高考英语作文高分素材训练23 高考概要写作高分技巧Word格式文档下载.docx

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Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?

Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal”,saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:

LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”

Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate（相称的）totheamountofeffortourchildhasputintoit.

练考场审题

Step1:

精准审题　谋篇布局

文体

议论文

时态

一般现在时

原文分析

第一段:

指出父母过多表扬孩子的弊端

第二段:

指出表扬得太少也不好

第三、四段:

给出建议,要根据孩子实际付出的努力而非最终的结果来表扬孩子

Step2:

头脑风暴　字字珠玉

（1）美词:

extreme,enthusiasm,insufficientpraise,anappropriateamountof,basedon,ratherthan

（2）佳句

①Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.

②Therefore,thegivenadviceisthatanappropriateamountofpraiseshouldbegivenbasedonprocessratherthantheresult.

Step3:

斟酌词句　妙笔生花

要点1:

专家警告家长们不要太多或太少表扬孩子。

一般表达:

Expertswarnparentsnottopraisetheirchildrentoomuchortoolittle.

句式升级（时间状语从句）

专家警告说,父母对孩子的表扬存有两个极端。

Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren. 

要点2:

因此,家长们应该基于过程而不是结果表扬孩子。

Therefore,parentsshouldpraisechildrenbasedontheprocessratherthantheresult.

句式升级（表语从句,被动语态）

因此,给出的建议是,适当的表扬应该基于过程而不是结果。

Therefore,thegivenadviceisthatanappropriateamountofpraiseshouldbegivenbasedonprocessratherthantheresult 

Step4:

衔接过渡　斐然成篇

Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.Ontheonehand,toomuchpraisemightleadtochildren’slackofenthusiasmtoexplorenewthings,forthey’reafraidtheywon’tmeetparents’expectations.Ontheotherhand,insufficientpraisemightletchildrenconsidereffortspointless.Therefore,parentsshouldpraisechildrenbasedontheprocessratherthantheresult.

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读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Ifyou’veheardpeoplesaytheyarehaving“hightea”insomeexclusive,smarthotellobby,youcansmiletoyourself,knowingthat“hightea”isseldomservedtotouristswithfancylodging.

“Hightea”doesn’trefertothe“fancy”fixings,theelegantsilver,thepure-whitetablelinens,ortheluxurysurroundingsofahigh-classsalon.Itisactuallythemainmealoftheday,servedbetween6:

00and7:

00p.m.The“high”inthephrasecomesfromthetimeoftheday,meaning“late”or“high”intheafternoon.

Foralongtime,thelowerandmiddleclassescouldaffordonlyonemealperday.Inordertomakeitthroughtothenextday,themainmealwouldbetakenafterworkandwouldconsistofanythingfromtheremnantsoflunchtotheverybasicfoodstaplesofthetime:

asliceofbread,ahunkofcheese,apieceofsausage,allofwhichwereeatenwhiledrinkingtheireveningtea.However,asthecountryadvanced,thecommonpeoplegotwealthier,andeveningmealsbegantobesupplementedwithheavierfoodslikeroastbeef,fish,eggs,vegetables,andpotatoes.

Sometimesreferredtoasa“meattea”,ora“hamtea”,theterm“hightea”hasbeenreplacedwiththemodernequivalentofdinner.

Incontrast,“lowtea”,or“afternoontea”isservedearlierintheafternoon,usuallybetween4:

00and5:

00.OriginallystartedbyAnna,theDuchessofBedford,thetraditionbeganwhenAnnaneededalittlesustenancetotideherover.

Tidbitswereservedwithtea,andAnnainvitedfriendstoshareconversationoverthesesmallsnacksbeforetheaffairoftheeveningmeal.

Inreality,peoplewhohavebeautiful“teas”withfancypastriesandcakesnowadays,arepartakingofthe“lowtea”or“lighttea”thatbegansomanyyearsagoinAnna’stime.

Whiletherefreshmentsarepretty,theyare“light”andtheemphasisofthe“afternoontea”isonthepresentationofthetea,andtheconversationoftheguests.

