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历年高考满分作文及名师点评
标题：
2003年上海高考英语作文范文
DearCathy,
Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyopinionsonfashionwithyou,forIhavejustheardthatyouweredepressedbecauseyoucouldn’taffordthebest（famous）brands.
Ishallsaythatitisnaturalforeveryonetopaymuchemphasisonhisownimage.Anditistruethatstylishclothes,shoesorsomethinglikethosewillmakeonemorefashionableandeye-catching.However,everybodyhashis（her）ownfamilybackground,anditisreallyextravagantforyoutobuythefamousbrands.Besides,itwillalsoaddtotheburdenofyourparents.
What’smore,beautyisjustskindeep.Therearemanythingswhichcanmakeyoupopularwithothersexceptfashion.Agreatamountofknowledge,noblecharacterandawarmheartwillsurelywinothers’respectandadmiration.Goodqualitiesarethetreasureinyourlifewhichismorevaluablethananythingyouwear.
Neverjudgeapersonbytheappearance.Ihopethatyouwillrememberthesayingandbecomeashappyasyouusedtobe.
Yours,Jane
标题：
2005年春季高考英语作文
2005年春季高考
Directions:
WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.
你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。
你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由。
（包括所具备的条件）。
2005春季范文
Dearsir,
IhearthatourschoolwillwelcomesomeCanadianstudentstostaywithusforortwoweeks.Studentswhowanttoinvitethemtostaycantakepartinit.Iwanttotry.
First,myparentsandIcanspeakEnglishwell.Thatbenefitsustocommunicatewitheachother.Second,ourhouseisbigenoughforheorshetostay.Furthermore,IliveneartheHuangpuRiver.IthasagoodviewofShanghai.
Lastbutnotleast,inmyhome,heorshewillenjoymuchChinaculture.Mygrandpaandgrandmaaregoodathandwriting.MygrandmaalsohasagoodskillinChinesepainting.
Ithinkourfriendlywillgivehimabothinterestingandcomfortableexperience.
Thankyouforyourreadingduringyourbusywork..Ihopethatyouwillagreewithme.
Yourssincerely,
LiHong
练习
假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。
于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。
信的开头如下：
DearMumandDad,
Howareyoudoing?
范文
DearMumandDad,
Howareyoudoing?
I‘mwritingtoyouaboutmygratitudeforyourhavingbroughtmeupandmyfutureplan.
DearMumandDad,Iamalready18yearsold,whichshowsthatIhavegrownup.WheneverIamthinkingofthis,Ican’thelpfeelinggratefultoyou.ItisyouwhofirstgivemeencoutagementwhenImeetwithdifficulties,especiallywhenIamnotgettingalongwellwithmystudies.Indeed,yourinspirationseemstobealamp,whichoffersmelightofhope,courageandconfidence.Andmoreimportantly,youarealwaysteachingmetobegoodtoothers,andtrytocontributetooursociety.
DearMumandDad,Iannowaseniorthreestudent,whoisfacingthecompetitivenationalcollegeentranceexaminations,Sofirstofall,Ioughttotrymybesttopasstheexams.IamsurethatthroughmygreateffortsIcanandwillbeabletorealizemybeautifuldreamofbeingakeyuniversitystudent.Then,Iwillstrivetobeanindependentyouth.ThesocialsituationIwillbefacingmustbemorecompetitive,soIwilldevelopandpreparemyselftobeayouthwithastrongsenseofcooperationandcompetition.Believeinme,MumandDad,Iwillmakeadifference.
Bestregardstoyou.
Yourssincerely,
WangHua
根据报道东方绿洲（OrientalGreenboat）要更名，有外国人建议用”DiscoveryLand”“FamilyPark”或“YouthHeaven”。
写出你的看法；或者你自己拟个名字，并陈述理由。
范文如下：
Asisreported,OrientalGreenboatisplanningtochangeitsname.Manycitizensaswellastheforeignershavegreatinterestingivinganewnamesuchas“DiscoveryLand”“FamilyPark”or“YouthHeaven”.
