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六级作文模板

主体段落扩展：

例据

Ø Forexample，…and…even…，also，…

Ø Forinstance

Ø Takesthforexample

Ø ,suchas/including+N/Ving

Ø Takingalookaround,wecanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist:

 例：

出生之后，什么在人的个性和发展中发挥重要作用？

Tobeginwith,educationafterbirthplaysasignificantroleinone’sdevelopment.

扩展：

Forexample,ahigh-schoollevelpersoncommonlymaynotsucceedtotheextentofapersonwhohasreceivedauniversityeducation.Thisisnotonlybecauseofthegreaterbreadthoftheknowledgeacquired,butalsoduetoamorecriticalandfocusedwayofthinkingthatisimpartedandrefinedduringone’ssenioreducation.

n Examples:

Awolfchild,toofferanotherinstance,duetoadeficiencyofeducationbycontrastwithhumanbeings,couldhardlyliveinoursocietyorself-develop.

n Examples:

⏹ Thehistoryisfullofexamplesofmenandwomenwhoachievedgreatnessdespitefacinghurdlessosteepthateasilycouldhavecrashedtheirspiritandleftthemlyinginthedust.

n AbrahamLincolnovercomesadifficultchild-hood,depression,thedeathoftwosons,andconstantridiculeduringtheCivilWartobecomegreatestpresidentever.

n HelenKellermadeanimpactontheworlddespitebeingdeaf,dumb,andblindfromanearlyage.

n FranklinRoosevelthadpolio.

n …

n Thereareendlessexamples.

∙Edison：

studyfromfailure

∙Thewolfiscoming：

honesty

∙Albert Einstein:

ItisnotthatIamsosmart,itisjustthat I stay with problems longer.

∙WilliamBlake:

Toseeaworldinagrainofsand

Andaheaveninawildflower，

Holdinfinityinthepalmofyourhand，

Andeternityinanhour

n 记叙事件

n 1，必须要有深刻的中心内涵

户外运动：

登山——teamwork,conquered

n 2，必须要有恰当的副词使用:

unfortunately,leisurely,suddenly,…

n 3，必须要有六大要素：

5W1H

通常使用一般过去时，若插叙，会使用过去完成时；与中心主体相关则详写，无关则略写。

n 时间

v Therewasatimewhen…/thereisatimewhen..

v Therewasatimewhenweknewnothingabouttheworld.

v Mystery

v TherearetimeswhenIcantakeitforgrantedthateverythingwillcometotheend.

v Thepasthasturnedintoash.

v Neverhasthepastturnedintoash.

n 记叙中的点睛：

v Giveamanfish,heeatsforaday.Teachhimtofish,hewillnevergohungry.

v Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.--JohnRuskin

v Trynottobecomeamanofsuccessbutrathertrytobecomeamanofvalue.--A.Einstein

v Wemustacceptfinitedisappointment,butwemustneverloseinfinitehope.--MartinLutherKing

v Throughallthechangeslifeandlovehavebroughtus,onethingremainsthesame-youmeantheworldtome. 

v The fox changes his skin but not his habits. 

v If people would dare to speak to one another unreservedly, there would be a good deal less sorrow in the world ahundred years hence.

v Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,theymakethem.---GeorgeBernardShaw

v It is easy to perform a good action, but not easy to acquire a settled habit of performing such actions. --Aristotle

v Theworldisabookandthosewhodonottravelreadonlyapage．—St.Augustine

v ItistobooksthatIoweeverythingthatisgoodinme.--Gorki

WilliamShakespeare:

v Virtueisbold,andgoodnessneverfearful.

v Donot,foronerepulse,forgothepurposethatyouresolvedtoeffort.

v Thetimeoflifeisshort;tospendthatshortnessbasely,itwouldbetoolong.

v Takehonorfrommeandmylifeisundone.

v  Doubtthouthestarsarefire,

Doubtthesundothmove,

Doubttruthtobealiar,

Butneverdoubtthylove.

……

主体段落扩展：

数据

n Motorizedflightisthegreatestinventioninthemodernworld.Nootherinventionhashadamoresignificantimpactonourlives.

n Inasense,theadventofmotorizedflighthasbroughtdramaticchangestopublicaswellascargotransportation.

n Foronething,itisbyfarthefastestmeansoftransportation.Whatusedtobeagoodten-hourridebycarcannowbeeasilycoveredinonehourandahalfbyair.Foranother,itissaferasitisfast.Thenumberofdeathfromairplanecrashismuchlessthanthatofanyothermeansofmasstransportation.

n Piratedproducts

n Takesoftwareforexample,scientificresearchshows/arecentsurveytells/thestatisticsreveals/indicatesthatapproximately70%softwareonpersonalcomputersarepiratedones.

n Data…

Ø 全国第五次人口普查资料显示，目前全国男女出生性别比为116.9：

100。

到2020年，中国处于婚龄的男性人数将比女性多出3000万到4000万，这意味着平均5个男性中将有一个找不到配偶。

Ø 网上购物用户在网民中的渗透率达到了42.5%。

Ø 调查数据显示，有57.5%的公众从未访问过政府网站，我国政府网站的普及率和影响度尚待提高。

Ø 调查结果显示，被访者对节能环保产品购买意愿很强烈，大部分的被访者表示在同等条件下，会优先购买节能环保产品，不会购买的只有0.7％。

Ø 在是否喜欢看电影的调查中，只有少数人的选择是一点也不喜欢电影，占所有人的0.75%，剩下99.25%的人对电影还是或多或少都喜欢的。

其中喜欢和非常喜欢的人占了93%。

主体段落扩展：

理据\

Sample:

Studentswhoarenoisyanddisobedientshouldbegrouptogetherandtaughtseparately.

