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专业八级的改错练习
专业八级的改错练习12
Mostpeoplewoulddescribewaterlikeacolorlessliquid.They__1__wouldknowthatinverycoldconditionsitbecomesasolidcallediceandthatwhenheatingonafireitbecomesavaporcalledsteam.__2__However,water,theywouldsay,isaliquid.Wehavelearnedthatwaterconsistsofmoleculescomposedwithtwoatomsofhydrogen__3__andoneatomofoxygen,whichwedescribebytheformulaH2O.
Thisisequallytrueofthesolidcallediceandthegascalledsteam.Chemicallythereisnodifferencebetweenthegas,theliquid,andthesolid,allofwhichismadeupofmoleculeswiththeformulaH2O.__4__Thisistrueofotherchemicalsubstances;mostofthemcanexistasgasesorasliquidsorassolids.Wemaynormallythinkofironasasolid,butifwewillheatitinafurnace,itwillmeltandbecomea__5__liquid,andatveryhightemperaturesitwillbecomeagas.Nothing
verypermanentoccurswhenagaschangesintoaliquidorasolid.Everyoneknowsthatice,whichhasbeenmadebyfreezingwater,canbemeltedagainbywarmedandthatsteamcanbecondensed__6__onacoldsurfacetobecomeliquidwater.Infact,itisonlybecausewaterissoafamiliarsubstancethatdifferentnamesareusedfor__7__thesolid,liquidandgas.Mostsubstancesareonlyfamiliarwith__8__usinonestate,becausethetemperaturesrequiringtoturnthem__9__intogasesareveryhigh,orthetemperaturesnecessarytoturnthemintosolidsaresolow.Waterisanexceptioninthisrespect,whichisanotherreasonwhyitsthreestateshavegiventhreedifferentnames.__10__
答案:
1改like为as.describesthassth是把……描述成……的意思。
2改heating为heated.在时间,条件,让步等状语从句中,当从句主语和主句主语是一致的时候,可以将从句的主语和be的变化形式省略。
3改with为of.becomposedof意思为“包括,由……组成”
4改ismadeup为aremadeup.which指代上文中的thegas,theliquid,andthesolid,表示复数概念,所以要用are
5将第一个will去掉,在时间条件状语从句和条件状语从句中要用现在时表示将来时。
6by改为when.whenwarm相当于whenitiswarmed
7改so为such.
8改with为to.短语familiarto后面才能接“某人”familiarwith是接sth
9改requiring为required.过去分词短语作后置定语时,和被修饰的名词时逻辑动宾关系。
10have后加been.动词give和主语threestates是动宾关系
专业八级的改错练习13
ClassicIntentionMovement
Insocialsituations,theclassicIntentionMovementis“thechair-grasp”.Hostandguesthavebeentalkingforsometime,butnowthehosthasanppointmenttokeepandcangetaway.Hisurge__1__togoisheldincheekbyhisdesirenotberudetohisguest.Ifhedid__2__notcareofhisguest’sfeelingshewouldsimplygetupoutofhischair__3__andtoannouncehisdeparture.Thisiswhathisbodywantstodo,__4__thereforehispolitenessglueshisbodytothechairandrefusestolethim__5__raise.Itisatthispointthatheperformsthechair-graspIntention__6__Movement.Hecontinuestotalktotheguestandlistentohim,butleansforwardandgraspsthearmsofthechairasabouttopushhimselfupwards.__7__Thisisthefirstacthewouldmakeifhewererising.Ifhewerenot__8__hesitating,itwouldonlylastthefractionofthesecond.Hewouldlean,__9__push,rise,andbeup.Butnow,instead,itlastsmuchlonger.Heholdshis“readiness-to-rise”postandkeepsonholdingit.Itisasifhis__10__bodyhadfrozenattheget-readymoment.
答案:
1将can改为must。
根据上下文的意思“主人有一个约会,必须离开”是客观要求,而不是“能不能”或者“可不可以”的问题。
2not后面加to。
desire后应该加动词不定式todosomething。
3将of改为about。
careabout意思为“对…在意,在乎”,而careof意思为“转交”。
（觉得还可以直接去掉of,care本身也有在乎的意思,可是答案不这么写,你怎么看嘞?
