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四级材料
作文
TheWorldExpoin2010(世博会)英文作文
TheWorldExpoin2010(2010年世博会)
TheWorldExpoin2010
Shanghaiwillhostthe2010WorldExpo.TheWorldExpohasalonghistorybutithasneverbeenheldinAsia.Sothe2010WorldExpoisanhonorforalloftheAsians.()urgovernmenthaspromisedthatitwillbethebestone.AndShanghai,asahostcity,willhavemorechancestodevelopquickly. AsastudentinShanghai,IshouldlearnEnglishwellsothatIcanbeavolunteerintheExpotohelpforeignersknowmoreaboutShanghai.
HowToBeALovelyCitizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)
GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghaiandmoreandmorepeoplethroughouttheworldarefocusingtheirattentiononShanghainow.AsacitizenofShanghai,IfeelImustsparenoeffortstodomybit.First,Idecidetohelpplantmoretreestomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Second,Ishouldobeysevennosandbegoodatlearningfromothers.Third,IshouldstudyhardsothatIcandosomethingbetterformycityinthefuture.
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCertificateCrazeOnCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法
CertificateCrazeOnCampus
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。
高分范文
CertificateCrazeOnCampus
Inrecentyears,gettingacertificatehasbecomeanewcrazeamongcollegestudents.[1]Justrandomlyaskastudentoncampuswhatheorsheisbusydoing,[2]quitepossibly,youmaygettheanswer[3]thatheorsheispreparingforacertificate[2]ofsomekind.[4]Whydoesthiscrazeappear?
[4]Therearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.First,[5]itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?
Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Second,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandards[6]bywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.
[7]Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerational[8]whenitcomestocertificates,[9]sincecertificates[2]donotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyis[10]nothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourability[10]butnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue.
【亮点点评】
[1]祈使句使用恰当。
randomly意为“随意地,随机地”。
[2]限定词使用恰当,使文章表达更严谨,增强了说服力。
[3]that引导同位语从句,修饰theidea。
[4]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。
[5]强调句型,此处是强调主语。
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词宾语。
[7]用于引出“我”的观点。
[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。
[9]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为“既然”。
[10]“只是,仅仅”。
“而不是”。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:
Youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.
临摩:
离婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实。
2.佳句:
Diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.
临摩:
在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高。
3.佳句:
Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates.
临摩:
我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudents’PursuitforFamousBrands.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌 2)产生这种现象的原因是什么 3)你如何看待这一现象
Students’PursuitforFamousBrands
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。
高分范文
Students’PursuitforFamousBrands
Nowadaysmanycollegestudentsliketopursuefamousbrands.Fromclothestomobilephones,evenstudyarticleslikeelectronicdictionariesandpens,they[1]areinclinedtobuyfamousbrands.[2]Moreover,manystudentsfrompoorfamiliesbeginto[3]followthisconsumptiontrendaswell.Thisphenomenonhasarousedwideattention.
[4]Thefollowingreasonscanaccountforcollegestudents’preferenceforfamousbrands.[2]Aboveall,inmanycollegestudents’eyes,afamousbrandisasymbolofsophisticationandtaste.Theyexpectotherstoadmiretheirhighclassandgoodtaste.[2]What’smore,inmodernsociety,famousbrandstosomeextentareequaltofashion,[5]whichhasagreatattractiontoyoungcollegestudents.[2]Besides,parents’spoilingtheirchildrenhelpsformtheirbadconsumptionhabit.
[2]AsfarasIamconcerned,[6]itisirrationalforcollegestudentstopursuefamousbrands.[3]Afterall,mostoffamousbrandsare[7]farbeyondtheirconsumptionability.[3]Besides,[8]itisnotfamousbrandsbutaperson’snoblecharacterthatreallymakeshimhighclass.[3]Therefore,collegestudentsshouldattachmoreimportancetocultivatingagoodcharacter[9]ratherthanpursuingfamousbrands.
【亮点点评】 [1]“有…倾向” [2]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。
[3]follow表示“跟随,追求(趋势或时尚)” [4]用于引出原因。
[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。
[6]it为形式主语,不定式为真正主语。
[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。
beyond表示“超出…范围”。
[8]强调句型,此处是强调主语。
not…but连接并列成分[9]“而不是”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句:
Itisirrationalforcollegestudentstopursuefamousbrands.
临摹:
对大学生来说,了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。
2.佳句:
Inmodernsociety,famousbrandstosomeextentareequaltofashion,whichhaveagreatattractiontoyoungcollegestudents.
