英语六级作文范文及解析汇总.docx

1、英语六级作文范文及解析汇总2011年6月英语六级作文范文及解析汇总英语六级作文题目Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Certificate Craze. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试2. 其目的各不相同3. 在我看来2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析1Part I WritingMy opinion

2、 on certificate crazeThe growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.

3、So, whys the craze?The reason behind this phenomenon is common the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in ter

4、ms of signifying ones ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another.Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since t

5、hey do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally.文章点评：这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。本篇亮点表达：The growing tendency has now evolved intob

6、e busily engaged in doingThe reason behindharsh job markethave no choice but toparlay their qualificationssth. weighs heavily in terms ofincreasing ones odds ofbe involved in doing be compelled to dohave an open mind towardcapability boosting本文有待提高之处：1. 文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。 逻辑

7、严谨，论证严密;句式表达灵活，用语较为地道。2. 微观语言点方面，有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diploma and certificates still weighs heavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦，比quite possibly, you would get the answer that 大可简化成youd most likely be told that 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复，比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象，文中的the enormous pressure of finding a job 不妨改为 the enormous press

8、ure of getting employed。从整体看，本篇文章不错，值得参考借鉴，不过用语方面还有待提高。2011年6月英语六级作文范文及评析2Part I WritingThe job market today is increasingly sophisticated, requiring workers to have specialized knowledge in their fields. As a result, becoming certified is a trend among todays job seeking youth. More and more people

9、, students especially, look at obtaining certification as a means to getting a better job and, therefore, enjoying brighter future.There are as many certificates as there are fields of study. Lawyers will take the LSAT, business majors will take the GMAT to further their study in the US, and those w

10、ho study a foreign language, like English, might take the TOEFL, TOEIC, or any number of English certification exams.Is this necessary? Or, is the “certification craze” just a trend that will eventually pass? I myself have obtained two different certifications: one in Japanese (N2) and another in te

11、aching English as a foreign language (TEFL). Both of these certifications have been beneficial in getting good jobs. Therefore, it is my opinion that, trend or not, the results of becoming certified are real and can be invaluable in opening up future opportunities.作文点评：1. 逻辑结构上，本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)

12、”“分析问题(背后的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。2. 本文的亮点非常多，用语非常地道，用英语思维催动出来的英语文章，才是真正的极品。相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章，这篇文章是很美味的，强烈建议大家背诵下来。大家记得天龙八部吗?鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。总之，我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句，其实表意明确，用语地道的文章，就肯定可以拿到高分。2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版1Certificate crazeRecently the phenomenon of certificate craze has become a big concer

13、n of the public. It is also a new craze in the university, which seems like a routine activity on campus, for certificates do play a vital role when students look for a decent job.Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon. Some people aim at certificates because of the employme

14、nt pressure. With the admission expansion of colleges, a great many graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. So it is the certificates that can make them more competitive. However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a persons ab

15、ility can be measured. They spare no effort to get the certificates for the sole purpose of proving that they are qualified in a certain field. Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy their progress.From my point of vie

16、w, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not merely getting a certificate.点评：本次六级作文探讨的是考生

17、比较熟悉的话题高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的考试风格，关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说，考生还是比较好把握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因，考生在该部分需要注意论述的条理性;此外，在保证句法通顺的前提下，尽可能做到表达的多样化。首先，在考生拿到题目的时候，应该先认真审题，心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个底。提起证书热的话，很多考生都会联想到就业压力，学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求;因此，全文可做如下安排;第一段，考生可以整体阐述一下该话题，陈述下目前存在的考证热现象;第二段，考生可以对考证热背后存在的各种各样的目的进行拓展;比如说由于日益严重的就业压力

18、，以及有的学校时不时给学生灌输的压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到的一些压力，都可能导致考证热的产生。第三段要求考生对于该现象给出自己的理解，考生应在这里持一种客观的态度。因为考证本身并不是一种错误，但是考生应当注意从题目“考证热”出发，重点放在“热”字上，对这一现象做出最理性的评述。综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，思路清晰;在第二段给出的例证具有代表性;此外，文章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是，由于时间和篇幅的限制，论证的展开还未完全挖掘出来，但在如此有限的条件下，可以称得上佳作了。2011年6月英语六级作文范文高分版2For a growing number of Chinese pe

19、ople, the most productive thing to do with ones spare time is to study for some kind of certification. From languages to business skills to teaching, certifications act as proof that you are skilled in something very specific. More and more, a resume with degrees and work experiences looks a bit bor

20、ing; certifications are like accessories they complete the outfit.Certifications accomplish several purposes. First, they show employers that youre diversified; you have made an effort to learn skills outside of your major or occupation. Also, certifications show that you are proactive; you dont sit

21、 around in your spare time. Instead, youre constantly looking to improve yourself. This is what sets applicants apart from the rest when applying for a sought-after position.In my opinion, certifications are attractive, but should not be over-emphasized. Communication skills are equally as important

22、, and can be honed and strengthened without paying for a class. After all, interviews are concerned with more than what is on the paper.2011年6月英语六级作文范文(新东方版)1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试2.其目的各不相同3.我的看法The Certificate CrazeAlmost no one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that a growing number of people

23、are enthusiastic about pursuing various kinds of certificates. Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease. A common case in point is that students spend a great deal of time and energy attending a great variety of certificate-oriented training courses to ensure a better score。The

24、 purpose of acquiring certificates varies from individuals to individuals. For students, as the job market competition is becoming increasingly fierce, not only can a certain certificate prove their capabilities, but also will put them in a favorable position in the employment market and the develop

25、ment of their career. When it comes to white-collared workers, more job-related certificates often guarantee greater opportunities for a salary raise and promotion. Whats more, it is also a ideal way to enhance their job techniques and sharpen their competitiveness。From my perspective, the merits of

26、 pursuing certificates are self-evident. However, we should also bear in mind that it is the practical skills, such as management, cooperation, communication, rather than certificates that guarantee ones accomplishment in career. Accordingly, we might as well attach great importance to both certific

27、ates and the improvement of ones comprehensive abilities。2011年6月六级作文范文高分版(新东方版)The Certificate CrazeThere is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailingtrend for people to take part in various examswith the purpose of obtaining certificates of many kinds: that forCET-4 or CET-6, that for com

28、puter level, the drivers license,etc。Of course people pursue certificates for various purposes. Someclaim that owning these certificates can give them more edge incompetition. One more certificate means a bit more chance ofwinning in the job market. Others, however, merelytake this practice as a sti

29、mulus for them to study or studyharder. They assert that, byworking for those certificates, they can broadentheir horizon and enrich their knowledge。Personally, I believe that oneshould choose to learn what he or she truly likesor really needs, instead of merely working for some certificates.As for

30、me, I shall focus my energy on a few fields, for I believeconcentration of attention and energy is the key to success.Besides, keen interest is the strongest motivation for study. To bespecific, I would like to learn kungfu and Beijing Opera inmy spare time. I may attend some relevant tests and be a

31、wardedcertain certificates, but they are just a natural result of mystudy, instead of my motivation。2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文(文都)2011年6月18日六级考试真题作文优秀范文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Certificate Craze. You should write at least 150 words foll

32、owing the outline given below:1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试2. 其目的各不相同3. 在我看来Certificate CrazeIn recent years, to get a certificate has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones. College students in growing numbers are beginning