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如何写雅思议论文55

如何备考写作:

增大阅读量

1.扩大词汇量,提高语言的运用能力。

2.热门话题,吸取有用观点,开拓思路,活跃文思

精读范文:

精心挑选,不仅理解,还要把有用的表达方式,观点,框架套用,所谓的骨头。

打好坚实的语法基础

勤动笔写

如何写议论文:

Essaywriting:

Candidatesmustwriteanessaydiscussinganissuesuchaseducationortheenvironment.Theyneedtoillustratetheiranswerwithexampleswhichcomefromtheirownexperience.Intask2,whichshouldtakeabout40minutes,theymustwriteatleast250words.Themarkingcriteriaincludegrammar,vocabulary,ideas,andlinkingideastogether.

40分钟完成一篇不少于250字的议论文:

主要是测试考生就某一问题找出成因病提出行啊应对策;

提出某种观点并进行论证;

比较题目所提供的相关信息;

评价和挑战题目所给出的论点等的能力。

Essay难点:

1字数要求,250字

2.话题数量多,题材广,最少有200多话题考试使用:

科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。

雅思的写作题材,掌握框架结构,掌握布局谋篇,组织好观点,理顺所要表达的意思,阐明理由;熟悉做题技巧,热门话题(七大话题),观点,必要地表达方式熟记常用句式和过渡词;基础词汇和语法

 

Essay类型:

议论文argumentativewriting.

1.discussion(report)

2.argumentation(essay)

Discussion:

要求考生分析某个方面的问题、现象,找出成因并提出解决方法,(wh--,how)。

特点:

1,providegeneralfactualinformation.2.outlineaproblemandpresentasolution.

Argumentation.要求考生就某一话题、观点发表自己的简介,阐述自己的观点,力图说服读者;对某一观点进行评价,驳斥对方观点等,往往以一般疑问句形式出题。

其特点:

1.presentandpossiblyjustifyanopinion,assessmentorhypothesis.2.presentandpossilyevaluateandchallengeideas,evidenceandargument.

论证方法:

充分而又有力的sufficientandpersuasive

Explanation,emphasis,exemplification,causeandeffect,comparisonandcontrast,factsandstatistics,concessionandrefutation,classification,definition,analogy

 

Discussion:

讨论题在07年和08年占到留学类议论文的三分之一左右;而在09年撒谎能够半年已经增加到近一半。

分析问题、提出对策

测试考生分析问题并提出解决方法的能力,写作话题大多基于一些社会问题如环保、健康、犯罪和民生问题等。

常见考题:

1.城乡差别越来越大,为什么?

如何缩小城乡差别?

2.越来越多的农民进城,原因何在?

如何解决这个问题?

等等

考题主要从原因与对策两方面展开,布局谋篇:

1.引言段:

提出问题,描述现状,表明写作目的。

40-50词

2.正文第一段:

分析数个原因90-100词

3.正文第二段:

提出相应对策90-100词

4.结尾段:

总结,发出号召或者倡议,展望未来30-40词

模式二:

(难度大,不宜使用)

1.引言段:

提出问题,描述现状,表明写作目的,40-50词

2.正文第一段:

分析第一个原因并提出对策60词

3.正文第二段:

分析第二个原因并提出对策60词

4.正文第三段:

分析第三个原因并提出对策60词

5.结尾段,总结,发出号召或者倡议,展望未来30-40词

 

例文:

城市和乡间的范围发展越来越大

Thereisagapoflivingincitiesandcountryside.Whatarethereasonsinyourcountry?

howtoreducethedifference?

Asthestepofeconomicdevelopmentaccelerates,thegapbetweenthecityandthecountrysidebecomesmoreandmoreovert,whicharousescolossalconcerns.Takeafurtherlookatthephenomenon,therearethreemajorcauses.(36)

Firstly,theinsufficiencyofinvestmentintheruralareasaccountsmainlyfortheissue.InChina,forinstance,duetotheemphasisonthedevelopmentinthecoastalareas,theChinesegovernmentdevotesmoreinvestmentinthelargecities,suchasshanghai,Beijing,andthelike.Theinvestment,undoubtedly,hasbroughtaboutthegreatincreaseofeconomyinthesecities.However,thisisnotthecaseintheruralareasandthewesternregions.Thelackofinvestmentbarrierstheeconomicdevelopment,andsharpensthegapbetweenthecityandthecountryside.(90)

Secondly,theloweducationlevelintheruralareascontributespartlytothegapofliving.Educationistheprimeforceofproductivity.Thus,manygovernmentsgiveprioritytothedevelopmentofeducation.China’seducationwitnessedarapidgrowthinthepastdecade.However,itisnotthatidealincountryside.Theenrollmentofprimaryschoolsandsecondaryschoolsismuchlowercomparedwiththeadvancedregions,nottomentionthehighereducation.Withoutgoodeducation,thedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnologywouldbeadreamdifficulttoberealized.(97)

Finally,theinfluxofmigrantworkerstothecitiesfromthecountrysidedeterioratestheundevelopedconditionintheruralareas.Thelifestyleintheurbanareasisveryattractivetothepeopleinthecountryside.Toseekmoreworkingopportunities,manypeopleabandonthefertilelandsandleavethemuncultivated.Ifthesituationcontinues,itwillleadtoseriousunbalanceofeconomicandregionaldevelopment.(66)

Tosumup,onlywhenthegovernmentrendersmoreconcernsovertheissue,canthegapbetweenthecitiesandcountrysidebebridged.(23)

范文2:

Thelivingstandardgapbetweencityandcountrysideisbiggerandbigger.Inmycountrydozensofruralyoungpeoplehavebeenabsorbedbythehighsalaryandcomfortablelivinginthebigcity.Somoreandmoreyoungpeopleselecttoworkinthecityandabandonfarmingforabetterfuture.Inthisessaywewillexaminetheproblemoftheincreasinglivingstandardgapbetweenthecityandcountrysideandthesolutions,suchasimprovingeducationallevelandeconomyinthecountry.

