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英语六级作文范文及解析汇总
2011年6月英语六级作文范文及解析汇总
英语六级作文题目
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来
2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析1
PartIWriting
Myopiniononcertificatecraze
Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?
Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.
ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.
文章点评:
这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。
本文先对学生的考证热进行简介,引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,句式多变,用语较为地道。
本篇亮点表达:
Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…
bebusilyengagedindoing
Thereasonbehind…
harshjobmarket
havenochoicebutto…
parlaytheirqualifications
sth.weighsheavilyintermsof…
increasingone’soddsof…
beinvolvedindoing…
becompelledtodo…
haveanopenmindtoward…
capabilityboosting
本文有待提高之处:
1.文章结构上,能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。
逻辑严谨,论证严密;句式表达灵活,用语较为地道。
2.微观语言点方面,有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦,比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可简化成you’dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复,比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象,文中的theenormouspressureoffindingajob不妨改为theenormouspressureofgettingemployed。
从整体看,本篇文章不错,值得参考借鉴,不过用语方面还有待提高。
2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析2
PartIWriting
Thejobmarkettodayisincreasinglysophisticated,requiringworkerstohavespecializedknowledgeintheirfields.Asaresult,becomingcertifiedisatrendamongtoday’sjobseekingyouth.Moreandmorepeople,studentsespecially,lookatobtainingcertificationasameanstogettingabetterjoband,therefore,enjoyingbrighterfuture.
Thereareasmanycertificatesastherearefieldsofstudy.LawyerswilltaketheLSAT,businessmajorswilltaketheGMATtofurthertheirstudyintheUS,andthosewhostudyaforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,mighttaketheTOEFL,TOEIC,oranynumberofEnglishcertificationexams.
Isthisnecessary?
Or,isthe“certificationcraze”justatrendthatwilleventuallypass?
Imyselfhaveobtainedtwodifferentcertifications:
oneinJapanese(N2)andanotherinteachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage(TEFL).Bothofthesecertificationshavebeenbeneficialingettinggoodjobs.Therefore,itismyopinionthat,trendornot,theresultsofbecomingcertifiedarerealandcanbeinvaluableinopeningupfutureopportunities.
作文点评:
1.逻辑结构上,本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)”“分析问题(背后的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。
2.本文的亮点非常多,用语非常地道,用英语思维催动出来的英语文章,才是真正的极品。
相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章,这篇文章是很美味的,强烈建议大家背诵下来。
大家记得《天龙八部》吗?
鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。
总之,我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句,其实表意明确,用语地道的文章,就肯定可以拿到高分。
2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版1
Certificatecraze
Recentlythephenomenonofcertificatecrazehasbecomeabigconcernofthepublic.Itisalsoanewcrazeintheuniversity,whichseemslikearoutineactivityoncampus,forcertificatesdoplayavitalrolewhenstudentslookforadecentjob.
Admittedly,therearedifferentpurposesbehindthisphenomenon.Somepeopleaimatcertificatesbecauseoftheemploymentpressure.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,agreatmanygraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Soitisthecertificatesthatcanmakethemmorecompetitive.However,someothersconsiderallthediplomaandcertificatesimportantstandardsbywhichaperson’sabilitycanbemeasured.Theysparenoefforttogetthecertificatesforthesolepurposeofprovingthattheyarequalifiedinacertainfield.Moreover,therearethosewhojustwanttoenrichtheirlifebypreparingforthecertificatesbecausetheyreallyenjoytheirprogress.
Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincecertificatesdonotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyisnothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourabilitybutnotmerelygettingacertificate.
点评:
本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题——高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格,关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说,考生还是比较好把握的。
需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因,考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外,在保证句法通顺的前提下,尽可能做到表达的多样化。
首先,在考生拿到题目的时候,应该先认真审题,心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个底。
提起证书热的话,很多考生都会联想到就业压力,学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求;因此,全文可做如下安排;
第一段,考生可以整体阐述一下该话题,陈述下目前存在的考证热现象;
第二段,考生可以对考证热背后存在的各种各样的目的进行拓展;比如说由于日益严重的就业压力,以及有的学校时不时给学生灌输的压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到的一些压力,都可能导致考证热的产生。
第三段要求考生对于该现象给出自己的理解,考生应在这里持一种客观的态度。
因为考证本身并不是一种错误,但是考生应当注意从题目“考证热”出发,重点放在“热”字上,对这一现象做出最理性的评述。
综合来讲,本篇文章观点明确,思路清晰;在第二段给出的例证具有代表性;此外,文章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是,由于时间和篇幅的限制,论证的展开还未完全挖掘出来,但在如此有限的条件下,可以称得上佳作了。
2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版2
ForagrowingnumberofChinesepeople,themostproductivethingtodowithone'ssparetimeistostudyforsomekindofcertification.Fromlanguagestobusinessskillstoteaching,certificationsactasproofthatyouareskilledinsomethingveryspecific.Moreandmore,aresumewithdegreesandworkexperienceslooksabitboring;certificationsarelikeaccessories–theycompletetheoutfit.
