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四级作文

主题：

大学生使用信用卡 

　　OnCreditCard 

　　Atpresent,awidevareityofcreditcardsissuedissued

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n.发布日期

v.发布，发行（issue的过去分词形式）

adj.发行的

bymajorbanksandshoppingmallsarethrivingincollegesanduniversitiesacrossthenation,withamultitudeofcollegestudentsmakingupagrowingpopulationofcardholders.Indeed,oneoutoffivestudentsisestimatedtobeinpossessionofatleastonecreditcard,andthefigureisexpectedtobeonthesteadyincrese,thelatestdatapublishedbyYangtzeEveningPostsuggests。

　　Likeanythingpriortotheemergenceofthissmallpieceofplastic,theincreasingpopularityofcreditcardoncampushasbothbrightanddarksides.Ontheonehand,youngadultsincollege,freefromthetroubleofpocketingaconsiderablesumofcash,couldenjoytheconvenienceofcreditcardsandpurchaseexpensivegoodsbyinstallmentsissued

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n.发布日期

v.发布，发行（issue的过去分词形式）

adj.发行的

.Ontheotherhand,however,theirresponsibleandexcessiveuseofthecardsbytheseyoungsters,themajorityofwhomarefreshoutofmiddleschoolincapableofbudgetingtheirmoney,canmakethemheavilyindebtwhichwilltakethemyearstopayoff。

　　Onmypersonallevel,whileenjoyingahostofconveniencesthecreditcardmaybring,wecouldn’taffordtoignoreaconspiciousfact:

inmostcases,parentsareoursolefinancialsources.Insteadofspendingwithoutanyrestrict,wearesupposedtoputstudiesonthetopofouragendaandmoveourselvesbeyondheavydependenceuponourparents。

主题：

环保 

　　观点对比题 

　　EconomicDevelopmentandEnvironmentalProtection 

　　1.有人认为经济发展先于环境保护; 

　　2.有人环境保护先于经济发展; 

　　3.我的看法。

　　[范文] 

　　Therearesomeindividualswhoarguethat,comparedtotheenvironmentprotection,thetoppriorityissupposedtogiventoeconomicdevelopment.Theydeemthatenvironmentalproblemsareinevitableandunavoidableintheprocessofeconomicdevelopment.Theyareonlythebyproductsofeconomicdevelopment,whichcanbehandledlaterwhenwehavethetimeandmoney. 

　　However,otherindividualsholddifferentopinionsthat（或者：

otherholdersoftheoppositeopinionsarguethat）environmentprotectionshouldbeattachedmoreimportancethaneconomicdevelopmentinthatpresentseriousenvironmentalproblemswillthreatenthehealthoftheresidentsandhindertheadvanceoftheeconomy. 

　　AsfarasIamconcerned,environmentalprotectionandeconomicdevelopmentcancoexistinparallelandcanstayinharmony（和谐）.Ourultimate（最终的）aimineconomicdevelopmentistoprovideacomfortableandhappylifeforourpeople.Whatisthepointofeconomicdevelopmentifweachieveitatthecostofourenvironment?

Therehasbeenmuchevidencetoprovethatabalancebetweenthetwohelpsmorerapidandcontinuousdevelopmentofthesociety.

话题：

旅游 

　　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline（giveninChinese）below:

　　1）有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行 

　　2）两种旅行方式的好处 

　　3）你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?

　　TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

　　___________________________________________________ 

　　_______________________________________________________ 

　　____________________________________________________ 

　　行文思路 

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。

提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：

指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：

有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。

　　高分范文 

　　TravelAloneorTravelwithaCompanion?

　　[1]Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.[2]Somepeopleliketotravelalone,[2]whileothersprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Ofcourse,everyonehashisconsiderationforhispreference. 

　　[4]Travelingalone,onecanenjoymorefreedom（自由）.Thetravelercanarrangehistourashewisheswithoutthetroubleofhumoringothers.[3]Moreover而且，此外,travelingalone[5]tendtobringthetraveler[6]unexpectedsurprise,[7]suchasmakinganewfriendandenjoyingadifferentscenery.[8]Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages.[3]Foronething,thegroupmemberscanhelpandlookaftereachotherinthejourney.[3]Foranother,[4]travelingwithotherswhohavesameinterestwith,youcansharecostsandexperienceswiththem. 

　　[9]Astome,Iprefertotravelwithacompanion.[3]Firstly,wecandealwiththepossibleproblemsanddifficultiesinthejourney.[3]Secondly,Iliketosharethepleasureoftravelingwithothers.[3]Insum,[10]bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone. 

　　亮点点评 

　　[1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。

　　[2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。

　　[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

　　[4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。

　　[5]“倾向，趋于”。

　　[6]“意外的惊喜”。

　　[7]表示列举。

　　[8]“和…相比”。

　　[9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。

　　[10]“或者…，或者”。

　　佳句临摩 

　　1.佳句：

Whenitcomestotravelingway,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.

