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四六级作文
四六级作文万用结构:
•起:
起动观点,开篇点题:
•应用文:
firstly,first,lastly
•议论文:
用有文采的,比如:
•Firstofall,inthefirstplace,firstandforemost,foronething,ontheotherhand
•Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…
•承:
正面论证,解析观点:
Besides,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,what’smore
•Lastbutnotleast,evenworse,moreimportant
•转:
反面论证,与众不同:
•Itisadmittedlythat,Admittedly,
•Nevertheless,yet,whereas=while比较圆润but生硬
•Instead,bycomparison,bycontrast,onthecontrary,conversely,incomparison
•合:
总结归纳,画龙点睛
•一篇文章至少3个表示合的词,第2,3段最后,第3段开头
•Thus,hence,inbrief,inshort,inconclusion,insummary,tosummarize,asaresult,tosumup,asaconsequence,ingeneral,generallyspeaking.
•原则:
1写的每个词必须是背过或者看过,自己编造容易错
•2想到的第一个词永远不要使用
•口头作文范文
04年六月范文:
•IamyourguidefromChinaTravelAgency.TodayIamgladtobeyourguide.Itisagreathonortostayherewithallofyouforawholeday.Justastheoldsayinggoes,“itisalwaysapleasuretogreetafriendfromafar.”Iwishallofyouenjoyyourselfduringthetrip.
•第二段
•Thefollowingisthetimeschedule.First,theGreatWallisthemajorattractioninthismorning.Second,havinglunchnearby,wewillgotovisittheSummerPalaceintheafternoon.Last,afterdiningatNightinBeijing,itistimetowatchtraditionalChineseperformances.At10.p.m,wewillgobacktoBeijingHotel.
•第三段
•Next,IwouldliketointroducetheGreatwalltoyou.ItiscalledtheEighthwonderintheworld.Builtin2000yearsago,thepresentrelicsareconstructedintheMingDynasty.Hopeyouenjoyyourselves.
•一共177个字,满分。
第一段可以删些句子。
•结构清晰,不要犯语言错误。
•05年1月范文:
竞选词
•Chairman,chairperson,spokesman,spokesperson
•TodayIamverygladtorunforthepresidentofthestudents’union.MynameisLiMingandajuniorstudentintheDepartmentofChemistry./ChineselanguageandLiterature/
•第二段
•IamsurethatIamqualifiedforthisposition.First,Iamgoodatcommunicatingandorganizing.Bytheway,withmyoutstandingleadership,Ihavebeenelectedpresidentofourdepartmentseveraltimes.Second,Iamwarm-heartedandeasygoing.Notonlydomyqualificationsandworkexperiencemakemeaperfectcandidate,mycheerfulpersonalityiswellsuitedfortheposition.Last,myhobbiesincludesportsandmusic.
•第三段
•IfIamelected,Iwillexertallmyefforts.Firstly,Iwillorganizesuitableactivities.Secondly,Iwilltrytoreachyourdemandsaswell.Therefore,Idonothesitatetorecommendmyselfasanidealcandidate.Iamsureyouwillmakeawisedecisioninvotingforme.Ihopetheaboveinformationwillhelpyoutoknowaboutmyself.Ifanyofyouhaveanyquestions/advice/forme/needanyfurtherinformation,pleasefeelfree/donothesitatetoaskatanytime.Thanksforyourlistening/attention.
•写作两大原则:
选词,选句,组句
•一句子原则:
•1.长短结合,以断句为主
•长句:
15-20词短句:
10词
•2基本句型:
•A主谓Isucceed,B主谓宾Ilovesb,C主系表…issmart.
•D主谓双宾Igave…anEnglishdictionary.
•E主谓宾补Tulongdaomakesmanypeopleselfish.
•3.长句写法:
•张道真,薄冰语法实用英语语法
•A并列句and,but,while,whereas
•B从句:
a定语从句who,that,which,when,where
b状语从句=副词性从句,放在句首或句尾when,where,if,because,though
•c名词性从句主语从句what,how,宾语从句Ithink,同位语从句reason,idea,conclusion,表语从句
•C非谓语动词a动名词b分词(过去,现在分词)c不定式
•D独立主格结构Timepermitting,I’ll…
介绍几种开头方式:
•1讲述背景知识
•例人为什么越活越长?