Certificationsaccomplishseveralpurposes.First,theyshowemployersthatyou'rediversified;youhavemadeanefforttolearnskillsoutsideofyourmajororoccupation.Also,certificationsshowthatyouareproactive;youdon’tsitaroundinyoursparetime.Instead,you’reconstantlylookingtoimproveyourself.Thisiswhatsetsapplicantsapartfromtherestwhenapplyingforasought-afterposition.
Inmyopinion,certificationsareattractive,butshouldnotbeover-emphasized.Communicationskillsareequallyasimportant,andcanbehonedandstrengthenedwithoutpayingforaclass.Afterall,interviewsareconcernedwithmorethanwhatisonthepaper.
2011年6月英语六级作文范文(新东方版)
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.我的看法
TheCertificateCraze
AlmostnooneinChinahasfailedtonoticethephenomenonthatagrowingnumberofpeopleareenthusiasticaboutpursuingvariouskindsofcertificates.Takingalookaround,onecanfindnumerousexampleswithease.Acommoncaseinpointisthatstudentsspendagreatdealoftimeandenergyattendingagreatvarietyofcertificate-orientedtrainingcoursestoensureabetterscore。
Thepurposeofacquiringcertificatesvariesfromindividualstoindividuals.Forstudents,asthejobmarketcompetitionisbecomingincreasinglyfierce,notonlycanacertaincertificateprovetheircapabilities,butalsowillputtheminafavorablepositionintheemploymentmarketandthedevelopmentoftheircareer.Whenitcomestowhite-collaredworkers,morejob-relatedcertificatesoftenguaranteegreateropportunitiesforasalaryraiseandpromotion.What’smore,itisalsoaidealwaytoenhancetheirjobtechniquesandsharpentheircompetitiveness。
Frommyperspective,themeritsofpursuingcertificatesareself-evident.However,weshouldalsobearinmindthatitisthepracticalskills,suchasmanagement,cooperation,communication,ratherthancertificatesthatguaranteeone’saccomplishmentincareer.Accordingly,wemightaswellattachgreatimportancetobothcertificatesandtheimprovementofone’scomprehensiveabilities。
2011年6月六级作文范文高分版(新东方版)
TheCertificateCraze
Thereisnodenyingthefactthatithasbecomeaprevailingtrendforpeopletotakepartinvariousexamswiththepurposeofobtainingcertificatesofmanykinds:
thatforCET-4orCET-6,thatforcomputerlevel,thedriver’slicense,etc。
Ofcoursepeoplepursuecertificatesforvariouspurposes.Someclaimthatowningthesecertificatescangivethemmoreedgeincompetition.Onemorecertificatemeansabitmorechanceofwinninginthejobmarket.Others,however,merelytakethispracticeasastimulusforthemtostudyorstudyharder.Theyassertthat,byworkingforthosecertificates,theycanbroadentheirhorizonandenrichtheirknowledge。
Personally,Ibelievethatoneshouldchoosetolearnwhatheorshetrulylikesorreallyneeds,insteadofmerelyworkingforsomecertificates.Asforme,Ishallfocusmyenergyonafewfields,forIbelieveconcentrationofattentionandenergyisthekeytosuccess.Besides,keeninterestisthestrongestmotivationforstudy.Tobespecific,IwouldliketolearnkungfuandBeijingOperainmysparetime.Imayattendsomerelevanttestsandbeawardedcertaincertificates,buttheyarejustanaturalresultofmystudy,insteadofmymotivation。
2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文(文都)
2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofCertificateCraze.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来
CertificateCraze
Inrecentyears,togetacertificatehasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Collegestudentsingrowingnumbersarebeginning