高中英语作文训练题20题含范文.docx

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高中英语作文训练题20题含范文

高中英语作文训练题20题（含范文）

一、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Theotherday,Iwasdrivinghome,alittleupsetbecauseIhatedworkingaltheweekend.On（heway,Idecidedtograbsomeveggiesinthenearbygreengrocer's.Sincetherewasstillthiniceontheroad,Itookaglanceattherearmirrortomakesurenopedestriansorvehiclescameclose,andslowlysteeredthewheeltotheright.Thenoutofanyofmyexpectancymycarbumpedintoanelectricbike,givingoutaharshmetallicclash.Icollectedmyselfandsawoutofthewindowscreenaboyleanononesideofthebike,onefootofftheground.

Allofasudden,afamiliarsceneflashedacrossmymind.

WhenIwasinhighschool,Ihadfunridingmybikealong（hecounlryroadonswelteringandboringafternoonsduringsummerholidays.SometimesIcarriedmylittlebrothertotheonlygrocerystoreintheneighborhoodwherewecouldbuyourfavoriteicecream.Oncewehadanargumentaboutwhattobuy.Seeinghimleavethestoreinatemper,Ijumpedonthebikeandtriedtotalkhimintogoingback.Suddenly,hegavemeapushand1inclinedtowardsthemiddleoftheroadwhenamotorbikecameinmyface.IfellonthegroundbeforeIcouldseeanythingclearly.Luckily,Ididn'tgethurtbutstillcouldn'trisetomyfeet.Themotorist,amiddle-agedman,ignoringhistornjeans,shedtocheckonme,"Areyouokay?

Yourleg?

Yourfoot?

”

"Iamallright,but..."Istaredathim,teirifiedbecauseIwassurehewouldaskfbr"big"sumofmoneyfordamage.Instead,hejustletmegodespitehiswife'sprotests.GuiltyasIwas,Iwashappythat1wasspared.Iwasreallygratefultothemanforforgivingasillykidwhohadmadesuchabigmistakeinvoluntarily.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

1.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Seeingthesamefrightintheboy'seyes,Iquicklygotoutofmycar.

awesome【答案】参考范文

Shefollowedme,hermindwandering.Minuteslater,westartedtoclimbasleepslope.Janesighed,draggingherlegsbehindme.Iwassurprisedtofindsomerarely-seentreesandflowers,andtookmanyphotosbutJaneshowednointerest.Shestoppedandsatonarock,thirsty,sweatyandbored.Ihandedherabottleofwaterandwetookabreak."Imissedmyphone,"shecomplainedaswccontinuedclimbing.Thoughunhappy,shejustclimbedalongwithme.

Reaching（hetop,Janewidenedhereyes,shouting,“Howawesome!

"Shelookedarounddreamily,hereyestwinklingwithindescribablywildexcitement.Arefreshingbreezebrushedthemountaintop,milesoftreesspreadoutbelowusandbirdschirpedbetweenbranches.Wesatonalargerockandatesandwiches,enjoyingthesounds,thesmellsandthesunlight."Anyonestillwantsherphone?

"Ijoked.Sherolledhereyes,laughingoutloud.Thenextmorning,Janedancedtomyroom,crying,“Let'shikearoundthelaketoday.,,Sure,getourhackpackthen,Ibeamed,relievedandjoyful.

【解析】【导语】

本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲的是作者全家去湖边的一间小屋度假，他们都玩得很愉快，但是作者第三天发现他的妹妹Jane沉迷于手机，所以他决定让Jane和他一起出去爬山。

【详解】1•段落续写：

1由第一段首句内容“她跟着我，心不在焉”可知，第一段可描写Jane虽然同意和作者一起爬山，但是感觉爬山很累，不如玩手机有趣。

2由第二段首句内容“登上山顶时，Jane睁大了眼睛，喊道：

“太棒了!

