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高考英语作文满分范文汇编
2020年高考英语作文满分范文汇编
1.
Mymotheralwaystoldmeitwasbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful.“Ifyouaresmart,finallyyouwillaffordtobebeautiful.”AllIneededwerethebrains,andsomeday,Iwouldbeareallybeautifullawyer.
MymotherworkedataTVstationandIwouldcomealongandwatchthemagicoffilmingTVshows.Butallthesame,Iwaslearning.
Whenmyfather’sbusinessfailed,Iwasabletocontinuetoattendoneofthebestbilingual(双语的)schoolsinMexicoCitythankstoscholarship.Scholarshipfollowedmeintomiddleschoolandhighschool.
However,duringmysenioryearinhighschoolmyfamilymovedtomydad’scountry,theUnitedStates.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,Ihadoptional(可选择的)classes.SoIdecidedtotakepsychologyclass.WhileIfoundthepublicschoolsystemtobeajoke,Ididfindmypsychologyclassattractive.Mymother,inherdreamsformylife,didnotseepsychologyasagoodchoice,butIwaslikeher,strong-willedtothesubject.
Imarriedyoung,evenbeforeIhadadegreeundermybelt.Worstofall,Imarriedakidwhowantedtobeposter(牧师).MymotherlovedAndydearlybutshewouldaskhimoccasionally,“Whenwillyouhavearealjob?
”IdidfinishmydegreeandIbecameasocialworker,butwhenIhadmyfirstchildatage24,Iquitmyjob.Thenat26,anotherbabygirljoinedourfamily.Unfortunately,thisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome(唐氏综合症).
HowwouldIbeabletobreakthenewstomymother?
“Itisbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful.”Iknewwhat“smart”meantinthestatement,andIdoubtedifmywithanextrachromosome(染色体)wouldmeetthoseexpectations.Mymomwascomingtothehospitaltomeethernewgrand-baby.Iwouldtellherthen.Ineededtimetogathermythoughts.Iwasafraid,afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmartorbeautiful.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para1:
Mymotherarrivedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.
Para2:
Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.
答案及解析:
1.Para1:
Mymotherarrivedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.IwasatalossbecausethisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome.Ididn’tknowhowtomeetmymother.Iwasafraid,afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmartorbeautiful.WhenItoldherthetruth,hedidn’tsayawordforalongtime.Irealizedthatshewouldn’tacceptthebaby.Shealwayssaysthat“Itisbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful.”ButIwaswrong.AtlastshetoldmethatIshouldfacetherealitybravely.Weshouldsupporthernewgrand-babywell.
Para2:
Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.Everytimemymotherplayswithhernewgrand-babyhappilyandbuyssomebeautifultoysthoughthegirlissufferingfromseriousdisease.Thegirlgetsonwellwithmymother.Sheneverlooksdownuponhergrand-babywhoisindifficulty.Inthehospitalwedidn’tabandonthedisabledbabyanddecidedtobringupher.Thenweknewwechoseatoughwaybutfromthenonwehaveneverregrettedforit.Instead,Ithinkitwasarightchoice,Ilovemymotherandwealllovemychildren.
【分析】
本文是一篇续写。
要求:
所续写短文的词数应为150左右;应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;续写部分分为两段,每段的开头已为你写好;续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【详解】Para1:
第一段所给首句Mymotherarrivedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.这一句是故事发展的转折点,新生儿有唐氏综合征,而自己还没有告诉妈妈,但妈妈已经来到医院,故事围绕“妈妈是否能接受这一事实”而展开。
无论从何角度拓展,都需注意与续写第二段的首句相呼应。
Para2:
第二段首句,Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.从这一句看,作者的妈妈也接受了这个外孙女,并相处的很好。
接下来应该是,尽管孩子有病,作者选择了一条艰难的路,但不后悔,她很爱她的孩子。
2.
假设你是李华,最近你校举办了一年一度的“校园文化周(CampusCultureWeek)”活动。
请给你的美国朋友Eric写一封邮件,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:
1.举办的时间、地点;
2.活动的内容:
讲座、展览及其他;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案及解析:
2.
DearEric,
Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?
I’mwritingtosharetheannual“CampusCultureWeek”inourschoolwithyou.
The“CampusCultureWeek”washeldfromMarch5thto9ththisyear.Alltheworksofcalligraphy,photographyandpaintingcreatedbystudentsandteacherswereondisplay.SomelecturesonChinesecultureweregiven,fromwhichwebenefitedalot.Undoubtedlynotonlycanthiseventenrichourschoollife,butalsoitcanofferusagoodopportunitytolearnmoreaboutourculture!
Doyouhavesimilaractivitiesinyourschool?
