TOEFL托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析Word文件下载.docx

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Itemsmadebyhandoritemsmadebymachine,whichdoyouprefer?

Someitems（suchasclothesorfurniture）canbemadebyhandorbymachine.Whichdoyouprefer—itemsmadebyhandoritemsmadebymachine?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestoexplainyourchoice.

写作思路展开结构分析

这道题还是比较具体的。

不过选择比较自由，无论选哪一种都行，只要列出几个好的理由。

（注意，如果说家具的话也有很多种，根据不同的种类，也可以有不同的偏好）手工：

可以按照特定要求制作，有特色，但缺点是成本往往会比较高。

机械：

一般批量生产，所以相对缺乏特色，但同时成本较低，更容易获得。

本话题高分范文赏析

Thereareawidevarietyofproducts,suchasclothesorfurniture,whichcanbemadeeitherbyhandorbymachine.Bothofthesemethodsofmanufacturingproductshavetheiradvantages,andbothholdanimportantplaceinsociety.Todecidewhichisbest,oneshouldparetheadvantagesofeachmethod.Therearemanyadvantagesofmakingproductswiththeaidofmachines.First,machine-madeproductstendtobecheaperthantheirhandcraftedcounterparts.Asmachinesareverysteadyanddotheexactsamethingeverytimetheyrecreateaproduct,thesetypeofproductstendtohaveconsistentquality.Frequently,handmadeproductshaveextremesintheirproductquality;

itcaneitherbeextremelygoodorextremelypoor.Finally,machine-madeproductshavetheadvantageofbeingabletousesomefinishesandmaterialsthatcannotbeusedwhencreatingsomethingbyhand.Theseincludesometypesofsteel,laminates,andenamelfinishes.Therearealsomanyadvantagesofbuyinghandcraftedproducts.Whenpeoplepurchasehandcraftedproducts,theyaresupportingtheartsandcraftsmunities.

Buyingthesetypesofproductskeepsmanypeopleemployed,asittakesmuchmoretimetocreateanobjectbyhand.Handcraftedobjectstendtohavemuchmorediversity,asitisalmostimpossibletocreateanexactduplicateofanobjectifyouaremakingitbyhand.Overall,Ithinkthatthereareadvantagesofusingbothmachine-madeproductsandhand-madeproducts.Ithinkthatifonecanaffordtobuyhighqualityhandmadeclothingandfurniture,thatwouldbethebestsituation.Thesetypesofproductstendtolastmuchlongerthantheirmachine-madecounterparts,andonecanbesatisfiedknowingthattheyaresupportinganartist.However,ifonecannotaffordtobuyhighqualityhandmadeproducts,itisprobablybettertobuythingsthataremachine-made.Machine-madeproductstendtobeofhigherqualitythanpoorlymadehandcraftedproducts.

Doadvertisementspromotethingswedonotneedorproductsthatmayimproveourlives?

Somepeoplesaythatadvertisingencouragesustobuythingswereallydonotneed.Otherssaythatadvertisements___usaboutnewproductsthatmayimproveourlives.Whichviewpointdoyouagreewith?

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

倾向于同意后者广告的好处：

介绍新产品;

降低报纸、杂志、电视节目的价格。

广告的不良影响（可大多情况下，那不是广告的错，而是制作者的责任，这些可以通过法制解决）结论是，广告有很多好处，也有一些不足，可是没有广告却是不可以的。

Overthelasttwentyyearstheamountofadvertingwearesubjectedtoinourdailyliveshasincreaseddramatically.Ithasgottothepointwhereonecanhardlyturnhis/herheadwithoutseeingawidearrayofmediaimages.Itendtoagreethefactthatadvertisementsmoreoftenthannotpersuadeusintobuyingthingsthatwedonotneed.Oftenitisdifficulttodiscernwhataproductisfromanadvertisement.Advertiserspreyonourbasalemotions,conjuringstrongrelationshipsbetweenourprimarydrivesandtheirproductnamesorlogos.

Aprimeexampleofthisisperfumeads.Inmanyofthesetypesofadvertisementstherearewomeninpromisingpositions,butthereisnomentionoftheactualproductforsale.Theseadsdrawusinandmakeusthinkthatwecanbebetterandmorebeautifulifwehavetheproduct.Inadditiontobeingmanipulative,advertisementsalsofillourenvironmentsandourconsciousness.Thereisnotaboovenueforadvertisements;

theyfillourtelevisions,radios,streetsandelevators.Someadvertisershaveeventakentoplacingimagesoftheirproductsinoururinalsoronboxers'

bodies.Itisimpossibletogetawayfromthem.Toillustratethispoint,allonehastodoistopickupapopularmagazine.Whileflippingthroughthepages,onewillmostlikelyfindthatforeverypageofcontentthereareatleasttwopagesofadvertisements.Itshouldalsobenotedthatasignificantportionofthissocalled"

content"

isactuallyadvertisingindisguise.

Finally,advertisementsfeedonourinsecuritiesandoftensuessfullyconvinceusthatwehavenovaluetosocietywithouttheirproducts.Advertisingwasoriginallydesignedtoshowcaseproductsandinformusastohowtheycanimproveourlives.Thisharmlessformhasbeenreplacedbyamediumthatviciouslyattacksourself-confidenceandself-esteem.Inconclusion,Ipositthatthemaingoalofadvertisementsistoconvinceustobuythingsthatwedonotneed.Asglobalizationcontinuestoshrinktheworld,advertisingcoercesallcountriestobeeconsumernations.

