosingasuitablemethodisveryimportantbothinourstudyandinourlife.（升华点题）

6.朝阳（困难与成功）

可能出现的立意:

1.遇到困难时应审时度势，尽可能找到解决办法。

2.要想成功，就不能害怕失败，尝试最重要。

3.不要被表面的困难吓倒，总会有办法。

4.每个人面前都有机会，重要的是能否抓住机会。

5.不同的人看待事物的角度不同（角度1：

悬崖角度2：

梯子）。

6.选用正确的办法是解决问题的关键（走下悬崖，从梯子爬上另一端，而不是跨过沟壑）。

7.……

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,thereisamanhesitatingbeforeagapwhichstopshiswaytothedestination.Thegapisdeepandwide,whichseemshardtocross.However,thereisaladderdowninthegap,whichprovidesaneasyaccesstotheotherside.

Thepictureconveysthemessagethatitisimportanttostudythesituationincaseofdifficulty.Theroadisstoppedbythegap.However,withthehelpoftheladder,onecangototheothersideandcontinuehisjourneytothedestination.Thisalsoappliestoourdailylife.Ifwestudywhatliesbeforeuscarefullywhenwemeetdifficulty,wemayfindawayout.Thus,itisnecessarytostudythesituationandfindasolution.

2011年东城一模

Wealwaysneedabalancebetweenspeedandquality.Ourworkhasnovalueatallifweignorethequalityofit.It’sdefinitelyhelpfultokeepinmindthatnomatterhowfastweneedtoachievesomething,qualitymayneverbeignored.

Aswecanseeinthepicture,twomenarecompetingagainsteachotherinbuildingwalls.Onemanhasbuiltupanobviouslyhigherbuttwistedwall,whiletheother’sworkiscompletelyvertical,strongandsolidthoughlower.

Thepictureimpliesaveryimportantruleofdoingthings—wealwaysneedabalancebetweenspeedandquality.Itisn’tdifficulttoseeexamplesofhowoftenhigherspeedissetupasatarget.“Thefaster,thebetter”hasbecomeamottoforusduetothefiercelycompetitiveenvironmentofoursociety.Howeverourworkhasnovalueatallifweignorethequalityofitjustlikethemanbuildingthetwistedwall.

Asstudents,wearerequiredtodothingsathighspeed.It’sdefinitelyhelpfultokeepinmindthatnomatterhowfastweneedtoachievesomething,qualitymayneverbeignored.

东城二模

丰台一模

Whendoingateamwork,peopleoftenmindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwe’lldothingsblindly.Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners.

Inthepicture,Icanseetwomenaretryingtomakeabench.Bothofthemareworkinghard,sweatingalot.Butobviouslytheyarenailingthelegsondifferentsides.

Seeingthepicture,Ican’thelpthinkinghowridiculousitis.Theyworkasateamandbothofthemdomaketheirefforts.Butunfortunatelytheymindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwe’lldothingsblindly.Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners.Otherwisealltheeffortswillbeinvain,justlikewhatthetwomendointhepicture.

丰台二模

humanbeingsandanimalscanbenefitfromeachotheriftheylivetogetherinperfectharmony

Inthepictures,Icanseeamannailingaboxonatreetomakeanestforbirds.Somebirdsflytoliveinit.Totheman’spleasantsurprise,thebirdseatthepestsandhiscropsgrowbetter.

Thepicturesconveythemessagethathumanbeingsandanimalscanbenefitfromeachotheriftheylivetogetherinperfectharmony（提出论点）.Allthecreaturesontheeartharefriendsandwehumanbeingsshouldcareabouttheothers,justlikethemaninthepicture（联系实际，讲道理）.Hemakesasafeandcomfortablehomeforbirds,inreturnbirdsprotecthiscropsbyeatingpests（联系图画，讲道理）.Sometimesasimpleactofkindnessmaymakeabigdifference.Let’sworktogethertomakeaworldwherehumanbeingsandothercreatureslivetogetherinperfectharmony.

海淀一模

workingaloneorworkingtogetherwithothers。

Therefore,itisessentialforustoworkinaunitedway.United,westand;

divided,wefall.

Weshouldbearinmindthatwecannotsurvivealoneandfrequentlyweneedtounitewithotherstoachieveourgoals.

1．立意：

团结

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,somepeoplearestandinghand-in-hand,formingtheshapeofaheart.Theyareallsmilinghappily.

Thispictureconveysthemessagethatsometimesweneedtobeunited.Therearebasicallytwowaystoaccomplishthings:

workingaloneorworkingtogetherwithothers.Wearebornwithallkindsofambitions,toconquertheworld,forexample.Yetveryoftenweareawakenedupbytheplainfactthattherearecertainthingswecannotaccomplishalone.Therefore,itisessentialforustoworkinaunitedway.United,westand;

Weshouldbearinmindthatwecannotsurvivealoneandfrequentlyweneedtounitewithotherstoachieveourgoals.（124words）

2．立意：

爱心传递

Ascanbeseeninthepicture,manychildrenarestandingmerrilyinacircle,hand-in-hand.Thecircleisheart-shaped.

Thesimplepictureconveysadeepmessagethattheworldwillbefulloflovewheneverybodypassestheirownlovetoothers.Loveisimportantforus.Justasthepictureabove,onlywhenloveisdeliveredfrompersontopersoncanwesenseeachother’strust,concern,warmth,friendship,etc,whicharevitalforeveryone’shappiness.

Inaword,ifeveryoneofuscandevoteabitoflovetoothers,ourliveswillbemorebeautiful.（100words）

海淀二模

Itisimportanttobuildasolidfoundationifwewanttosucceed.Agoodfoundationisthekeytosuccess.

Inthepicture,amanisrowingaboatwithgreatdifficulty.However,thewaterintheriveristooshallowfortheboattomoveon.Obviously,itisdifficulttomovetheboat