【参考范文】

Asthefillingbetweentwodaysbythepoorhistorically,highteaisnowthemainmeal,servedbetween6:

00p.m.（要点1）Incontrast,afternoonteawasonceservedbyAnna,theDuchessofBedford,beforethebigmealtoherguestswithsnacks.（要点2）Gradually,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,dinnergrewoutofhightea,andpeoplearefocusingonconversationoverafternoontea.（要点3）

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TheU.S.FishandWildlifeService（FWS）hasissuedamajorupdatetothenation’spolicyonelephantivory.ThemeasurebansalmostallivorysalesandtradeintheU.S.Itwasalreadyillegaltoimportelephantivoryfromothercountries.Thenewrestrictionscoverivorythathasalreadybeenimported.

Officialshopethemovewillhelpstoppoachingofelephants.Africanelephantsareathreatenedspecies,inlargepartbecauseofillegalhunting.Conservationgroupsestimatethatbetween30,000and50,000wildelephantshavebeenkilledbypoacherseachyearsince2008.

Themainreasonwhypoacherstargetelephantsisfortheirivory,whichisveryvaluable.TheU.S.isthesecond-largestmarketforivory,behindChina.Anti-poachinggroupssaythenewbanmakesanimportantstatement.

Thenewivorybanincludesveryfewexceptions.Someantiquesandobjectsthatcontainarelativelysmallamountofivory,canstillbeboughtandsold.Thenewrestrictionsreplaceacomplexsetofrulesthatmadeitbothdifficulttoknowwhativorywaslegaltosellandeasytocheatthesystem.Forexample,itwaslegaltotradeivoryobjectsthathadbeenmadebeforeelephantsbecameendangered.Unfortunately,someivorydealersgotaroundthisrulebydeliberatelymakingnewitemsappearolder.TheseandotherstrategiesmeantitwasrelativelyeasytosellillegalivoryintheU.S.

TheFWS’snewrestrictionsclosesuchloopholes.Conservationistsagreethatoneofthemostimportantwaystoprotectelephantpopulationsistogivepoachersfewerwaysofmakingmoneyfromtheirkills.Thelessdemandforivorythereis,thelessappealingitwillbetopoachelephants.

Somepeopleareworriedthatthenewbanwillturnpeoplewhocurrentlyownantiqueitemscontainingivory,likemusicalinstrumentsandtrinkets,intolawbreakers.Conservationistsapplaudtherestrictions,however.TheU.S.isalsohopingothernationswillfollowinitsfootstepswithmorerestrictiveivoryrules.Asitbecomesmorechallengingtosellivoryproducts,thehopeisthatpoachingwillslowandelephantpopulationswillgrow.

Ivoryproductsbenefitdealerssomuchthatpoacherssparenoefforttokillelephantswithoutmercy,leavingthemdyingout.（要点1）Toprotecttheendangeredspecies,FWSbansanyivorysalesandtrade,includingthoseimportedlongago.（要点2）Thoughthereareconcernsfromsome,conservationistsstandbythebanstrongly.（要点3）Also,Americaisexpectingothernationstofollowsuittomaketheelephantsmultiplyquickly.（要点4）

Hungerisaresultofpoverty,butitalsocausespoverty.Inmanycountrieswomen,althoughtheydomuchofthefanning,lackaccesstotraining,creditorland.Conflict,poororcorruptmanagementofnaturalresources,displacementofsmallfarmersbynaturaldisasters,andfinancialandeconomiccrisesthateliminatejobsatthelowestlevels,allcontributetocreatingconditionsthatpushthepoorestintohunger.

Tobreakthisviciouscycle,theUnitedStateslaunched,in2010,FeedtheFutureInitiative,whichaimstoreduceglobalhunger,poverty,andundernutritionbyfocusingonsmallholders,increasinginvestmentsinagricultureandsupportingcountry-ownedplansforimprovingfoodsecurityandnutritionwhilegeneratingopportunitiesforeconomicgrowthandtrade.

Backthen,theU.S.governmentselected19countriesinAfrica,AsiaandLatinAmericatoparticipateintheinitiative,basedon5criteria.Since2010,FeedtheFuturehashelped9millionpeoplelivingintheparticipatingcountries,pullthemselvesoutofpoverty.

ThepassageoftheU.S.GlobalFoodSecurityActof2016endorsedFeedtheFuture’sapproachandusheredinaneweraoftheU.S.governmentglobalfoodsecurityinvestment.Anew,correspondingglobalfoodsecuritystrategydevelopedbytheU.S.governmentisguidingFeedtheFuture’sworkastheinitiativeintoitssecondphase.

OnAugust31st,USAIDAdministratorMarkGreenannouncedt