Onesolutionistosegregatethesestudentsina“sinbin”wheretheyaretaughtontheirown.

However,althoughthismayseemalogicalsolution,takingthiseasywayoutmaycauseasmanyproblemsasitsolves.First,thesegregatedstudentswillinpracticereceivefewereducationalopportunitiesthanpeerswheninfacttheyneedmore.Second,theexperienceofbeingexcludedwithinthesocietyofschoolmayembitterthemagainstsocietyingeneralandtheymaygoontoacareerofcrimeandanti-societybehavior.

Sample:

Schoolsaretooacademicinorientationanditwouldbemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatters.

n Myfirstreasonisthatitisthedutyofparents,notteachers,topracticetheirchildrentodealwiththepracticalaffairsoflife.

⏹ Thehome,nottheclassroom,istheidealplacetolearnabouthomemanagementandinterpersonalskills.Asforworkabilitiesandattitudes,theyarethebestlearned“onthejob”andunderthesupervisionofanexperiencedolderworker.

¡ Mysecondreasonisthatacademicsubjectshavewithstoodthetestofthetime.

■ Theyrepresenttheaccumulatewisdomofourancestorsdownthroughtheages,and,farfrombeingimpractical,theyequipuswiththeknowledgeandconfidencetomakesoundjudgementsaboutanyproblemswhichmaycropup.Inaddition,academicsubjectsaregoodfortrainingusinmentaldiscipline,whilepracticalsubjectsareweakinthisregard.

n Mythirdreasonisbasedonthesaying“Mandoesnotlivebybreadalone”.

⏹ Schooldaysdevotedsolelytoinstructionindown-to-earthpracticalmatterswouldbedullindeed!

Lessonsinthebestliteratureofthepastenrichourlivesandmakeusfeelthatwearepartofthegreatfamilyofmankind.

n Reason？

For:

Ø Itmouldsstrongandrealcharacter.

Ø Ithelpstoreinforcetheauthorityofteachersandparents.

Ø Permissivenessresultsinundisciplinedchildren.

Ø Parentallaxityleadstothespreadofjuveniledelinquency.

n Corporalpunishment

Against:

Ø Itseriouslyviolatesthelegalrightsandinterestsforchildren.

Ø Itendangerschildren’sphysicalandmentaldevelopment.

Ø Itisakindofbrutalityandcrueltywhichmayleadtoinjuryorevendeathofthestudent.

Ø Researchesrevealthatstudentswhosufferfromcorporalpunishmenttendtoresorttoviolenceintheirfuturelife.

Ø Themissionofeducationcanbefulfilledinothermorecivilizedways.

n Schoolorparents'responsibility

Theschool:

Ø Asaninstitutionofeducation,theschoolhasthesoleresponsibilitytoeducatetheyoungergeneration.

Ø Mostofthechildren’swakingtimeisspentinschools,andtheirpurposeinattendingschoolistoreceiveaneducation.

Ø Theparentsofthechildrenpayfortheeducationoftheirchildren,sotheyshouldreceivecorrespondentservices.

Ø Therearewell-equippedfacilitiesandwell-trainedteachersinschools.

n Schoolorparents'responsibility

Theparents:

Ø Theparentsknowtheirchildrenbetterthantheschool,andtheyknowwhattoteachandinwhatwayitcanbeaccepted.

Ø Inschool,eachchildgetsinadequateindividualattention,andsometimeshisorherparticularneedsarepassedover.

Ø Theparentsfunctionasthefirstteachersoftheirchildrensothattheyshouldberesponsiblefortheeducationofthechildren.

n TheprosandconsoftheInternet

 Advantages：

Ø Easyandquickaccesstothelatestworldwideinformation.

Ø Aconvenientandcheapsourceofentertainmentandinformation.

Ø Worldwidepersonalcommunicationisbothmoreconvenientandswifter/cheaper.

Ø TheInternetmakestheworldsmaller.YoucanmakefriendswithanybodythroughtheInternet.

Ø Playsaroleofeducationandhasbecomepowerfulacademicresources.

n TheprosandconsoftheInternet

Disadvantages：

Ø Lacksocialinteraction,fosterself-centerednessandinflexibility,unabletomakeacleardistinctionbetweenfantasyandreality.

Ø Over-indulgenceintheInternetwilldoharmtoone‘shealth：

myopia/near-sightedness.Leadasedentarylife.“OTAKU”

Ø Hackers'attacksmayunderminethenationalsecurity

Ø easyaccesstosubversiveorpornographicitems

Ø exposuretoexcessivesexandviolence;ourmoralitywilldefinitelyreceiveaheavyblow.

Ø Makecopyrightlawshardertoenforce,soitishardertokeepnewtechnologysecrets.

现象阐释类1：

3：

1

首段：

1

第一句：

引出话题——赞扬/中立/批评的口吻

Nowadays/inthisdayandage/,_____hasproduceed/exerted+negative/adverse/baneful+effects/impacts/influenceson____.

Thereisnodenyingthateveryoneinthisworldwantstoembracehappiness.

Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthat___hasbecomeagraveproblemwithwhichweareconfronted.

第二句：

切入考题

However,howtoachievehappiness/howdoesitcomeabout/whoshouldberesponsiblefor…（考题）hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople.

第三句：

亮明观点——承上启下

Frommyperspective,Iwouldliketogivethefollowingpossiblereasons.

具体问题：

femalesmokers

Nobodycouldhavefailedto