Themainreasonisthedifferentstandardofeducationbetweenthecityandthecountryside.Becauseofpoverty,dozensofcountrystudentslosethechancetostudyatschool.Socountrypeople’seducationallevelistoolowtofindjobsofhighsalary.Commonlyhighsalaryrequireshigheducationallevel.Manuallabormeanslowsalary:

therefore,thecountrypeoplewillbepoorer.Itwillbecomeabadcircle.

Anotherreasonisthateconomicdevelopmentisnotbalancedbetweencityandcountryside.Suchasbothtrafficandtransportationarenotconvenient,informationtobereceivedslowlyandindustrialinstitutionistoosimple,allofthemarethedirectandprimaryreasonstoinducethekindofproblemthatthegrowthofcountryside’seconomylessthancity’s.

Asaresultofthegapinlivingstandardbetweenthecityandthecountryside,theoutlookissomewhatgrim.Peoplealreadyrealizethisproblemexistsandaretryingtosolveit.

Foronesolution,developedcitiesshouldspendplentyofmoneyonbuildingcountryschoolsandhelpingpoorcountryfamilythattheyhavetheabilitytosupporttheirchildrentoschool.

Thesecondsolutionisunitingcitiesandbasedoncountryconditionsofnaturetoprogresslocaleconomyspecially.Inmostofthecountryside,plentyofnaturalresourcesareutilizedanddeveloped.Onthecontrary,developingcitiesneedlotsofresources.Theycanhelpeachother.Theimportantthingisthatdevelopedcitiesshouldprovidehelptochangethecountrysidetoreducethelivingstandardgapbetweenthecityandthecountryside.

 

范文三

Whenyoulookbacktothelastcentury,amazinglyyouwillfindthatnotonlyallworld’slargestpopulatedcitieshadexperienceddifferentpopulationgrowthrates,butalsothedifferencebetweenthecityandthecountrysidehadgrownaccordingly.Tworeasonsofminecanexaminethetendencyasfollowing.(49)

Theglamorouscitylifeallureslotsofhumanresourcestomovetothecity,takingmajorcontributiontothegap.Inthecity,therearemanyadvantagestoattractthosetalentedpeopletosettledown---morejobopportunities,culturalactivities,sportingevents,etc.therefore,eventhosewell-educatedpeoplewhoareoriginatedfromthecountryintendtoleadadynamiccitylifeinsteadofreturningtofacethestaticcountryview.Iftheruralgovernmentcanworkoutsomefavorablepoliciessuchaslowpricesoflandoccupiedforindustrialuses,withthecombinationoflowcostofworkforce,investorsarewillingtoestablishfactoriesinthecountryside.Theimprovementofemploymentsituationwillenormouslyhelppullbacksomeintellectualsandlessenthegap.(104)

Inthesecondpart,Iwouldmentionthefactoroftransportation.Thevitalresistanceofeconomicdevelopmentinthecountrysideistheinconvenienttransportation.Ithasbeenwitnessedinchinathatalmostalltheleadingcitiesarescatteredalongthecoastline.Theytakeadvantageofsea,airandothersophisticatedtransportfacilitiestoenjoyhigheconomicgrowthrates.Isuggestthatthecentralgovernmentshouldfundoninfrastructureforthewholenation,includingruralareas;tobuildupanationwidetransportnetwork.Consequentlytourismaswellashousinginthecountrysidewillbeboosted,andthedifferencebetweenthecityandthecountrywouldbeminimized.(94)

Tosumup,intelligentresourceswoulddeterminewhoisthewinnerorloseroftheintenseintelligentcompetition;moreover,transmitsystemsalsoplayanimportantroleindevelopingeconomy.Ifbothissuesweretackledproperlyinthecountryside,gapbetweenthecityandthecountrywouldneverbeoverwhelming.(49)

Argumentation

要求考生就某一话题、观点发表自己的简介,阐述自己的观点力图说服读者;对某种观点进行评价,驳斥对方观点等。

篇章模式:

等分型(双边型)和一面倒(单边型)

等分型是比较完美的雅思议论文的模式:

Agoodanswerwilltrytogiveargumentbothforthestatementandagainstitbeforestatingthefinalopinion.Agoodanswershouldachieveabalanceofagreementanddisagreement.

模式一:

最重要的是不能只提出自己的观点,而要先分析对立双方的观点。

等分型counter-argument

引言段:

引出主体,简单陈述该问题的不同看法和意见

正文第一段:

陈述其中一方的观点、具体的论据

正文第二段:

过渡,陈述另一方的观点及具体论据

结尾:

比较上述不同观点的优劣,得出结论或者表明自己的立场、看法

P31剑七P45精讲

Itisgenerallybelievedthatsomepeoplearebornwithcertaintalents,forinstanceforsportormusic,andothersarenot.However,itissometimesclaimedthatanychildcanbetaughttobecomeagoodsportspersonormusician.

Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

Therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.

Obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencaneffectivelybetaughttoacquiredifferentskills,includingthoseassociatedwithsport,artormusic.Sofromourownschoolexperience,wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthatachildcanacquiretheseskillswithcontinuedteachingandguidedpractice.

However,somepeoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhohasbeentrainedtoplayasportoraninstrument,fromthosewhobecomegoodplayers.Inotherwords,thereismoretotheskillthanalearnedtechnique,andthisextratalentcannotbetaught,nomatterhowgoodtheteacherorhowfrequentlyachildpractices.

Ipersonallythinkthatsomepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes.S

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