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IELTS2test1writingtask1（band8score）

Thetablebelowshowstheconsumerdurables（telephone,refrigerator,etc.）ownedinBritainfrom1972to1983.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Datadescribingtheconsumerlong-lastingproductsfrom1972to1983wassurveyedinBritain.Thisresearchinvolvedeightproductswhichwereusedinhouseholds.

Accordingtothetable,onlywastelevisionrecordedmorethan90%andlessthan100%duringthisperiod.ThisindicatedthattelevisionbecameaninseparabletechnologyformostpeopleinBritain.Differentfromformerone,therewasaslightriseoccurringinvacuumcleaner,washingmachine,anddishwasher.Forvacuumcleaner,therewasnodatashownonthetablein1983,whereasdatarecordingdishwasherstartedin1978.Inaddition,videowhichreachedby18%wasonlypresentedin1983.

Ontheotherhand,thesignificantincreasesofdurablesarecentralheating,refrigerator,andtelephone.Incentralheatinguse,itdoubledinpercentageapproximately30%（1972）to64%（1983）.Then,therewasanoticeabledifferencebothfridgeandtelephone.Between1972and1983,thepercentageofusingfridgegrewfrom73%to94%,andincreasedfrom42%to77%fortelephone.

Inconclusion,devicesprovidingcommunicationandentertainmentconceivablybecameamainneedforBritainpeopleintheseyears.Thiscouldbeseenfromtheenormouspercentagebothtelephoneandtelevision.

IELTS2test1writingtask2

Fatherhoodoughttobeemphasizedasmuchasmotherhood.Theideathatwomenaresolelyresponsiblefordecidingwhetherornottohavebabiesleadsontotheideathattheyarealsoresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.Towhatextentdoyouagree?

Motherhoodnowadayshasdevelopedintoavitalpositioninsociety,whichhasnearlyover-takenfatherhood.However,thereexistsaninfluencingideathatwomenareresponsibleforfosteringthechildrenassociatedwiththeopinionthatwomenhavetheindependentresponsibilitytomakethedecisiontohavebabiesornot.Frommyperspective,Iamagainstthisviewpoint,andIsupposethatmalesandfemalesoughttoplayanequalroleduringtheirchildren'sgrowth.

Tobeginwith,itisadmittedthatincontemporarysocietymenandwomenhaveadifferentincorporationwhenrunningafamily.Menemphasizemoreinmaterialsupplying.Forexampletheyaremoreresponsibleforfinanceandsymbolstatus,whereastheirwivesmostlykeenonlifestyleandemotionalaspects.Therefore,itseemstobethatwomenhavemorepotentialabilityanddutytoraiseachildthantheirhusbands,whichisdecidedbynaturalcharacteristics.However,whatmusttobepointedoutisthathavingmoredutyisnotthesameasholdingasoleresponsibilityintakingcareofchildren.What'smore,materialisalsoanessentialaspectwhenraisingachild.Herefollowsmyexplanationstowardthisview.

Firstly,inrecentyears,menandwomenarenowhavingthesamerightsandobligationsinvariousfields:

work,familyandsocialrolesforinstance.Thereforetheirrighttomakeadecisiononsomeimportantissuesinafamilyshouldbeequal,whichmeansitisnecessarytomakedecisionsaftertalkingwitheachother.Moreover,afamilyisanentity,also,thechildrenaremembersofthisentity.Asaresultitisundoubtedthatmalesandtheirfemalecounterpartsshouldbringtheirbabiesuptogether,therebypromotingthefamilybondingofhusbandandwife,andwhat'sfurther,oftwogenerations.

Inconclusion,personallyIthinkmenandwomenshouldhaveacleardivisionwhenfosteringtheirbabies.Fathersareaimingmoreatfinancialsupportwhilstmothersarefocusingmostlyonbabies'emotionalrespectsandmoraleducation.Onlyinthiswaycanafamilybeunitedandremainacircumstanceofwell-being.

IELTS2test2writingtask1（band8score）

Thechartbelowshowstheamountofleisuretimeenjoyedbymenandwomenofdifferentemploymentstatus.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Thebarchartindicatestheamountofleisuretimeperweekthatmalesandfemalesofvariousemploymentstatusesenjoyedoveraoneyearperiodoftimefrom1998to1999.Theemploymentstatusesreferredtoherearegroupedintofivecategorieswhichare:

employedfull-time,part-time,unemployed,retiredandhousewives.

Asisindicatedinthechart,underthebackgroundsofbeingemployedfull-time,unemployedandretired,maleshadmoreleisuretimetoenjoythanfemalesdid.Butwiththeothertwostatuses,namely,beingemployedpart-timeandbeingpurehousewives,maleshadnothingtocomparewithfemales.

Firstly,unemployedandretiredmalesandfemalesenjoyedthegreatestamountofleisuretime.Theaverageweeklyleisuretimeenjoyedbymalesandfemaleswere85hoursand70hoursrespectively.Amongthosewhowereretired,menhad84hourswhilewomenhad69hours.Generallyspeaking,malesandfemalesunderthesetwostatusesofemploymentshowedveryslightdifferenceintermsoftheamountofleisuretimebeingenjoyed.

