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雅思写作总结dsg

雅思大作文（40分钟，250词）

考前五步骤：

读题目；定题型；主题词；想结构；做计划

类型

1.观点让步反驳（24）

2.平衡讨论（10）

3.PRS（PS/RS）（4）

4.优大于缺（6）

5.组合题（4）

提问方式

①Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

②Isitpositiveornegative?

③极值类型thebestway/theonlyway/themosteffectiveway/themosteffectingway

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

PS:

problemandsolution

RS:

reasonandsolution

Advantagesoutweighdisadvantages?

策略

①②只写一种观点

极值类型：

先不同意；本质上无法解决；有更好方法。

段落结构

总—分—总

（Introduction—Body—Conclusion）

BACK—TEEL—PPL（PEEL）

B=background（主题词插入语的背景句）

A=argument（三种变体-直观争议，暗含争议，让步争议）

C=contention（个人观点，短语或者从句均可）

K=keypoints（分论点的罗列）

T=topicsentence（牢记表示逻辑变化的句型）

E=explain

E=example

L=linkingback（对于topicsentence的一个更为详细的阐述）

C=contrast比较对比关系展开

Ⅰ.Introduction（给出明确观点）

Ⅱ.Supportingparagraph1

（TEEL）

Ⅲ.Supportingparagraph2

（TECL）

Ⅳ.让步反驳（不否认其好处，但..）

Ⅴ.Conclusion（PPL）

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.ViewA（2points）

Ⅲ.过渡段

Ⅳ.ViewB（2points）

Ⅴ.Conclusion

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Cause1&Cause2

Ⅲ.过渡段

Ⅳ.Solution1&Solution2

Ⅴ.Conclusion

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Advantages2

Ⅲ.Disadvantages2

Ⅳ.反驳反方观点

Ⅴ.Conclusion

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Cause1&Cause2

Ⅲ.积极1

Ⅳ.积极2

Ⅴ.Conclusion

结尾重申作者观点+重申分论点+提出建议（记得要同意转换）

结尾让步：

插入语,whileinsomewaysnegative

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Cause1&Solution1

Ⅲ.Cause2&Solution2

Ⅳ.Conclusion

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Advantages3

Ⅲ.Disadvantages2

Ⅳ.Conclusion

Ⅰ.Introduction

Ⅱ.Cause1

Ⅲ.Cause2

Ⅳ.积极1

Ⅴ.Conclusion

1.观点让步反驳开头写法：

背景法BACK

B=background（主题词插入语的背景句）：

注：

位于主语和谓语动词之间，俩逗号隔开，不能出现动词原形，插入语用来修饰主语（主题词）

Progressintechnology,asaninevitabletrend,haschangedpeople’slivesdramatically.

Computers,beingthemostsuccessfulproductofmoderntechnology,havecausedimpactonthewaypeoplereceiveeducation.

Sometechnologies,suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,areofbignegativeeffect.

Movies,especiallypornographicones,shouldberegulated.

Anewfactory,especiallyonescontainingchemicalorradiation,wouldcontaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourcity’sinhabitantsadversely.

A=argument（三种变体-直观争议，暗含争议，让步争议）

直接争议：

Itisgenerallyacceptedthat…,whereasmanyothers….

暗含争议：

whether[…一个句子]isindeedworthdiscussing.

让步争议：

加一个让步的句子，即反方观点总的好处。

Aindeedhave/has好处.However,Istillbelievethat…也可以用although

例子：

Computerswillreplacetheroleofteachers

Computers,frombeingeasytobeingcomplicated,arewidelyusedineducationalsettings.（background）

Itisgenerallyacceptedthatcomputerswillsoonerorlaterreplacetheuseofteachers,whereasothersbelievethatteacherswillremaintheirvalue.（argument直接争议）

Whethercomputerswillreplaceteachers,becomingthemainsourceofeducationisindeedworthdiscussing.（暗含争议）

Teachersindeedhavetheirvaluesineducation.However,IstillbelievethattheywillbeeventuallyreplacedbycomputersasIconsiderthefactsthatcomputersarelesstimeconsuming…（让步争议）

Accordingtome,teacherswillbereplacedeventuallyforthereasonsthatcomputersarelesstimeconsuming,moreflexibleandeasiertocomprehend.（contention+keypoints）

举例：

家用电器的好处或者坏处

Householdgoods/appliances=electronicdevices=technologicalproduct=advancedequipment

（背景同位语从句Background）Householdgoods,developedrapidlywithtime/havingvariousconvenienceandfunctions,arewidelyusedinpeople’severydaylife.

