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——包含所有内容要点;
——使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;
——语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
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——有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;
——格式和语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
攻略:
在文章中,最关键的地方要埋伏着―亮点‖,切忌犯愚蠢的错误。
关键的地方包括:
开头;
结尾;
段落首句
A:
愚蠢无比的错误+光芒四射的亮点
5+1=6分
B:
光芒四射的亮点+愚蠢无比的错误
18-1=17分
C:
愚蠢无比的错误+愚蠢无比的错误
5-1=4分
2.如何取悦阅卷人
2.1文章脉络清晰;
2.2段落衔接畅顺;
2.3用词造句经典;
2.4书写优雅美观
2.1文章脉络清晰
1)观点鲜明的开头;
2)紧扣主题的结尾;
3)衔接顺畅的中间段
例子:
写一篇500字的武侠小说。
2.2段落衔接畅顺
1)关联词(and,but,so,or)
2)重复词
南北战争前,美国称―邦联‖;
南北战争后,美国称―联邦‖。
Beforethecivilwar,theUnitedStatesare;
afterthecivilwar,theUnitedStatesis.
3)序数词(原因如下,1,2,3,我的观点)
―当前环境污染很糟糕‖,
怎么糟糕?
1、2、3我的观点。
2.3用词造句经典
1)Agentlemanisratherthandoes.
2)Totheworld,youarejustoneperson;
buttome,youarethewholeworld.
★TheCanteenServiceonCampus
Totheworld,ourschoolmaybejustoneschool,buttous,ourschoolmaybethewholeworld.
★StudentUseofComputers
Totheworld,computersmaybecomputers,buttosomestudents,computersmaybethewhole
world.
★TheDayMyClassmateFellILL
Totheworld,myclassmatemaybeoneperson,buttome,friendshipmaybethewholeworld.
3)同位语
形容词最高级:
Helenisabeautifulgirl.
Helenisaverybeautifulgirl.
Helenisaveryverybeautifulgirl.
Helenisthemostbeautifulgirl.
Helenisoneofthemostbeautifulgirls.
HelenisoneofthemostbeautifulgirlsthatIhaveeverseeninmylife.
造句:
王泉是个好老师。
4)定语从句
Topic=>
Keyword
Askonequestion:
Whatisthe―Keyword‖?
The―Keyword‖is…,which…
Topic:
LovearoundUs=>
Whatisthe―Love‖?
Loveis…,which…
①爱心是情感的力量,不论我们周围的世界多么黑暗,爱心都能支撑我们。
Loveisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaround
usbecomes.
★Loveanddedicationisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdark
theworldaroundusbecomes.
★Familyaffectionisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarkthe
worldaroundusbecomes.
★Strongconfidenceisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarkthe
★Thespiritofcooperationisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhow
darktheworldaroundusbecomes.
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★Apositiveattitudetowardslifeisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatter
howdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.
★Friendshipisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworld
aroundusbecomes.
★Knowledgeispower,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.
★Honestyisakindofemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworld
5)仿写
表示―很重要‖,英语咋说?
Beimportant=Beessential=playanimportantpart=matter=bewhatreallymatters
箴言仿写:
Cultivationistothemindwhatfoodistothebody.——-M·
T·
Cicero
AistoBwhatCistoD.
2012年考研作文人生态度——乐观与悲观
Apositiveattitudeistolifewhatthesunistotheearth.
2005年考研作文赡养父母——家庭
Familyistothepeoplewhatlifeistotheindividual.
TheImportanceofReadingClassics
★阅读对于思想,好比运动对于身体一样。
Readingistothemindwhatexerciseistothebody.
ItPaystoBeHonest
★诚信对于人来说,好比生命对于人一样。
Honestyistothepeoplewhatlifeistothecreature.
ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus
★清洁对于食堂来说,好比名誉对于人一样。
Cleannessistothecanteenwhatreputationistothepeople.
2.4书写美观
奖励分(3分)+基准分(5分)
1.书法笔迹2.大字VS小字3.笔的选择4.正确正规可读5.非正规标记:
&
Vs,etc.
6.简写的问题:
WTO?
WorldTradeOrganization(WTO)7.^_^―共200字!
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八股文:
破题、承题、起讲、入手、起股、中股、后股、束股
高分标准:
1.内容要点2.词汇语法3.过渡衔接
1.内容要点——我画你猜
考察能力:
1.描述能力
2.挖掘能力
3.总说能力
考研写作列纲
1)Describethedrawingbriefly
2)explainitsintendedmeaningand
3)giveyourcomments
第一段:
描述
第二段:
意图/现象/寓意
第三段:
己见
2012年
描述(分析碎片)
1.如图所示
2.面对打翻的瓶子,两个人有着截然不同的反应。
3.一个绝望,全完了;
一个赶忙去扶起瓶子,微笑,庆幸还剩点。
词汇语法
Fromthepicture,wecanseethat…
Itcanbeshownfromthepicturethat…
Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,
第一句
Twomenhavedifferentreactiontothebottleknockedontotheground.
Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudetothesamething.
Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,twomenhavedifferentreactiontothebottleknockedontothe
ground.
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Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudetothesamething.
2007年
第二句:
Thedrinkspillsout.
Onepersonfallsintodespair.
Allscrewedup.
