历年高考满分作文及名师点评.docx

1、历年高考满分作文及名师点评标题：2003年上海高考英语作文范文 Dear Cathy,I am writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you were depressed because you couldnt afford the best(famous) brands. I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image. And it is true

2、 that stylish clothes, shoes or something like those will make one more fashionable and eye-catching. However, everybody has his(her) own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy the famous brands. Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents.Whats more, beauty is ju

3、st skin deep. There are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surely win others respect and admiration. Good qualities are the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear.Never jud

4、ge a person by the appearance. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be.Yours,Jane标题：2005年春季高考英语作文 2005年春季高考Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信

5、说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。2005春季范文Dear sir,I hear that our school will welcome some Canadian students to stay with us for or two weeks. Students who want to invite them to stay can take part in it. I want to try.First , my parents and I can speak English well. That benefits us to communicate with each oth

6、er. Second, our house is big enough for he or she to stay. Furthermore , I live near the Huangpu River. It has a good view of Shanghai. Last but not least , in my home, he or she will enjoy much China culture. My grandpa and grandma are good at handwriting. My grandma also has a good skill in Chines

7、e painting. I think our friendly will give him a both interesting and comfortable experience. Thank you for your reading during your busy work. I hope that you will agree with me .Yours sincerely, Li Hong 练习假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：Dear Mum and Dad,How are yo

8、u doing ?范文Dear Mum and Dad, How are you doing ?I m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan. Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I cant help feeling grateful to you . It is you who f

9、irst give me encoutagement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to

10、 contribute to our society.Dear Mum and Dad, I an now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream

11、 of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a differe

12、nce. Best regards to you .Yours sincerely,Wang Hua 根据报道东方绿洲(Oriental Greenboat)要更名，有外国人建议用”Discovery Land” “Family Park” 或 “Youth Heaven ”。写出你的看法；或者你自己拟个名字，并陈述理由。范文如下：As is reported, Oriental Greenboat is planning to change its name. Many citizens as well as the foreigners have great interest in giv

13、ing a new name such as “Discovery Land” “Family Park” or “Youth Heaven”.It suddenly occurs to me that why dont we call it “The World of Discovery ”.Ive got several reasons to account for it. First of all, the word “world” has a more meaningful definition than “park” or “ land”. According to my visit

14、, Oriental Greenboat covers a vast area, and it is more appropriate to call it a “world” rather than a “park”.Secondly, Oriental Greenboat provide the chance to enhance the relationship between family members and promote friendship between the youth. We are give the opportunity to relax and enjoy ,t

15、hus discovering what is of great importance in our life. Thirdly , students are involved in many activities there. They come to discover how they should cooperate and overcome the difficulties with their own efforts. This is a world for them to discover how wonderful and able they are!To sum up , I

16、think it would be a wise choice to name it “ The World of Discovery”.高考英语满分作文 How to Spend Sundays（如何度过星期天） How to Spend Sundays Though Sunday is set aside as a day for rest, we ought to devise some .good ways of spending it. Firstly, we should review what we have learned during the past week. One w

17、ill get something new in looking over ones old studies Is a very wise saying. If we do not fully understand what we have been taught in the week, how can we expect to understand next weeks lessons? Secondly, to increase our knowledge, we should read on Sundays, those books,newspaper and magazines th

18、at are not in our regular curriculum. That will do us good. The two ways of spending Sundays will surely do anyone good if he carries them out faithfully and persistently. 如何度过星期天 虽然星期天是供大家休闲娱乐的一天，但我们还是可以想出很多好办法来度过这一天。 首先，我们可以复习上周所学的内容，“温故而知新”这是非常明智的谚语。如果我们连本周所学的知识都不能完全消化，那又怎能掌搔好下一周的知识呢? 其次，为了提高我们的知

19、识水平，我们可在星期天阅读课外书籍、报纸、杂志，虽然不是我们的正规功课，但是对我们很有用。 如果有恒心坚持的话，以上两种度过星期天的方式毫无疑问是很有益的。高考英语满分作文 Mending a Puncture(补车胎) Mending a Puncture The other day found the front tyre of my bicycle was flat. There was a puncture in the tyre. I always insist on doing everything on my own, so I decided to repair the pun

20、cture by myself. First, I got my bicycle puncture-repair kit, and found what I wanted: a tube of glue, some chalk and some rubber patches. In addition, I got a bucket full of water.Second, I took the wheel off the bicycle, leveled off the tyre and took out the inner tube. Thlrd, I partly pumped up t

21、he inner tube and then submerged it, section by section, in the water to see where the puncture was. When a stream of bubbles were rising, I knew where the puncture was. Fourth, I dried and cleaned the surface of the inner tube. Then marked the hole with the chalk, applied some glue to the surface o

22、f the inner tube and to one of the rubber patches, and pressed the rubber patch firmly over the hole. Finally, I pushed the inner tube back inside the tyre of the bicycle wheel, and pumped up the tyre until it was hard. That was the whole repairing process. 补车胎 一天我发现我的自行车前轮胎瘪了，那上面有一个小洞，我一贯坚持自己的事情自己做

23、，因此，我决定自己来补这个孔。 首先，我拿来修补车胎的工具箱，我找到了一管胶水，一些粉笔和一圈能用来作补丁的橡皮片，此外，我又打来满满一桶水；第二步，我倒置自行车车轮，扒开外带取出内胎；第三步，我给内胎充上气，然后把它放到水里，一段一段地检查小孔的位置，当一串泡沫显出来时，我知道小孔就在那里；第四步，我擦干净内胎表面，然后用粉笔在有孔的地方作了标记；之后，我往孔的周围内胎及备用的一块胶带上涂胶，用力将胶带压在刺孔处，最后，我将内胎装好，当它牢固时给轮胎充足了气。 这就是补车带的全过程。高考英语满分作文 给报社写信关于土地荒漠化的英语作文 假设你叫李华,你的家乡有很多茂密的森林,但现在森林已变成

24、了荒漠.请根据下面几幅图的内容,向一家英文报社写一封120词左右的信,陈述以下内容:当地土地沙漠化的经过举一例来说明土地荒漠化的后果 发表你的看法.注意: 1.信的开头部分已写好(不计入总词数)2. 生词提示:荒漠 wastelandPossible version:Dear editor,Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could be seen all over the hills. As time went on, people destroyed

25、almost the whole forest to grow more crops. To make matters worse, people let their cattle eat up the grass. So, you can only see wasteland instead of green forests now. As a result, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers. Strong winds also blow away the valuable soil t

26、hat lies on the top of the fields. I do hope all the people will take good care of the forests and plant more trees to improve our living conditions. 高考英语满分作文 Advertisement广告 资料来源：中国京翰教育 请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文.1) 广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀有的广告走向极端你对广告的看法Possible version: AdvertisementAdvertisem

27、ents appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisemen

28、ts fill your life.In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delici

29、ous food product while they film him.Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for. 高考英语满分作文 写邮件简述18岁成人宣誓仪式的感受 假如你是李华,昨天学校为你们举办了18岁成人宣誓仪式.请根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封

30、电子邮件,描述宣誓仪式过程并简述你的感受.要点:1.宣誓仪式;2.感谢家长和老师的培养和教育;3.老师送贺卡;4.表演节目 注意:1.邮件必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥;2.词数:100字左右;开头已为你写好.参考词汇:宣誓make an oathDear Tom,Its great to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.Yours truly,Li HuaPossible version:Dear Tom,Its great to rece

31、ive your e-mail. Now Id like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday.In the afternoon we held a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty/responsibility for our society from now on. Then we sh

32、owed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think its very important for us. I will never forget the