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基础组

Correction1限时：

6分钟

[2016·衡水二中仿真]IliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisitforourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,whichwewatchedaflag－raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrisingslow,Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremelyexciting.Thenwegotosomeotherfamoustouristattraction,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,thoughtoftheoldsayingthat“Hewhodon'tclimbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,butIreallyhadagoodtime.

答案　

Iliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisit

ourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,

wewatched

flag－raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrising

，Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremely

.Thenwe

tosomeotherfamoustourist

，liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,

oftheoldsayingthat“Hewho

climbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,

Ireallyhadagoodtime.

Correction2限时：

7分钟

[2016·枣强中学期中]Thereiscommonphenomenonnowadayswhichparentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisofgreatlyconcern.I'mstronglyopposedofthiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecomeveryreliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreativeidea.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgivingouttoomuchcareisextremelybadforourdevelopmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesanddevelopingbythemselvescantheygrowuptobeingindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.

答案　

Thereis

commonphenomenonnowadays

parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisof

concern.I'mstronglyopposed

thiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecome

reliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreative

.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgiving

toomuchcareisextremelybadfor

developmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesand

bythemselvescantheygrowupto

independentandbecometrulysuccessful.

Correction3限时：

7分钟

[2016·衡水二中热身]

July24th,ThursdaySunny

Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Bothsideoftheroadwerelinedwithaplentyoftrees,greenandtall.Whenraisemyhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflyingfreeinthebluesky.ThenIlostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,thatcouldgowhereveritwantedanddidwhateveritliked.Impossiblelikeitwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthathewasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!

AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappearedinmyface.

答案　

July24th,ThursdaySunny

Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Both

oftheroadwerelinedwith

plentyoftrees,greenandtall.When

myhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflying

inthebluesky.ThenI

lostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,

couldgowhereveritwantedand

whateveritliked.Impossible

itwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthat

wasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!

AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappeared

myface.

Correction4限时：

6分钟

[2016·武邑中学期末]Myfatherwasthebiologyprofessor.WhenIwasyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,thereIsawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookmeonawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesandfirefly.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,thinkaboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelveryluckily.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfromher.Hehelpsmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.

答案　

Myfatherwas

biologyprofessor.WhenI

younghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,

Isawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookme

awalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesand

.Heseemed

knoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,

aboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelvery

.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfrom

.He

medevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.

Correction5限时：

7分钟

[2016·衡水二中预测]

Deareditor，

IamLiHua,astudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmyopiniononifmobilephonesshouldbeallowedinmiddleschools.Nowadaysmobilephoneshavebecomeapopularmeansofcommunication.However,manyaschooldon'tallowstudentstobringmobilephonestoschool.Ithinkitiscompletewrong.

Asweknowit,the21stcenturyisamodernagewhereisfullofinformation.Themobilephoneisoneofthequickesttooltoexchangeinformation.It'ssuchusefulinventionthatitmakesourlifemoreconvenient.Therefore,ifsomethingurgenthappenedsuddenly,wecancallforhelpimmediately.What'smore,wecanrelaxourselvesbyplayinggamesorlisteningtomusicbeforeweworkhardallday.

Ihopethestudentscanbeallowedtousingmobilephonesatschool.Doyouagreewithme?

Yourstruly，

LiHua

答案　

Deareditor，

IamLiHua,astudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmyopinionon

mobilephonesshouldbeallowedinmiddleschools.Nowadaysmobilephoneshavebecomeapopularmeansofcommunication.However,manyaschool

allowstudentstobringmobilephonestoschool.Ithinkitis

wrong.

Asweknow

the21stcenturyisamodernage

isfullofinformation.Themobilephoneisoneofthequickest

toexchangeinformation.It'ssuch

usefulinventionthatitmakesourlifemoreconvenient.Therefore,ifsomethingurgent

suddenly,wecancallforhelpimmediately.What'smore,wecanrelaxourselvesbyplayinggamesorlisteningtomusic

weworkhardallday.