　　临摩：

当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。

　　____________________________________________. 

　　2.佳句：

Comparedwithtravelingalone,travelingwithacompanionhasalsoitsadvantages. 

　　临摩：

和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。

　　3>___________________________________________. 

　　3.佳句：

Bothtravelingaloneandtravelingwithacompanionhavetheirattractions,andyoucanfindthepleasurefromeitherone. 

　　临摩：

网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。

　　_____________________________________. 

　　KEY:

　　1.Whenitcomestowhetherweshouldcancelthe“goldenweek”holiday,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions. 

　　2.Comparedwiththecities,thecountrysideisrelativelybackwardineconomy. 

　　3.Bothnetworkteachingandtraditionalschoolteachinghavetheiradvantages.Therefore,weshouldcombinethesetwoteachingways

主题：

电影和电视对公众的影响力 

　　【题目】 

　　Howdomoviesortelevisioninfluencepeople’sbehavior?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer. 

　　【范文】TheInfluenceofTelevisionandMovies 

　　Thereisnodoubtthatwatchingtelevisionandmoviescaninfluencethewaythatpeoplebehave.Moreover，itseemsthatpeoplearespendingmoreandmoretimewatchingsomesortofvisualentertainment，whetheritistelevision，avideotapeoraDVD.Therefore，theeffectsofvisualmediacannotbeignored. 

　　Oneobviouseffectofthesemediaisthatwatchingtheminducespeopletobuycertainproducts（产品）Televisionadvertisingiswidespreadand，nowadays，evenmovietheaterspermit（准许）advertisements.AnotherwayTVandthemoviesaffectpeopleisthattheygivepeopleeitherabroaderviewoftheworldoradistortedone，dependingonwhattypeofprogramtheywatch.Thosewhowatchnewsandeducationalprogramcanlearnmanynewthingswhilethosewhowatchprimarily（最初的）entertainmentshowsmaycometobelievethatmostpeopleintheworldpossessgreatwealthandgoodlooks.Itmaymakethembecomedissatisfiedwith（对什么不满意）theirownlives.Finally，perhapsthemostsusceptibleviewersarechildren，whomaybeunabletotellfactfromfictionandmaytrytoimitateactsthattheyseeonTVorinthemovies. 

　　Withtheever-increasingpopularityofvideoentertainment，societymustpayattentionto（注意）theseeffects（影响）.Televisionandmovies，whileentertainingandinformative，cannottaketheplaceofrealexperience.（不能取代现实的生活）

　Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertotheuniversitypresident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbasedontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

　　1.学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养。

　　2.学校应该丰富学生的校园生活 

　　【范文】 

　　ALettertotheUniversityPresident 

　　DearSir, 

　　Iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerningourteachingandcampuslife. 

　　AsasophomorefromtheMathDepartment,Iamquitesatisfiedwiththepresentconditionofmyuniversity,butI餯liketosaythatthereisstillsomeroomforimprovement. 

　　First,Ibelievethatmoreattentionshouldbepaidtotheguidanceofour studymethods.Tosomeextent,universitystudentsarecapableof studyingbythemselves,butmoreoftenthannever,wefindourselvesatalossastochoosegoodbookstoreadandappropriatetopicsforourresearch.Itisclearthatweneedsomeadvicefromourteachers.Ifourteacherscanlecturemoreon“howtolearnbyyourself”forus,especiallyforthefreshmen,ourskillswillbefurtherimproved. 

　　Second,moreactivitiesshouldbeconductedtomakeourcampuslifemorecolorful.I餸sorrytosaythatthepresentlifeoncampusisquiteboring.Everydaywehaveclasses,（上课）readinthelibrary（图书管里阅读）,orstayinthedormitory（呆在寝室）.Lifehereisroutine.Weneedmoremeaningfulactivitiesorganizedtoenrichourcollegelifeandenableusto study moreefficiently. 

　　Ihopeyoucanconsidermysuggestions.Thankyou. 

　　Yourssincerely 

　　LiMing

Directions:

Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyOpiniononCampusLectures.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

　　1.大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩 

　　2.听讲座的益处 

　　3.你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论 

　　【范文】 

　　MyOpiniononCampusLectures 

　　Inrecentyears,moreandmorelecturesarebeinggivenoncampus.Theyareorganizedeitherbythedepartmentsorbythestudentsunionswithanaimtoimprovethestudentsqualitybothmentallyandacademically.Theselecturesareusuallyinseriesandondifferenttopics,suchasarts,life,economy,psychologyandworldissues. issues['iʃju:

z]

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n.议题，问题；债券（issue的复数）；争点

v.发行（issue的第三人称单数）；分发；流出

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议题过量发行的印刷品争点

　　Generallyspeaking,theadvantagesofgoodlecturesarevarious.Firsttheybroadenthestudentsknowledgehorizonandcultivateinterestindifferentfields.Second,theymakethelifeofthestudentscolorfulandenj