雅思写作高分范文.docx

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雅思写作高分范文

雅思写作高分范文

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高分范文一

Individualscandonothingtoimprovetheenvironment;onlygovernmentsandlargecompaniescanmakeadifference.Towhat

doyouagreeordisagree

Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofpeopleareconcernedaboutenvironmentalprotectionandregarditasoneofthemostimportantchallenges.However,whetheronlygovernmentsandbigfirmshaveresourcesandpowerstopreserveourenvironmentisacontroversialissue.Myviewisthateverysinglecitizencouldalsomakeahugedifference.

Inthefirstplace,itisclearthatitishumanactivitiesthathavethegreatestimpactthroughoutthehistory.Bothenvironmentcontaminationandconservationarethelong-termprocess,andnosinglegovernmentorbigcompanycanmeetthischallengealone.Sowhoevercreatedtheproblemshouldberesponsibleforsolvingit;environmentprotectionneedseveryoneofustocontinuouslyparticipatein.

Moreover,thepublic’swillsandbehaviorshavecriticalinfluenceongovernment’spoliciesandcompanies’strategies.Forexample,ifeveryonesays“no”toplasticshoppingbagsandpapercups,thecompaniesthatmanufacturesuchproductswillswitchtoenvironmental-friendlysubstitutesinordertosurviveinthemarket.

However,thatisnottosaythatgovernmentsandlargecompaniescannotpositivelycontribute.Indeed,governmentscanenactlawsandintroduceprogramstoraisethepublic’slow-carbonawareness;companiescanpromotegreenproductstochangethepublic’sconsuminghabits.Buttheyalsoneedeverycitizen’sappreciationandsupporttobringgoodresults.

Insum,noeffortistoosmallwhenweareprotectingtheenvironment.Meanwhile,localauthoritiesandorganizationsmustshouldertheirresponsibilitytodeveloplow-carboneconomyatthemacrolevel.Onlybydoingsocanweassurethatwecouldhandthisbeautifulplanettoournextgenerationandthenextgenerationafter.

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高分范文二-----Argumentation

TheInternethasdramaticallyalteredourlivesoverthepastfewdecades.Althoughsomeofthesechangeshavebeennegative,theoveralleffectofthistechnologyhasbeenpositive.Whatareyouropinionsonthis

TheInternethasbroughtsignificantchangestoourlivesinrecentyears.However,thereremainssomedisagreementastowhethertheoveralleffectofthistechnologyhasbeenpositiveornegative.Whiletherearecertainlyvalidargumentstothecontrary,IpersonallybelievethatthebenefitsoftheInternetfaroutweighitsdrawbacksandthesebenefitsaretwofold.

Firstofall,itisanindisputablefactthattheInternethasrevolutionizedthewaywecommunicate.Despitetheriskofsocialisolation-aproblemoccasionallyseeninpeoplewhospendtoomuchtimeattheircomputerterminalratherthanrelatingtopeopleintherealworld-mostofushavebenefitedgreatlyfrome-mailsandInternetchatprogramslikeMSNMessenger.Theseincrediblyusefulandpowerfultoolsofcommunicationfacilitatebothcontactwithlovedonesinfarawayplacesandglobaltrade.

Moreover,theInternethasplacedtheentireworld（andalloftheinformationinit）atourfingertips.Inearliertimes,conductingresearchentailedlonghourssearchinglibraryshelves.Now,however,thesameinformationcanbeaccessedattheclickofabutton.Admittedly,notalloftheinformationavailableontheInternetisreliableorhelpful-thereisavastamountofmaterialonlinethatsomewouldconsideroffensiveordangerous,rangingfrompornographytoinstructionsonhowtomakebombs.Nonetheless,Iwouldcontendthatthisfreeflowofinformationhasgenerallybeenaverypositivedevelopment.

Bywayofconclusion,IonceagainreaffirmmypositionthattheInternethashadapositiveimpactonmodernlifebecauseofitsinfluencesoncommunicationandtheflowofinformation.

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高分范文三-----Report

Withdivorceratesandfamilybreakdownsincreasingglobally,itisgenerallyacceptedthatfamiliestodayarenotcloseastheyusedtobe.

Discussthecausesofthisproblemandoffersomepossiblesolutionstoit.