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】
本篇书面表达要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:
根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:
假设你是李华,最近你校举办了一年一度的“校园文化周(CampusCultureWeek)”活动。
请给你的美国朋友Eric写一封邮件,介绍这次活动。
内容包括:
1.举办的时间、地点;2.活动的内容:
讲座、展览及其他;3.你的感受。
第2步:
根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:
thesedays(这些天,目前);CampusCultureWeek(校园文化周);ondisplay(展览);enrichourschoollife(丰富我们的校园生活);等。
第3步:
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
The“CampusCultureWeek”washeldfromMarch5thto9ththisyear.句中使用一般过去时态的被动语态;Alltheworksofcalligraphy,photographyandpaintingcreatedbystudentsandteacherswereondisplay.过去分词作后置定语;SomelecturesonChinesecultureweregiven,fromwhichwebenefitedalot.句中使用非限制性定语从句;Undoubtedlynotonlycanthiseventenrichourschoollife,butalsoitcanofferusagoodopportunitytolearnmoreaboutourculture!
句中使用部分倒装。
3.
假定你是李华,校学生会组织学生下周六开展关爱自闭症儿童(childrenwithaulism)义演活动。
请你给外教Shelly写一封邮件,邀请她一同前往。
内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 活动内容(现场表演、义卖等)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案及解析:
3.
DearShelly,
I'dliketoinviteyoutojoinusinanactivityofcaringforchildrenwithautism,whichistotakeplaceatZhongshanRoadnextSaturday.Needlesstosay,thereareanumberofsuchspecialchildrenarounduswhoareincapableofcommunicatingfreelywithothersandneedmorepeopletotakecareofthem.Thatdaywewillgiveperformanceslikesinging,dancingandplayingmusicalinstrumentstodrawattentionfromthechildren.Inthemeanwhile,someprettyworksdesignedbyusstudentswillbedisplayedforsale.Themoneycollectedwillgotocharity.Weshouldbebackaround4o'clockintheafternoon.Ifyouareabletocomewithuspleaseletusknowandwe'llwaitforyouattheschoolgateat9inthemorning.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiHua
【满分范文】
DearShelly,
I wouldliketoinviteyoutoparticipateinanactivitytotakecareofchildrenwithautism,whichwillbeheldnextSaturdayatZhongshanRoad.Asweallknow,therearesomespecialchildrenarounduswhocan'tcommunicatewithothersnormallyandneedmorepeopletotakecareofthem.Onthatday,wegiveperformanceslikesinging,dancingandplayingmusicalinstrumentssoastoattractthechildren'sattention.Atthesametime,somestudentswillexhibittheirbeautifulworks.Theywillraisemoney,whichwillbedonatedtocharitiestohelpthechildren.Ifyoucancomewithus,pleaseletusknowintime.
Hopetogetyourtimelyreply!
Yours,
LiHua
解析:
本文是一篇应用文写作,属于半开放、提纲式作文,话题充满正能量,有一定的价值导向,体现了语言的生活化和应用化的特征。
在写作过程中,首先要明确本文的时态和人称。
其次,在表达上要简洁、清晰,涵盖所给出的信息,适当加入一些合理的情节,使文章在表达上呈现一定的层次性和连贯性。
最后,在语言上,恰当地运用一些地道的表达方式,或者高级句子结构,以增加文采。
4.
假定你是学生会主席李华。
为提高同学们的阅读兴趣,你校将于3月19日下午2:
00在教学楼201室举行读书交流活动,请用英语写一则通知,号召同学们积极参加。
要点如下:
1. 活动的时间、地点;
2. 活动的目的;
3. 活动的内容;
4. 号召大家积极参与。
注意:
1.词数100左右,标题和落款已给出,但不计入总词数
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
NOTICE
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TheStudents’Union
答案及解析:
4.
NOTICE
Inordertoimprovethestudents’interestinreading,ourschoolistoholdanactivityinRoom201oftheteachingbuildingat2pmonMarch19.
Allthestudentsarewelcometotheactivity,wheretheparticipantsareexpectedtoexchangeviewsaboutwhattheyhaveread.Besides,youcanrecommendbookstoothers.Itishopedthatallthestudentsshouldspendmoretimereadingduringthecomingsummerholidayinordertohavewonderfulideastoshaarewithothers.
Let'sseizethechanceandmakegoodpreparationsforit!
TheStudents'Union
本文要求写一则通知,内容主要有:
(1) 活动的时间、地点;
(2) 活动的目的;
(3) 活动的内容;
(4) 号召大家积极参与。
注意,写作时要点要全面,尽量使用过渡性词语以使行文连贯;使用一些较高级句式,尽量避免句式单一;可适当增加细节,以使文章内容更丰富。
时态方面应以将来时为主,人称则以第三人称为主。
5.
假定你是李华,最近你们学校举办了一场以“垃圾分类(garbageclassification)”为主题的宣传活动。
你的朋友Peter对此很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,简单介绍这次活动。
要点:
1.活动的目的;
2.活动的内容:
演讲比赛、黑板报等。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案及解析:
5.
DearPeter,
Howareyoudoingrecently?
Havinglearnedthatyouareinterestedinthegarbageclassificationactivityheldinourschool,I’mwritingtointroduceittoyou.
Recently,GarbageClassificationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsinourcountry.Inordertoenhancetheconsciousnessofenvironmentalprotectionofusstudents,ourschoolorganizedtheactivitythroughspeechcontest,bulletinandblackboardpostercompetition.Throughtheactivity,wehavelearnedhowtosortoutourgarbagebeforedumpingit,whichnotonlybeautifiesthecampusbuteconomizesresour