【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)PPT文件格式下载.pptx

1、信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,Best wishes.Yours,xxx,Step1：analyze（审题）,first person,suggestion letter,suggetions of learning English,simple present tense,Dear Li Hua,You have asked me for my advice on how to lear

2、n English well.Here are my some suggestions.Firstly,don t lose your heart.Secondly,you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Thirdly,you can speak English with your classmates and teachers,which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.Whats more,its good idea to read English

3、 books before the class and after the class.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Yours,xxx,表明意图,提出建议,表明希望,7,suggestion letter,beginning,body,ending,three,Step2.structure（结构）,problems and purposes of writing,suggestions of learning English,hopes and wishes,_ parts,Step3:find key

4、points（要点）Brainstorming,ways to improve English,.,Step4:organize your writing（组织语言）transition words（过渡词）开始然后最终递进,first,firstly,at first,first of all,to begin with,next,after that,and then,at last,in the end,last but not least,whats more,moreover,furthermore,in addition,not only.but also,for one thin

5、g.for another.,whats worse,to make things worse,worse still,Step4:organize your writing（组织语言）transition words（过渡词）转折因果结论观点,however,but,on the contrary,so,therefore,for this reason,as a result,as a consequence,in short,in brief,in a word,in conclusion,to sum up,in my opinion,as far as Im concerned,fr

6、om my perspective,Write a draft（草稿）by groups.,Step5:write a draft（草稿）para1：Purposes and Problems 1.Im glad to receive your letter,asking for my advice on how to.2.My suggestions are as follows.3.Ive received your letter,saying.4.Here are some suggestions for you.5.You have asked me for my advice on

7、how to,Step5:write a draft（草稿）para2：your suggestions1.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to make a suggestion that you（should）2.Dont you think it more beneficial if you could 3.Have you considered doing./So why not do.?4.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.,Step5:

8、write a draft（草稿）para3：hopes and wishes1.I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.3.I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.4.I do hope that my ideas will work.,Step6.polish your writing（润色）,How to polish your w

9、riting？,Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）,Compare these two sentences.Which sentence do you think can attract the teachers?,Polish your composition by improving your language,1.You tell me that English is diificult to learn.2.Im informed that you have trouble in learning Engl

10、ish.,Polish your composition by improving your language,A.excellent words and phrases（词汇短语的选择灵活新颖）B.a variety of sentence patterns（句型结构运用高级多变）,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型,1.I am happy to receive your letter.（改为感叹句）_ happy I am to receive your letter.2,It is a useful way to improve your

11、 English.（改为感叹句）_ a useful way it is to improve your English!,How,What,Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型,3.Reading English books helps a lot.（改为强调句）_ is reading English books _ helps a lot.4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.（改为强调句）I_hope my suggestions will be of great help.,It,that,

12、do,Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型,5.In this way,you can make great progress in English.（改为倒装句）_ in this way,_ you make great progress in English.6.When you are having class,you should listen carefully.（改为省略句）When _ class,you should listen carefully.,Only,can,having,Use a variety of sentence

13、 patterns 丰富句型,7.Your English will improve by talking with others in English.（改为状语从句）_you talk with others in English,your English will improve.8.You should have a good attitude towards learning English.It helps a lot.（改为定语从句）You should have a good attitude towards learning English，_ helps a lot.,If

14、,which,Use a variety of sentence patterns,9.I want to suggest you reading more English books.（改为名词性从句）_ I want to suggest is _ you can read more English books.10.You should watch English films,because it can develop your listening skills.（改为定语从句加名词性从句）The reason _ you should watch English films is _ it can develop your listening skills.,What,that,why,that,Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.,beautybe attractive,finished in a limited time!,假设你是学生李华，你的朋友Tom在生活中遇到了一些困难，害羞胆小，在学校没有好朋友，因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样结交好朋友。请你给他回复你的建议。1词数：100左右;2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Homework,Thank you!,