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如何写雅思议论文55
如何备考写作:
增大阅读量
1.扩大词汇量,提高语言的运用能力。
2.热门话题,吸取有用观点,开拓思路,活跃文思
精读范文:
精心挑选,不仅理解,还要把有用的表达方式,观点,框架套用,所谓的骨头。
打好坚实的语法基础
勤动笔写
如何写议论文:
Essaywriting:
Candidatesmustwriteanessaydiscussinganissuesuchaseducationortheenvironment.Theyneedtoillustratetheiranswerwithexampleswhichcomefromtheirownexperience.Intask2,whichshouldtakeabout40minutes,theymustwriteatleast250words.Themarkingcriteriaincludegrammar,vocabulary,ideas,andlinkingideastogether.
40分钟完成一篇不少于250字的议论文:
主要是测试考生就某一问题找出成因病提出行啊应对策;
提出某种观点并进行论证;
比较题目所提供的相关信息;
评价和挑战题目所给出的论点等的能力。
Essay难点:
1字数要求,250字
2.话题数量多,题材广,最少有200多话题考试使用:
科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。
雅思的写作题材,掌握框架结构,掌握布局谋篇,组织好观点,理顺所要表达的意思,阐明理由;熟悉做题技巧,热门话题(七大话题),观点,必要地表达方式熟记常用句式和过渡词;基础词汇和语法
Essay类型:
议论文argumentativewriting.
1.discussion(report)
2.argumentation(essay)
Discussion:
要求考生分析某个方面的问题、现象,找出成因并提出解决方法,(wh--,how)。
特点:
1,providegeneralfactualinformation.2.outlineaproblemandpresentasolution.
Argumentation.要求考生就某一话题、观点发表自己的简介,阐述自己的观点,力图说服读者;对某一观点进行评价,驳斥对方观点等,往往以一般疑问句形式出题。
其特点:
1.presentandpossiblyjustifyanopinion,assessmentorhypothesis.2.presentandpossilyevaluateandchallengeideas,evidenceandargument.
论证方法:
充分而又有力的sufficientandpersuasive
Explanation,emphasis,exemplification,causeandeffect,comparisonandcontrast,factsandstatistics,concessionandrefutation,classification,definition,analogy
Discussion:
讨论题在07年和08年占到留学类议论文的三分之一左右;而在09年撒谎能够半年已经增加到近一半。
分析问题、提出对策
测试考生分析问题并提出解决方法的能力,写作话题大多基于一些社会问题如环保、健康、犯罪和民生问题等。
常见考题:
1.城乡差别越来越大,为什么?
如何缩小城乡差别?
2.越来越多的农民进城,原因何在?
如何解决这个问题?
等等
考题主要从原因与对策两方面展开,布局谋篇:
1.引言段:
提出问题,描述现状,表明写作目的。
40-50词
2.正文第一段:
分析数个原因90-100词
3.正文第二段:
提出相应对策90-100词
4.结尾段:
总结,发出号召或者倡议,展望未来30-40词
模式二:
(难度大,不宜使用)
1.引言段:
提出问题,描述现状,表明写作目的,40-50词
2.正文第一段:
分析第一个原因并提出对策60词
3.正文第二段:
分析第二个原因并提出对策60词
4.正文第三段:
分析第三个原因并提出对策60词
5.结尾段,总结,发出号召或者倡议,展望未来30-40词
例文:
城市和乡间的范围发展越来越大
Thereisagapoflivingincitiesandcountryside.Whatarethereasonsinyourcountry?
howtoreducethedifference?
Asthestepofeconomicdevelopmentaccelerates,thegapbetweenthecityandthecountrysidebecomesmoreandmoreovert,whicharousescolossalconcerns.Takeafurtherlookatthephenomenon,therearethreemajorcauses.(36)
Firstly,theinsufficiencyofinvestmentintheruralareasaccountsmainlyfortheissue.InChina,forinstance,duetotheemphasisonthedevelopmentinthecoastalareas,theChinesegovernmentdevotesmoreinvestmentinthelargecities,suchasshanghai,Beijing,andthelike.Theinvestment,undoubtedly,hasbroughtaboutthegreatincreaseofeconomyinthesecities.However,thisisnotthecaseintheruralareasandthewesternregions.Thelackofinvestmentbarrierstheeconomicdevelopment,andsharpensthegapbetweenthecityandthecountryside.(90)
Secondly,theloweducationlevelintheruralareascontributespartlytothegapofliving.Educationistheprimeforceofproductivity.Thus,manygovernmentsgiveprioritytothedevelopmentofeducation.China’seducationwitnessedarapidgrowthinthepastdecade.However,itisnotthatidealincountryside.Theenrollmentofprimaryschoolsandsecondaryschoolsismuchlowercomparedwiththeadvancedregions,nottomentionthehighereducation.Withoutgoodeducation,thedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnologywouldbeadreamdifficulttoberealized.(97)
Finally,theinfluxofmigrantworkerstothecitiesfromthecountrysidedeterioratestheundevelopedconditionintheruralareas.Thelifestyleintheurbanareasisveryattractivetothepeopleinthecountryside.Toseekmoreworkingopportunities,manypeopleabandonthefertilelandsandleavethemuncultivated.Ifthesituationcontinues,itwillleadtoseriousunbalanceofeconomicandregionaldevelopment.(66)
Tosumup,onlywhenthegovernmentrendersmoreconcernsovertheissue,canthegapbetweenthecitiesandcountrysidebebridged.(23)
范文2:
Thelivingstandardgapbetweencityandcountrysideisbiggerandbigger.Inmycountrydozensofruralyoungpeoplehavebeenabsorbedbythehighsalaryandcomfortablelivinginthebigcity.Somoreandmoreyoungpeopleselecttoworkinthecityandabandonfarmingforabetterfuture.Inthisessaywewillexaminetheproblemoftheincreasinglivingstandardgapbetweenthecityandcountrysideandthesolutions,suchasimprovingeducationallevelandeconomyinthecountry.
