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作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生
●审题概述●
这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写时重点即在于此。
开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。
第一段,主要概述;
第二段,说明原因;
第三段,详细论述措施。
【范文】
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FirePreventiononCampus
Peoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampusfiresinrecentyears.Ineachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported–houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?
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Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents’useofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhighshouldthewaterinthebottleboildrywhilenooneisaroundtoturnoffthepower.Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc。
Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:
First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher.Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.
◇第一段思路点评:
概述并引入下文
◇语言点提示:
(1)此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?
常可作为过渡句,引出下文
(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如arealarmedby,werereported,wereburneddown,weredamaged,Facedwith。
◇第二段思路点评:
论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂,
electricwater-heaters电热水器
◇第三段思路点评:
详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。
takeprecautions采取预防措施
fireextinguisher灭火器
(二)EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts
校园盗窃案件时有发生
物品被盗的原因
学生如何加强防盗意识
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。
第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。
第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。
第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
【范文】
EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts
“Ifyoudon’twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you’dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangingwidelyfrombikes,cellphones,purses,pre-paidICcardstosunglasses,bags,andevenunderwear.Inshort,anythingthatworthadimeislikelytobestolen。
Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?
Thereasonsarenothardtofind.ButIbelieveofallthesereasons,thelackofanti-theftalertnessisthemostimportant.Forlackofalertness,thestudentstendtoleavethedoorsandwindowswideopenduringsleepatnoonoratnightinsummer.Forthesamereason,they’llalsoleavetheirbikesunlockedbeforeastoreorbyaroad,orforgettotakeawaytheirpersonalstuffbeforetheygooutoftheclassroomtomakeaphonecall.Theseactsundoubtedlyhaveincreasedtheirexposuretothelight-fingeredmonsters。
Inordertominimizepossiblelosses,thestudentsmuststayonguardinthefirstplace,asawarenessofthetheftsaroundoftenmakesabigdifference.Tobemorespecific,thestudentsshouldnothideanytemptingamountofcashinthedorm.Putitinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleaveanyvaluableitemsunattended.Takethemwhereveryougo.Inaddition,it’sadvisabletodevelopaneighbourhoodwatchprogrammewithotherstudentsinthedormandneighbouringdorms。
陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
itseemsthat此句型表示一种可能性
说明被盗原因
(1)Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?
此句引出下文
(2)anti-theftalertness防盗意识
(3)lackofalertness缺乏警惕
(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
阐述如何加强防盗意识
注意关联词语inthefirstplace,Besides,Inaddition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性
(三)HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?
网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
你对网络依赖症的看法
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审题概述●
本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。
第一段,侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。
第二段,详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。
第三段,论述对网络依赖的观点。
【范文】1:
HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?
IfaskedwhethertheInternetisthegreatestdiscoveryofthe20thcentury,myanswerwouldbeyes.TheInternethasdrawntheworldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife。
Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainwiderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetifthey’dseek