六级作文模板.docx

1、六级作文模板主体段落扩展：例据 For example，andeven，also， For instance Take sth for example , such as/ including + N/Ving Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list:例：出生之后，什么在人的个性和发展中发挥重要作用？ To begin with, education after birth plays a significant role in ones development. 扩展：For example, a hig

2、h-school level person commonly may not succeed to the extent of a person who has received a university education. This is not only because of the greater breadth of the knowledge acquired, but also due to a more critical and focused way of thinking that is imparted and refined during ones senior edu

3、cation.n Examples: A wolf child, to offer another instance, due to a deficiency of education by contrast with human beings, could hardly live in our society or self-develop.n Examples: The history is full of examples of men and women who achieved greatness despite facing hurdles so steep that easily

4、 could have crashed their spirit and left them lying in the dust.n Abraham Lincoln overcomes a difficult child-hood, depression, the death of two sons, and constant ridicule during the Civil War to become greatest president ever.n Helen Keller made an impact on the world despite being deaf, dumb, an

5、d blind from an early age.n Franklin Roosevelt had polio.n n There are endless examples. Edison ：study from failure The wolf is coming：honesty AlbertEinstein :It is not that I am so smart, it is just thatIstaywithproblemslonger. William Blake: To see a world in a grain of sandAnd a heaven in a wild

6、flower，Hold infinity in the palm of your hand，And eternity in an hour n 记叙事件n 1，必须要有深刻的中心内涵户外运动： 登山teamwork, conqueredn 2，必须要有恰当的副词使用: unfortunately, leisurely, suddenly, n 3，必须要有六大要素：5W 1H 通常使用一般过去时，若插叙，会使用过去完成时；与中心主体相关则详写，无关则略写。n 时间v There was a time when/there is a time when.v There was a time wh

7、en we knew nothing about the world.v Mystery v There are times when I can take it for granted that everything will come to the end.v The past has turned into ash.v Never has the past turned into ash.n 记叙中的点睛：v Give a man fish, he eats for a day. Teach him to fish, he will never go hungry.v Living wi

8、thout an aim is like sailing without a compass. - John Ruskinv Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value. - A. Einstein v We must accept finite disappointment, but we must never lose infinite hope. - Martin Luther Kingv Through all the changes life and love have brou

9、ght us, one thing remains the same-you mean the world to me. v Thefoxchangeshisskinbutnothishabits.vIfpeoplewoulddaretospeaktooneanotherunreservedly,therewouldbeagooddeallesssorrowintheworlda hundredyearshence.v The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances

10、 they want, and if they cannot find them, they make them. -George Bernard ShawvItiseasytoperformagoodaction,butnoteasytoacquireasettledhabitofperformingsuchactions.-Aristotlev The world is a book and those who do not travel read only a page St. Augustinev It is to books that I owe everything that is

11、 good in me.-GorkiWilliam Shakespeare: v Virtue is bold, and goodness never fearful.v Do not, for one repulse, forgo the purpose that you resolved to effort.v The time of life is short ; to spend that shortness basely, it would be too long.v Take honor from me and my life is undone.v Doubt thou the

12、stars are fire, Doubt the sun doth move, Doubt truth to be a liar, But never doubt thy love.主体段落扩展：数据 n Motorized flight is the greatest invention in the modern world. No other invention has had a more significant impact on our lives.n In a sense, the advent of motorized flight has brought dramatic

13、changes to public as well as cargo transportation.n For one thing, it is by far the fastest means of transportation. What used to be a good ten-hour ride by car can now be easily covered in one hour and a half by air. For another, it is safer as it is fast. The number of death from airplane crash is

14、 much less than that of any other means of mass transportation.n Pirated productsn Take software for example, scientific research shows / a recent survey tells / the statistics reveals / indicates that approximately 70% software on personal computers are pirated ones.n Data 全国第五次人口普查资料显示，目前全国男女出生性别比

15、为116.9：100。到2020年，中国处于婚龄的男性人数将比女性多出3000万到 4000万，这意味着平均5个男性中将有一个找不到配偶。 网上购物用户在网民中的渗透率达到了42.5%。 调查数据显示，有57.5%的公众从未访问过政府网站，我国政府网站的普及率和影响度尚待提高。 调查结果显示，被访者对节能环保产品购买意愿很强烈，大部分的被访者表示在同等条件下，会优先购买节能环保产品，不会购买的只有0.7。 在是否喜欢看电影的调查中，只有少数人的选择是一点也不喜欢电影，占所有人的0.75%，剩下99.25%的人对电影还是或多或少都喜欢的。其中喜欢和非常喜欢的人占了93%。主体段落扩展：理据 Sa

