写作指导写作素材积累1.docx

写作指导写作素材积累1.docx

《写作指导写作素材积累1.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《写作指导写作素材积累1.docx（4页珍藏版）》请在冰豆网上搜索。

写作指导写作素材积累1

写作素材积累

（1）

写作素材积累

（1）

1.Areparentsthebestteachers?

Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Parentsarethebestteachers.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

Obviously,inmostcasestheearliestteacherspeoplehavearetheirparents,andparentsaregenerallymostconcernedaboutthedevelopmentoftheirchildren.However,itisnotcompletelytruetosaythatparentsarethebestteachers.Firstofall,notallparentsaregoodteachers.Asnormalindividuals,someparentsmoreorlesshavesomebadhabits.Eventhoughparentsalmostinstinctivelydevotethemselvestocultivatingtheiroffspring,theoutcomemightturnouttobedisappointment,forallchildrentendtounconsciouslyorsubconsciouslycopyeverythingincludingbadonesfromtheirparents.Anotherdeficiencyofparentsasteachersisthefactthatmostparentsarelackofcommonsensesofeducation.Alltoooftenweobservesomeparentstendtopursuetheircherishedbutfaileddreambyforcingtheirchildrentodevelopinaprearrangeddirection.Ironically,whentheirchildrendonotfollowtheinstructions,thechildrenwillberegardedasdisobedientorallegedlyrebellious.Infact,itisparentsratherthantheirchildrenthatvirtuallydisobeycommonsenses.

Moreover,someparentsarequalifiedasgoodteachers,butnotallofthemarethebestones.Whenchildrenareinthepreliminaryschool,itisnotsurprisingthatparentsareperhapscapableofteachingtheirchildrenalmosteverysubjectevenbetterthanprofessionalteachersintheschool.Butthesituationwillnotlastlong.Weliveinaworldwhereknowledgeisaccumulatedbymultiplyingandatthesametimebecomesmoreandmorespecialized.Therefore,tobeaprofessionalinacertainfieldtodaytakesmuchlongertimethanhaseverbeenbefore.Noparentisabletobeprofessionalinallfields,thoughtheymightbeexpertsinoneormorefields.Wiseparentsoftenreleaseratherthanchargetheirchildrenasearlyaspossible.Theyareawareofthepossibilityoutsidethefamily.

Parentsmay,nevertheless,helptheirchildrenmuchmorethandogoodteachers.Mostpartsofchildreneducationarevirtuallybeyondteachers’reaches.Itisparentsthatsupplement.Psychologystudieshaveshownusthatparents’lovesometimeshasastonishinglymagicpowertotheirchildren.AlbeitEinstein’smotherandthatofForestGumparebothgoodexamples.Ontheotherhand,parentsmightdotheirchildrenharmmorethandobadteachersaswell.Thenaturesofthosechildrenwhoseparentshavedivorcedareoftenseverelydistorted.Inaword,itisrathersuperficialto

simplysaythatparentsarethebestteachers.

2.Whichismoreimportant,bookknowledgeorexperience?

Ithasbeensaid,Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.Compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.Inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?

Why?

『范文』

Ingeneral,knowledgegainedfrombookshasawiderrangethanthatgainedfromexperience.Wenowliveinaworldthattypophileisnolongerexorbitant,andthatprintedmattersarereadilyavailable.Inlibraries,wecanlearnnearlyeverythingonlyifwehavealreadyacquiredbasicreadingskills,philosophy,history,literature,

physics,mathematics,chemicals,biology,geography,anthropology,andthelistwillgoon.Unliketheexperienceofanindividualthatislimitedbytherangeofthatindividual,booksseemtohavealmostnolimitation.Sittinginthelocallibrary,wevirtuallycantraveleverywherethroughaninterestinggeographicencyclopedia,andcertainly,withnearlynoexpenseatall.

Ontheotherhand,itcanbearguedthatsometimesknowledgegainedfrom

experienceismuchdeeperandmorecomprehensivethanthatgainedfrombooks.Itisquitetruethatnoteverythingiscontainedinbooks.Howtodealwithpersonal

finance,howtocopewithcurrentsocialtrends,evenhowtomosteffectivelyorganizeourownmind,andnumerousotherthingscanseldombefoundthoroughlyandcomprehensivelydiscussedinbooks,wehavetogaintheknowledgebyourownexperience.Andthesadnewsisthatevensomeknowledgethatiscontainedinbooksusuallyneedsfurthercomprehension,mainlythroughexperience.

Astowhichsourceismoreimportant,theanswersvary.Someknowledgecanbeacquiredonlythroughbooks.It’shardtoimaginewecanhaveagoodunderstandingofhistorywithoutreadingbooks.Ontheotherhand,someknowledgecanbeobtainedonlythroughexperience.Whenwetrytolearntoswim,merelyadetailedmanualofswimmingskills,evenabundantlyfilledwithillustrations,isatmost

useless.Wehavetojumpintothewaterandthengaintheknowledgewithexperience.Wehavetousebooksandexperienceassourcesimultaneouslytogetwhatwewanttoknow.Takelearningphysicsforexample,bothbooksandexperiencesareequallyimportantsources,andexamplesassucharenumerous.Therefore,Ithinkwhetheronesourceismoreimportantthantheotherdependsoncircumstances.

