高考英语作文满分范文汇编.docx

1、高考英语作文满分范文汇编2020年高考英语作文满分范文汇编1.My mother always told me it was better to be smart than to be beautiful. “If you are smart, finally you will afford to be beautiful.” All I needed were the brains, and someday, I would be a really beautiful lawyer.My mother worked at a TV station and I would come along

2、 and watch the magic of filming TV shows. But all the same, I was learning.When my fathers business failed, I was able to continue to attend one of the best bilingual(双语的）schools in Mexico City thanks to scholarship. Scholarship followed me into middle school and high school.However, during my senio

3、r year in high school my family moved to my dads country, the United States. For the first time in my life, I had optional（可选择的） classes. So I decided to take psychology class. While I found the public school system to be a joke, I did find my psychology class attractive. My mother, in her dreams fo

4、r my life, did not see psychology as a good choice, but I was like her, strong-willed to the subject.I married young, even before I had a degree under my belt. Worst of all, I married a kid who wanted to be poster（牧师）. My mother loved Andy dearly but she would ask him occasionally, “ When will you h

5、ave a real job?” I did finish my degree and I became a social worker, but when I had my first child at age 24, I quit my job. Then at 26, another baby girl joined our family. Unfortunately, this baby girl had Down syndrome（唐氏综合症）.How would I be able to break the news to my mother? “ It is better to

6、be smart than to be beautiful.” I knew what “smart” meant in the statement, and I doubted if my with an extra chromosome（染色体） would meet those expectations. My mom was coming to the hospital to meet her new grand-baby. I would tell her then. I needed time to gather my thoughts. I was afraid, afraid

7、that she would see Nichole as one that would never be smart or beautiful.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1:My mother arrived at the hospital mid-morning, ready to meet her new granddaughter. Para 2:Six years later, Nichole runs to m

8、om whenever we see each other.答案及解析：1.Para 1:My mother arrived at the hospital mid-morning, ready to meet her new granddaughter. I was at a loss because this baby girl had Down syndrome. I didnt know how to meet my mother. I was afraid, afraid that she would see Nichole as one that would never be sm

9、art or beautiful. When I told her the truth , he didnt say a word for a long time . I realized that she wouldnt accept the baby. She always says that “ It is better to be smart than to be beautiful.” But I was wrong. At last she told me that I should face the reality bravely. We should support her n

10、ew grand-baby well.Para 2:Six years later, Nichole runs to mom whenever we see each other. Every time my mother plays with her new grand-baby happily and buys some beautiful toys though the girl is suffering from serious disease .The girl gets on well with my mother .She never looks down upon her gr

11、and-baby who is in difficulty. In the hospital we didnt abandon the disabled baby and decided to bring up her . Then we knew we chose a tough way but from then on we have never regretted for it. Instead, I think it was a right choice,I love my mother and we all love my children.【分析】本文是一篇续写。要求:所续写短文的

12、词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。【详解】Para 1:第一段所给首句My mother arrived at the hospital mid-morning, ready to meet her new granddaughter.这一句是故事发展的转折点,新生儿有唐氏综合征,而自己还没有告诉妈妈,但妈妈已经来到医院,故事围绕“妈妈是否能接受这一事实”而展开。无论从何角度拓展，都需注意与续写第二段的首句相呼应。Para 2:第二段首句，Six years later, Nic

13、hole runs to mom whenever we see each other.从这一句看，作者的妈妈也接受了这个外孙女，并相处的很好。接下来应该是，尽管孩子有病，作者选择了一条艰难的路，但不后悔，她很爱她的孩子。2.假设你是李华，最近你校举办了一年一度的“校园文化周（Campus Culture Week）”活动。请给你的美国朋友Eric 写一封邮件，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.举办的时间、地点；2.活动的内容：讲座、展览及其他；3.你的感受。注意：1. 词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_答案及解析：2.Dear Eric,How is everything goi

14、ng these days? Im writing to share the annual “Campus Culture Week” in our school with you. The “Campus Culture Week” was held from March 5th to 9th this year. All the works of calligraphy, photography and painting created by students and teachers were on display. Some lectures on Chinese culture we

15、re given, from which we benefited a lot. Undoubtedly not only can this event enrich our school life, but also it can offer us a good opportunity to learn more about our culture! Do you have similar activities in your school? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封电子邮件。【详解】第