Ihopethestudentscanbeallowedto

mobilephonesatschool.Doyouagreewithme?

Yourstruly，

LiHuar

Correction6限时：

7分钟

[2016·枣强中学月考]YesterdayIstoppedatatrafficsignal.AsIwaitedforthelightstoturngreen,aboyapproachedtome.Hewasholdingabunchofpensandasksmetobuysome.ItoldhimIdidn'tneedsome.Heexplainedtheywereverycheaply.Isawhimgoingtoothersandnooneboughthispens.Myfriend,thatwaswithme,suggestedgivingtheboysomemoney,soshewouldn'tbotherus.Ididgivehimmoneybybuyingtwoofhispen.Iexplainedmyfriendthattheboywastryingtohelphisfamilybydoingsomething.ThisIthoughtwaswellworthpraised.

答案　

YesterdayIstoppedatatrafficsignal.AsIwaitedforthelightstoturngreen,aboyapproached

me.Hewasholdingabunchofpensand

metobuysome.ItoldhimIdidn'tneed

.Heexplainedtheywerevery

.Isawhimgoingtoothers

nooneboughthispens.Myfriend,

waswithme,suggestedgivingtheboysomemoney,so

wouldn'tbotherus.Ididgivehimmoneybybuyingtwoofhis

.Iexplained

myfriendthattheboywastryingtohelphisfamilybydoingsomething.ThisIthoughtwaswellworth

.

能力组

Correction1限时：

7分钟

[2016·衡水二中猜题]ThismorningIlostmyMP3playeronmywaytoschool.ItwasboughtwiththemoneyIhadbeensavedformonths.TooupsetwasIthatIcouldhardlyconcentrateinwhattheteacherwassaying.Afterclass,myheadteachercalledmeoutandaskedifIhadlostsomethingornot.ItturnedoutthatmyMP3playerslippedoutofmypocketswhileIwaswalking.Andfortunately,ayoungladywalkedbehindmenoticedit.Shefoundtheschoolguardandgavethemtohim.

HowexcitedandhowdeepmovedIwastogetmyMP3playerback!

Iwanttobekindpersonlikethelady.

答案　

ThismorningIlostmyMP3playeronmywaytoschool.ItwasboughtwiththemoneyIhad

savedformonths.

upsetwasIthatIcouldhardlyconcentrate

whattheteacherwassaying.Afterclass,myheadteachercalledmeoutandasked

Ihadlostsomethingornot.ItturnedoutthatmyMP3playerslippedoutofmy

whileIwaswalking.

fortunately,ayounglady

或

behindmenoticedit.Shefoundtheschoolguardandgave

tohim.

Howexcitedandhow

movedIwastogetmyMP3playerback!

Iwanttobe

kindpersonlikethelady.

Correction2限时：

7分钟

[2016·衡水二中一轮检测]Duringthesummervacationthisyear,IthoughtIshoulddoeverythingmeaningfulinsteadofstayathome.BeforelongIgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurantandworkedtherelikeacleaner.Iworkedeighthoursadayforthreeweek.Thejobwashardandboredandseemedendless,whatmademesotiredthatInearlygaveituphalfway.ButIstuckitwithgreatdetermination.EverydayIstartoffforworkearlyinthemorningandgothomelateintheevening.FinallyIfinishedthejobbeforethenewtermbegan.Now,Iunderstandthatwhatworkmeans.Ithinkitisreallyasuccessfullyexperience.

答案　

Duringthesummervacationthisyear,IthoughtIshoulddo

meaningfulinsteadof

athome.BeforelongIgotajobataKFCfastfoodrestaurantandworkedthere

acleaner.Iworkedeighthoursadayforthree

.Thejobwashardand

andseemedendless,

mademesotiredthatInearlygaveituphalfway.ButIstuck

itwithgreatdetermination.EverydayI

offforworkearlyinthemorningandgothomelateintheevening.FinallyIfinishedthejobbeforethenewtermbegan.Now,I