Whypeoplerememberspecialgiftstheyhavereceived?

Peoplerememberspecialgiftsorpresentsthattheyhavereceived.Why?

Usespecificreasonsand

这道题目的要点在于special，考生需要从特殊这一点去进行展开。

比如特殊的礼物带来的特殊的意义，或者特殊的改变等等。

当然，这种特殊也可能是因为送礼物的人所带来的，或是在特定的时间点收到的礼物等等。

examplestosupportyouranswer.

Onecustomthatisprevalentinallsocietiesaroundtheglobeisthatofgift-giving.Thisisatime-honoredtraditioninallcountries,andevokesdifferentfeelingsoremotionsinallofus.Gift-givinghasmanydifferentfunctionsinChineseculture.Onecanreceiveagiftasatokenofaffection,oronecanreceiveorgiveagifttostimulatebusinessopportunities.Inbothofthesecases,thegiftsarealwayswellreceived,andservethefunctionofamemento.

Perhapsthemostmonsituationinwhichagiftisgivenisonaspecialday,forexample,one'

sbirthdayorananniversary.Thesegiftsetoapersonfromlovedones,andusuallysymbolizeaffectionoradmiration.

Thesegiftscanbelargeorsmall.Forexample,myfatherboughtmeadigitalcameraformylastbirthday.Thiswasagreatpresent,andwasquiteexpensive.Ididnotappreciatethegiftbecauseofitsmoaryvalue,however.Ivalueditbecauseitwasaverythoughtfulgift,asmyfatherknewIwasinterestedinphotography.Othergiftshavelessmoaryvalue,butarestilljustasmeaningful.Anexampleofthisiswhenaboyfriendbuysflowersforhisgirlfriend.Theflowersdonotcostalotofmoney,buttheyevokefeelingsofhappinessandlove.

Giftscanalsobegiventostimulatebusiness.Forexample,manybusinessmeninChinawilltaketheirmostimportantclientsonaspecialvacationtoseethesightsofanothercity.Thistripdoesnotrelatedirectlytobusiness,asinmanycases,thebusinessathandisnotdiscussed.Instead,thebusinessmanwilloffersuchatripasatokenoftrustandrespect.Theclientappreciatesthisgesture,asitshowshim/herthatthebusinessmanisseriousaboutwork,andvalueshim/herasacustomer.

nbothofthesecases,thegiftssignifytothereceiverthathe/sheiscaredaboutandisimportant.Itisalwaysatreattoreceiveagift,andmostpeopleviewthisasasignoffriendship-Giftsserveasmementosofthepeoplewhogivethem,whichiswhyweholdtheminspecialplacesinourhearts.

Doyoulikealargeshoppingcenterbeingbuiltinyourneighborhood?

Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatalargeshoppingcentermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?

Why?

Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.

这道题目的关键点有两个，分别是large以及inyourneighborhood，既然是开在社区里的大商场，那么势必会带来商业繁荣的影响，往好了说以后自己买东西会更方便，社区会更热闹更有活力。

往不好的方向展开则可以说社区的安静气氛会受影响变得更加吵闹，同时安全性以及交通出行方面也可能会受到影响。

大家喜不喜欢都可以找到展开的点。

Whiletheproponentsoftheplantobuildalargeshoppingcenterinmymunitybelievethatitwillaideconomicdevelopment,Ithinkthatitwillpossiblydoirreparableharmtoourneighborhood.Theproposedshoppingcenterwilldamageexistingbusinesses,provideinferiorproducts,anddestroytheenvironmentofourpeacefulmunity.

Researchindicatesthatpanieswithlessthan50workersemploymorepeopleandgeneratemorerevenueasapercentageofanation'

sGDPthanlarge-scalecorporations.ThisistrueinAmerica,wheresmallbusinessesareconsideredtheengineoftheeconomy,asitisinourmunitywheremanypeopleownandoperatesmallshops.Largestorescanbuylargequantitiesofgoodsatwholesaleprices.Whilelocalgrocery,thatcannotbuyproductsinbulk,willbeunabletopete.Oncethepetitionisgone,thelargestorecanraiseitspricesandloweritsemployee'

swages.Thisclassicexampleofexploitativemonopolycapitalismimpoverishesamunitywhileenrichingasmallnumberofpeople.

Thegoodssoldattheshoppingcenterwouldbemassproducedandnecessarilyofinferiorqualitytothehandcraftedlocalgoodsandfreshlygrownlocalproduce.Cheapproductslikeplasticfurniturewouldlackthecharacterandlocalflavoroftraditionalwoodenfurnituremaderighthereinourtown.Cheaplymass-producedfood,ladenwithpesticidesandchemicalpreservatives,wouldcrowdoutthehealthier,fresher,andtastierlocalproduceontheshelvesofthelargeshoppingcenter.Lowpricesfromthelargestoremighttemptlocalconsumerstoeatlesshealthyfood,endangeringthehealthoflocalpeopleaswellasharmingtheinesoflocalfarmersandshopkeepers.

Lastly,Imustpointoutthatalargeshoppingcentermightbringunweledevelopmenttooursmallmunity.Uglyandnoisyroadsandparkinglotswouldneedtobeconstructed.Thevolumeofpeoplewantingtobuythingsatthenewshoppingcenterwouldworsenthetrafficsituation,whichisalreadybad.Pollutionfro