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雅思曲线写作

曲线写作

一．审题

1.看文字信息,标题和图表找出写作对象，句型动词，纵坐标（数据）横坐标（时间）。

找出并写出备选的主语、谓语、状语。

E.g.：

标题FishandMeatconsumption

对象：

chicken,beef,lamb,fish--food.…………………………………………………主语

动词：

（静态）be动词或实义动词consumed/eat/used→consumption……………谓语

（动态）变化动词increase/decline

纵坐标：

数据Percentage/proportion/quantity/amount/figure/number主语/状语

横坐标：

时间………………………………………………………………………状语

备选的主谓结构（be）Chickenwasthemostpopularfood.

（被动）Muchlessfishwasconsumed/eaten.

（变化动词）Theconsumptionofbeef/thepercentageofbeefdeclines.

2.标题审图标注出：

静态点：

★最高点★最低点★中间类（同类/相类似）

动态变化：

★上升的★下降的★持平的（同类/相类似）

特殊点：

★交叉点★转折点

3.改写开头段

曲线类特有本质：

howtheamount/percentage/proportionofsthchanged

=thechangesintheamount/percentage/proportionofsth

E.g.：

ThegraphbelowshowstheconsumptionoffishandsomedifferentkindsofmeatinaEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.

=Thelinechartillustrateschangesintheamountofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountryovertheperiodfrom1979and2004.

=Thelinechartillustrateshowtheamountofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrychangedovertheperiodfrom1979and2004.

练习：

Thegraphbelowgiveinformationaboutwateruseworldwideandwaterconsumptionintwodifferentcountries.

二．写作顺序：

方法一：

（段落1）先静态对比描写S1静，S2静，S3静，S4静，

先找极端数据，即，①最高点，②最低点，再找③中间类、同类或相类似别的。

（段落2）再动态变化描写（划分阶段写）S1动，S2动，S3动，S4动，

找出①上升的，②下降的，③平稳不变的。

方法二：

整线描写：

每跟曲线的静点和变化同时写

S1静，S1动;S2静，S2动;S3静，S3动;S4静，S4动

三．曲线写作模板（Body段）

方法一：

（段落1）先静态对比描写S1静，S2静，S3静，S4静，

先找极端数据，即，①最高点，②最低点，再找③中间类、同类或相类似别的。

（段落2）再动态变化描写（划分阶段写）S1动，S2动，S3动，S4动，

找出①上升的，②下降的，③平稳不变的。

（段落1）S1+动词/被动语态/servesas（isusedas）themainn（+数据）+时间.,WhileS1wastheleastpopular+n,with+数据+时间.Moreover,S2andS3+动词/被动语态insimilarquantities+数据.

（段落2）However，thepercentage/proportionofS4increasesto/by+数据in+时间.Ontheotherhand,therewasafallinthepercentageofS5,decreasingfrom+数据to+数据by+时间.Whatisworthmentioningisthatthepercentage/consumptionlevelofS1remainstable+时间.

范文E.g.：

剑7

In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities（around150grams）,whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed（justover50grams）.

However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespectively.Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50gram,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemoststable.Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperpersonperweek.

结尾：

overall,thegraphshowshowthconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.

方法二：

整线描写：

每跟曲线的静点和变化同时写，S1静，S1动;S2静，S2动;S3静，S3动;S4静，S4动

S1+动词/被动语态/servesas（isusedas）themainn（+数据）+时间.Andthepercentage/proportionofS1increasesto/by+数据in+时间.S2wastheleastpopular+n,with+数据+时间.therewasafallinthepercentageofS2,decreasingfrom+数据to+数据by+时间.Moreover,S3andS4+动词/被动语态insimilarquantities+数据.Whatisworthmentioningisthatthepercentage/consumptionlevelofS3remainstable+时间.

范文E.g.：

剑6

Throughthecentury,thelargestquantityofwaterwasusedforagriculturalpurposeandthisincreaseddramaticallyfromabout500kgtoaround3000kgintheyear2000.Waterusedintheindustrialanddomesticsectorsalsoincreased,butconsumptionwasminimaluntilmid-century.From1950onwards,industrialusegrewsteadilytojustover1000kg,whiledomesticusefellmoreslowlytoonly300kg.

（分阶段写）剑5

In1940theproportionofpeopleaged65ormorestoodatonly5%inJapan,approximately7%inSwedenand9%intheUS.However,whilethefiguresfortheWesterncountriesgrewtoabout15%inaround1990,thefigureforJapandippedtoonly2.5%formuchofthisperiod,beforerisingtoalmost5%againatthepresenttime.

Inspiteofsomefluctuationintheexpectedpercentages,theproportionofolderpeoplewillprobablycontinuetoincreaseinthenexttwodecadesinthethreecountries.Amoredramaticriseispredictedbetween2030and2040inJapan,bywhichtimeitisthoughtthattheproportionofelderlypeoplewillbesimilarinthethreecountries.

四．曲线必备万能句型

静态数据对比描写（三个必备句型）

①最高点

S1wasthemostpopular/dominant/main+n,with+数据+时间..

=S1+动词/被动语态/servesas（isusedas）themainn（+数据）+时间.

=Thelargestquantityofn+被动语态isS1+数据+时间.

=S1,thehighestproportionofall,+被动语态+数据+时间.