16、1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，最近你校举办了一年一度的“校园文化周（Campus Culture Week）”活动。请给你的美国朋友Eric 写一封邮件，介绍这次活动。内容包括：1.举办的时间、地点；2.活动的内容：讲座、展览及其他；3.你的感受。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：these days（这些天，目前）；Campus Culture Week（校园文化周）；on display（展览）；enrich our school life（丰富我们的校园生活）；等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意

17、使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。The “Campus Culture Week” was held from March 5th to 9th this year.句中使用一般过去时态的被动语态；All the works of calligraphy, photography and painting created by students and teachers were on display.过去分词作后置定语；S

18、ome lectures on Chinese culture were given, from which we benefited a lot.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Undoubtedly not only can this event enrich our school life, but also it can offer us a good opportunity to learn more about our culture!句中使用部分倒装。3.假定你是李华,校学生会组织学生下周六开展关爱自闭症儿童(children with aulism)义演活动。请你给外教Shelly写

19、一封邮件,邀请她一同前往。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容(现场表演、义卖等)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_答案及解析：3.Dear Shelly, Id like to invite you to join us in an activity of caring for children with autism, which is to take place at Zhongshan Road next Saturday. Needless to say, there are a number of such special children aro

20、und us who are incapable of communicating freely with others and need more people to take care of them. That day we will give performances like singing, dancing and playing musical instruments to draw attention from the children. In the meanwhile, some pretty works designed by us students will be di

21、splayed for sale. The money collected will go to charity. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【满分范文】Dear Shelly, Iwould like to i

22、nvite you to participate in an activity to take care of children with autism, which will be held next Saturday at Zhongshan Road. As we all know, there are some special children around us who cant communicate with others normally and need more people to take care of them. On that day, we give perfor

23、mances like singing, dancing and playing musical instruments so as to attract the childrens attention. At the same time, some students will exhibit their beautiful works. They will raise money, which will be donated to charities to help the children. If you can come with us, please let us know in ti

24、me. Hope to get your timely reply!Yours,Li Hua解析：本文是一篇应用文写作,属于半开放、提纲式作文,话题充满正能量,有一定的价值导向,体现了语言的生活化和应用化的特征。在写作过程中,首先要明确本文的时态和人称。其次,在表达上要简洁、清晰,涵盖所给出的信息,适当加入一些合理的情节,使文章在表达上呈现一定的层次性和连贯性。最后,在语言上,恰当地运用一些地道的表达方式,或者高级句子结构,以增加文采。4.假定你是学生会主席李华。为提高同学们的阅读兴趣,你校将于3月19日下午2:00在教学楼201室举行读书交流活动,请用英语写一则通知,号召同学们积极参加。要点

25、如下:1.活动的时间、地点;2.活动的目的;3.活动的内容;4.号召大家积极参与。注意:1.词数100左右,标题和落款已给出,但不计入总词数2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。NOTICE_The Students Union答案及解析：4.NOTICE In order to improve the students interest in reading, our school is to hold an activity in Room 201 of the teaching building at 2 pm on March 19. All the students are welcom

26、e to the activity, where the participants are expected to exchange views about what they have read. Besides, you can recommend books to others. It is hoped that all the students should spend more time reading during the coming summer holiday in order to have wonderful ideas to shaare with others. Le

27、ts seize the chance and make good preparations for it!The Students Union本文要求写一则通知,内容主要有:(1)活动的时间、地点;(2)活动的目的;(3)活动的内容;(4)号召大家积极参与。注意,写作时要点要全面,尽量使用过渡性词语以使行文连贯;使用一些较高级句式,尽量避免句式单一;可适当增加细节,以使文章内容更丰富。时态方面应以将来时为主,人称则以第三人称为主。 5.假定你是李华,最近你们学校举办了一场以“垃圾分类(garbage classification)”为主题的宣传活动。你的朋友Peter对此很感兴趣,请你用英语

28、给他写一封电子邮件,简单介绍这次活动。要点: 1.活动的目的;2.活动的内容:演讲比赛、黑板报等。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_答案及解析：5.Dear Peter,How are you doing recently? Having learned that you are interested in the garbage classification activity held in our school, Im writing to introduce it to you.Recently, Garbage Classification has bec

29、ome one of the most popular topics in our country. In order to enhance the consciousness of environmental protection of us students, our school organized the activity through speech contest, bulletin and blackboard poster competition. Through the activity, we have learned how to sort out our garbage before dumping it, which not only beautifies the campus but economizes resour