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四级作文模块修改的
四步作文法:
一、审题
1、明确体裁
记叙文(时间顺序)AJobSearchingExperience
描写文(空间顺序)MySchoolCampus
说明文,着重客观陈述(罗列法、例证法、因果法、比较法、对比法、定义法、时间顺序法和分类法)HowIOvercomeDifficuilitiesinLearningEnglish,MyIdealJob,MakeOurCitiesGreener,TheSuccessfulInterview.
议论文,着重发表自己的看法(归纳法,演绎法,因果法,举例法,对比法与较法)MyViewonJobhopping,Don’tHesitatetoSay“No”,DoLuckyNumbersReallyBringLuck?
2、根据体裁确定写作方法
TryingToBeaGoodUniversityStudent
1)做合格大学生的必要性(议论文,从正反两个方面)
2)做合格大学生的必要条件(可从德智体等方面谈)(说明文)
3)我打算这样做(描写文)
二、确定主题句
8分作文最保险的做法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。
如:
TryingToBeaGoodUniversityStudent
1)Itisverynecessarytobeagoodunversitystudent.
2)Thereareseveralrespectsofnecessitiestobeagooduniversitystudent.(moralqualities,intellectualability,physicalfitness)
3)WhatIwilldointhefutureisasfollows.
三、三段十二句作文法
1、开头段。
引用法,提问法,定义法,数字法,故事法,开门见山法,间接开头法,概括法。
2、中间段。
例证法,比较与对比法,因果法。
3、结尾段。
总结法或重述法,建议法,评价法,引语法,预测法,展望或期望法,反问法。
四、修改完善。
1、语篇水平上的检查;
2、段落水平上的检查;
3、句子水平上的检查。
(大小写,单词拼写,词性,动词的时态语态、人称是否正确,主谓关系是否一致,名词的单复数、代词及指代关系是否一致,句子是否完整,标点符号是否正确)
四级作文模板参考
(I)说明原因型模块Currently,XXhasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanXXItisclearthat
(1).Ifyou
(2),asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou(3).Failurewillbefollowingwithyou.Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.Noonecandenyanotherfactthat(4).Youdon'thavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow(5).Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon(6).Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink(7).注释:
1:
XX第一个优点2:
支持XX做法3:
不支持XX做法4:
XX第二个优点5:
举例证明优点二6:
说明XX优点三影响
相应作文:
Theimportanceofself-confidenceCurrently,self-confidencehasbeentheorderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory---nothingismorevaluablethanself-confidence.Itisclearthat(self-confidencemeanstrustinone'sabilities).Ifyou(arefullofself-confidence,itwillbringyourcreativepowertoplay,arouseyourenthusiasmforwork,andhelpyouovercomedifficulties),asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou(havenoconfidenceinyourself,thereislittlepossibilitythatyouwouldeverachieveanything).Failurewillbefollowingwithyou。
Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.Noonecandenyanotherfactthat(self-confidencegivesyoulightwhenyouareindarkandencouragementwhenyouaredismayed).Youdon'thavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,inrespectthatweallknow(thesecretofMMe.Curieliesinperseveranceandself-confidence,thelatterinparticular).Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon(theachievementofone'sambitions).Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink(hethatcanhaveself-confidencecanhavewhathewill).
(I)说明原因型模块
(2)Inrecentyears,XXhascausedaheateddebateon
(1).Thefactorsfor
(2).Firstofall,(3).Then,therecomesacasethat(4).Moreover,(5).Especiallywhen(6).Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbecollectedtheremindpeoplethat(7).Inthisway,weshouldbehavejustlike(8).
TheimpactofTelevisionInrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,80percentofallhomesinChinahavesatelliteTV,offeringasmanyas50channels.Ithascausedaheateddebateon(theimpactoftelevisiononchildren).Manyparentsareworriedabouttheimpactofsomuchtelevisiononchildren.Thefactorsfor(parents'worryisthatchildrenareindulgeintelevisionandspendtoomuchtimeonit.).Firstofall,(withsomanyprogramstochoosefrom,childrenarenotgettingasmuchexerciseastheyshould).Then,therecomesacasethat(somestudieshaveshowthatexcessivewatchingoftelevisionbymillionsofchildrenhasloweredtheirabilitytoachieveinschool).Moreover,(theeffectonchildren'smindsaremoreseriousthantheeffectonchildren'sbodies).Especiallywhen(thechildrenaretoosmalltojudgewhatprogramsaresuittothem).Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbeconnectedtoremindparentsthat(theyshouldpaycloseattentiontoandresponsibilitiesforsupervisingtheirchildren'sTVviewing).Inthisway,childrenwillnotbeinfluencedtoodeeply.
