【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)PPT文件格式下载.pptx

【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)PPT文件格式下载.pptx

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信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。

请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearLiHua,Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,Step1：

analyze（审题）,firstperson,suggestionletter,suggetionsoflearningEnglish,simplepresenttense,DearLiHua,YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Herearemysomesuggestions.Firstly,dontloseyourheart.Secondly,youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass.Thirdly,youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers,whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities.Whatsmore,itsgoodideatoreadEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.Bestwishes.Yours,xxx,表明意图,提出建议,表明希望,7,suggestionletter,beginning,body,ending,three,Step2.structure（结构）,problemsandpurposesofwriting,suggestionsoflearningEnglish,hopesandwishes,_parts,Step3:

findkeypoints（要点）Brainstorming,waystoimproveEnglish,.,Step4:

organizeyourwriting（组织语言）transitionwords（过渡词）开始然后最终递进,first,firstly,atfirst,firstofall,tobeginwith,next,afterthat,andthen,atlast,intheend,lastbutnotleast,whatsmore,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,notonly.butalso,foronething.foranother.,whatsworse,tomakethingsworse,worsestill,Step4:

organizeyourwriting（组织语言）transitionwords（过渡词）转折因果结论观点,however,but,onthecontrary,so,therefore,forthisreason,asaresult,asaconsequence,inshort,inbrief,inaword,inconclusion,tosumup,inmyopinion,asfarasImconcerned,frommyperspective,Writeadraft（草稿）bygroups.,Step5:

writeadraft（草稿）para1：

PurposesandProblems1.Imgladtoreceiveyourletter,askingformyadviceonhowto.2.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.3.Ivereceivedyourletter,saying.4.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto,Step5:

writeadraft（草稿）para2：

yoursuggestions1.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou（should）2.Dontyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould3.Haveyouconsidereddoing./Sowhynotdo.?

4.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.,Step5:

writeadraft（草稿）para3：

hopesandwishes1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.,Step6.polishyourwriting（润色）,Howtopolishyourwriting？

Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourhandwriting（书写）,Comparethesetwosentences.Whichsentencedoyouthinkcanattracttheteachers?

Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguage,1.YoutellmethatEnglishisdiificulttolearn.2.IminformedthatyouhavetroubleinlearningEnglish.,Polishyourcompositionbyimprovingyourlanguage,A.excellentwordsandphrases（词汇短语的选择灵活新颖）B.avarietyofsentencepatterns（句型结构运用高级多变）,Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型,1.Iamhappytoreceiveyourletter.（改为感叹句）_happyIamtoreceiveyourletter.2,ItisausefulwaytoimproveyourEnglish.（改为感叹句）_ausefulwayitistoimproveyourEnglish!

How,What,Useavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型,3.ReadingEnglishbookshelpsalot.（改为强调句）_isreadingEnglishbooks_helpsalot.4.Ihopemysuggetionswillbeofgreathelp.（改为强调句）I_hopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelp.,It,that,do,Useavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型,5.Inthisway,youcanmakegreatprogressinEnglish.（改为倒装句）_inthisway,_youmakegreatprogressinEnglish.6.Whenyouarehavingclass,youshouldlistencarefully.（改为省略句）When_class,youshouldlistencarefully.,Only,can,having,Useavarietyofsentencepatterns丰富句型,7.YourEnglishwillimprovebytalkingwithothersinEnglish.（改为状语从句）_youtalkwithothersinEnglish,yourEnglishwillimprove.8.YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish.Ithelpsalot.（改为定语从句）YoushouldhaveagoodattitudetowardslearningEnglish，_helpsalot.,If,which,Useavarietyofsentencepatterns,9.IwanttosuggestyoureadingmoreEnglishbooks.（改为名词性从句）_Iwanttosuggestis_youcanreadmoreEnglishbooks.10.YoushouldwatchEnglishfilms,becauseitcandevelopyourlisteningskills.（改为定语从句加名词性从句）Thereason_youshouldwatchEnglishfilmsis_itcandevelopyourlisteningskills.,What,that,why,that,Enjoyonepossibleversionfromyourclassmate.,beautybeattractive,finishedinalimitedtime!

假设你是学生李华，你的朋友Tom在生活中遇到了一些困难，害羞胆小，在学校没有好朋友，因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样结交好朋友。

请你给他回复你的建议。

1词数：

100左右;

2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Homework,Thankyou!