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4.but 

→and 

5.us 

改成ourselves 

6.on∧ 

the 

7.going→ 

go

8.bigger 

→big 

9.when 

→since 

10.sweetly→sweet 

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Manyyoungboysandgirlshadthehabitofsmoking,thoughtheyaremiddleschoolstudent.Asweallknow,smokingdoharmtohumanbeings.Moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedthathowseriousthis 

problem 

is.Buttheyareneverboringwithit.Somepeople 

think 

smokingisakindof 

fashion,andotherthinksmokingcanrefreshhimself.Infact,smokingcausemanyillnesses.The 

most 

seriousillnesscausingofsmokingislungcancer.Meanwhile,smokingisthewasteofmoney.What’sworse,carelesssmokers 

may 

causedangerfires.

1.had→have2.student→students3.do→does

4.realized后的that去掉5.boring→bored6.other→others7.himself→themselves8.causing→caused

9.thewasteofmoney中the→a10.danger→dangerous

3

Iamworkeratthetapwatercompany.Ifindthatpeoplewerebecomingmoreandmorecarefulabouthealth.Ifthetapwaterappearalittlebitunclearandmuddy,thetelephonewillringagainandagain.Fortunately,peopledonotpayequalattentionoftheprotectionofwaterresources.Forthesakeofourhealth,weshouldtakegoodcareourwaterresourcesandenvironment.Thereisasaying“whetherwedonotcarefulprotectourenvironmentthelastdropsofwaterwewillseethemwillbeourowntears.”

1.worker前加a2.were→are3.appear→appears

4.muddy前and→or5.Fortunately→Unfortunately6.attention后of改为to7.care后加of8.whether→if9.careful→carefully10.see后them去掉

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InEngland,afternoontea,takenbetweenfourorfive,isthemostformalmealoftheday.Ifyouareafriendofthefamily,youmaydropforteawithoutbeeninvited.Veryoftenitisnotservedatatable.Thememberandvisitorstaketeainthesittingroom.Eachpersonhadacupandsaucer,aspoonandasmallplateforbread-and-butterandcake.Ontheway,donothelpyoutocakefirst;

bread-andbutterfirst,thencakeifthereisany.Otherpieceofadviceis:

donotputmorethanonepieceofbreadorcakeatsametime.

76.or→and77.formal→informal78.drop后加in

79.been→being80.member→members81.had→has

82.On→By83.you→yourself

84.Other→Another85.at后加the

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Itcanbeseen,moreandmorepeopleownmobilephonesinChinanow.Attheendof2002,therewere20millionsmobilephoneusers.By2005anumberreachedupto30million.Peoplehavefoundmobilephonesconvenience.Theycangetintouchtoeachotherwheneverandwherevertheylike.There’redifferentfunctionstomeetingdifferentneeds,suchassurftheInternet.However,itmaybringussometrouble.Foranexample,theradiationfromthephonemaydoharmourhealth.Inspiteofthis,thenumberofpeoplehavingmobilephonesareincreasingsteadily.

1.It→As2.millions→million 

3.a→the

4.convenience→convenient5.to---with6.meeting→meet

7.surf→surfing8.去掉an9.our前加to10.are→is 

6

OnedayIhappentofindachattingroominmyQQ，therepeoplewerechattinginEnglish．Itriedtochatwithsomeofthem．T0mysurprised，IfoundtheoralEnglishofsomejuniorstudentswerebetterthanme．IaskedthemforadviceandtheytoldmetopractisemoreonQQ.ButeverydayafterthatIwouldspendonehourpractisemyoralEnglishonQQ.DaybydayIlearnedfrommanyusefulwordsandexpressions．Withtimewentby．IfoundthatIcouldevencommunicatesomecollegestudentsfreely．

76.happen→happened77.there→where78.surprised→surprise

79.were→was80.me→mine81.But→So

82.pratise→pratising83.去掉from84.went→goingmunicate后加with

7

ThereisateacherwhoIcanneverforgetherinmylife.ThatwasinmyolddayswheneverIwasinthemiddleschoolandIoncehadlotsofteacherswhowereverystricttousexceptonefemalewhowasyoung,prettyaswellkind-hearted.Itisveryhardofmetodescribehowshewaslike,butshehadherownpersonalitythatquicklyconqueredusall.Sheaskedustoelectourmonitor.Sheletustodecidewheretogoforanouting.Shedidn’tgetangryevenifanyofthemwaslateforschool.Itwasnotlonguntilmostofusbehavedverywellbecausewedidfindheranelderlysisterwhowecanrelyon.