16、mple: Students who are noisy and disobedient should be group together and taught separately. One solution is to segregate these students in a “sin bin” where they are taught on their own. However, although this may seem a logical solution, taking this easy way out may cause as many problems as it so

17、lves. First, the segregated students will in practice receive fewer educational opportunities than peers when in fact they need more. Second, the experience of being excluded within the society of school may embitter them against society in general and they may go on to a career of crime and anti-so

18、ciety behavior.Sample: Schools are too academic in orientation and it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters.n My first reason is that it is the duty of parents, not teachers, to practice their children to deal with the practical affairs of life. The home, not the classro

19、om, is the ideal place to learn about home management and interpersonal skills. As for work abilities and attitudes, they are the best learned “on the job” and under the supervision of an experienced older worker. My second reason is that academic subjects have withstood the test of the time. They r

20、epresent the accumulate wisdom of our ancestors down through the ages, and, far from being impractical, they equip us with the knowledge and confidence to make sound judgements about any problems which may crop up. In addition, academic subjects are good for training us in mental discipline, while p

21、ractical subjects are weak in this regard. n My third reason is based on the saying “Man does not live by bread alone”. Schooldays devoted solely to instruction in down-to-earth practical matters would be dull indeed! Lessons in the best literature of the past enrich our lives and make us feel that

22、we are part of the great family of mankind.n Reason？For: It moulds strong and real character. It helps to reinforce the authority of teachers and parents. Permissiveness results in undisciplined children. Parental laxity leads to the spread of juvenile delinquency.n Corporal punishmentAgainst: It se

23、riously violates the legal rights and interests for children. It endangers childrens physical and mental development. It is a kind of brutality and cruelty which may lead to injury or even death of the student. Researches reveal that students who suffer from corporal punishment tend to resort to vio

24、lence in their future life. The mission of education can be fulfilled in other more civilized ways.n School or parents responsibilityThe school: As an institution of education, the school has the sole responsibility to educate the younger generation. Most of the childrens waking time is spent in sch

25、ools, and their purpose in attending school is to receive an education. The parents of the children pay for the education of their children, so they should receive correspondent services. There are well-equipped facilities and well-trained teachers in schools.n School or parents responsibilityThe pa

26、rents: The parents know their children better than the school, and they know what to teach and in what way it can be accepted. In school, each child gets inadequate individual attention, and sometimes his or her particular needs are passed over. The parents function as the first teachers of their ch

27、ildren so that they should be responsible for the education of the children.n The pros and cons of the InternetAdvantages： Easy and quick access to the latest worldwide information. A convenient and cheap source of entertainment and information. Worldwide personal communication is both more convenie

28、nt and swifter/cheaper. The Internet makes the world smaller. You can make friends with anybody through the Internet. Plays a role of education and has become powerful academic resources.n The pros and cons of the InternetDisadvantages： Lack social interaction, foster self-centeredness and inflexibi

29、lity, unable to make a clear distinction between fantasy and reality. Over-indulgence in the Internet will do harm to ones health：myopia/near-sightedness. Lead a sedentary life. “OTAKU” Hackers attacks may undermine the national security easy access to subversive or pornographic items exposure to ex

30、cessive sex and violence; our morality will definitely receive a heavy blow. Make copyright laws harder to enforce, so it is harder to keep new technology secrets.现象阐释类 1：3：1首段： 1第一句：引出话题赞扬/中立/批评的口吻Nowadays/in this day and age/, _ has produceed/exerted + negative/adverse/baneful + effects/ impacts/

31、influences on _.There is no denying that everyone in this world wants to embrace happiness.Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that _ has become a grave problem with which we are confronted. 第二句：切入考题 However, how to achieve happiness/ how does it come about/ who should be responsible for (考题) has become a hot topic among people.第三句：亮明观点承上启下 From my perspective, I would like to give the following possible reasons.具体问题：female smokers Nobody could have failed to