3.Themostimportantthingyouwanttochangeaboutyourhometown

Ifyoucouldchangeoneimportantthingaboutyourhometown,whatwouldyouchange?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

改变其环境，因为一个好的环境会使人们

更加快乐

更加健康

更加有效率

『范文』

IwasborninasmalltownnamedHailin,locatedintheNorth-EastofChina.Themostseriousproblemsinmyhometownarethebackwardideasaboutawoman’splaceinthefamily,school,workplace,andsociety.Thesenegativestereotypeshurtnotonlywomen,butallofsocietyaswell.Ifpossible,Iwouldchangetheattitudesofthepeopleinmyhometownsotheywouldviewmenandwomenequally.

Discriminationagainstwomeninmyhometownbeginsbeforetheyareevenborn.Becausepeopleherebelievethatonlyamancancarryonthefamilyline,every

familywantstohaveatleastoneson.Eachfamilyisonlysupposedtohaveonechildbecauseoftheoverpopulationproblem.Thismeansthatifafamilycanfindoutafetusisfemalebeforeitisborntheymightabortit.Orinothercases,peoplewillhavemanyfemalebabiesbeforetheyhaveason,whichonlymakesthepopulationproblemworse.Iffemalebabieswereconsideredasimportantasmalebabies,thenthesetwoproblemsprobablywouldnotexist.

Discriminationagainstgirlscontinuesastheygotoschoolandwork.Theprevalentstereotypeisthatwomenarenotassmartasmenandweshouldn’twastetimeandmoneyeducatingthem.Familiesofteninsistthattheirdaughtersstayathomeandhelpwithhouseworkwhilesendingtheirsonstoschool.Girlsareborneverybitassmartasboysandequallydeservetoreapthebenefitsofeducation.Manyoftheworld’sfamousscientistsandleadersarewomen,fromMarieCurietoMargaretThatcher.Weneedtoeliminatethestereotypethatwomenarelessintelligentthanmensothatourcommunitycanbenefitfromtheachievementsthatwomenarecapableofmakingwhenarmedwitheducation.

Infact,womenneedtoberespectedenoughtoholdprofessionalandleadershipjobsinourcommunity.Thiswouldmeanthatintheclassifiedsectionofnewspapers,therewouldnolongerbejobsformenonly.Wewillneverknowhowmanywomencouldhavedonethosejobsbetterthanamancouldhaveuntiltheparentsofeverybabygirldecidethattheirdaughterisworthasmuchastheirson.ThisisprobablythemostimportantthingthatIwanttochangeaboutmyhometown.

4.Theinfluenceofmoviesortelevisiononpeople’sbehaviorHowdomoviesortelevisioninfluencepeople’sbehavior?

Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.

『分析』

电影、电视等大众传媒（massmedia）往往可以对人们的行为产生影响

通过改变人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而改变人们行为

通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地讨论一件事情

通过满足人们的幻想，或使人们处于平衡状态，或使人们一定程度上失衡

『范文』

Theimpactthatmoviesortelevisionhashadonourdailylife,andsocietyingeneral,isundeniable.Nodoubtitwillbecomeevengreaterasthescopeofwhichcontinuestogrow,andastherelevanttechnologiesbecomemoreandmoresophisticated,andsofascinatingthatvirtuallynobodywillbeabletoescape.Already,itcanbeseenhowwesternmoviesareexercisinginfluenceonouryouthgeneration:

theygrowlong-hairregardlessoftheirgender,commonlypartofwhichisdyedingold;theywearjeansineachandeveryseason,usuallythekneesofwhicharedeliberatelytattered;boysarefondofearringsorotheroddpendants;andgirlsarekeenonMarlborosandweirdbadwords.

Themajormeansthatmoviesandtelevisioninfluencethepublicisbycreatingtopicsofdiscussioninthesociety.Moviesofferpeople（theconsumers）issuestotalkandthinkabout.Titanichadbroughtaworldwideuproarbyitsextollingoffascinatingimmortallove;PrimeColorandWagtheDogmetthenationaldebateonrightanddutyofthepresidentoftheUnitedStates.AntiwarmoviessuchasTearsoftheSunandAllQuietontheWesternFrontamongnumerousothershavebeenraisingthe

questionthatisanywarreallytoupholdjusticeorisitreallyworthythatanindividualmakessacrificestohiscountryandatthesametimeignoreshisownfamilyorhispersonalvalues?

Televisionalsoshapesourunderstandingofwhatisimportantandwhatisnot

important（toknow）.Theimportantissuesarebeingdiscussedoverandoverorinthebeginningofaprogram.Thenotimportantstoriesaretheonesthatarenotbeingtoldatall.Thenotveryimportantstoriesareprobablyveryshortandhiddeninthelastpart.Byprearrangingpublicissue,moviesandtelevisionmakedecisionsforus.Eventhoughtherearecriticalthinkingindividualsinanysociety,theyaredefinitelyinminority;thepublicinwholeindeedlackskillsofcriticalthi