76.去掉her77.whenever→when78.to→with

79.well后加as80.of→for81.how→what

82.去掉第一个to83.them→us84.until→before

85.can→could

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Dearsir,

Thankyouverymuchforyourletter.IpleasedtohearaboutyourholidayandthepeopleyoumeetinRome.ItsoundedgreatfunandhowIwishIcouldhavebeingwithyou.Thankyoualsoforthestampsyousentthemtomeformycollection.MostofthemwerethosewhatIhadbeenexpectingforlong.Yousaidbyyourletterthatyouwishtohavesomephotosofme.Sorrytotellyou,Ihavelittlephotosgoodenoughtosendtoothers.YetIwillsendyouaphotoofyourfamily.Pleasewritesoonandtellmewhatyouaregettingonwithyourcollegelife.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

Jason

1.I后加am2.meet→met3.being→been

4.去掉them5.what→that或去掉those6.by→in

7.wish→wished8.little→few9.your→my10.what→how

9

Asstudents,wehaveclassesfromearlymorningtilllateafternoon.Therefore,takeaten-minutebreakbetweenclassisdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.Otherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired.Duringtheten-minutebreakwedidsomethingtogetridoftiredness.Whatweneedistohaverealrest,insteadofgettingeventired.Sodon’tdoanythingthatwillmakeyoutooexcited.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleased.Iusuallydosomesimpleexercises.SometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmatesorjusttakingawalkduringthebreak.Whenthenewclassbegins,Ifeelfreshlyagain.

1.take→taking2.class→classes3.or→and

4.did→do5.real→areal6.tired→moretired.

7.pleased→pleasing8.Sometime→Sometimes

9.taking→take10.freshly→fresh

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Itookpartinageographyresearchstudygroupinlastterm.Ourtopicwasenviromentalpollutionandprotection.Wetookavarietyofpicturesshowedthepresentpollutionconditionsofourcity.Tooursurprised,therearestillalotofpeopledoingsillythingstooursurroundings.Somepeoplethrowtherubbishanywheretheylike,

somecarsgiveoffharmfulgases,andwastewaterispouredinriversbysomefactories.Worsestill,peoplesometimeshadtomaketheirwaysthroughdustywindsasaresultofpollution.Throughourresearch,wecometoknowwhateverybodymustpayattentiontoourenvironmentandsomemeasuresshouldbetakentoprotect.

1.去掉第二个in.2.enviromental→environmental

3.showed→showing或showed→whichshowed.

4.surprised→surprise.5.去掉the6.in→into7.had→have.

8.ways→way9.what→that或去掉what.10.protect后加it.

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Nowadays, 

people 

in 

many 

big 

cities 

are 

complaining 

heavy 

traffic. 

It 

has 

serious 

influenced 

daily 

life 

and 

economic 

development. 

To 

solve 

the

problem, 

have 

put 

forward 

some 

pieces 

of 

advices. 

Some 

suggest 

that 

more 

streets 

roads 

built. 

By 

this 

way, 

traffic 

density 

can 

be 

reduced, 

thus 

speeding 

up 

flow 

buses 

cars. 

people

advise 

limiting 

number 

bikes 

This 

decrease 

flow. 

But 

on 

other 

hand, 

will 

effect 

consumption 

makes 

crowded. 

In 

my 

opinion, 

private 

cars 

should 

put 

under 

control. 

And 

at 

sametime, 

their 

own

special 

routes 

which 

used 

by 

vehicles.

1.complaining后加about2.serious→seriously

3.people→people’s4.advices→advices5.are→be

6.By→In7.effect→affect8.makes→make

9.the去掉10.can→can’t

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Friendshipisimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inallourliveswecan’tlivewithoutfriendshipjustlikewecan’tlivewithoutairandwater.Friendshipmakesusgettingonwellwithoneanothertogoaheadunderdifferentkindofdifficultiesinfrontofus.Butrealfriendshipiseasytocomeby,truefriendshipmustbesincerelyandbebasedonunderstand

eachotherbutnotonbenefitsofeachother.Agoodfriendcanalwaysbeagoodteachertous.Byhisadvicewearepersuadingtogotherightway.Thereforemorefriendswehave,thebetterwecanimproveourself.

1.important或importance前加of2.like→as3.getting→get

4.kind→kinds5.easy前加not6.sincerely→sincere

7.understand→understanding8.persuading→persuaded

9.more前加the10.ourself→ourselves

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Inthepastmyhometownwasthemostbeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgreengrasscouldbeseenanywhere.Inordertobuildmorehouseandgrowmorecrops,peoplecutdownmuchmoretrees.Astimewenton,thewholeforestwasalmostdestroyed.Gradually,thegreenhillsturnwasteland.Asaresult,sandstormsstruckusnowandthen,fromwhichweweresufferedlot.ButIdowishallthepeoplecouldrealizetheterriblydisastercausedfromman.What’smore,weshouldtakegoodcare