•背景知识:
自1990以来,中国人的平均寿命增加了4年多
•这种写法要求你们由非常丰富的课外知识:
•搜集背景信息:
Google…
•2.引用法开头(名人名言)
•例学校有一笔钱;买书?
计算机?
•SirFrancisBaconsaidthatknowledgeisthepower.知识就是力量。
•要求比较高:
积累了许多名人名言…
•注意:
一定要引用贴切;要符合西方人的习惯:
不要翻译中国的名人名言;
•例:
住校&住外面?
•中国学生:
Thereisfamoussaying:
youcaneverykindofbirdinthelargeforest.
•Aproverbsays,“youareonlyyoungonce.”/Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.
•3.定义法开头
•对你所要描述的主题作一个客观的、符合事实的定义
•AisB太一般:
Aisdefinedas/understoodas/referredtoasB;
•注意:
有些抽象概念不要下定义:
例如progress无法定义;
•4.问句法开头
注意:
问句分高质量和低质量
•低质量:
•一篇6级作文:
练习英语阅读的最好办法是精读还是泛读?
•InordertoimproveourEnglishreadingcapability,shouldwereadintensivelyorextensively?
•低质量:
通过问题无法看出作者的立场!
•高质量:
Doyouknowhowmanypeoplediefromtrafficaccidentsevery23minutes?
•你去黄山看过日出吗?
你去大海里游过泳吗?
如果没有的话,你的人生是多么的不完整啊!
•高质量:
通过问题作者的立场非常清楚!
•论证方法:
如何展开论证:
6种方法
•1.分类法
•面对一个非常抽象的idea,一筹莫展时,分类法可帮你一下撒开思路;
•例1:
TVprogramsareforentertainmentoreducation?
•2.举例说明法
•举例原则:
convincing(不一定noble):
自己身上的例子最convincing;
•关键是举例时的关键词:
forexample,forinstance太普通;
•推荐:
take…asanexample,toillustrate/asanillustration,agoodcase/anothercaseinpointis…
•万能:
Numerousexamplescanbegiven,butthis/thesewillsuffice.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone(s).
•3.对比/比较法compareandcontrast
•例:
Confidenceisimportant.
•你可以用举例法:
Mrs.Curie/Edison(万能论据)
•总结:
有了自信,你就能所有事情都成功;
•1.Withconfidence,youaretosucceedinalmosteverything.
•Without(with找不到更好的反义词)confidence,youaredoomed(命中注定)to(这个to是prep,+O)failureinalmosteveryfield.
•替换:
withoutintheabsenceofconfidence(自信缺席);
•“反之”:
conversely,otherwise,onthecontrary
•5.数字论证法
•数据的好处:
convincing;
•数字可以编,不要太离谱;
•编数字有技巧:
95%or94.85%?
94.85%好;
•本题:
编数字:
1500、2000都可以,但不要太离谱;编数字不难,关键是模版:
•经典句型:
•Accordingtotherecentsurvey/data/figure/statistics/studybytheChineseAcademyofsocialscience
•Onthebasisofarecentsurveyconductedbyagroupofoutstandingscientists,statisticsshowthat…
•6.名家名言来论证
•名人名言可以编,但要编的像样:
•反例:
Ithinkwherethereishopethereisaway.Ithink错误;
•技巧:
•AnancientChinesesage(智者)oncesaid…美国人不认识Chinese;
•万能论据:
Chinesesage换为Confucius;
•替换:
saidremarked,claimed(子曰…)
•AfamousBritish/Greeksageoncesaid…;
•7.经典废话模式
•A.Numerousevidencessuggestthat…
•替换:
suggestdemonstrate,illustrate,indicate,show,reveal
•B.Numerouspsychological/sociological/economicstudiesshowthat…
•C.Commonsenseinformsusthat…&Itaccordswithcommonsensethat…
•D.Bothcommonsenseandourexperienceinformusthat…
•E.Itisaquestionbothbasicandprofound.
Conclusion结尾段写作
•明确一点:
无论时间多么不够,结尾一定要写完;哪怕理由少写一个理由少一个只有你自己知道,如果你结尾没有那天下人就都知道了;
•先讲一个错误的结尾:
•反问式:
Shouldn’twespendthemoneyoncomputers?
难道我们不应该买计算机吗?
•结尾要有结尾的标志:
•简而言之:
Inaword,inshort,insummary,inconclusion;tosumup,toconclude…
•有总结
•错误:
Finally:
前面3个理由firstly,secondly,thirdly…这里finally容易让人以为是第4个理由;inshorts穿着短裤;
•结尾段的5种模式:
例:
买书&买计算机?