""可知,第二段可描写Jane到达山顶看到美景惊讶，从此爱上了户外活动。

2.续写线索：

Jane勉强同意外出爬山——途中，Jane抱怨这次爬山体验——到达山顶，Jane被美景征服——从此爱上户外活动词汇激活

行为类到达：

reach/arriveat/getto

1大叫：

shout/scream/yell/cry休息—会儿：

takeabreak/takearest/havearest

情绪类惊讶的：

surprised/astonished/amazed

1不高兴的：

unhappy/uncheerful/upset高兴：

delight/excitement

【点睛】[高分句型1].Janesighed,draggingherlegsbehindme.（使用非谓语作状语）

[高分句型2].Shelookedarounddreamily,hereyestwinklingwithindescribablywildexcitement.（使用独立主格结构）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成•篇完整的短文。

Whenwearehavingquarrelswithothers,itiseasytosayordohurtfulthingsinanger.Theverbalwoundcanbeasbadasaphysicalone.Andnomatterhowmanytimesyousayyouaresorry,orhowmanyyearspass,thescarofthosewoundswillstillbethere.Ifwearewise,wewillspendourtimebuildingbridgesratherthanbarriersinourrelationships.

Onceuponatimetherewasalittleboywhowastalented,creative,handsome,andextremelybright.Anaturalleader.Thekindofpersoneveryonewouldnormallyhavewantedontheirteamorproject.Buthewasalsoself-centcrcdandhadaverybadtemper.Whenhegotangry,heusuallysaid,andoftendid,someveryhurtfulthings.Infact,heseemedtohavelittleregardfbrthosearoundhim,evenfriends.So,naturally,hehadfew,“But,“hetoldhimself,"thatjustshowshowstupidmostpeopleare!

"

Onedayatschool,whenhavingacraftclass,hispartneraccidentallycrushedasmallpartoftheirhandiwork.Theboyimmediatelygotextremelyangry,startingtocriticizeandteaseher."Youdisgustme!

Afterhearingthosehurtfillwords,shestartedtocryuncontrollably.Beforelong,thegirlbeganshuttingherselfawayfromeveryoneandwasseizedbyasenseofworthlessness.Fortunately,undertheguidanceofteachers,shebrokeawayfromthetrapofworthlessness.Butshenevertalkedwiththeboy.

Havingknownwhathappenedatschool,theboy'sparentsbecameconcernedaboutthispersonalityflaw,andthoughtlongandhardaboutwhattheyshoulddo.Finally,thefatherhadanidea.Andhestruckabargainwithhisson.Hegavehimabagofnails,andabighammer."Wheneveryouloseyourtemper,“hetoldtheboy,"Iwantyoutoreallyletitout.Justtakeanailanddriveitintotheoakboardsofthatoldfenceoutback.Hit（hatnailashardasyoucan!

注意：

1.续写词数应为15（）左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Theboystartedtohitthenail,butitwasn'taseasyasitfirstsounded.

Toshowhimwhatremainedinthefence,hisfathertoldhimtopulloutonenaileachtimehecontrolledhistemper.

【答案］Theboystartedtohitthenail,butitwasn'taseasyasitfirstsounded.Bytheendofthefirstweek,theboyhaddriven40nailsintotheoakboardsofthatwouldfence.Littlebylittle,thenumberbecameless.Holdinghistemperprovedtobeeasierthandrivingnailsintothefence.Finally,thedaycamewhentheboydidn'tlosehistemperatall.Helookprideinhimselfashetoldhisparentsabouthisprogress.

Toshowhimwhatremainedinthefence,hisfathertoldhimtopulloutonenaileachtimehecontrolledhistemper.Hedidashisfathertoldhim.Finally,onedaytheboywasabletoreportexcitedlythatallthenailsweregone.Atthatpoint,thefatheraskedhissontotakeonemorelookatthefence.Theyoungboyfoundmanyholeswereleft.Thefathersaid:

"Nomatterwhathappensfromnowon,thefencewillneverbelhesame.Sayingordoingiiurlfulthingsinangerproducesthesameresult.Soweneedtoavoidasmanyofthosehurtsaswecan."Theboynoddedwithsatisfaction.

