四级作文模块修改的.docx

1、四级作文模块修改的四步作文法：一、 审题 1、 明确体裁记叙文（时间顺序）A Job Searching Experience描写文（空间顺序）My School Campus说明文,着重客观陈述(罗列法、例证法、因果法、比较法、对比法、定义法、时间顺序法和分类法)How I Overcome Difficuilities in Learning English,My Ideal Job,Make Our Cities Greener,The Successful Interview.议论文，着重发表自己的看法（归纳法，演绎法，因果法，举例法，对比法与较法）My View on Job hop

2、ping,Dont Hesitate to Say“No”,Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Luck?2、 根据体裁确定写作方法Trying To Be a Good University Student1） 做合格大学生的必要性（议论文，从正反两个方面）2） 做合格大学生的必要条件（可从德智体等方面谈）（说明文）3） 我打算这样做（描写文）二、 确定主题句8分作文最保险的做法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。如：Trying To Be a Good University Student1) It is very necessary to be a good unve

3、rsity student.2)There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.（moral qualities, intellectual ability, physical fitness）3)What I will do in the future is as follows.三、 三段十二句作文法1、 开头段。引用法，提问法，定义法，数字法，故事法，开门见山法，间接开头法，概括法。2、 中间段。例证法，比较与对比法，因果法。3、 结尾段。总结法或重述法，建议法，评价法，引语法，预测法，展

4、望或期望法，反问法。四、 修改完善。1、 语篇水平上的检查；2、 段落水平上的检查；3、 句子水平上的检查。（大小写，单词拼写，词性，动词的时态语态、人称是否正确，主谓关系是否一致，名词的单复数、代词及指代关系是否一致，句子是否完整，标点符号是否正确）四级作文模板参考(I)说明原因型模块 Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a res

5、ult, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You dont have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influen

6、ce upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).注释:1:XX第一个优点2:支持XX做法3:不支持XX做法4:XX第二个优点5:举例证明优点二6:说明XX优点三影响相应作文:The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory - nothing is more valuable than self-confidence. It is

7、clear that (self-confidence means trust in ones abilities). If you (are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yo

8、urself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You dont have

9、 to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of MMe. Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular). It will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of ones ambitions). With reference to my standpoint, I think (he that can have

10、self-confidence can have what he will).(I)说明原因型模块(2) In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way,

11、 we should behave just like (8).The impact of Television In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels. It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). Many parents are wor

12、ried about the impact of so much television on children. The factors for (parents worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then, there comes a case

13、that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover, (the effect on childrens minds are more serious than the effect on childrens bodies). Especially when (the children are too small to judge what progr

14、ams are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their childrens TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.(I)说明原因型模块(4)For most of us today, (1). From above, w

15、e can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second,(4). The third reason, actually, is (5).The significance for (6)。Therefore, (7).注释:(1)人们针对XX态度和举措(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因(6)重申造成现状最重要原因Pollution Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollutio

16、n has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bring

17、ing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)From above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows. the primary reason, I think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make

18、use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday,

19、so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). The significance for (controlling pollution) noted that its high time that more effective measures should be taken. Therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, i

20、n the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. lets make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).(I)说明原因型模块(5)These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3

21、).For another, (4). What is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.(1)提出论题(2)说明现状(3)理由一(4)理由二(5)理由三(6)理由三引起后果(7)

22、解决方法Pollution of environment These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.). Why does such circ

23、umstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more, since (the industrial revolution ),it is

24、 natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment). To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. We should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with

25、pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.写作模板图表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/

26、dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of (多少). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, (第一个原因). More importantly, (第二个原因). Most important of all, (第三

27、个原因). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里使用于那些不太好变化趋势).写作模板提纲式作文1 对立观点式 A. 有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？B. 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？C. 我看

28、法。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 另一个原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There

29、 is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 有一个坏处。 2 批驳观点式 A一个错误观点。 B 我不同意。 Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点进一步解释。An example they have

30、presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点影响)。 There might be some element of truth in these peoples belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反观点。There are a number of reasons b

31、ehind my belief. (以下参照辩论文议论文写法)。3 社会问题(现象)式 4 A一个社会问题或者现象B 产生原因 C对社会和我们生活影响 D 如何杜绝。(如果是问题话)E 前景预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象情况。(或者是一个例子)。 There ar

32、e a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will . 4.辩论式议论文模版1 Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There ar