观点论证式作文.docx

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观点论证式作文

三、观点论证式

立论式

描述图画内容+提出具体观点，进行理论及事实论证+总结观点，再次表明观点

人生价值（2004年，终点又是起点；2008年，合作，两人一起闯南北；）；情感类（2001年，爱心是一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越明亮）

辩论式/对比论证式

描述图画内容，提出问题或观点+分析或列举对该问题或观点的不同看法并适当进行比较+阐明个人观点（2007年，积极乐观心态与成功的关系，守门员及射手；2012年，人生态度与成功）

立论式真题解析：

2004年真题

Itisvividlydepictedinthecartoonthataboyisrunningalongtheracetrackwithpainstakingefforts,sweatpouringdowninghisface.Afteralongjourney,heismakingthefinalspurt（冲刺）towardthefinishingline,withstrongdeterminationtobecomethechampion.Itseemsthathecouldrestforawhiletoenjoytheecstasyofvictory.However,straightaheadliesasignwhichindicatesanew“startingpoint”andurgeshimtocontinuerushingtothenextdestination.[图画图表描述段]

Undoubtedlythecartoonconveysthemeaningthatlifeisliketheprocessofrunninginwhichoneshouldmakeconstanteffortsandneverstopmakingprogress.（立论）Owingtothequickeningpaceoflife,competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife,stimulatingeveryonetopursueonegoalafteranother.Onceapersonstopsmakingprogress,hecanhardlymaintainhispastgloryandsurviveinthiscompetitiveworld.AsDengXiaoping,thegreatChineseleadersaid,“Developmentistheonlyway.”Nomatterhowpowerfulacountryis,nomatterhowsuccessfulaspecificinstitution,itwilldefinitelyseeknewdevelopmentinhighspeed.Therefore,,neitheracountrynorapersoncanremainstagnant（停滞的，迟钝的）.[意义阐释段]

Acaseinpointisthesuccessfullaunchingof“ShenzhouIXspacecraft”whichsetsChinainahighpositionofaviationandspaceflight.AlthoughitmeansagreatachievementforusChinese,wearefacingnewchallengesinthefutureandneedtodofurtherresearchinspacetechnology.Anotherillustrationiscloselyrelatedtous,theexaminees.Ifwepassthistestandarefortunatelyadmittedbyauniversity,weshallnotstopmakingefforts.Instead,weareconfrontedwiththechallengeofconqueringthedifficultgraduatecourses.Westillhavetostriveforsuccessinourfutureacademicstudy,employmentandcareer.Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“Destinationisanotherstartingpoint.”[举例论证段（注意：

这里是真题要求的，2005年后写法有所不同）

2008年真题

Directions:

Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould

1）describethedrawingbriefly,

2）explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen

3）giveyourcomments.

YoushouldwriteneatlyonAnswerSheet2.

文字说明：

"你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北。

"

Asissubtlyportrayedinthedrawing,twohandicappedyoungmenareheadingtowardstheirdestinationwithvigorousstrides,leavingalltheircrutchesbehind.Thehardshipofdisabilitybeingnolongeranobstacleontheirjourney,theysupporteachotherwithfirmhandsandproceedsteadily.Thecaptionindicatesthattheycantravelnorthandsouthextensivelywithcombinedlegs.

正如漫画敏锐地描绘的，两个身患残疾的年轻人正在大步流星朝着他们的目的地前进，把拐杖都抛在了身后。

残疾的艰难已经不再是他们路途上的障碍，他们互相有力地扶持着稳步前进。

图画文字表明"你一条腿，我一条腿；你我一起，走南闯北"。

Itisapparentthatthecartoonistaimsatremindingusoftheimportanceofcooperationinourdailylife.Hardlycananyoneachievesuccessinhiscareerwithouttheassistanceofhiscolleaguesandpartners.Ascompetitioninalllinesofworkgrowsincreasinglyfierce,wemustdefeatourrivalsthroughpowerfulteamwork.TakebasketballheroYaoMingforanexample,hecanslamthedunksmartlybecauseallhisteammatescontributemoreorlesstohisoutstandingperformance.Likewise,thesuccessfullaunchingofChang'eNo.1lunarprobeshouldbeattributedtotheChinesescientists'jointeffortsinsteadofindividualaccomplishment.Ifweworkseparately,wewillbeconfinedtofrailmindsandlimitedresources.

卡通画作者显然是为了提醒我们合作在日常生活中的重要性。

如果没有同事或搭档的帮助，任何人都不可能在事业上取得成功。

由于各行各业的竞争日趋激烈，我们只有通过强大的团队才能击败对手。

以篮球英雄姚明为例，他能够潇洒地扣篮，是因为他的队友或多或少成就了他杰出的表现。

同样，嫦娥一号探月卫星的成功发射要归功于中国科学家们的集体努力，而不是个人成就。

如果我们孤立地工作，必然受到局限，变得意志脆弱，享受不到多少资源。

Onthebasisoftheanalysisabove,wemaydrawaconclusionthatcooperationandteamworkreallycountinthiscompetitivesociety.Therefore,weshouldassociateourselvesharmoniouslywithourcompanionsineveryattempttowardsourgoals.Inaddition,itisindispensabletotrainourkidsfrequentlytointeractsmoothlywithothersinateam.Astheproverbgoes,unityisstrength.（241words）

在以上分析的基础上，我们可以得出结论：

在竞争社会中，合作和团队极为重要。

因此，在实现目标所做的每次努力中，我们都要和我们的同事们默契合作。

此外，经常培训我们的下一代也是必不可少的，为了让他们适应在团队中顺利地沟通。

正如谚语所说的，团结就是力量。

辩论式/对比论证式题型解析：

模拟试题：

面对人生与社会：

乐观与豁达

审题：

第一段：

描述图画；第二段：

利用正反举例论证悲观与乐观的差距+总结句；第三段：

倡导一种乐观生活、达观处世的人生态度和人生哲学。

思维拓展

当然本文也可以从世界观、人生观的角度入手。

相反，如果是一幅表明悲观厌世的图片，也可以采取同样的手法进行处理。

Asisapparentlyrevealedinthecartoonabove,thesheepliveshappilyinanoptimisticstateofmind,ignoringthethreatofadarkshade,becausehebelievesthatwherethereisshadow,thereissunshine.Whatisconveyedinthepictureisbothpositiveandilluminating.

Asfarasthepurposeofthedrawerisconcerned,Ithinkheintendstoremindusoftheimportanceofhowtocorrectlytreatoptimismandpessimism.Ifthesheepinthecartoonfeelsanxiousandpessimisticaboutthedarkshadealldaylong,hecanbynomeanshaveacomfortableandhappylife.Exampleslikethisarenumerous,butIfirmlybelievethatthefollowingonewillbeconvincingenough.Ifthereishalfacupofwater,thepessimistmaycryoveritbecausetheyhaveonlyhalfleft,whiletheoptimistmaycheerforitbecausetheystillhaveanotherhalf.Obviously,theywillhavedifferentperceptionsandfeelingstowardthesamelife.

Thereisnodenyingthat,mostoptimistshaveahighhappinessindex,whichcanhardlybeexperiencedbypessimists.Therefore,wemustreadourlifewithapositiveattitude.What’smore,theoptimisticattitudecaninfectothersstrongly,meaningthatwewillfindthatallthefriendsaroundusareoptimisticifweobservetheminthesameperspective.Asaresult,anatmosphereofoptimismandhappinesscouldbenaturallysetup.Therefore,let’skeepthefamouslineofShelley,thewell-knownpoet,inmindforever,thatis,“Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?

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