【解析】【导语】

本文讲述了一位父亲想让自己的儿子控制脾气而让他去钉钉子的故事，告诉他伤害一旦产生就不会消失，要避免做一些给别人带来伤害的事情。

【详解】段落续写：

1第一段首句内容''男孩开始钉钉子，但是并不像听起来那样容易”可知，第一段可描写男孩通过钉钉子来发泄自己的情绪。

2由第二段首句内容“为了让儿子看到拔掉钉子以后篱笆上会留下什么，他让儿子每一次控制住脾气后，就拔一颗钉子”可知，第二段可描写男孩拔出钉子后的感受。

1.续写线索：

发脾气一钉钉子一控制脾气——拔掉钉子——留下的洞——父亲教诲——感悟词汇激活

行为类控制脾气：

holdone'stemper/controlone'stemper

1自豪：

takepridein/beproudof发脾气：

loseone'stemper/becomeangry

情绪类兴奋：

excitedly/bewildwithjoy/beveryexcited

1满意地：

withcontent/withsatisfaction【点睛】

[高分句型1].Finally,thedaycamewhentheboydidn'tlosehistemperatall.（运用了when引导的分隔式定语从句）［高分句型2J.Nomatterwhathappensfromnowon,thefencewillneverbethesame.（运用了让步状语从句）

2.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成-•个完整的故事。

In1985myparentsmadethebigmovefromIllinois,tosouthernCalifornia,alongwiththreeverytinychildrenandalltheirhouseholdpossessions.Mymotherhadcarefullywrappedandpackedfourboxesofhermother'shand-painteddinnerchina.Grandmoiherhadpaintedthislovelysetherself,choosingaforget-inc-notpattern（勿忘我图案）.

Unfortunately,somethinghappenedduringthemove.Oneboxofthechinadidn'tmakeit.Itneverarrivedatournewhouse.Somymotherhadonlythree-quartersoftheset—shehadplatesofdifferentsizesandsomeservingpieces,butmissingwerethecupsandsaucers（茶碟）andthebowls.OftenatfamilygatheringsorwhenwewouldallsitdownforaThanksgivingorChristmasdinner,mymotherwouldsaysomethingaboutthemissingchinaandhowshewishedithadsurvivedthetrip.

WhenmymotherdiedIinheritedGrandmother'schina.I,too,usedthesetonmanyspecialoccasions,andI,too,wonderedwhathadhappenedtothemissingbox.

Ilovetovisitfleamarkets（蹴K蚤市场），huntingfortreasures.It'sgreatfuntowalkupanddownthestreetsearlyinthemorning,watchingasthevendors（摊主）spreadtheirwaresontheground.

Ihadn'tbeentoafleamarketinoverayearwhen,oneSundayin2013,1gottheitchtogo.SoIcrawledoutofbedal5a.m.,anddroveanhourtotheGiantRoseBowlFleaMarketinanothertown.IwaslookingaroundandafteracoupleofhoursIwasthinkingaboutleaving.IroundedthelastcomerandtookafewstepsdownthestreetwhenInoticedsomechinaspreadonthefloor.Isawthatitwashand-paintedchina...Withforget-me-nots!

Iracedovertolookatitmoreclosely,andpickedupacupandsaucer...Forget-me-nots!

ExactlylikeGrandmother'schina,withthesamedelicatestrokes（笔画）andthesamethingoldbandsaroundtheedges.Ilookedattherestoftheitems-therewerethecups!

Thesaucers!

Thebowls!

ItwasGrandmother'schina!

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头己为你写好：

3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Thevendorhadnoticedmyexcitement.

Paragraph2:

IlefttheFleaMarketwithmyamazingtreasure.

【答案】Possibleversion1:

Thevendorhadnoticedmyexcitement.WhenshecameoverItoldherthestoryof（hemissingboxandaskedwhereshe'dgotthem.Itturnedoutthechinahadcomefromanestatesale:

shefoundanoldunopenedcartonstoredinthegarden,andthechinawasinit.Shequestionedthe