Theotherpersonhurriestoliftupthebottle.
Theotherpersonsmiles.
Theotherpersonfeelssoluckystilltohavesomethingleftinthebottle.
★Seeingthedrinkspillsout,onepersonfallsintodespair,sighing―Allscrewedup‖,whilethe
otherpersonhurriestoliftupthebottle,smilingashefeelssoluckystilltohavesomethingleftin
thebottle.
图表作文+观点类作文+社会热点分析类
1.描述图表+引述主题
2.分析原因
3.总结陈词
2006年
描述图表:
1.这是一副非常有趣而且发人深省的图片。
Thisisatremendouslyinterestingandthought-provokingpicture.
2.如图所示,XXX的问题变得越来越严重了,并已经引起全社会的广泛关注。
Asisvividlyshownbythepicture,theissueof/that…hasbecomeamajorconcernaroundour
society,whichisincreasinglyserious.
„:
of+名词;
that+从句
2011年
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2000年
2009年
2005年
2003年
About/on=>
Concerning;
regarding;
asto;
inrelationto;
inpointto;
withregardto
3.引出主题
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
关于大学是否应该向游客开放一直存在热门的争论。
Thereisaheatedargumentinpointtowhethertheuniversityshouldbeopentotourists.
3.引出分论点:
“一些人认为„”咋说?
Somepeoplethinkthat…
词汇升级:
Think=>
Holdtheattitudethat;
Beundertheimpressionthat
“但是”英语咋说?
But;
However=>
WhileWhereasNevertheless
“不同的”英语咋说?
Different=>
Opposite
一些人认为„,但是另外一些人持有不同观点,他们坚信„
Somepeopleareundertheimpressionthat…,whereasotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlyholding
theattitudethat…
“我认为”英语怎么说?
Frommypart,Frommypointofview,Inmyopinion,Inmyeyes,Inmyownperspective
4.表明立场
Inmyownperspective,itismorereasonabletosupporttheformer/latteropinionthanthe
latter/formeroneforthefollowingreasons.
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1)Thepictureisattemptingtoconveyathought-provokingmessage.
2)Problemcandividepeopleintothepessimisticandtheoptimistic.
注意?
Payattentionto
Pourattentionto
Focusone‘sattentionon
第一个人关注的是事物的黑暗面,第二个人关注的是阳光的一面。
正能量,负能量
Positiveenergy,negativeenergy
转折关系But,However,while,whereas,nonetheless,nevertheless,onthecontrary,incontrast
▲省略
3)Theformerfocustheirattentiononthedarksideofthings,whereasthelatter(focustheir
attention)onthebright(ofthings).
导致?
Leadto;
Resultin;
giveriseto;
contributeto;
beresponsiblefor;
generate;
4)Thesecontrastingattitudesgiverisetooppositeresults.
因为?
BecauseAsOwingtothefactthatDuetothefactthatThankstothefactthat
悲观者,乐观者?
Pessimists;
optimists
5)Aspessimistsareobsessedwithwhattheylose,theydonotthinkaboutmakinganyattempt
beforesurrenderingtomisfortune.
6)Onthecontrary,optimists,concentratingonwhatmaybepossible,cancreateopportunitiesof
theirdifficulties.
我认为?
Inmyopinion,
Frommypointofview
Frommyperspective,
1)Frommyperspective,weshouldlearnfromthepositiveandoptimisticman.
无论?
However=nomatterhow
Whatever=nomatterwhat
2)Nomatterwhatdifficultieswemeetinlife,weshoulduseapositiveandoptimisticattitudeto
face.
3)Wecanbesuccessfulinthisway.=>
Onlyinthiswaycanwebesuccessful.
4)Itisourattitudethathaschangedeverythinginourlife.
●2011年大作文
Writeanessayof160——200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)explainit‘sintendedmeaning,and
3)giveyourcomments.
YourshouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)
布局谋篇:
描述图画
图画反映的现象
提出解决办法
Asyoucanseeinthedrawingabove,twopeoplearetakinginthesceneryonaboatfloating
smoothlyonsurfaceofthelake,readingnewspaperandenjoyingtheirpicnic.
第二句
However,whenyoulookatthelowerpartofthedrawing,youwillseeanotherpicturewhich
standsinmarkedcontrasttotheupperpart:
alotofrubbish.
第三句
Furthermore,thereisanironiccaptionunderthedrawing,whichreads―the‗remains‘ofthe
journey‖.
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Whatthisthought-provokingdrawingmirrorsisthephenomenonthattheenvironmentoftourist
areasispollutedbytourists.
Theproblemoftouristpollutionhasbeenknownforyears.
Manytouristareassufferfromalitterproblem.
第四句
Litterintouristareaspoilstheview,pollutestheenvironment,andtakestimeandmoneytoclean
up.
第五句
Moreover,theproblemalsoeffectsmanytouristattractions.
第六句
Sometouristscarvethecharacterslike―someonehasvisitedthisplace.‖Onthewallorstatues,
thiscausesdamaged,irremediableinsomecases,totheculturalrelicsandhistoricsites.
Inviewofalltheharmfulinfluencesoftouristpollution,Ithinkitishightimethatwetook
measurestotackletheproblem.
Tobeginwith,weshouldraise