Itsuddenlyoccurstomethatwhydon’twecallit“TheWorldofDiscovery”.I’vegotseveralreasonstoaccountforit.
Firstofall,theword“world”hasamoremeaningfuldefinitionthan“park”or“land”.Accordingtomyvisit,OrientalGreenboatcoversavastarea,anditismoreappropriatetocallita“world”ratherthana“park”.
Secondly,OrientalGreenboatprovidethechancetoenhancetherelationshipbetweenfamilymembersandpromotefriendshipbetweentheyouth.Wearegivetheopportunitytorelaxandenjoy,thusdiscoveringwhatisofgreatimportanceinourlife.Thirdly,studentsareinvolvedinmanyactivitiesthere.Theycometodiscoverhowtheyshouldcooperateandovercomethedifficultieswiththeirownefforts.Thisisaworldforthemtodiscoverhowwonderfulandabletheyare!
Tosumup,Ithinkitwouldbeawisechoicetonameit“TheWorldofDiscovery”.
高考英语满分作文HowtoSpendSundays（如何度过星期天）
HowtoSpendSundays
ThoughSundayissetasideasadayforrest,weoughttodevisesome.goodwaysofspendingit.
Firstly,weshouldreviewwhatwehavelearnedduringthepastweek."Onewillgetsomethingnewinlookingoverone’soldstudies"Isaverywisesaying.Ifwedonotfullyunderstandwhatwehavebeentaughtintheweek,howcanweexpecttounderstandnextweek’slessons?
Secondly,toincreaseourknowledge,weshouldreadonSundays,thosebooks,newspaperandmagazinesthatarenotinourregularcurriculum.Thatwilldousgood.
ThetwowaysofspendingSundayswillsurelydoanyonegoodifhecarriesthemoutfaithfullyandpersistently.
如何度过星期天
虽然星期天是供大家休闲娱乐的一天，但我们还是可以想出很多好办法来度过这一天。
首先，我们可以复习上周所学的内容，“温故而知新”这是非常明智的谚语。
如果我们连本周所学的知识都不能完全消化，那又怎能掌搔好下一周的知识呢?
其次，为了提高我们的知识水平，我们可在星期天阅读课外书籍、报纸、杂志，虽然不是我们的正规功课，但是对我们很有用。
如果有恒心坚持的话，以上两种度过星期天的方式毫无疑问是很有益的。
高考英语满分作文MendingaPuncture（补车胎）
MendingaPuncture
Theotherdayfoundthefronttyreofmybicyclewasflat.Therewasapunctureinthetyre.Ialwaysinsistondoingeverythingonmyown,soIdecidedtorepairthepuncturebymyself.
First,Igotmybicyclepuncture-repairkit,andfoundwhatIwanted:
atubeofglue,somechalkandsomerubberpatches.Inaddition,Igotabucketfullofwater.Second,Itookthewheeloffthebicycle,leveledoffthetyreandtookouttheinnertube.Thlrd,Ipartlypumpeduptheinnertubeandthensubmergedit,sectionbysection,inthewatertoseewherethepuncturewas.Whenastreamofbubbleswererising,Iknewwherethepuncturewas.Fourth,Idriedandcleanedthesurfaceoftheinnertube.Thenmarkedtheholewiththechalk,appliedsomegluetothesurfaceoftheinnertubeandtooneoftherubberpatches,andpressedtherubberpatchfirmlyoverthehole.Finally,Ipushedtheinnertubebackinsidethetyreofthebicyclewheel,andpumpedupthetyreuntilitwashard.
Thatwasthewholerepairingprocess.