临摹:
在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博
像赌博的那么有害和危险了,它经常会导致一个人破产,还会玷污人的心灵。
3.佳句:
Therefore,collegestudentsshouldattachmoreimportancetocultivatingagoodcharacterratherthanpursuingfamousbrands.
临摹:
很多同学经常玩电脑游戏,这是浪费时间,而不是一种有益的放松方式。
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteALetterApplyingforaBankLoan.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1)简单介绍个人情况 2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan
行文思路
本题属于情景式命题,要求写一封申请信。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
简单介绍自己的情况,表明写信目的:
申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心,最后表示感谢。
高分范文
ALetterApplyingforaBankLoan
Sep12th,2008
Towhomitmayconcern,
IamafreshmanofLianheUniversity,[1]majoringinAppliedPhysics.IamwritinginthehopethatImayobtainabankloantosupportmystudyinAppliedPhysicsforthefollowingfouryears.
Myparentsarebothlaid-offworkers,soit’s[2]beyondtheirpowertofinancemethroughthecollegeeducation.[3]Tomakemattersworse,mymotherhassuddenlyfallenillandisexpectingamajoroperation.[4]Therefore,[5]withthecollegetuitionbecomingamuchheavierburdenonmyfamily,IamcompelledtoapplyaRMB20,000bankloan.
[6]Igiveyoumypromisethattheloanwouldbeusedproperly.[4]Meanwhile,I’ll[7]sparenoefforttoworkhardbothinthestudyandmyfuturecareerinordertopaybacktheloan.Iwouldbegreatlyobligedifmyapplicationisgranted.AndIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
Sincerelyyours,
SongXue
【亮点点评】[1]“主修…”,现在分词作伴随状语[2]“超出…的能力范围”[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”[4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。
[6]“我保证…”,that引导同位语从句。
[7]“不遗余力”。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:
Tomakemattersworse,mymotherhassuddenlyfallenillandisexpectingamajoroperation.
临摩:
令人更迷惑不解的是,很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。
2.佳句:
Therefore,thecollegetuitionbecomingamuchheavierburdenonmyfamily,IamcompelledtoapplyaRMB20,000bankloan.
临摩:
由于周围交通不便利,人们只得步行回家。
3.佳句:
Meanwhile,I’llsparenoefforttoworkhardbothinthestudyandmyfuturecareerinordertopaybacktheloan.
临摩:
全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会。
(1).亮点句型和词汇
1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)
2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good.
3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad,如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive
4.moreandmore=anincreasingnumberof/agrowingnumberof
Moreandmoreimportant=increasinglyimportant
(2).适当使用被动来代替主动,更能客观的反映事实.句子开头不能总用I,my.不用weshouldtakeeffectivemeasuresto….而用Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento…
(3).善于使用连接词或者插入语,例如:
however,therefore,forexample等.
Someholdtheopinionthat..换成Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
主要规律
1.不考热点问题,比如今年的大地震,奥运会
2.以议论文为主,基本结构:
第一段:
描述某种现象第二段:
说一下好处坏处第三段:
你的看法
3.写一个announcement描述一个假设的事件,书信(只考过一次,这个基本不用准备)
4.08英语考试存在2种可能:
议论文,announcement重点准备写一个announcement
例如:
假如你今年被选为优秀学生代表,要在教师节之际在大会上做一个发言,属于一篇应用文写作.
LadiesandGentleman,
Firstofall,pleaseallowmetoexpressthemostheartfeltgratitudetoallofourteachers.Becauseofyourhardshipsinteaching,wecanhavesuchgoodgrades.
Teachersmoldthelivesthattheyinfluence.Lessonslearnedfromteachersremainwiththeirstudentsthroughoutlife.Teachersthatbreakdownbarriersandreachintothesoulsofthestudentsthattheyareresponsiblefordonotgettherecognitionorgratitudetheyhaveearned.Manyteachersareexhaustedfromtheirworkloadandresponsibilities.Theyhavetheirownfamilies,financialandlifestressesthatchallengethemalongwitheveryoneelse.Weshouldalwaysrespectourteachers.
Ourteacherstoldusthatgratitudeisafruitoflongcultivation.Ourteachersmadeuswhatyouaretodayandwhatyouwillbeinfuture.
Ourteacherswillcertainlyinfluencethewholelifeofallofus.Alltheeffortsmadebyourteacherswillencourageustomoveonevenmore.
6级作文模板:
1)先背3个句子
1Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvanced…….,moreandmore….. arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.(讲重要性)
2Thepopularityofdigital…willhavegreatinfluenceonourwork,studyandeverydaylife.Ontheonehand…, Butontheotherhand