Divorceandfamilybreakdownwerevirtuallyunheardofjust100yearsago.Now,however,almosthalfofallmarriagesfail.Thisphenomenonissymptomaticofthegrowingdistancebetweenfamilymembersinmodernsociety.Inthisessay,Iintendtoexplorethesourcesofthisproblemalongwithsomepossiblesolutionstoit.

Chiefamongthecausesofthisproblemisthemodernlifestyle.Today’sparentshavetoworkharderthanthoseofpreviousgenerationstosupporttheirfamilies.Traditionally,oneparentassumedtheroleofbreadwinner,whiletheother-typicallythemother-actedasthehomemaker.Recently,though,doubleincomefamilieshavebecomethenorm.Consequently,anincreasingnumberofchildrennowgrowupinaparentlessenvironment.Littlewonder,then,thattheyfeelalienated.Anothercontributingfactoristhepassiveandsolitarynatureofmanymodernformsofentertainment.

Inordertosolvethissenseofalienationwithinfamilies,Ibelievewemustfirstaddressitsrootcauses.Perhapsthemosteffectivemethodofdoingthiswouldbeforgovernmentstoofferfinancialincentivestoparentswhochoosetoremainathomeandtakecareoftheirfamilies.Admittedly,suchincentiveswouldprobablynotfullycompensatecouplesforlostincome;however,theywouldatleastsoftenthehardshipoflivingonasingleincomeandprovideanalternativeforparentswhowouldratherremainathomebutareunabletodosobecauseoffinancialconstraints.Onefurthermeasurewouldbetopromotemoreinteractiveleisureactivitiesinthecommunitythroughpubliceducationcampaigns.

Inconclusion,Ibelievethatthisisclearlyaproblemofsuchcomplexitythatnosolutionislikelyintheshortterm.However,Ibelievethatthemeasuresoutlinedabovewouldconstituteagoodfirststep.

Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileotherthinkitisunfair.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyouropinion.

Asaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhavebecomestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikemoviestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandcars.

Manypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair,especiallywhencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilityofgoverningthecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietyapersonmakes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof“fairness”isnottheissue.

Whilethosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethatthenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentareveryfew,andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationapersonneedstobesuccessful.Competitionisconstantandaplayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer.Thepressurefromthemediaisintenseandthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight.Soallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeearnings.

Personally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietyplacesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionalsandachievements.

Inmanycountries,theproportionofolderpeopleissteadilyincreasing.Doesthistrendhavemorepositiveornegativeeffectsonsociety

Inmoreandmoredevelopedcountriesweseethefollowingtrends:

incomesrise,peoplegetmarriedlaterandhavefewerkids.Theresultisthedemographicschangeandthepopulationages.Whilehavingmoreoldpeoplesoundslikeagoodthing（astheytendtobekindandwarm-hearted）,itcanhaveaseriousimpactoneconomiesandsocieties.

Consider,forexample,thatinorderforacountry’sGDPtogrowitneedstoproducemoregoodsandserviceseachyear.Withanagingpopulationandmorepeopleretiring,fewerarelefttowork,creatinganeconomichole.Theresultisthatsuchcountrieshavetorelyonimmigrationtofillthegapandthisisaless-than-desirablesolution.

Consideralso,thatasmorepeoplereachtheirtwilightyearstheywillfaceincreasinghealthproblemsandthisputshugepressureonhealthcareandothersocialprograms.Inmostcountriesthegovernmentpaysforatleastsomeofthecostsofhealthcare,nottomentionthingslikepensions,allofwhichmeansabigbillsomeonehastopayfor.

Tobefair,however,weshouldbecarefulnottodirectourangertowardsoldpeoplethemselves.Oldpeoplecanstillmakecontributionstosociety,whetheritmeanshelpinglookaftergrandchildren,workingparttimeorevendoingvoluntarywork.Onanindividuallevel,oldpeoplecanbearealtreasure.

Tosumup,governmentsshouldrecognizethechallengesofanagingsocietyandtaketheappropriateaction.Butinadditiontofixingtheshort-termimpactofanoldersociety,theyshouldalsolookatthebiggerpictureanddotheirbestsothatinthefuturewehaveabetteragebalance.