）
4删掉and或者to。
5将therefore改为yet或but。
这两部分之间应是转折的关系。
6将raise改为rise。
raise是及物动词,后面必须加宾语,而且在此与文章意思不符。
rise意为“起身”,“站起来”,符合文义。
7在as和about之间加上if或者though。
此处的意思是主人身子往前倾,双手抓着椅子,好像就要站起来一样。
asif/thoughtodosomething意思为“仿佛要做什么事情”。
8将make改为perform或do。
此处考查搭配问题,动词make与前面的act不能搭配。
9将the改为a。
afractionofasecond意思为非常短暂的时间。
10将post改为posture
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Thehunter-gatherertribesthattodayliveasourprehistorichuman__1__ancestorsconsumeprimarilyavegetabledietsupplementingwithanimalfoods__2__Ananalysisof58societiesofmodernhunter-gatherers,includingtheKungofsouthernAfrica,revealedthatone-halfemphasizegatheringplantsfoods,
one-thirdconcentrateonfishing,andonlyone-sixthareprimarilyhunters,Overall,two-thirdsandmoreofthehunter-gatherer’scaloriescomefrom_3__plants.DetailedstudiesoftheKungbythefoodscientistsattheUniversityofLondon,showedthatgatheringisamoreproductivesourceoffoodthanishunting.Anhourofhuntingyieldsinaverageabout100edible__4__calories,asanhourofgatheringproduces240.__5__Plantfoodsprovidefor60percentto80percentoftheKungdiet,andno__6__onegoeshungrywhenthehuntfails.Interestingly,iftheyescapefatalinfectionsoraccidents,thesecontemporaryaborigineslivetooldagesdespiteoftheabsence__7__ofmedicalcare.Theyexperiencenoobesity,nomiddle-agedspread,littledentaldecay,nohighbloodpressure,noheartdisease,andtheirbloodcholesterollevelsareverylow（abouthalfoftheaverageAmericanadult）.__8__Ifnooneissuggestingthatwereturntoanaboriginallifestyle,wecertainly__9__couldusetheireatinghabitsasamodelforhealthierdiet.__10__
答案:
1将as改为like。
此处的意思是“像史前人类祖先那样生活”。
2将supplementing改为supplemented。
supplemented修饰diet,可以看作whichissupplementedwithanimalfoods的简化形式。
3将and改为or。
4将in改为on。
onaverage是固定用法。
5将as改为while或者whereas
6删掉for,或者将provide改为account。
此处provide是及物动词,后面不用介词for
7删掉第一个of。
despite做介词,后面直接接名词。
8在half后加that。
that指代前面的bloodcholesterollevels,不能省略,因为这里是将部落成员的胆固醇含量与美国人的胆固醇含量相比较。
9将if改为whereas或者while。
此处意思为“尽管没有人……,但是……”,是转折关系。
10在for后面加不定冠词a。
专业八级的改错练习15
Therearegreatimpedimentstothegeneraluseofastandardinpronunciationcomparabletothatexistinginspelling（orthography）.Oneisthefactthatpronunciationislearnt‘naturally’andunconsciously,andorthography__1__islearntdeliberatelyandconsciously.Largenumbersofus,infact,remainthroughoutourlivesquiteunconsciouswithwhatourspeechsounds__2__likewhenwespeakout,anditoftencomesasashockwhenwe__3__firstlyheararecordingofourselves.Itisnotavoicewerecognizeatonce,__4__whereasourownhandwritingissomethingwhichwealmostalwaysknow.We__5__beginthe‘natural’learningofpronunciationlongbeforewestartlearningtoreadorwrite,andinourearlyyearswewentonunconsciouslyimitatingand__6__practicingthepronunciationofthosearoundusformanymorehoursperevery__7__daythanweeverhavetospendlearningevenourdifficultEnglishspelling.
