届高三英语一轮复习 专题撬分练 专题14 短文改错.docx

1、届高三英语一轮复习 专题撬分练 专题14 短文改错短文改错基础组Correction 1 限时：6分钟2016衡水二中仿真I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, which we watched a flagraising ceremony. While I wat

2、ched the flag rising slow, I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely exciting. Then we go to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, thought of the old saying that “He who dont climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Alt

3、hough I was tired, but I really had a good time.答案I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, we watched flagraising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising ，

4、I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely . Then we to some other famous tourist ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, of the old saying that “He who climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, I really had a good time.Correction 2 限时：7

5、分钟2016枣强中学期中There is common phenomenon nowadays which parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of greatly concern. Im strongly opposed of this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become very reliant on their parents that they fail to have i

6、ndependent thoughts or creative idea. For another, overprotecting the children or giving out too much care is extremely bad for our development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and developing by themselves can they grow up to being independent and beco

7、me truly successful.答案There is common phenomenon nowadays parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of concern. Im strongly opposed this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent t

8、houghts or creative . For another, overprotecting the children or giving too much care is extremely bad for development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and by themselves can they grow up to independent and become truly successful.Correction 3 限时：7分钟20

9、16衡水二中热身July 24th, ThursdaySunnyOn the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both side of the road were lined with a plenty of trees, green and tall. When raise my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying free in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a

10、 bird, that could go wherever it wanted and did whatever it liked. Impossible like it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that he was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared in my face.答案July 24th, ThursdayS

11、unnyOn the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both of the road were lined with plenty of trees, green and tall. When my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird, could go wherever it wanted and whateve

12、r it liked. Impossible it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared my face.Correction 4 限时：6分钟2016武邑中学期末My father was the biology professor. When I was young he wa

13、s used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my fath

14、er and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.答案My father was biology professor. When I young he was used to take me to the biology lab, I saw pigs, cats

15、and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and . He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very . I am grateful that I got the c

16、hance to learn from . He me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.Correction 5 限时：7分钟2016衡水二中预测Dear editor，I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on if mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile ph

17、ones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school dont allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is complete wrong.As we know it, the 21st century is a modern age where is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest tool to exchange informat

18、ion. Its such useful invention that it makes our life more convenient. Therefore, if something urgent happened suddenly, we can call for help immediately. Whats more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music before we work hard all day.I hope the students can be allowed to using

19、 mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?Yours truly，Li Hua答案Dear editor，I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many

20、 a school allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is wrong.As we know , the 21st century is a modern age is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest to exchange information. Its such useful invention that it makes our life more convenient. Therefore, if someth

21、ing urgent suddenly, we can call for help immediately. Whats more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music we work hard all day.I hope the students can be allowed to mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?Yours truly，Li HuarCorrection 6 限时：7分钟2016枣强中学月考Yesterday I stoppe

22、d at a traffic signal. As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached to me. He was holding a bunch of pens and asks me to buy some. I told him I didnt need some. He explained they were very cheaply. I saw him going to others and no one bought his pens. My friend, that was with me, sugge

23、sted giving the boy some money, so she wouldnt bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his pen. I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth praised.答案Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal. As I waited for the lights to

24、 turn green, a boy approached me. He was holding a bunch of pens and me to buy some. I told him I didnt need . He explained they were very . I saw him going to others no one bought his pens. My friend, was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so wouldnt bother us. I did give him money by bu

25、ying two of his . I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth .能力组Correction 1 限时：7分钟2016衡水二中猜题This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had been saved for months. Too upset was I that

26、I could hardly concentrate in what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked if I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my pockets while I was walking. And fortunately, a young lady walked behind me noticed it. She found the sch

27、ool guard and gave them to him.How excited and how deep moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.答案This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had saved for months. upset was I that I could hardly concentrate what the tea

28、cher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my while I was walking. fortunately, a young lady 或 behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave to him.How excited and how moved I was to g

29、et my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.Correction 2 限时：7分钟2016衡水二中一轮检测During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eigh

30、t hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the ne

31、w term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a successfully experience.答案During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do meaningful instead of at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three . The job was hard and and seemed endless, made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I