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Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,orto
askothersforadvice?
Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwintowersinproblem-solving,oneisoftenpresentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eithertowrackhisbrain,justlikewhathappenedtoNewton,sittingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventuallyfiguringoutoneofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoseekforothers’wisdomthroughtheiradvice,justasinthecaseofBenjaminFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownedlibrary.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,BenjaminFranklinmaybestberegardedasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.
Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers’advicecontributegreatlytoeffectivenessandefficiencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelatedtoproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindandcapabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone’smindis,moreoftenthannot,farlessshiningcomparedwithgroup’swisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurtherwhenstandingupontheshoulders’ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalwayswithgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincooperationishighlyemphasizedinthe21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhancecapabilitiesofeachindividualinvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventheentireglobalvillage.
Askingothers’adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone’sownpromotesdemocracyandcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancestospeaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsourrespecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,ideaexchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingaboutperspectives,principles,practicalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.
Admittedly,turningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteandirresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,andstressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnotthebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKennedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannot
dowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.
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Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Othersliveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbetter?
Givereasonsforyouranswer.
Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsprefertoliveintheirhometownswhileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhispreference.Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethisdecisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.
Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesforwork,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferentmuseumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,IwillhavenodifficultyinfindingajobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.
Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.ItakethisintoconsiderationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIliveinthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.
Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativestovisitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,IcouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleandmakemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomyhomecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithoutanytroubleandwasteoftime.
Inshort,mychoiceisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.Ithinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.
Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?
Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.
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Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocaresaboutyourneedsandyourproperty,whichishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhoissupportiveintimesofcrisis.
Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmayoccasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto.He'llrealizethatchildrencanbecarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewon'tmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregularthing.Inthesamevein,heknowsthatyou'llunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcansblowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords,heissensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcanhappen.Hedoesn'tmakeabigdealaboutthem.
Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty.Forexample,sheasksyourpermissionbeforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhat'syours.Thismeansshewouldn'tplantahugetreeinbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltaboutit.Ifshewantedtoputupafence,shewouldletyouknowfirst.Shemightworkwithyoutodecidewhereitshouldbeplaced.Maybethetwoofyouwouldevensplitthecost.
Agoodneighborwouldlendyousomemilkifyouranout.She'dgiveyouaridetoworkifyourcarwasbroken,andletyourchildrenstayatherhouseintheeveningifyougotstuckworkingovertime.Youwoulddothesameforher.Bothofyouwouldhelpmaketheother'slifeeasier.
Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou,likeadeathinthefamily,agoodneighborwillvolunteertohelpinanywayhecan.Thiscouldmeansomethingsmall,likemakingsomecasserolestoputinyourfreezertofeedvisitingrelatives.Oritcouldmeansomethingbig,likehelpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.
Ithinkonlysomeonewhohasexperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciateagoodone!
Agoodneighborcanbeagoodfriend.Heorshecanmakeallthedifferenceintheworldtoyourlife.
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Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepareandeat
foodathome.Whichdoyouprefer?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.
Somepeopleliketoeatoutatfoodstandsandrestaurants,whileothersliketopreparefoodat
home.Oftenitdependsonthekindoflifestylepeoplehave.Thosewithverybusyjobsoutsidethe
housedon’talwayshavetimetocook.Theyliketheconvenienceofeatingout.Overall,though,it
ischeaperandhealthiertoeatathome.
Whileeatinginrestaurantsisfast,themoneyyouspendcanaddup.WhenIhavedinnerata
restaurantwithafriend,thebillisusuallyovertwentydollars.Icanbuyalotofgrocerieswith
thatmuchmoney.Evenlunchatafast-foodstandusuallycostsfiveorsixdollarsforoneperson.
That’senoughtofeedthewholefamilyathome.
Eatingathomeisbetterforyou,too.Mealsatrestaurantsareoftenhighinfatandcalories,
andtheyservebigplatesoffood-muchmorefood-thanyouneedtoeatatonemeal.Ifyoucook
foodathome,youhavemorecontrolovertheingredients.Youcanusemargarineinsteadofbutter
onyourpotatoes,ornotputsomuchcheeseontopofyourpizza.Athome,youcancontrolyour
portionsize.Youcanserveyourselfaslittleasyouwant.Inarestaurant,youmayeatafullplate
offood"becauseyoupaidforit."
It’struethateatingoutisconvenient.Youdon’thavetoshop,orcook,orcleanup.Butreal
homecookingdoesn’thavetotakeupalotoftime.Therearelotsofsimplemealsthatdon’ttake
longtomake.Infact,they’refasterthaneatingout,especiallyifyouthinkofthetimeyouspend
drivingtoarestaurant,parking,waitingforatable,,waitingforservice,anddrivinghome.
Botheatingatrestaurantsandcookingathomecanbesatisfying.Bothcantastegoodandbe
enjoyedwithfamilyandfriends.Iprefercookingathomebecauseofthemoneyandhealthissues,
butpeoplewillmakethechoicethatfitstheirlifestylebest.
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题目:
Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatanewmovietheatermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?
Why?
Usespecificreasonsanddetailsto
supportyouranswer.
ANewMovieTheater
Entertainmentisanimportantpartofeveryone’slife.Weallneedtotaketimetorelaxandleadhealthylivesanddoourworkefficiently.Itiseasiertorelaxwhenanappropriate
formofentertainmentisconvenientandcloseby.Therefore,Iwouldsupportaproposaltobuilda
newmovietheaterinmyneighborhood.
Entertainmentplacescanbringsomedisadvantagestoacommunitysuchasincreasedtraffic
andnoise,butIbelievetheadvantagesofanewmovietheaterwouldoutweightheseconcerns.
Foronething,thepeopleinmyneighborhoodwouldsavetime.Whentheywantedtoseeamovie
theycouldsimplywalktothenewtheaterratherthanspendtimetravelingbybusorcar.In
addition,itwouldbesaferforchildrentovisitanearbymovietheaterratherthanoneinsome
otherpartofthecity.Andfinally,anewtheatermightattractotherbusinesses,suchasrest