Secondly,forthosewhoworkedfull-time,malesalsohadmoreleisuretimethanfemalesandthechartshowedthatmaleshad45hourswhilewomen37hours.

Thirdly,whatisreallyinterestingisthatwhileitistotallyunderstandablethattheHousewivescategoryhadnothingtodowithmen,itwasreallyhardtobelievethatthecategoryofbeingemployedpart-timeonlyinvolvedfemalesandnomales.Whatsoever,thefigureweseeis40hoursforpart-timeemployedfemalesand50hoursforhousewives?

Ingeneral,apartfromtwoveryspecialgroups,maleshadmoreleisuretimetoenjoythanfemales.

IELTS2test2writingtask2

“Preventionisbetterthancure”.Outofacountry’shealthbudget,alargeproportionshouldbedivertedfromtreatmenttospendingonhealtheducationandpreventativemeasures.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?

Therisingcostsofhealthcarehavebecomeanissueformanycountriesintheworld.Todealwiththisproblem,itisrecommendedthatabigpartofthestatehealthbudgetbeusedforhealtheducationanddiseasepreventioninsteadoftreatment.

Firstofall,manykindsofdiseasesarepreventableandpreventingadiseaseisusuallymuchcheaperthantreatingit.Forexample,peoplecouldpreventcatchingacoldiftheydresswarmlyandgetgoodrestwhentheweatherfirstgetscoldinthewinter.Butmanypeoplegetsickbecausetheyfailtodosoandhavetospendmuchmoremoneyseeingadoctor.Anothercaseinpointiscancer,theleadingcauseofdeathintheworld.Butlungcancer,livercancerandmanyotherkindsofcancercouldallbeeffectivelypreventedifpeopletakemeasuresfortheirhealthinanearlystage.Smallthingssuchassmokinglessoreatingmorehealthyfoodwouldhavekeptmillionsoffamiliesfrombecomingbankruptifthepatientstookmeasuresforearlycancerprevention.

Inaddition,healtheducationalsoplaysakeyroleinimprovingpeople’shealth.Bygivingpeoplemoreinformationabouthealth,countriescouldhelppeopleunderstandtheimportanceofdiseasepreventionandwaystoachieveit.

However,emphasizingondiseasepreventionisnotdownplayingthesignificanceofmedicaltreatment.Afterall,preventionandtreatmentarejusttwodifferentmeanstowardthesameend.

Inconclusion,wecouldsavemoneyinhealthcareandtreatpatientsmoresuccessfullyifourcountryusesmoremoneyonhealthpreventionandeducation.

IELTS2test3writingtask1（band8score）

Thefirsttablebelowshowstheresultsofasurveywhichsampledacross-sectionof100,000peopleaskingiftheytraveledabroadandwhytheytraveledfortheperiod1994-98.Thesecondtableshowstheirdestinationsoverthesameperiod.Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Thetwotablesreflecttheresultsofasurveywhichsampledacross-sectionof100,000Britishpeopleoveraspanoffouryearsfrom1994to1998.Thefirstoneshowsthepurposesoftheirvisitsabroadandthesecondindicatestheirchoicesofdestinations.

Ascanbeseenfromtable1,holiday-makingwasthemainreasonforBritishpeopletotravelabroad.Nextwereforbusinesssakeandforvisitingfriendsandrelatives.Table2showsthatWesternEuropewastheprimarydestinationoftheBritishpeopletravelingabroadandnextcameNorthAmericaandmanydifferentcountriesandareasasawhole.

First,in1994,therewere15,246visitsabroadforholidayspendingwhichcontrastedstrikinglyto3,155visitsforbusiness,2,689visitsforvisitingfriendsandrelativesand982visitsforotherreasons.In1995,weseethatthenumberofvisitspaidbythesampledBritishpeopleinthesurveydecreasedto14,898,butitwasstillmuchhigherthanvisitsforallotherreasons.Inthefollowingyears,wefindthatvisitsforholidaymaking,businessandforvisitingfriendsandrelativescontinuedtorise,amongwhich1996witnessedthebiggestgrowth,increasingfrom14,898to17,896.In1997,visitsforbusinessandforseeingfriendsandrelativessawthelargestgrowthandtherewereanincreaseby390and277respectively.Visitsabroadforotherreasonsfluctuated,droppingfrom982in1994to896in1995andthenclimbingbackto1054beforefinallyfallingto990.Intermsofthetotalofeachdesignatedyear,1998boastedthehighestwith28,828while1995wastheleastwith21,610.

Second,thedestinationsofthevisitsofthesampledpeopleinthesurveyfollowedasimilartrendtotable1.WeseethatWesternEuropereceivedthelargestnumberofvisitorsfromtheUK.In1995,evenwhenthevisitswereatitsbottom,itwasalsoashighas18,944andin1998,itwas24,519,thehighest.