•1.最简单的conclusion:
时间不够用
•综上所述,我们可以得出…结论。
•Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydraw/cometotheconclusionthat…
•2.缩写前面的理由+结尾:
•如果时间还有剩余可以总结一下前面你列举的几个理由
•Insummary,投资计算机的好处有A、B、C(3个理由缩写成3个单词).所以我认为投资于计算机好。
•3.让步结尾:
如果时间有比较多的剩余
•用让步从句把对立面说一下+突出强调一下自己的优点+结尾;
•当然,我们承认投资于书还是有其优点的,便宜、没电也能看。
但是还是投资计算机更好:
A、B、C。
所以我认为投资于计算机好。
•4.后果性结尾
•你所讨论的问题如果得不到解决将会有非常严重的后果
•例:
作为一个坏习惯,吸烟肯定是弊大于利的;为了你的健康,请远离吸烟。
•Asabadhabit,smokingwilldoyoufarmorebadthangood.
•5.展望未来+号召:
呼吁读者采取行动
•到了…的时候:
Itisthetimethatwedidsth.虚拟语气
•推荐:
Itishightimethatwedidsth.正是到了…的时候
•01年6月范文:
•DearXiaoWang,
•WordsfailtoexpressmyexcitementwhenIlearnedthatyouwouldliketospendyourholidaytogetherwithme.ImissyousomuchthatIevencannotwaittoseeyou.Iamsurethatyourjourneywillbeexciting,rewardingandfulloffun.
•第二段
•Ihavemadearoughplanforthisholidayasfollows.Onthefirstdayyouarrivehere,Iwillshowyouaroundournewcampus.Duringthesecondfivedays,wecanvisitsomescenicspotsandhistoricalsitessuchasSummerPalace,theForbiddenCity,theGreatWall,theBeijingZoo.Onthelastday,wecandosomeshopping.
•第三段
•Bytheway,pleasetakecareofyourluggageonthetrain.Anddonotforgettotellmewhenyouwillarrive.
•Bestwishes,Yourssincerely,ZhangYing
•口头作文可以有3-5处非正式表达,比如缩写,省略句,口语表达方法
•02年一月范文
•DearMr.President,
•IamsophomoreformtheDepartmentoflaw.Iamwritingtheletterinpurposeofcomplainingaboutthefoodandserviceinthecanteen.
•Tobefrank,Iamratherdisappointedatthefoodquality,priceandserviceinthecanteen.First,thedishesarescarcelywellcookedandmostofthemtastethesame.Secondly,mostofthedishestherearepricedsohighthatsomestudentscannotevenaffordthem.
•第三段
•Thirdly,theserviceinthecanteenisfarfromsatisfyingandtheinsideofthecanteenalwaysseemuntidy.
•Tosolvetheproblem,Isuggestthatanothercanteencanbebuiltandamechanismofcompetitionbeintroducedbetweentheoldandthenew.Besides,boththecanteensshouldbesubjecttothestudents’supervision.Diningisaneverydayissueforstudents.
•continue
•Itmayaffecttheiracademicperformance.Therefore,IsincerelyhopethislettercandrawyourattentiontothematterandIhopetheproblemsmentionedabovebesolvedassoonaspossible.
Yourssincerely,LiMing
•05年6月范文:
•Sep.10thisthedaythateverystudentshouldbearinmind.Itisthetimetoexpressourcongratulationstoourteachers,whohavedevotedmostoftheirtimeandenergytous.
•Iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.Iamreferringtothatunfortunateaccidenttheotherday,whenIwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.
•最后一段
•Ifithadnotbeenformyteacher’stimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid,Ifearthattheconsequencemighthavebeenmuchserious.Everyoneagreesthatitwashisquick-wittedresponseinthatemergencethathasledtothissatisfactoryoutcome.
•continue
•Iwillrepaymyteacher’skindnesswithmyunselfishhelptoothers.Althoughnowadayspeopleinmountingnumberstalkabouttheneedtobeunselfish,weseeveryfewpeoplepracticewhattheypreach.Ifthereweremorepeoplelikemyteacher,thisworldwouldbeamuchnicerplace.
•双满分作文
•不同类型书信常用句型总结:
•1申请信:
•Iamwritingto/Iwouldliketoapplyfor….
•Acco