Themainreasonisthedifferentstandardofeducationbetweenthecityandthecountryside.Becauseofpoverty,dozensofcountrystudentslosethechancetostudyatschool.Socountrypeople’seducationallevelistoolowtofindjobsofhighsalary.Commonlyhighsalaryrequireshigheducationallevel.Manuallabormeanslowsalary:
therefore,thecountrypeoplewillbepoorer.Itwillbecomeabadcircle.
Anotherreasonisthateconomicdevelopmentisnotbalancedbetweencityandcountryside.Suchasbothtrafficandtransportationarenotconvenient,informationtobereceivedslowlyandindustrialinstitutionistoosimple,allofthemarethedirectandprimaryreasonstoinducethekindofproblemthatthegrowthofcountryside’seconomylessthancity’s.
Asaresultofthegapinlivingstandardbetweenthecityandthecountryside,theoutlookissomewhatgrim.Peoplealreadyrealizethisproblemexistsandaretryingtosolveit.
Foronesolution,developedcitiesshouldspendplentyofmoneyonbuildingcountryschoolsandhelpingpoorcountryfamilythattheyhavetheabilitytosupporttheirchildrentoschool.
Thesecondsolutionisunitingcitiesandbasedoncountryconditionsofnaturetoprogresslocaleconomyspecially.Inmostofthecountryside,plentyofnaturalresourcesareutilizedanddeveloped.Onthecontrary,developingcitiesneedlotsofresources.Theycanhelpeachother.Theimportantthingisthatdevelopedcitiesshouldprovidehelptochangethecountrysidetoreducethelivingstandardgapbetweenthecityandthecountryside.
范文三
Whenyoulookbacktothelastcentury,amazinglyyouwillfindthatnotonlyallworld’slargestpopulatedcitieshadexperienceddifferentpopulationgrowthrates,butalsothedifferencebetweenthecityandthecountrysidehadgrownaccordingly.Tworeasonsofminecanexaminethetendencyasfollowing.(49)
Theglamorouscitylifeallureslotsofhumanresourcestomovetothecity,takingmajorcontributiontothegap.Inthecity,therearemanyadvantagestoattractthosetalentedpeopletosettledown---morejobopportunities,culturalactivities,sportingevents,etc.therefore,eventhosewell-educatedpeoplewhoareoriginatedfromthecountryintendtoleadadynamiccitylifeinsteadofreturningtofacethestaticcountryview.Iftheruralgovernmentcanworkoutsomefavorablepoliciessuchaslowpricesoflandoccupiedforindustrialuses,withthecombinationoflowcostofworkforce,investorsarewillingtoestablishfactoriesinthecountryside.Theimprovementofemploymentsituationwillenormouslyhelppullbacksomeintellectualsandlessenthegap.(104)
Inthesecondpart,Iwouldmentionthefactoroftransportation.Thevitalresistanceofeconomicdevelopmentinthecountrysideistheinconvenienttransportation.Ithasbeenwitnessedinchinathatalmostalltheleadingcitiesarescatteredalongthecoastline.Theytakeadvantageofsea,airandothersophisticatedtransportfacilitiestoenjoyhigheconomicgrowthrates.Isuggestthatthecentralgovernmentshouldfundoninfrastructureforthewholenation,includingruralareas;tobuildupanationwidetransportnetwork.Consequentlytourismaswellashousinginthecountrysidewillbeboosted,andthedifferencebetweenthecityandthecountrywouldbeminimized.(94)
Tosumup,intelligentresourceswoulddeterminewhoisthewinnerorloseroftheintenseintelligentcompetition;moreover,transmitsystemsalsoplayanimportantroleindevelopingeconomy.Ifbothissuesweretackledproperlyinthecountryside,gapbetweenthecityandthecountrywouldneverbeoverwhelming.(49)
Argumentation
要求考生就某一话题、观点发表自己的简介,阐述自己的观点力图说服读者;对某种观点进行评价,驳斥对方观点等。
篇章模式:
等分型(双边型)和一面倒(单边型)
等分型是比较完美的雅思议论文的模式:
Agoodanswerwilltrytogiveargumentbothforthestatementandagainstitbeforestatingthefinalopinion.Agoodanswershouldachieveabalanceofagreementanddisagreement.
模式一:
最重要的是不能只提出自己的观点,而要先分析对立双方的观点。
等分型counter-argument
引言段:
引出主体,简单陈述该问题的不同看法和意见
正文第一段:
陈述其中一方的观点、具体的论据
正文第二段:
过渡,陈述另一方的观点及具体论据
结尾:
比较上述不同观点的优劣,得出结论或者表明自己的立场、看法
P31剑七P45精讲
Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportspersonormusician.
Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.
Obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencaneffectivelybetaughttoacquiredifferentskills,includingthoseassociatedwithsport,artormusic.Sofromourownschoolexperience,wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthatachildcanacquiretheseskillswithcontinuedteachingandguidedpractice.
However,somepeoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhohasbeentrainedtoplayasportoraninstrument,fromthosewhobecomegoodplayers.Inotherwords,thereismoretotheskillthanalearnedtechnique,andthisextratalentcannotbetaught,nomatterhowgoodtheteacherorhowfrequentlyachildpractices.
Ipersonallythinkthatsomepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes.S