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大学英语六级写作培训教案
评分标准
大学英语六级考试作文的目的旨在考核学生英语书面表达的能力。
作文考试时间为30分钟，要求写出不少于120个词的短文。
六级考试作文的出题方式有：
命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文章。
考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
对作文的要求是：
切题，文理通顺，表达正确，意思连贯，无重大语言错误。
下面介绍六级考试作文的评分原则和标准，并通过五份样卷作一个详细说明。
（一）、作文评分原则
CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。
CET作文题采用总体评分方法。
阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。
内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。
要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
避免趋中倾向。
该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
（二）、作文评分标准
本题满分为15分。
阅卷标准共分五等：
2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。
各有标准样卷一至二份。
阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。
评分标准：
2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分…基本切题。
表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
8分……基本切题。
有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分…切题。
表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分…切题。
表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。
基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
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白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。
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1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数
2.只写一段者：
0~4分；只写两段者：
0~9分（指规定三段的作文）
3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。
其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。
作文分 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
得分率100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7
经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。
按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。
也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。
Samplesofgradedpapers:
SayNotoPiratedProducts
14points
Presently,thephenomenonofpiracyisquiteserious.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedproducts.Anditwouldsoundstrangeifonesayshehasneverusedanypiratedproducts.
Whatfactorsaccountforthisphenomenon?
Wecanconsideritfromtwoaspects.Ontheonehand,piratedproductsaremuchcheaperthancopyrightedones.Sotheyareveryattractivetopeople,especiallyyoungsters,whoarenotfinanciallywell-off.Ontheotherhand,withhighlydevelopedtechnology,itisnotdifficulttomakepiratedproducts.Withoneauthorizedcopy,theillegalproducerscanmakethousandsofcopiesataverylowcost,thusmakinghugeprofits.
Inthiswayintellectualpropertyrightsareseriouslyinfringed.Honestproducerswilllosethemotivationtodeveloptheproducts.Meanwhile,piratedproductsareoftenoflowquality,thusdamagingtheinterestsofbuyers.
Canwedosomethingtostopthephenomenon?
Yes!
Firstly,weshouldstopusingpiratedproducts.Thentheirmarketswillperish.Secondly,thegovernmentshouldtakemoreeffectivemeasurestobanpiracy.Finally,thepriceofauthorizedproductsshouldbelowered.Ifthesesuggestionscanbeputintopractice,wecancertainlystoppiracy.
11points
Nowadayspiracyisbecomingaseriousproblem.Piratedproductscanbeseeneverywhere,includingbooks,videotapes,andmanydigitalproducts.Thisreallydoesharmtosociety.
Manyconsumerschoosepiratedproductsbecauseoftheirlowprices.Buttheydon’trealizeintellectualpropertyrightsshouldbeprotectedandthiskindofbehaviorinfringescopyrightsofthosewhoproducedtheminitially.
Becauseofpiracy,manywritersandsingershavetostopwritingorsinging.Becausethemorebookstheywriteorthemoresongstheysing,thebiggeroneslosstheywillmake.Theyhavelostconfidenceofthemarket.Ontheotherside,piratedproductsalwayshavepoorqualitysothatpeopleboughtthemdon’treallybenefitfromthelowprice.
Fromtheharmsmentionedabove,weshouldtakeactionstofightpiracy.First,thegovernmentcanmakelawstopunishthosesellingpiratedproducts.Second,themaketcandeclinethepricetoencouragepeopletobuyrealproducts.Lastbutnotleast,moreeducationshouldbegiventohelppeoplerealizetheharmofsellingorbuyingpiratedproducts.
8points
Nowadays,piratedproductscanbeseeneverywhere.Piracyhasbecomeabigproblemofoursociety.
Whatisitsreason?
Willitdobadtooursociety?
Weknowintellectualpropertyrightsisveryimportant.Assoonasyouwriteanovel,ordrawapainting,youownpropertyrights.Becauseyouspentyourtime,wastedyouenergyandthatwasaprogressofarts,otherscant’usewithoutyouagree.
What’stheresultifothersdirectlycopyyourproduct?
Hecangetwealthandfameeasily,howeveryou---thefatheroftheproductwillgetnothing.
It’sclearthatcopyrightinfringementisinlegal.Ifthiskindofbehaviorcannotbecontrolledeffectively,noonewillwriteanovelcarefully.Socialmarketwillbedisturbedorevenleadtoadestruction.
Thenhowshouldwedo?
SeveralmonthsagomanypopularsingerscallontheirfansnotgoingtobuypiratedCDs.AlthoughpiratedCDsarequitecheaper,theydobadtothepopularsongworld.Asaadult,weshouldknowwhatisright.Ifwecontinuetobuypiratedproducts,wewillbreakthelaw.
5points
Therearealotofpiratedproductsinourmarketnow.Itmadeabadeffecttoourlivesandalsomademanycompanieshadabigloss.