（直接争议Argument）Itisgenerallyacceptedthatusingthesedevicesisapositivedevelopment,whereasmanyothersinsistthatthistrendmaycausenegativeeffects.

（暗含争议）Whethertheuseofmodernhouseholdappliancesgeneratespositiveornegativedevelopmentisindeedworthdiscussing.

（让步争议及分论点）Widelyusingthesehouseholdappliancesmaycausecertainnegativeeffects.However,itseemstomethatdeviceswillbringaboutmorepositivedevelopmentforthereasonsof….

（个人观点Contention及分论点Keypoints）Objectivelyjudged,Ideemthatwidelyusingthesehouseholdappliancespresentspositivetendencyforthereasonsofconvenienceandbeinglesstimeconsuming.

2.平衡讨论开头写法两种方式（BAC）和BA（K）C

BAC

Parentingstyles,beinginvariousways,affectchildren’sgrowth.（Background）

Somepeopleconcedethatparentsaresupposedtoreadstoriestotheirchildrenwhenevertheycan,whileothersarguethatchildrenshouldberelyingonthemselvestoreadbooksorwatchtelevisionswithoutparentsbeinginvolved.（Argument）

Thefollowingparagraphswillbeanalyzingbothviewsandpresentedwithmyownopinions.（Contention）

BA（K）C

Parentingstyles,beinginvariousways,affectchildren’sgrowth.（Background）

Somepeopleconcedethatparentsaresupposedtoreadstoriestotheirchildrentostrengthenthebondoffamiliesandcorrectanymisunderstanding,whileothersarguethatreadingbooksorwatchingtelevisionwithoutparentsbeinginvolvedenableschildrentocultivatetheirimaginationandasenseofindependence.（Argument&KeyPoints）

Thefollowingparagraphswillbeanalyzingbothviewsandpresentedwithmyownopinions.（Contention）

再换一下Parentingstyles,beinginvariousways,affectchildren’sgrowth.Whetherparentsshouldreadtotheirchildrenorself-learningbringsaboutmorebenefitsisindeedworthdiscussing.Thefollowingparagraphswillbeanalyzingbothviewsandpresentedwithmyownopinions.

地道英语表达方式Thisclashinideas,thedebatebetweenparents’readingandself-learningwillbediscussedintheparagraphsbelow.

3.结尾的写法PPL或者PEEL

Putthecontentioninadifferentway重申作者观点，同意转换

Puttogetherthekeypointsinadifferentway重申主要论点

Lookingaheadtothefuture提出建议或者展望

举例：

Computerswillreplacetheroleofteachers

（重申作者观点）Tosumup,Iamconvincedthatcomputersarelikelytosubstituteteachers,

（重申主要论点）becausenotonlydoestheadvancedtechnologyimprovetheefficiencyofgainingknowledgeandcreateeasyaccessibility,itcanalsoassiststudentsgraspofknowledge.

（提出建议）Therefore,thereshouldbemoreimplantationofcomputersinourdailylifeinsteadofheavilyrelyingonteachers.

我认为。

。

。

Iholdtheopinionthat…/Itaketheviewthat…

Iwouldpointoutthat…/Iwouldsuggestthat…

Objectivelyjudged,Ideemthat…

Itseemstomethat…

Iconcedethat…

Itisclearthat…/Itappearsthat…

Ifitisuptometodecidewith,Iwill…

分论点罗列

forthereasonsthat+从句

forthereasonsof+名词或短语

becauseof+名词或短语

becausethat+从句

dueto+名词或短语

since+从句

4.主体段落写法TEEL/TECL

适应于所有类型大作文，段落展开形式：

因果展开，比较对比，举例，编造事实数据，引用名言做例证

Itiswidelyunderstood.众所周知，不用asweallknow.

