届高三英语二轮专题检测最新模拟题汇编专题十九短文改错全解析.docx

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届高三英语二轮专题检测最新模拟题汇编专题十九短文改错全解析

2012届高三英语二轮专题检测（最新模拟题汇编）专题十九

短文改错（全解析）

特别说明：

因时间关系，本资料试题未经校对流程，使用时请注意。

1.下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏词符号【∧】，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线【﹨】划掉。

修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。

【2012.02·桐乡模拟】ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithoutbeingtold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

短文改错

ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwas

decided

havingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.Ihadaboutfiftydollarinmypockets,andsoIthought

gettingdollars

aboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.

when

Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:

beingmoreresponsible,

totally

moredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyown,Igettodealwithmydutieswithout

beingtold∧.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.

toadvice

Intheotherhand,Icouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformetofollow.

0nmy

2.【2012吉林市普通中学高中毕业班质检】

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcantype200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraisedherhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”Themanagerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsforfirstthreemonths.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

V.短文改错:

Rosewantedajob.Shewenttomanyofficesandshedidn’tlikeanyofthem.

but

Onedayshesawaboardinanofficeread:

“Thisofficeneedsatypistwhomcan

readingwho

type200wordsaminute.”Rosewasexciting.WhenRosewenttothemanager’soffice,

excited

themanwaswritingsomething.Roseknockedatthedoorandthemanagerraised

herhead.“Doyouneedatypist?

”askedRose.“Yes!

”hesaid.Roseclappedherhand.

hishands

Shecouldn’thelpsaying,“OK!

Howmuchwillyoupayformeeverymonth?

”The

managerthoughtforawhileandsaid,“Iwillpayyou77dollarsfor∧firstthree

the

months.ThenIwillpayyou30dollarseverymonth.”Rosesmiledandanswer,“Great!

answered

Iwillcomeandworkherethreemonthslate.”Themanagerwasspeechless.

later

3.

【2012·宝鸡一次质检】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：

在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：

把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：

在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

DearWeiFang,

ItsalongtimesinceIheardfromyouinlastlime．NowI'dliketotellyouaimpressivestorythathappenedonthefirstdayofmyteachingcareer．

Aboy,LiMing,whomfatherdiedamonthago,waslateforschool．Hestoodoutsidetheclassroomsilent．Ismiledtohimandlethimcome．

Afterawhile,hebegantocry．Seeingthis,Iwalkedtohimandaskedwhathashappened．Hetoldmehismotherwasillbuthehadtogetsomemedicineforher．Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness．Movedbyhisword,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongwasnamed"Mother"forthestudents．Fromthenon,Ibegantorealizeweshouldrespectourparentsanddidourbesttohelpthem．Doyouthinkso?

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．

4.

【2012·西安一次质检】Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasgoodtripattebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandbecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilepone,buttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterwhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.

5.

【2012.02·桐乡模拟】你的同学刘芳乐于助人（helpful），积极乐观（positive）。

她在上星期日下午回校途中帮助了一位受伤的老人。

请根据题示，用英语写一篇短文向英语报EnglishTimes投稿，简要叙述她做好事的经过，并谈谈你的感想。

Whathappened

·anoldmanseriouslyhurtintheleg

·whatLiuFangdid

Youropinion

·misunderstandingoreventrouble,ortherightthing?

·…

Nowadays,alotofpeoplearereportedlyunwillingtohelpothers.However,LiuFangacteddifferently.____________________________________________________________________

Onepossibleversion:

Nowadays,alotofpeoplearereportedlyunwillingtohelpothers.However,LiuFangacteddifferently.

LastSundayafternoon,onherwaybacktoschool,LiuFangcameacrossanoldmanlyingontheground,seriouslyhurtintheleg.Sheimmediatelystopped,called120andpracticedfirstaid.Soon,theambulancecameandtookthemantohospital.WheneverythingwasOK,sheleftforschool.

SuchisLiuFang,ahelpful,positiveanddeterminedperson.Thoughtheremightbemisunderstandingoreventroublewhenwedogood,Istronglybelievethatshehasdonetherightthing.Asresponsiblecitizens,itisourdutytohelppeopleinneed.Also,ifyoudon’tofferyourhelpwhenothersareintrouble,howcanyouexpecthelpfromotherswhenyouareintrouble?

Therefore,helpingothersmeanshelpingourselvesinasense,doesn’tit?

（131words）

6.

【2012西安五校一模】Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardatrelaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplaythebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantmegoout.TheyareafraidI’llbeknockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllosemyway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltrytopersuadethem.

Thewinterholidayiscoming,whichmademeexcited.Ihavebeenlookingforwardat

makesto

relaxingmyself.I’dliketogoskating,climbmountainsandseeseveralmovie.IthinkIcanplay

movies

thebasketballwithmyclassmates.HowawonderfultimeI’llhaveduringthewinterholiday!

theWhat

However,myparentsthinkdifferent.Theydon’twantme∧goout.TheyareafraidI’llbe

differentlyto

knockeddownbyatruck,fallenoffatree,orfightwithothers.Besides,theyareafraidIwilllose

fall

myway.Ihatebeingtreatedlikeabirdkeepinginacage.Togetmorefreedom,soIwilltryto

keptso

persuadethem.

7.【2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末】

OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan

environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They

pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under

theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,they

feltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe

publictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe

getalongwellwithit.

【答案】

OnSaturdayafternoon,LiHuaandWangPing,membersfrom“GreenEyes”,washavingan

were

environmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.They

caught

pickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelp,theytookithome.Under

upmight/could

theirtreatmentandcare,theluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflythebird,they

feltabitofpitybutverydelightfulIthinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthe

去掉ofdelightedthem

publictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwe

去掉theinwhich/that/去掉

getalongwellwithit.

8.

【2012郑州预测】

OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman，whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan20years．Sheisalwaysworkinghard．Foramodelteacherformanyyears，sheiskindandfriendlytousandverystrictwithus.Inclass，shealwaysencouragesusspeakandreadEnglishasmuchaspossible．Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting．InherspareSheIntime，sheoftenteachesusEnglishsongandhelpsustoputonEnglishshortplays．Shelovesusso10muchassheisalwaysreadytohelpus．Inthefact，sheisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend．Weallrespectandlovehim．

OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwoman,whohadbeenteachingEnglishformorethan

has

20years.Sheisalwaysworkinghard.Foramodelteacherformanyyears,sheiskindandfriendly

As/Being

tousandverystrictwithus.Inclass,shealwaysencouragesus∧speakandreadEnglishas

butto

muchaspossible.Sheisquitegoodatteachingandtrytomakeherlessonsliveandinteresting.In

trieslively