高中英语作文句子的扩写优秀公开课课件PPT文档格式.pptx

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作文句子的扩写,罗湖区滨河中学张玉梅,句子的充实一篇好文章必然是内容充实，形式多样的。

@#@学生尽可能避免写出内容简单，形式单调的句子。

@#@我们可以朝以下几个方面努力。

@#@,1.加强细节描写的意识。

@#@Ilikehimverymuch.-Ilikehimverymuchbecauseheishonest.Mr.LiPinggaveusalectureinthehallonFriday.-Mr.LiPinggaveusalectureinthehallonFridayinordertohelpstudentslearnEnglishbetter.,2.对所表达的句子加以补充说明。

@#@Itisdangeroustowalkhomealone.-Itisdangeroustowalkhomealone,especiallyinthedark.IprefertogotoShanghaibyplanethanbytrain.-IprefertogotoShanghaibyplanethanbytrain,becauseitismuchfasterandmorecomfortable.,3.对所表达的内容适当地加以评论，充实句子。

@#@Mr.Liwillgiveusareport.-Mr.Liwillgiveusareport,whichwillinfluenceusalot.-Mr.Liwillgiveusareport,whichwillhaveaninfluenceonourstudy.,练习。

@#@将下列句子扩展。

@#@1.youshouldstopsmokingnow.2.Nowadays,cooperatingwithpeopleisveryimportantinthesociety.Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,cooperatingwithpeopleisveryimportant,ifwewanttocompleteourworkmoreeffectively.,在学习、生活和工作中，学会与人合作是非常重要的。

@#@请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇五句话作文。

@#@,你的看法,倾听别人的意见，有礼貌地指出别人的错误。

@#@,page319,Nowadays,cooperatingwithpeopleisnecessary.Itcansaveustimeandenergyandgiveusmorechancestolearnfromeachother.Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhomwelike,wewillbeveryhappyandsharehappinessandsadness.Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhomwedislike,weshouldlearntobearhimandtrytodiscoverhisadvantages.Weshouldlistentoothersopinionandpointoutothersmistakes.,but,2.Notonlycanoperationsaveusalotoftimealsowecanlearnfromeachother.,Nowadays,cooperatingwithpeopleisamustinthesociety.Itcansaveustimeandenergyandgiveusmorechancestolearnfromeachother.Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,wemustlearntocooperatewithothers,ifwewanttocompleteourworkmoreefficiently.,Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhowelike,wewillbeveryhappyandsharehappinessandsadness.Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhowedislike,weshouldlearntobearhimandtrytodiscoverhisadvantages.,cooperatewithsomeonewecanshareourhappiness,3.Wewillbeluckyenoughtowhomwedislike,becauseandsadness.,because,tocooperateweshouldlearn,andtryourbestto,withsomeonewhomwedislike,toputupwithhisshortcomingsdiscoverhisadvantages.,4.Onthecontrary,itwillbeverydifficult,shouldlistentoothersopinionandpointoutothersmistakespolitely.5.AsfarasIamconcerned,tobeagoodpartner,we,shouldlistentoothersopinionandpointoutothers,mistakespolitely,becauseonlyinthiswaycanwecooperatewithothershappilyandefficiently.,Weshouldlistentoothersopinion,notforceourideasonothersandpointoutothersmistakespolitely.5.AsfarasIamconcerned,tobeagoodpartner,we,Nowadays,cooperatingwithpeopleisnecessary.Itcansaveustimeandenergyandgiveusmorechancestolearnfromeachother.Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhomwelike,wewillbeveryhappyandsharehappinessandsadness.Ifwecooperatewithsomeonewhomwedislike,weshouldlearntobearhimandtrytodiscoverhisadvantages.Weshouldlistentoothersopinion,notforceourideasonothersandpointoutothersmistakes.,Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,wemustlearntocooperatewithothers,ifwewanttocompleteourworkmoreefficiently.Notonlycanoperationsaveusalotoftimebutalsowecanlearnfromeachother.,3.Wewillbeluckyenoughto,whomwedislike,because,cooperatewithsomeonewecanshareour,happinessandsadness.,4.Onthecontrary,itwillbeverydifficult,someonewhomwedislike,because,tocooperatewithweshouldlearn,andtryourbestto,toputupwithhisshortcomingsdiscoverhisadvantages.,5.AsfarasIamconcerned,tobeagoodpartner,we,shouldlistentoothersopinionandpointoutothers,mistakespolitely,becauseonlyinthiswaycanwecooperatewithothershappilyandefficiently.,wemustlearn,1.With,ifwewantto.,2.Notonlycanoperation,butalso,.3.Wewillbeluckyenoughto,because.,Onthecontrary,itwillbeverydifficult,becauseshortcomingsandtryadvantages.As,tobe,weshouldlistenandpolitelyway,becauseonlyinthiswaycan.,