补车胎
一天我发现我的自行车前轮胎瘪了，那上面有一个小洞，我一贯坚持自己的事情自己做，因此，我决定自己来补这个孔。
首先，我拿来修补车胎的工具箱，我找到了一管胶水，一些粉笔和一圈能用来作补丁的橡皮片，此外，我又打来满满一桶水；第二步，我倒置自行车车轮，扒开外带取出内胎；第三步，我给内胎充上气，然后把它放到水里，一段一段地检查小孔的位置，当一串泡沫显出来时，我知道小孔就在那里；第四步，我擦干净内胎表面，然后用粉笔在有孔的地方作了标记；之后，我往孔的周围内胎及备用的一块胶带上涂胶，用力将胶带压在刺孔处，最后，我将内胎装好，当它牢固时给轮胎充足了气。
这就是补车带的全过程。
高考英语满分作文给报社写信关于土地荒漠化的英语作文
假设你叫李华,你的家乡有很多茂密的森林,但现在森林已变成了荒漠.请根据下面几幅图的内容,向一家英文报社写一封120词左右的信,陈述以下内容:
当地土地沙漠化的经过
举一例来说明土地荒漠化的后果
发表你的看法.
注意:
1.信的开头部分已写好（不计入总词数）
2.生词提示:
荒漠wasteland
Possibleversion:
Deareditor,
Someyearsago,myhometownusedtobeabeautifulplace.Thicktreesandgreengrasscouldbeseenalloverthehills.Astimewenton,peopledestroyedalmostthewholeforesttogrowmorecrops.Tomakemattersworse,peoplelettheircattleeatupthegrass.So,youcanonlyseewastelandinsteadofgreenforestsnow.Asaresult,whenitrains,thesoiliswasheddownthehillsandintotherivers.Strongwindsalsoblowawaythevaluablesoilthatliesonthetopofthefields.Idohopeallthepeoplewilltakegoodcareoftheforestsandplantmoretreestoimproveourlivingconditions.
高考英语满分作文Advertisement－广告
资料来源：
中国京翰教育
请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文.
1）广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀
有的广告走向极端
你对广告的看法
Possibleversion:
Advertisement
Advertisementsappeareverywhereinmodernsociety.Whenyouwalkalongthestreets,youcanseelargeboardswithprettygirlssmilingatyou.Youreadnewspapers,andseehalfofthepagescoveredwithads.YouturnonTV,andyouseecommercialadvertisementsagain.Whetheryoulikeitornot,advertisementsfillyourlife.
Inordertoattractmorecustomers,advertisementswillsometimesgotoextremes.Advertisementsuseeverypossiblemeansinproducingtheirannouncements.Forexample,toadvertiseacertainfood,advertiserswillemployanactortositatatableandeatuptheirseeminglydeliciousfoodproductwhiletheyfilmhim.
Althoughadvertisementsenableyoutomakedecisionsquickly,sometimestheycancauselotsoftrouble.Therearealwaysmanyofthemandtheymakeyouforgetwhatyouaresittingtherefor.
高考英语满分作文写邮件简述18岁成人宣誓仪式的感受
假如你是李华,昨天学校为你们举办了18岁成人宣誓仪式.请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件,描述宣誓仪式过程并简述你的感受.
要点:
1.宣誓仪式;2.感谢家长和老师的培养和教育;3.老师送贺卡;4.表演节目
注意:
1.邮件必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥;2.词数:
100字左右;开头已为你写好.
参考词汇:
宣誓makeanoath
DearTom,
It’sgreattoreceiveyoure-mail.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingthattookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.
Yourstruly,
LiHua
Possibleversion:
DearTom,
It’sgreattoreceiveyoure-mail.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingthattookplaceinmyschoolyesterday.
Intheafternoonweheldagrown-upceremonyforourcoming18-year-oldbirthday.Atfirstwemadeanoaththatasgrown-upsweshouldhaveasenseofduty/responsibilityforoursocietyfromnowon.Thenweshowedourthankstoourparentswhohadgonethroughhardshipstobringusupandteacherswhohavebeeneducatinguspatiently.Andourteachersalsogaveuscardsexpressingtheirgoodwishestous.Finallyweputonwonderfulperformances,singinganddancing.Welearnedalotfromtheactivity.Ithinkit’sveryimportantforus.Iwillneverforgetthe
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