Aroundmyschool,therearealotofpiratedCDsellers.Abigdeelofstudentshaveboughtthem.Theydidthisbecausetheyarepooratintellectualpropertyrights.Theyonlywantedtobuycheapthingbutthisiscopyrightinfringement.IfmoreandmorepeoplebuypiratedCD,thosesingerwon’tsingbecausetheycan’tearnenoughmoneytoworkatmusic.Ican’imageit.
Whatcanwedo?
Wemustsaynottopiratedproducts.Wesouldn’tbuythosepiratedproductsandtellourfriendsnottobuytoo.Wecanforcethelawofintellectualpropertyrightssothatwedidn’tinfringesb’scopyrightthenwe’llneverdoitagain.
Let’ssaynotopiratedproducts.
2points
Today,therearesomanypiratedproducts,whichcausetheproplems.
Asweknow,themostadvantageofpiratedproductsisthatitischeaperthanproduct.
Theproductneedauthorspendsomuchtimeonit,soitisneedpriceasmuchashimaffordtoit.However,piratedproducteraffordtotheproductsolittle,andwhythepiratedproductsarecheaper.
Piratedproductsletauthorloseheartonproducts,anditwillcausenobodytoproductatlast.Sociationhasdonemoreharmaspiratedproductspopular.Everypeoplewillverysadseeittoo.
Refusepirtedproductsshouldstarttous.Piracyhassopowerlifeisthattherearemanypeoplelikeit.Weshouldnotbuyanypiratedproducts.Ifnobodybuypirateproducts,thelifeofpirateproductswillbeend.Thennobodycopyrightinfringement,authorproductmoreproducts,thesociationwillwillbedevelopment.
AlettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus
14points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
I’mveryluckytoattendthisworld-famousuniversity,butI’mafraidI’mnotcontentwiththecanteenserviceoncampus.
Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.Undoubtedly,therearealotofdeliciousdishes,butalltheyear,theyarethesame.Moreandmorestudentsarecomplainingabouteatingthesamefoodeachday.SoIthinkthemosturgentproblemisvariety.
Secondly,thepriceisabittoohigh.Manyofushopethatthecanteencanprovideuswithnotonlydeliciousbutalsocheaperfood.
Finally,theenvironmentissonoisythatwecan’tenjoyourmealsingoodmood.Isuggestthattherebesomesoftmusictohelpusrelax.
Thosepresentedsuggestionsarenotjustofmyown,butalsoofmanyotherstudents.Wehopeourrespectablepresidentwillpayattentiontooursuggestions.
Bytheway,thecanteenworkersareverypatientandalwayssmiling.SoIthinkifouruniversityoffersthembetterconditions,theywillofferusbetterservice.
Bestwishes,
YoursSincerely,
LiMing
11points
January12th,2002
Asoneofyouruniversitystudents,Iamnotverysatisfiedwithourcanteenservice.
Thefirstreasonisthattherearemanystudentscomingfromotherplaces.Theymanybenotaccustomedtothelocalfoodatthebeginningoftheterm.Soourcanteenshouldprovidemuchmorekindsoffoodforthemtochoose.
Secondly,thepriceofthefoodishigherthanwecanafford.Ihopethepriceofsomefoodcanbedecreasedalittle.Thenwecanhavealargerchoice.
Inadditiontoabovesuggestions,Iwanttoreflectthatmanystudentswillhavelunchafterclasses.Atthattime,thecanteenwillbecometoocrowded.Sowehopethatyoucanarrangesomemoreseatsforstudents.
Thesearemysuggestionsofourcanteenservice.Ireallyhopeyoucantakesomemeasurestomakethecanteenservicebetterandbetter.Thankyouverymuch.
YoursSincerely,
LiMing
8points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
I’mreallysorrytooccupyyoursparetime.Asamemberofallstudentsinouruniversity,Ihavesomeimportantthingaboutourcanteentotellyou.
Ithinkourcanteenisnotwellenoughforus.Asfollows:
firstly,thepriceistoohighforsomeofustoafford.Wealsofindthatthepriceofmostfoodishigherthananyotheruniversitiesinourcity.Moreover,thoughthehighprice,ithasn’tbrougtwiththegoodqualityofthefood.Couldyouconsiderthatthepriceshouldbelowdownalittle?
But,everycoinhasitstwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenisthebestoneinthecity.AndIknowthatithasbeenequipedwith8TVsetssincelastyear.Thisisagoodwaywhichwecangetmoreinformationfrom.
Aslast,Iwanttogivesomesuggestionstoimproveourcanteen.Addsomekindsoffoodwillsaticefythemorestudents.
Thankyou.Ireallyhopeyoucanthinkovermysuggestions.
5points
January12th,2002
DearMr.President,
MynameisLiMing.Iamyourstudentingradethree.
Today,Iwritethislettertoyou,mydearPresident.Iwanttellyousomethingaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.
Ouruniversityhavetencampuses.Butthesamefoodindifferentcampus,thepriceisnotthesame.Iwanttoknowwhythepriceisdifferent.T
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