Thisis‘natural’,therefore,thatourspeech-soundsshouldbethoseofourim-__8__mediatecircle;afterall,aswehaveseen,speechoperatesameansofholdingacommunityandtogiveasenseof‘belonging’.Welearnquiteearlytorecognizea__9__‘stranger’,someonewhospeakswithanaccentofadifferentcommunity—perhapsonlyafewmilesfar.__10__
答案:
1将and改为whereas/but/yet
2将with改为of。
unconsciousof是固定搭配。
3删掉out。
speakout意思为“大胆地说”,“大声地说”,与此处意思不符。
4将firstly改为first
5将which改为that或者将which删掉。
限制性定语从句前面的先行词是something,因此要用that引导定语从句。
也可以将which删掉,不用任何引导词。
6将went改为go
7删掉per或者every
8将This改为It。
It在此处做形式主语,后面的that从句是真正的主语。
9在community后面加together。
此处的大意为“语音是把社区团结在一起的工具”。
10将far改为away。
“只有几英里远”应是afewmilesaway。
专业八级的改错练习16
Sportingactivitiesareessentiallymodifiedformsofhuntingbehavior.
Viewingbiologically,themodernfootballerisrevealedasamemberofadisguised__1__huntingpack.Hiskillingweaponhasturnedintoaharmlessfootball
andhispreyintoagoal-mouth.Ifhisaimisinaccurateandhescoresagoal,__2__enjoysthehunter’striumphofkillinghisprey.__3__Tounderstandhowthistransformationhastakenplacewemustbrieflylookupatourancientancestors.Theyspentoveramillion__4__yearevolvingasco-operativehunters.Theirverysurvivaldependedonsuccess__5__inthehunting-field.Underthispressuretheirwholewayoflife,eveniftheir__6__bodies,becameradicallychanged.Theybecamechasers,runners,jumpers,aimers,throwersandprey-killers.Theyco-operateasskillfulmale-group__7__attackers.
Then,abouttenthousandyearsago,whenthisimmenselylongformative__8__periodofhuntingforfood,theybecamefarmers.Theirimprovedintelligence,
sovitaltotheiroldhuntinglife,wereputtoanewuse—thatofpenning,__9__controllinganddomesticatingtheirprey.Thefoodwasthereonthefarms,awaitingtheirneeds.Therisksanduncertaintiesoffarmingwerenolonger__10__essentialforsurvival.
答案:
1将viewing改为viewed。
非谓语动词view和句子的主语是逻辑动宾关系。
2将inaccurate改为accurate。
如果真的目标不准确,也就不可能进球了（hescoresagoal）。
3在enjoys前面加he。
由于前面ifhisaimisaccurateandhescoresagoal是条件状语从句,因此可见这里是主句,主句的主语he是不可以省略的。
4将lookupat的up省略
5将year变为复数
6将if去掉
7将co-operate改为co-operated
8将when改为after
9将were改为was。
该谓语动词的主语是Theirimprovedintelligence,是单数。
10将farming改为hunting。
纵观全文,在从事种植业后,“狩猎”而不是“农耕”的危险和不确定性对人们的生存已经不再那么重要了。
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Duringtheearlyyearsofthiscentury,wheatwasseenastheverylifeblood
ofWesternCanada.Peopleoncitystreetswatchedtheyieldsandthepriceofwheat
inalmostasmuchfeelingasiftheyweregrowers.Themarketingofwheat__1__
becameanincreasingfavoritetopicofconversation.__2__
Warsetthestageforthemostdramaticeventsinmarketingthewesterncrop.
Foryears,farmersmistrustedspeculativegrainsellingascarriedonthrough
theWinnipegGrainExchange.Wheatpricesweregenerallylowintheautumn,
sofarmerscouldnotwaitformarketstoimprove.Ithadhappenedtoooftenthat__3__
theysoldtheirwheatsoonshortlyafterharvestwhenfarmdebtswerecomingdue,__4__
justtoseepricesrisingandspeculatorsgettingrich.Onvariousoccasions,producers__5__
groupsaskedfirmercontrol,butthegovernmenthadnowishtobecome__6__
involving,atleastnotuntilwartimewhenwheatpricesthreatenedtorunwil
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