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（模考作文问切忌抛开漫画内容直接议论！
（模考作文问题一）题一）vTIPS:
2.漫画的内容一定要符合图片，漫画的内容一定要符合图片，v切忌无中生有！
（模考作文问题二）切忌无中生有！
（模考作文问题二）vTheboythoughtdeeplyvTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.vTheboystopsplayingandlearningalot.vTheboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencourainghimvpara2：
全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;
揭示现象（问题）并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。
TIPS：
可以从可以从2-3个方面个方面进行阐述，也可以将这进行阐述，也可以将这部分部分分为两段。
分为两段。
Para3.：
giveyourconclusion.（a）提出建议，重申观点重申观点主题句主题句（b）对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理提出合理建议建议或或总结观点总结观点。
主题句的复述主题句的复述不是不是简单地重复，通常需符合简单地重复，通常需符合1.1.如果在段末，用如果在段末，用强调词强调词转换方式连接。
转换方式连接。
2.2.与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。
与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。
3.3.转换方式：
转换方式：
词对应，同根，逆向词对应，同根，逆向EXAMPLESv主题句主题句：
youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.v主题句复述：
主题句复述：
InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.v2.主题句：
主题句：
Toperceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.v主题句复述句：
主题句复述句：
Itisofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.vORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.实例运用实例运用+模考模考分析分析模考一模考一一、语法问题一、语法问题v1.时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。
时态，人称，单复数的混用，不统一。
veg:
1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.v2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.v3.Lifeplanmusthasadestinationv4.Ifsomeonedonthavealifeplan.v2.词性的使用错误词性的使用错误veg:
1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.v2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecantbesuccessv3.weshouldfacedifficultbravelyv4.wehavemanychooses3.Therebe句型使用错误句型使用错误eg:
1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedonthavelifeplan.4.被动语态的使用错误被动语态的使用错误eg:
1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis.2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite.3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinstitutessettospreadchineseculture.4.run-onsentences串句无法理解的句子串句无法理解的句子EG:
1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearentneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave.二、佳句欣赏二、佳句欣赏v1.Therefore,wearesupposedtomakealifeplanfromnowontomakeourlifemoremeangingfulandcolorful（章笑盈）v2.AsfarasIamconcerned,makingalifeplanisveryimportantforyoungpeople.（李程鹏）v3.Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthepicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsthatweshouldmakealifeplanfromanearlyage.vMakingalifeplanshouldbeattachedgreatsignificancetobyourselves.（赵建宏）v4.Onlyyoumakealifeplananddevoteyourselfintoit,canyouhavenoregretwhenyouareold.（卞涵）v5.Weareeasytobocomeconfusedwithourlife.Makethelifeplanrightnowandfocusonthethingsyouwanttodobecausetimedoesntwaitforanyone.（钱林豪）三、看图作文的解题思路应用v1.审题（认真阅读写作提示）：
漫画信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”确定写作主题：
年轻人应该做好人生规划以及人生规划的重要性的原因2.作文提纲（结构）v第一段：
简要描写图画内容（who,what,when,where）:
v爷爷教导孙子：
如果年老的时候写自传，你会看到自己去过哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年轻时候写，你就会知道你将去哪里（willseewhereyouaregoing）。
vThepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,youllseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,youllseewhereyouregoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate第二段：
解释图画深刻含义（揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。
Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,youremorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第三段：
给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）。
vTosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearlysoastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinth
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