=S1+动词/被动语态inthelargestquantity,+数据+时间.

②最低点

WhileS1wastheleastpopular+n,with+数据+时间..

=Incontrast,theconsumptionofS2wasminimal+数据+时间..

=Conversely,thesmallestquantityofn+动词/被动语态fromS2andS3+数据+时间.

=TheproportionofninS1,thehighestofall,+动词+数据+时间.

=S1+动词/被动语态inthelowestquantity,+数据+时间.

③中间类（同类/相类似）

whiletheproportionofS3andS4is/stoodat+数据+时间.

=Furthermore,muchlessS2andS3+动词/被动语态+数据.

=Moreover,S2andS3+动词/被动语态insimilarquantities+数据.

E.g.：

1.In1997,beefwasbybarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsperpersonperweek.

2.Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）.

=CoalwasusedasthemainelectricitysourceinAustralia（50units）.

=ThemainelectricitysourceusedinAustraliawascoal,with50units

3.Thelargestquantityofwaterwasusedforagriculturalpurpose.

4.Tokyoservesthegreatestnumberofpassengersperyear,at190passengers.

5.Britainhasspentmostheavilyontherangeofthegoods.

6.Foodwasthemainaverageweeklyexpenditure.

7.CoalwasusedasthemainelectricitysourceinAustralia（50units）.

=Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）

8．Theproportionoftheagedover65inJapan,thehighestofall,keptstableat50%in1990.

9．Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）.

=CoalwasusedasthemainelectricitysourceinAustralia（50units）.

=ThemainelectricitysourceusedinAustraliawascoal,with50units.

E.g.：

1.Fishwastheleastpopularfood（justover3grams）

2.Germanisthelowestspender.

3.Lambwaseateninthesmallestquantities,with5grams.

=Thesmallestquantitiesoflambwereeatenin1998,at5grams.

E.g.：

1．FranceandItalymaintainmiddleposition.

2．Whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed（justover5grams）.

3．Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities（around4grams）.

4．In1940,theproportionofpeopleaged65ormorestoodatonly5%inJapan,approximately7%inSwedenand9%inUSA.

动态描写变化（三个必备句型）

①上升类

However，thepercentage/proportionofS1increasesto/by+数据in+时间.

=However，therewasanincreaseinthepercentageofS1,risingfrom+数据to+数据by+时间.

=Incontrast,theyearof+时间witnessedanincreaseinthepercentageofS1,from+数据to+数据

=Ontheotherhand,theconsumptionofS1showsanupwardtrend/increases+时间（数据）.

=Ontheotherhand,adramaticincreasecanbefoundintheconsumptionofS1+时间（数据）.

=Interestingly,S1outnumbers/overtakesS2by+数据in+时间.

②下降类

Whilethepercentage/proportionofS1declinedto/by+数据+时间.

=andtherewasafallinthepercentageofS1,decreasingfrom+数据to+数据by+时间.

=Incontrast,theyearof+时间witnessedadecreaseinthepercentageofS1,from+数据to+数据.

=Ontheotherhand,theconsumptionofS1showsadownwardtrend/decreaseto/by+数据+时间.

=Ontheotherhand,adramaticfallcanbefoundintheconsumptionofS1+时间（数据）.

③持平类

Whatisworthmentioningisthatthepercentage/consumptionlevelofS1remainstable+时间.

=Furthermore,S1continue/remaintheleast/main/second+n,动词ing+数据+时间.

相似类

WecanseeasimilarpatternintheproportionofS1+数据+时间

=AsimilarpatterncanbefoundintheproportionofS1+数据+时间

=TheproportionofS1followthesamepatternas…+数据+时间

E.g.：

1.Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showsanupwardtrend.

2.Duringtheperiod,however,theconsumptionofchickenfelldramaticallytoapproximately4grams.

3.Londonhasthelargestincreaseinthepriceofaveragehouse.

=Londonhasthelargestincreaseinhouseprice.

4.In1980,however,thepercentageofCoalincreased/creptupby4%//to51%.

5.Incontrast,therewasanincrease/creeping-upof4%inthepercentageofCoal.

6.Theyearof1980witnessed/reflectedariseinthepercentageofCoal,increasingby4%.

7.Incontrast,in1980Coaloutnumbereditscounterpartby4percent/10timesasthemainsource.

8.Coalin1980overtookitscounterpartby4percentasthemainsource.

9.WhileNuclearrocketedby10times.

10.Waterusedintheindustrialanddomesticsectorsalsoincreased.

11.WhilethefiguresfortheWestoncountriesgrewtoabout15%inaround1990,thefigureforJapandippedtoonly25%

12.Theproportionofolderpeoplewillprobablycontinuetoincreaseinthenexttwodecades.

E.g.：

1.Therewasadecreaseof4%inthepercentageofHydro.

2.Inaddition,theyearof1980witnessedaslumpof9%inNaturalGas.

3.However,duringthe15-yearperiod,theconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand80gramsrespectively.

4.From1950onwards,industrialusegrewsteadilytojustover30%,wiledomesticuserosemoreslowlytoonly10%，bothfarmorebelowthelevelofconsumptionbyagriculture.

E.g.：

1.WhatisworthmentioningisthatOilwasalmoststableduringthedecade.

2.Furthermore,hydrocontinuedtobeanothersignificantsource,supplyi