T=topicsentence（是结果，牢记表示逻辑变化的句型）

E=explain不用名言

E=example引用编造的中科院数据

L=linkingback（对于topicsentence的一个更为详细的阐述和说明及引申）

C=contrast比较对比关系展开

主体段落分论点句写法，观点让步反驳（共两点）任选其一，平衡讨论（共四个点）选其二

1）分论点写法之一

消极的2points：

第一句…isthemostseriousproblem.

第二句Asubtlerproblemof….,butperhapsjustasserious,isthe….

1）Thedamagetochildren'sphysicalhealthbysittinginfrontofatelevisionscreenisthemostseriousproblem.

2）AsubtlerproblemofwatchingTV,butperhapsasserious,isthatchildren'sacademicperformanceislikelytobeaffectedadversely.

积极的2points：

第一句…isthemostoutstandingadvantage.

第二句Asubtlermeritof…,butperhapsasbeneficial,isthepositiveeffecton….

1）HelpingchildrenrelaxbywatchingTVisthemostoutstandingadvantage.

2）AsubtlermeritofwatchingTV,butperhapsasbeneficial,isthepositiveeffectonchildren'sknowledgeexpansion.

2）分论点写法之二2points

第一句Tomakeclearofthequestion,theveryfirstansweris:

…

第二句Anotheraspectofthestoryshouldbeconsideredisthat…

例如：

大学是否专注一门还是多门科目

第一句Tomakeclearofthisquestion,theveryfirstansweristhatfocusingononesubjectreducesstudents'stress.

第二句Anotheraspectofthestoryshouldbeconsideredisthatsinglemajorenhancesstudents’academicperformance.

案例：

Artandmusic

首段（BACK）Artandmusic,beingthegreatestculturalinheritancesfromourancestors,arecommonsubjectsinschools.Artclassesareseeminglyunessentialtomanystudents.However,itisreasonabletomakethemcompulsoryconsideringthoseclasseshelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitybetter,andtheircharacters.

主体段落1helpdeveloptheirabilitybetter：

（TopicSentence）Tostartwith,asisoftenpointedthatartandmusiccanenhancechildren’sabilityofimagination.

（Explain）Sincemusicisanexpressiveartofsoundandthemeaningofeverymusicalnotehasuniqueprofoundnesswhichleavesourchildrenunlimitedscopeofimagination,theycouldinterpretthemusictheyheardintheirownways.

（Example）Forexample,evenababywouldmoveitsbodytoapieceofmusic.

主体段落2theircharacters：

（TopicSentence）Next,artandmusiccanbetterchildren'sdispositionandtemperament.

（Explain）Theprocessoflearningartandmusiccanimprovethecommunicationamongthestudentsandteachers.Theymayexpresstheiremotionfreelyandestablishaspecialbridgeofcommunicationwithothers.

（Example1）Whentheyplayapieceofmusicorpaintapictureskillfullyandbeautifully,self-achievementandactivenesshasbeenbuiltupunconsciously.

（Example2）AccordingtotherecentsurveymadebyChineseAcademyofSocialScience,manychildrenarebecomingbetter-tempered,warm,generous,willingtohelpandcommunicatewithothers,afterstartingtolearnartandmusicforaperiodoftime.

案例：

earlyindependence

（TopicSentence）First,earlyindependencecausesmanyyoungadultstofail.

（Explain）Thisshouldnotbesurprisingsinceoftentheyareactuallynotmentallyreadyalthoughtheyarephysicallyready.Itiswidelyunderstoodthattoliveindependentlyrequiresalotofenergyandisnoteasyatall.Inthistwentyfirstcentury,peoplemayneedanincreasingamountofpreparationbecausecompetitionisincreasingrapidly.

比较对比Watchingtelevisionisbadforchildren

主体段1（TELE）

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