(I)说明原因型模块(4)Formostofustoday,
(1).Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy
(2)areasfollows.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,is(3).Second,(4).Thethirdreason,actually,is(5).Thesignificancefor(6)。
Therefore,(7).注释:
(1)人们针对XX态度和举措
(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因(6)重申造成现状最重要原因
PollutionMostofustoday(recognizethatenvironmentalpollutionhasbeenagreatlyseriousproblem.lotsofplantstreescorpsaredestroyedbybadair.manyfishdieofpoisonouswater.thousandsofpeoplediefromeatingpoisonedfishorbreathingingas.therefore,environmentalpollutionshouldberesponsibleforthesediseasesthataredisabling,orbringingdeathnotonlytohumanbeings,butalsotowildlife.)Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy(environmentarepollutedmoreandmoreseriously)areasfollows.theprimaryreason,Ithink,is(thereasonofharmfulsubstancesintoenvironment.forexample,topreventinsects,farmersmakeuseofgreatamountsofinsecticides,soastohavebumperharvests.however,theypolluteair,waterandland).Second,(thegascomingfromthecarenginesandfactoriesalsomakeenvironmentpollutedbadly).thethirdreasonactuallyis(theresultofagrowingpopulationintheworld.everyday,somuchlitterandwastearepouredoutfromhouses,alsopollutetheenvironment).Thesignificancefor(controllingpollution)notedthatit'shightimethatmoreeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Therefore,(newlawsshouldbepassedtolimittheamountofpollutantsfromfactories.moreover,inthehouseholds,thereisanobviousneedtoreducelitterandwaste.let'smakeourgoodefforts,andtheworldwillbeasaferplacetoliveforus).
(I)说明原因型模块(5)Thesedaysweoftenhearthat
(1).Itiscommonthat
(2).Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?
Foronething,(3).Foranother,(4).Whatismore,since(5),itisnaturalthat(6).Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthtrying.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(7)toimprovehepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.
(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状(3)理由一(4)理由二(5)理由三(6)理由三引起后果(7)解决方法
PollutionofenvironmentThesedaysweoftenhearthat(ourlivingconditionsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousbecauseofthedestructionofourenvironment).Itiscommonthat(manytreesandanimalsarenearextinction,andtheall-importantfoodchainhasbeendestroyed.).Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?
Foronething,(thepopulationoftheworldisincreasingsorapidlythattheworldhasbeensocrowded.).Foranother,(theoveruseofnaturalresourceshasinfluencedthebalanceofnaturalecology).Whatismore,since(theindustrialrevolution),itisnaturalthat(agreatnumberoffactorieshavebeenspringinguplikemushrooms.Thesmokeandharmfulchemicalsreleasedfromfactoriesalsopollutetheenvironment).Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthing.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(plantingmoretrees,equippingcarswithpollution-controldevicesandlearningtorecyclingnaturalresources)toimprovethepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture.
写作模板——图表式作文Itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears(asXvaries).AtthepointofX1,Yreachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).Whatisthereasonforthischange?
Mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Firstofall,…(第一个原因).Moreimportantly,…(第二个原因).Mostimportantofall,…(第三个原因).Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraphic/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime(ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括号里使用于那些不太好变化趋势).
写作模板——提纲式作文
1.对立观点式
A.有人认为X是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B.有人认为X是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C.我看法。
SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat支持X第一个原因。
Theyalsoarguethat支持X另一个原因。
However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheyconsideritharmfultodoX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X第一个理由。
Anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:
Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,XalsomayX有一个坏处。
2.批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B.我不同意。
Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。
Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点进一步解释。
Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat一个例子。
(AccordingtoasurveyperformedbyXonagroupofY,almost80%ofthem赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点影响)。
Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat与错误观点相反观点。
Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.(以下参照辩论文议论文写法)。
3.社会问题(现象)式
4.A.一个社会问题或者现象B.产生原因C.对社会和我们生活影响D.如何杜绝。
(如果是问题话)E.前景预测。
Nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmentalproblem.(Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic).Accordingtoasurvey,调查内容说明这种现象情况。
(或者是一个例子)。
Thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。
Xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbeenarticulatedinthefollowingaspects.参照辩论式议论文写法。
AdozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventXfrombringingusmoreharm.同上Basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeoplewill……..
4.辩论式议论文模版
1Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Therear